LuciferGrindelwald

i love it but why did you have to make him fall in love so quickly, so many options I love Zoe but come on he going to meet way hotter ladies

thank you for that review...

at some point aemon needs to step up and put everyone in their place, hims mother, daemon, leana, corlys even alicent. leana should know that she is his wife and any attempt to disrespect or undermine him won't go down well, his mother because she basically manipulated him there, daemon because he feels he has power over him. basically he's going to need to stand his ground

I think Harry is way too naive, it war people die and people get killed if you can't kill then don't fight and what use is it carrying dead weight into a battle. the whole thing is just dumb. after seeing all the devastation Morgan caused he is still hesitant to kill in order to prevent it from happening again? that's supremely foolish

I honestly love the story it's really good but it's repetitive, the same story every chapter. you have been on Hogwarts reaction to this and nothing about the outside worlds reaction to it... its's the same chapter as the last several chapters only different wording and scenes... please move it along

I'm honestly getting tired of the same story over and over again it's like each chapter is a repetition of the what we already know from the earlier chapters. Please can we move it along?

I love the book , it's not too slow, explains clearly and informative

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in front of absolute power all schemes are rendered completely obsolete

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