darksea
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If I like your story I'll tell you, if your story sucks I'll tell you.
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darksea5dCommentedpedazo de inútil, al fin haces algo bueno.
La vida en la madriguera fue buena dentro de lo que la pobreza nos permitió, pero fue bastante cálido a un nivel emocional. El tiempo pasó, y a diferencia de los años anteriores me dediqué a perfeccionarme y mejorar.- darksea5dCommented
habilidad inuúti.
-Un mercader aparecerá en ciertas áreas cercanas en días aleatoriamente durante la noche, podrás comprar y vender objetos con él. Solo tú o personas que te acompañen mientras lo buscas podrán percibirlo- - darksea5dCommented
lo de la parte física me parece razonable pero el control mental me parece una estupidez
-Podrás utilizar tu magia de sangre para poder manipular física o mentalmente a distintos seres. La manipulación de 'Calma' permite inducir al objetivo a un estado de Relajación.- - darksea5dCommented
tremendo desperdicio. el MC más inservible que he leído
En lo que más paso mi tiempo era principalmente en leer. No había ni internet ni televisión, pero había libros de magia de mis hermanos mayores o de nuestros padres, estaban viejos, pero aún cumplían con su deber y logré aprender algunas cosas, no diría que leía cantidades al nivel de Hermione, pero me defendía. - darksea5dCommented"Bueno, creo que no la cague tanto"
- darksea5dCommentedCh 1 CAPITULO 1
- darksea20dCommentedCh 3 my new bitch (life) is not good
- darksea2mthCommentedCh 19 Ch. : 19 Tom and Jerry, Taking them with me, Ambush on the way back
- darksea10mthCommentedMy belly contracted as I exhaled slowly and heavily. In that same breath, I lifted my right leg, stretched it out and stepped forward. I inhaled and leaned back my upper body before throwing my left hand out to the front, fingers slightly bent to the underside of the knuckles in a palm strike. I exhaled and held the pose. My left hand swept to the right side and I pivoted on my right leg. The left leg alternated with the right, by going to the front while my right hand exploded forward in a swift but powerful fist. Just in time for me to exhale.
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- darksea10mthCommented[In this Marvel World, you will be given a choice sooner or later. Will you be one of the good guys, or will you fall to the dark side? It is time to choose!]
- darksea10mthCommentedAnd she wants to smack herself for having such conflicting thoughts. If Hector used his telepathy to read her mind he would think: Women...
- darksea10mthCommentedBut I accept Zatanna, Dr Fate, and Constantine. Heck, there a bunch of Magic Users in anime that can fit the position.
- darksea10mthCommented
anodita
But I accept Zatanna, Dr Fate, and Constantine. Heck, there a bunch of Magic Users in anime that can fit the position. - darksea10mthCommented"Damn... Your really thought in everything, right?" Captain Celebrity talks about his place.
- darksea10mthCommented"Oh, you'll have to transmit it in another way. Gestures, your tone of voice…" She says.
- darksea10mthCommentedHe should take a break.
- darksea11mthCommentedWhile most of the Hogwarts students were clueless, the Mahoutokoro students reacted quite intensely by the new arrival. It was an auburn haired girl with a serious face and a voluptuous body that was outlined due to her tight clothing. She had a short sword strapped to her back.
- darksea11mthReplied to StevenWar"Yep, that's him. He's got a crazy huge fan following on Hooter and Magebook,"