reddragon

did it taste as good coming up as it was going down jk hope you get better soon

I'm surprised that you don't have any ride Pokemon for land besides Arcanine like Tauros Bouffalant Dodrio Stantler Sawsbuck Wyrdeer Ponyta Numel Ariados

I love the story and can't wait to have more stories from you. I like how you turn your enemies into useful tools.[img=update][img=recommend]

you meant by not my

or Gap

master

Scyther's wing you wrote sneasel's wing

you meant to say the second one was destroyed

you use Gurkinn instead of the gym leader's name again

you used Gurkinn instead of the gym leaders name twice in this sentence