You are the man, HolyJoker deserve to be stoned for abandoning this story

the concept is good, the execution is poor, too dumb of a story for my taste.

the concept is good, the execution is poor, too dumb of a story for my taste.

it's one of the things I always forget, on is on top and in is inside, this oversight is because in my native tongue theres no distinction.

not at all, all criticism is welcome, in regards to the timeline, it is not decided yet.

I'm certain that I mentioned it in the fic itself.

I did not state a specific year because he is in the age of heroes, before the andal invasion, Aegons Conquest is thousands of years in the future.

I have plans for them, in the next chapters more will be said.

Probably not, I think that such a setting will benefit more without adding excessive foreign elements.

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Hello, I'm the author, just writing that self review, getting to the point, this novel is all about this unstable man transported to another world, dont expect the normal progression, this fic is a way to improve my writing, so there will be experimenting, none that will be dumb or crazy, but different nonetheless.

be patient young one, hehehe

that is why I prefer third person pov, read my book, the only book the book of God.

talking too much will spoil future steps :)

i will expand more on this topic on the next chapters

yes he will

oh god

couldnt have said better

The damage is immensurable, I just don't know how many brain cells I lost by reading this MTL, heed my warning, don't lose your time with this nationalistic piece of fiery trash. Thank You.

its just a way to not get op too fast, but it will not be a problem