Thank youu!!! haha it helped me understand it a lot better now!

ohh my day just got better!!! yesss!! hahah if you don't mind, i have a question, when he got to the planet.. the "declared his" right? so that anyone that set foot in it would pay him up.. so why he is so worried about the pirates? hahha i was a long time ago that i read this, so could be kinda wrong.

We're glad you are back! know that i will use all my gems to help you, your story was the one that i missed the most and i think that there may be other people like me there, so just relax, write when you can and have a good recovery!!!

yes and no.. i think this DC universe is from the young justice(i think), so there ... Constantine and all that kind of supernatural are not introduced(but they do have magic.. so ... meh?)

what happened to Sol? after his last "evolution" i'm not seing it anymore

noice, just sad it maybe take some time to read again haha

noice

it was good! but hey, they booth have telepaths, so you maybe dont need to make a big fight hahaha sure they can fight a bit than show everything to them

man... overpower fanfics take all the fun of the process, yeah he can beat everyones as*, but than it wouldnt be fun, the most fun in system novels or OP novels is him getting stronger, because later is just faceslaps all the time, gets pretty borring like that

him making some friends its nice, just dont be forced, frienship takes at least some time to be fine, or just like him, logan and laura, fight for your life type of situation, and make him if possible, more vocal about his beef with scot, thanks for the novel!

its good.. the only problem.. i need more ahhahaha, really liked the story, if only the MC was a little more focus on learning(personal opnion) it would be better, but really like it

yeah... i love the story.. but the harem and **** stuff... just isnt for me .. yeah a bit is fine, no problem.. but now is going to take a full week just to have some story progression?... yeah.. not for me.. dropping it, hope that you can create one that isnt full on *** in the future

i think that absorving the speedforce would be wrong... in the MCU it doesnt exist.. try to adapt it, makes it like the skill can create a barrier that block air resistence and shields him from debris(a bug can kill him if he is fast enough), that way the aint THAT OP, but still OP

the only thing i can see thats wrong... is that you are using portuguese hahaha well.. its fine.. myself as a brazilian its cool... it needs to be spanish

the world needs a good "PJ" fanfic

harry potter: lost son, harry potter and the rise of the protector.. even the reborn as batman little brother(i think this is the title), just dont fall to the harem trap... hhaha almost all fanfics are like this... the coolest ones are when the author dont force the MC to fuc..k every cute girl possible ahhahaha

its fine, Odin is afterall a pridefull god, he cant just be so calm

introduce a little of modern day enterprises... divide the work so he only need to aprove or know high level sh't, its better i think(personal opinion)

i didn't this includes it.. thats why the +18 parts and no just this one... its way to fast for both ... i just thought that it wouldnt have another one so fast

i really like this story... just think that the +18 parts were unecessary and the change in attitude was wayyy to fast... not that it can't happen ... its just that was kinda forced...