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  • Spalk
    Spalk2mth
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    Maximilian Bones

    What these children were playing was actually Yu-Gi-Oh Dueling Cards invented by Edward himself. The game has become widely popular in the wizard world--among both children and adults. Official competitions have already been conducted, and even an international one was held two years ago.
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  • Spalk
    Spalk3mth
    Replied to hamuhamu

    Do you believe that Aizen-sama wouldn't use women to gain political power?

    Sasuke nodded with a thoughtful expression and said, "So that means I need to find 4 wives. Can the wives be civilians, or must they be ninja?"
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  • Spalk
    Spalk3mth
    Replied to CruelReality

    It literally explains the logic in the next paragraph. It is just a matter of priorities.

    Right now, it is not worth it to spend my time overanalyzing all this information. This is a developed world with rich history. I am sure that there are already many ninjas and scientists who have answered most of my questions. I can just wait until I have Hokage's trust and immediately gain access to all the information. I should only start experimenting when I reach the limit of this world's knowledge. 
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  • Spalk
    Spalk3mth
    Replied to NunuXD

    Hello. Why did you continue reading the original Naruto series after encountering Jiraiya, who has a much more problematic personality than Neji? Additionally, Neji is a teenager, and it's worth considering that his current personality may be influenced by his lack of education in certain matters. Also if your problem is about Sasuke and his lack of reaction just wait for the chapter 41.

    Ch 39 The proper use of byakugan
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  • Spalk
    Spalk3mth
    Replied to Gacha123

    I have great plans for him ;)

    Ch 40 Matchmaking
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  • Spalk
    Spalk3mth
    Replied to Ga1234

    In the next chapter you will find out why Aizen was ok with it ;)

    Ch 40 Matchmaking
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  • Spalk
    Spalk3mth
    Replied to Rhandson_D

    Kakashi was 6 when he was a chunin and killing people in missions and Itachi at 13 was an ANBU captain. In these kind of stories you should not take age literally. Just imagine that all the kids are 10 years older because they act like teenagers.

    The girl turned around frightened. It seems that she was too focused on her training. As soon as she saw Sasuke, she relaxed, but then her eyes turned down from his eyes to his torso and then to his abs. The girl had a slight change in her expression, and her cheeks turned red. After a brief silence, she said with embarrassment.
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  • Spalk
    Spalk3mth
    Replied to Didar_Muratov_5750

    Choji is still in the academy. If you remember Naruto, Sakura, Ino and Shikamaru were promoted by 1 year. The 4 of them are much stronger than canon because of their training.

    Ch 31 Revelation – Part 2 
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  • Spalk
    Spalk3mth
    Replied to carefreeshadow

    Hokage has informed Kakashi that he will be Sasuke's and Naruto's teacher. If you remember the decision was made after dealing with Danzo. Kakashi was impressed with Sasuke's training and immediately introduced himself as his new sensei. Of course the announcement is not yet official.

    "My sweet student can use the replacement jutsu with no hand signs already. Not bad," the man said with a teasing smile.
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  • Spalk
    Spalk3mth
    Replied to Anonny_Anonymous

    I disagree completely with your whole post. Kakashi was a chunin at 6 and is one of the most talented characters in the show. The only reason that Naruto and Sasuke won against Kaguya was Kakashi. The only reason Kakashi wasn't broken in the early series was his psychological problems. The guy was literally watching graves and he was grieving instead of training. Now if you have read my previous plot points, Hiruzen had decided to treat Kakashi as it should have happened if people were using their logic in the manga. I am trying to make the characters use their brains here. In the chapter about Rock Lee's flashback there are many parts about Kakashi and his decision to finally accept treatment. The chapter also focuses on Kakashi's recovering and his training with Gai. It does not make sense for Kakashi to lose against Sasuke at this point of the story. Even according to cannon --> Naruto Uzumaki says Kakashi is smarter than Shikamaru Nara, has a better sense of smell than Kiba Inuzuka, is more adept with the Sharingan than Sasuke Uchiha, and has better taijutsu skill than Rock Lee. Kakashi is the definition of a genius. Of course Aizen is also genius but there are limits. In bleach even with kyoka suigetsu's broken ability it took him years to complete his plans. If I make him stronger than Kakashi now the power scale will break and the story will suck.

    Ch 28 Kakashi vs Sasuke - Part 1
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  • Spalk
    Spalk4mth
    Replied to ChaosV

    I had to find a realistic way to make Aizen reincarnate. I think that its better than having him getting hit by a truck 😂

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  • Spalk
    Spalk4mth
    Replied to Yuuki123

    Don't worry. There will be 1 more chapter before the time skip.

    Ch 23 The 2 Fuinjutsu Scrolls
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  • Spalk
    Spalk4mth
    Replied to WebFanfics

    Hello. I have fixed it in the later chapters. When I have time, I will also fix the old chapters.

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  • Spalk
    Spalk4mth
    Replied to Anonny_Anonymous

    I disagree with your points. Sasuke plays a careful game right now and knows that Hiruzen wants to stop his progress. However he is an unknown world without his previous powers. He does not want to openly antagonize Hiruzen because he want's his support to become Hokage. He has concluded that they consider him a risk already and he does not want to prove them right. If Sasuke starts to use aggresive methods to receive more jutsu , Hiruzen might decide that the risk it too much and he may try to erase his memories or stop his training completely. Sasuke is no out of options to get stronger. I have listed a complete list of areas that he can practice and improve. The list has so many options that Sasuke's main problem is that he does not have enough time and clones. Considering his many options there is no reason for Sasuke to risk going against the Hokage.

    Ch 22 Sasuke's Strategic Plans
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  • Spalk
    Spalk4mth
    Replied to Daoisto0M3es

    I know that but if you think about it both transformation and body replacement are like plot holes in Naruto. They both are E Rank and in reality they are better than most jutsu. Imagine a character with scientific knowledge like Orochimaru abusing these jutsus. It would completely break the story. If I make transformation jutsu changing the properties of an object a character like Aizen by his nature must abuse it to its limit and this will immediately make him OP and destroy the story. The same with body replacement. A lot of fanfictions made this jutsu work like a small scale flying thundergod and It does not make sense.I will try to make the power system and the character a little more realistic. If Aizen comes into this world and immediately takes an E rank and makes it S rank it is like all the other characters are completely morons. I want to respect this world and it's characters and I want to make Aizen OP but through logic and serious scientific experiments.

    Ch 13 The 3 academy jutsu
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  • Spalk
    Spalk4mth
    Replied to Anonny_Anonymous

    Hello. You forget that Kakashi had White fang to teach him. Sasuke also learned the fireball jutsu from his family and could also learn the academy 3 from them if they weren't dead. However the academy has to follow a protocol and can't just go around teaching jutsu because most of the kids are not mature enough and a large number of them are from a civilian background.

    Ch 13 The 3 academy jutsu
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  • Spalk
    Spalk4mth
    Replied to Daoisto0M3es

    Don't worry about it w8 next chapter ;)

    Ch 8 My first friend
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  • Spalk
    Spalk4mth
    Commented

    It was good till now but I dislike this 100%. Sorry but I have to drop it.

    Ch 68 Shiori vs Izumi(Rewrite)
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