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thanks, this is my first time writing novel. with so many comments I believe I can improve my works.

I think this is revenge, but not like villain that kills innocent, he just wants to trash avenger, etc

well, it is not just MCU, most fanfiction usually will get dropped, cz you will not get any money from it,

there is no story development at all. it just like the author adds a new paragraph for our mc. this kind of thing is disappointing. but other settings okay

well if it were me i will give up my seat 1. because it is annoying to buzzing around arguing. 2. well i i saw my mother pregnant and it is look not easy. although i am not good people but i am not lower my self to that level. it is just a seat for pregnant mother.

plot armor?

well when you read a novel please read their discription first. thanks

we dont know anything about where he is . and you just give us a haotian stage mc but we cant understand is haotian strong or not ? how much level are there,family background( he has or not it is better to tell us clearly) or hint .

candidate hinata ino afterall tsunade already auntie level