Tags: +18, Mature, Action, Maybe Harem, Fantasy, Kingdom Building, Romantic Subplot, Strong MC, Timeline Divergence, Transmigration, Reincarnation, Gore,  Brutality, Villain MC.

A selfish power-hungry guy dies and transmigrates into the STAR WARS universe. See his attempt to conquer the galaxy and becoming a Sith. Dark/Selfish Powerhungry MC fic. I also uploaded this fic on fanfiction net so there's no copying.

Planning to finish the story even if it takes 10 years.

This is a 'REWRITE' of my first ever fanfiction; please give me feedback and suggestions. In a sense, I am turning a new leaf for this story.

English is my second language to let others know why I sometimes make mistakes.

Note: I do not own Star Wars. It Belongs to The Walt Disney Company. This story is not written for commercial gain. I make no money from it.

Being reborn sucks. And to do so in the Star Wars Universe is a recipe for disaster.

And if you are reborn as a Force Sensitive during the Old Republic Era, you are royally kriffed. 

Unless you are me. 

This is my account of life in the Star Wars Universe and how I kriffed up the timeline just by existing...

Author- Hello everyone, I hope your all having a great day I know I am and without further ado let's hop right into it.

1:  The chronological order will not be the same as in the original clone wars.  I originally was planning to, but it is so incredibly difficult to keep it in that order while writing a good fanfiction, so by doing it in a new chronological order it will be much easier and more enjoyable.

2:  I will be introducing new arcs into the clone wars.  

3:  I will be slightly modifying ancient star wars lore.

4:  I will not be following either canon or legends when it comes to the Sequel timeline.  Instead, I will be creating my own sequels that I believe you will all enjoy much more than either of the former options.

5:  Should there be 2 or 3 companions (Including Ashoka).  If so who should they be?

6:  Don't forget to support me at PayPal.Me/YugiohGod

When a prodigy of the Jedi Order, Mandalorian by blood, and proud warrior, sacrifices himself to allow his friends to escape the clutches of Darth Vass a member of the dark council.  

Surprisingly, he survived his suicide attack but he awakens over five millennia later.

"What happened to the Sith Empire?  Huh?  Confederacy?  Clone Wars?  What year is it?"

(WARNING:  FOR THE FINAL TIME HE IS A STRONG MC, NOT AN OP MC!!!!)

(DISCLAIMER I DO NOT OWN RIGHTS TO STAR WARS)

(-)  =  Thoughts
{-}  =  System
"-"  = Speaking
[-]   = Sounds

It was an unusually warm night of the coast of Bahrain, Our MC (Main Character) was on the Focsle of the Royal Navy Ship he works on maintaining the 30mm barrel of a Hunt Class Minesweeper. It was a standard job for our MC he was known as Drex onboard the crew, he was very quite and hard-working and never complained about anything. He was 5'4 and 22 years old with deep blue eyes and dark brown hair.

He was greasing up the barrel like he usually does when he finishes his maintainance when suddenly the siren goes on board. Normally he wouldn't care as it would be for one of the thousands of drills he has done over the past 7 months he has been on this ship but this siren was no ordinary siren it was the incoming threat siren. [ SAFEGUARD, SAFEGUARD, SAFEGUARD, AIR THREAT RED! AIR THREAT RED! AIR THREAT RED! ON ANTI FLASH AND GLOVES] Drex being on the outside of the ship first reaction was to shout "FUCKKKK" as he seen a missile coming directly to him  and that was the last thing he seen as the missile imbedded into himself and into the primary weapon system of the ship he was just maintaining.

As his soul was leaving what remains of his body he looked around to what remained of the ship he had been living on for the past 7 months. It was in ruins and not a single thing left remaining, this was mainly because of the whole ship was made of fibreglass. All he could see was body parts and chunks of whats left of the ship floating around. Somehow some of the crew had survived and were clinging onto the only remained life buoy. He thought (Thank fuck some survived) but that was all too soon as another missile came and hit the wreckage and obliterated who all survived. All he could do was get angry and wanted to know who had done it!

As his soul was getting higher into the sky he noticed flashes around the world as thousands and thousands of nuclear bombs were going off everywhere. All he wondered was (Why, why has everything went to shit) then his vision goes fully black and he couldn't see anything or hear anything.

After what felt like an eternity he hears this loud ominous voice "YOU WERE THE FIRST TO DIE IN YOUR PLANETS WAR AND NEVER HAD A CHANCE TO DEFEND YOURSELF"... Drex suddenly shouted back "WHO IS THERE! SHOW YOURSELF YOU COWARD!".. The voice returned laughing "AHAHAHAH, I LIKE YOU YOUNG ONE! AHAHA!".. Drex laughed a little "AHA! You aint bad old man but what happened?, Why did i have to die and why did the world go to shit!"... The voice went silent  for a bit and said "Computer error... There was an update that was sent world-wide by a computer company and it installed everywhere automatically but the update wasnt supposed to go out as it was flawed but a disgruntled employee sent it and boom everything went to shit from there.."

Drex went silent and just shouted "A FUCKING COMPUTER UPDATE!"... The voice came back and said "Yup simple as that, I was too busy trying to stop a war between to different universes so i didn't notice till it was too late"... Drex went silent for a bit just contemplating what happened as all of his friends and family had just been obliterated of the face of the planet along with everyone he had every met...

Finally he came round and asked "What happens now then?" He wanted to know what happens now as he loved to read Isekai novels and manga, He was a secret Otaku in the world of the military as it was the only thing that kept him kinda sane with the hours he does in the heat he works in.. The voice came back and said "Well depends on if you want to reincarnate or not. It all depends on you!" Drex was happy and shouted "I WANT TO REINCARNATE!" The voice came back and said happily "I love the enthusiasm young one!, Very well then i will give you 5 wishes since you made me laugh for the first time in a long time!" chuckling the whole time he said that.

Drex was Stunned and stuttered "Re.. Really?" The voice came back instantly laughing "Yes really hahahah" Drex was still stunned and couldn't think of anything to say, time went by and the voice came back and said "Shall i make it easier for you? Young One?" trying to get his attention, This brought Drex back out of his daze and he said "Yes please and thank you" The voice came back and said "Well looking at your memory i can see growing up you were into you video games and anime but you never neglected your fitness which is great, Hmmmmm, I'll let you keep you 5 wishes and you can choose between the following 5 universes to reincarnate into" suddenly a list pops up in front of Drex on that list it says the following:

{Please select one of the following Universes to Reincarnate into}
{Walking Dead}
{Star Wars}
{Lord of the Rings}
{One Piece}
{RWBY}

Drex was stubbed at what to decide between as he loved all the options but his current favourite was the Star Wars Fan Fics he had been reading so he asked "If i get to choose between them can i choose the timeline also?" The voice came back and said "Yes of course you can young one" Drex was physically pleased, if he had a body right now there would a massive grin on his face so he asked also "Do i get a system and decide what my body would be like also?" Drex knew it was a shot in the dark but he wanted to know..

The voice went quite for a bit and Drex thought (Maybe i asked too much, what if he removes my wishes) He was starting to get stressed out.. The voice came back and stated "After checking through your memories i see what you mean now young one, Yes you will get a system and i will make it a Gamer System to make you happy as to the designing of your own body that is a standard thing for reincarnating so you can decide your own race or choose a pre-selected species and then change what you want to look like it's all up to you" Drex became ecstatic and couldn't control himself and stated "I would like to know if ill meet other reincarnates or will it be personally for me?" The voice said "I make it so everyone gets a unique experience and i don't want people who have reincarnated meeting others as it always turns into conflict, Had that happen a hundred too many times"

Drex became quite happy as he didn't want someone who has super powers trying to kill him. Drex suddenly said "I would love to reincarnate in the Star Wars Universe and as for timeline I want to awaken about 10 years before the Invasion of Naboo" The screen that was in front of him changed as soon as he said that.

{You have chosen the following Universe to Reincarnate into}
{Star Wars}

{Timeline chosen 10 years before the Invasion of Naboo}

{Please select your race}
{Custom race and aspects}
{Sith Pureblood}
{Human}
{Chagrian}
{Gand}
{Quarren}
{Zabrak}
{More +}

Drex contemplated and slowly pressed the custom race and aspects and another screen popped up.

{Choose Base Race}
{Human}
{Sith Pureblood}
{Chagrian}
{Gand}
{Quarren}
{Zabrak}
{More +}

Drex pressed Sith Pureblood as he always played as the bad guy in the KOTOR games and other star wars games.

{Sith Pureblood selected}
{Please choose aspects you want to change and racial features}

What shown up in front of him was a 7 foot tall Sith Pureblood with bright red skin and tons of horn like features sticking out everywhere. It looks more like a blade monster than a standard sith pureblood. He slowly removed all the bone like features so he can them he also made the body a dark Red that was closer to a brownish black with tints of red than a normal red. After all the bone features were removed he changed the body back to his normally height of 5'4 as he didn't want to get used to being tall and bang his on everything. He then started to put some bone like features on his elbows and made the as sharp as he could, he then put a solid layer of bone over his chest to act like a breastplate he never has to remove a bit of inbuilt protection while he is sleeping. He changes the body to be slim but muscular, he added some shin guard with the bone intrusions so he had some extra protection again. He decided to not add any bone intrusions to he head area as he didn't want to look strange when he is fully armoured up, he added a short buzzcut as it reminded him of his old bodies hair. Once he had done that he had completed the body and now he had to add traits to his race as he will be the first of its kind.  He made sure he was male at the end then selected the button to confirm he was done.

{Aspects completed please add Racial traits}
{Total points to choose with 100 CCP = Character Creation Points}
{Adaptive Muscle Memory = 5 CCP}
{Advanced Technology Manipulation = 25CCP}
{Force Masters = 15CPP}
{Dark Lords descendant = 20CCP}
{Jedi Grandmaster descendant = 20CPP}
{Total Memory = 5CCP}
{More +}

Drex was stunned at the choices it just kept going and going and he didn't know what to decide on. He was deciding on what he wanted to be when he enters the star wars universe as he wanted to use the force but he wasnt sure that he wanted to be working under someone other than himself. He also loved the idea of being a bounty hunter that travels the universe doing what he wants. He was also always upset that the droids weren't being used to the best of their advantage so he instantly chose the technology buff as it seemed so overpowered.

{Advanced Technology Manipulation = 25CCP,
create, advanced technology, capable of completing tasks and feats so epic that it appears like magic such as controlling reality, living armor, and weapons, devices, etc also shape, and manipulate technology and technological constructs, computers, robots, hardware, and other devices of technology. Allows for physical interaction with machines, or even a psychic ability that allows mental interface with computer data. Control the flow of intricate machinery, and assemble or disengage their programming at will and operate most technology at a distance. Instinctively how to hack through difficult mainframes of information and bypass intensively challenging levels of online security. The user can also hack the systems of incredibly complex devices and weapons to aid them in various situations.}

He was stunned when he selected it as it just seemed so over powered for the price of 25 CCP so he instantly chose it and that left him with 75 CCP to play with he was happy about that. Time went by as he chose what he wanted and this is what he has chosen after what felt like hours and hours of looking through it all.

{Racial Traits chosen}

{Advanced Technology Manipulation = 25CCP,
create, advanced technology, capable of completing tasks and feats so epic that it appears like magic such as controlling reality, living armor, and weapons, devices, etc also shape, and manipulate technology and technological constructs, computers, robots, hardware, and other devices of technology. Allows for physical interaction with machines, or even a psychic ability that allows mental interface with computer data. Control the flow of intricate machinery, and assemble or disengage their programming at will and operate most technology at a distance. Instinctively how to hack through difficult mainframes of information and bypass intensively challenging levels of online security. The user can also hack the systems of incredibly complex devices and weapons to aid them in various situations.}
{Total Memory = 5CCP, Remember and recall everything that you have ever experienced, encountered, or learned in your lifetime. You only need to read, hear or see something once and you'll never forget it.}
{Adaptive Muscle Memory = 5 CCP, copy any/all movements/actions after seeing it performed once, including acrobatics, martial arts, and other physical stunts. With these skills, they can become masters and incredible at what they do, by combining what several forms which they copy how a person aims, giving themselves incredible marksmanship. However, to use certain weapons, have to watch a person fire that weapon to be able to copy it.}
{Force Master = 15CPP, Master force techniques 200% faster than usual you gain 50+ to FP = Force Points}
{Dark Lords descendant = 20CCP, By having the blood of the sith of old in your veins, you gain 50% to Darkside techniques mastery speed and +15 to FOC.}
{Jedi Grandmaster descendant = 20CPP,  By having the blood of the Jedi of old in your veins, you gain 50% to Lightside techniques mastery speed +15 to FOC. }
{Fluentcy= 10CCP, Fluent in every language in the Star Wars Universe, you will never have trouble communication with anyone out there}

Drex was happy with his selection and he confirmed it with system.

{Racial Traits Confirmed}

{Name your Race}

Drex was wondering what he should name it as it was a Sith Pureblood but he changed so much of the body and traits it had, He also got rid of the height so he will be a lot shorter than most of the other sith pure-blooded but the timeline he chose their supposed to be just about extinct anyhow so he doesn't want to be recognized by anyone of the Jedi Order. He couldn't decide what to call it so he just removed some of the sith part and changed it to PureBlooded Skell due to his body being a Sith Pureblood but he changed the body to not have the usual bone intrusions but more solid plates on his body as protection and only his elbow blades he has.

{You have chosen the name for your race as}
{PureBlooded Skell}

After a few seconds no other promts shown up and Drex got worried.. The voice suddenly said "Did you forget about your wishes young one you still have 5 to choose from ahaha" Drex suddenly remembered and then asked "What limitations do i have for the wishes?" The voice came back and said "You can wish for whatever you want but you can't ask for more wishes Ahaha" Drex sighed happily and started to wonder what to wish for. He suddenly had an idea "For my first wish i want to be a master of all combat arts" The voice happily said "Granted, What be thy next wish?" He went into deep thought and wondered (what if he was all alone in the world he will awaken on, id need survival skills and way to get off the planet...)

He though and decided (he would need someone to help him survive someone strong and wont age.. A HK droid would be perfect but what about a squad of them that would make it even better) He suddenly said "For my second wish i want to be a master of survival skills and building skills, For my third wish i want a squad of fully geared HK droids all of them being a master in a different skill" The voice said "Smart Choice they could protect you when you are young and look after you and teach you all the skills you would want"

Drex smiled that his idea went well with the ominous voice and he had suddenly decided what he wanted to do with his new life when he gets reborn. He was gonna be a mercenary that has an army of strong and powerfull droids. So he decided on what he wanted to do with his last two wishes. "For my fourth wish i want a Powerfull spaceship that can hold the Squad of HK's and is fully geared enough to go into battle and come unscathed" The voice came back and said "Your wish has been granted and i added an infinite fuel source into the ship for you so you never have to refill" Drex was Super happy about that and said "Thank you, thank you very much"

Drex suddenly asked the voice "What is your name, I want to name the ship after you Sir Voice" The voice suddenly went quite and said "I am know as God to all the universes i oversee but i am a simple administrator in my universe but you can call me Dispatcher since i dispatch the lost souls to new worlds" Drex was amused by the name and said "Well Dispatcher shall be my ship's name then since i will dispatch anyone who attacks me to you sir"

He was trying to decide what he should do for his last wish as he had so far gotten master of all combat skills,  master of survival and building skills, a squad of fully geared HK droids and a Powerfull spaceship... Just what was he missing and then he was thinking of where will he be brought into this new universe so he asked "Sir, where will i be brought up in the star wars universe?" the voice contemplated and said "You will be awoken out of carbonite at the age of 8 into a undiscovered hidden Sith Temple on the moon of Dxun as it is the largest of the moons around the planet of Onderon"

Drex was happy as he remembers the Mandalorian missions in KOTOR. He loved the mandlorian armour and there way of life. Which gave him an idea what if he can make the armour which then got him thinking about how should he mantain his robots and then he thought of something better. While thinking of KOTOR he remembers the mission looking for Star Forge then he thought why don't i wish for a Star Forge inside the Sith Temple a smaller one of course but one that he can only control and no one else. 

That was it he thought a small star forge that only he can control directly attached to the Sith Temple. Drex had finally decided and stated to the voice "For my last wish i want a small star forge that can attach to the Sith Temple that only i can control" The voice suddenly said "Well since it will be small and attached to a sith temple it wont be able to build massive star ships are you sure with this wish" Drex piped up and stated "Yes please, i am gonna use it to build droids and small space ships under my command anyhow" The voice chuckled and said "Hahaha so your gonna build an empire are you?" Drex said "More like an army of powerful robots who do what they want when they want" The voice stated "Well it was nice to meet you Young One and you shall be of on your way" suddenly everything went black and he couldnt see or hear anything anymore.

{System Initialising.... 4%}
{16%}
{37%}
{67%}
{98%}
{100%}

{Welcome Drex to the Gamer System}

{STATUS}
NAME: Drex Xi Rinn
AGE: 8 
STRENGTH: 8
VITALITY: 11 
DEXTERITY: 6
INTELLIGENCE: 25
WISDOM: 25
CHARISMA: 3

TRAITS:
Advanced Technology Manipulation
Total Memory
Adaptive Muscle Memory
Force Master
Dark Lords descendant
Jedi Grandmaster descendant
Fluentcy
Master of all Combat Arts
Master of all Survial Skills
Master of Building
{END STATUS}

Hi, my name is Alex Barter I died in a Car accident and yeah, I've stayed so long in this dark space that I started talking with myself just to pass time. I also felt that my memory is fading away, so I decided to list in my mind what I still remember, as said I died in a Car accident and landed here. I was on my way back home form a friend of mine, we both loved Si-Fi and novels, on the faith full day we watched all the star wars movies in one go it took the whole day so it was pretty late when I was on my way back… and that's basically it more I don't remember. It's not much but I at least remember something right?
So, I started to recount that information in my head to not forget that too. Don't know how much time has passed but it felt like an eternity when finally, something happened.

"Quit repeating that already I have understood that your name is Alex Barter and that you died in a car accident", Thundered an unknown voice in my head.

"Hello there who might you be? I just repeated the last things I know to not forget them too like the rest. Didn't know someone cloud hear me could you forgive me for that?" (me)

"Hmm You're quite sentient for a dead soul normally a soul would just be dead… well I forgive you and to take you out of this place I will reincarnate you and grant you five wishes… so where would you like to reincarnate?" (The thundering voice which calmed down and which I started to assume was God)

"If it's possible I would like to reincarnate to Star Wars as it's one of only things I remember. For my first wish I would like to have a System which can show me my Status, has an Inventory, can give me Missions, has a Store and a Crafting function.
My second wish is that I have a Mining Dimension which resets every month. 
My third wish I would like the Mining Dimension to have a high force concentration so I could train in it. 
My fourth wish is that I have a Library Dimension which holds a Holocron of every known force technique there is and updates when a new force technique is found. 
My fifth wish is to have a high force sensibility." (me)

"I will grant all your wishes, but I advise you to pick something different for your fifth wish" (God)

"Then I wish for unlimited Cell replication so my body doesn't die of old age and a reinforcement of my mind so that I can withstand the strain of old age." (me)

"Granted normally I would take that as two different wishes but because you thought of the strain the old age will put on your mind, which not many people do most just ask for cheat abilities and don't care what those would do on the long run to them." (God)

"Thank you for that, so when will I reincarnate do, I still have to wait or is there something else I have to do?" (me) 

"Well you still Have to choose as which race you would like to be reborn as and which perks to be reborn with. You can choose three perks for your race." (God)

Suddenly a list of perks and Races as well as a Character editor appeared before me. As a race I choose Human, because it could be quite troublesome to get acquainted to the movement forms of the new race. For the perks I choose [Child of the Force], [Natural Mechanic] and [Hard working Immune system] with those the doors to the galaxy of Star Wars where open. As for my appearance I just choose to look like in the last live. In my last live I had ordinary looks not to chubby and not to lean, brown hair and Storm blue eyes. Just for my eyes I wanted a little tweak, so I made them golden with a little twinkle in them.

"Then I guess it's goodbye for now make sure you don't come back here to soon!" (God)
"One last question If you would allow Sir?" (me)

"Sure, go ahead." (God)

"Will there be others who choose to reincarnate into Star Wars, or would I be the only one?" (me)

"You will be the only one with the simple reason with your appearance in the universe you create an alternate timeline and as long as no one especially wishes to be put in your timeline you would be alone." (God)

"Then thank you for your assistance and for the chance to live again." (me)

"Sure, no problem have a nice Second live. Goodbye!" (God)

Then everything went dark. When I could see again, I was laying in a forest you could hear a small river in the background and the chirping of birds it was idyllic till I heard.

/System loading 5%, 35%, 42%, 68%, 87% 100% System loaded welcome host to your new live/

'Hello System, is it ok if I call you Jason in remember of my friend who was always with me from kindergarten to University?' I asked in my mind.

/That would be quite alright/(Jason)

'Then give me a rundown of your functions Jason'

/As requested, I have your Status page, the Missions Tab, Inventory, Store and Crafting Tab. God also had the liberty to bind the Mining and Library Dimension to me to grant you an easier access/ 

'That's great! Show me my Status page please.' 

/Status:
Name: Alex Barder
Age: 5 (27)
Title: [Child of the Force], [Master Mechanic], [Undying]
Race: Human
Perks: [Child of the Force], [Natural Mechanic] and [Hard working Immune System]
Abilities: [Strong Mind]
Force understanding: none
Force abilities: none
Force relationship: Child/

'So, I don't have stat points and levels… That just means I must put hard work into getting stronger, but what does Force relationship mean? System?'

/It means that the force recognises you as its own child and other than the Jedi and Sith you won't have to fight against its temptations to bring you to the other side and if you would use the Dark side of the Force you would have any of the side effects, because no one wants to hurt his own child right?/

'That's understandable and I guess I turned five because that's the age when the order takes in it's padawans right?' 

/That's correct. Now you just must wait in a few days there should be a Jedi knight coming to this Planet. He should feel you through the Force and come to pick you up. /

/New Mission Available/

'Please show me the mission Jason'

/Survive in the Forest
Time to Survive: 3 days
Reward: 1000 System points and an Automatic mining drone.
Penalty: death/

'The penalty is pretty understandable, but I think the Reward is a bit high. Not that I'm going to complain about it. Oh, right Jason do I have a starter Package?'

/Indeed, you have.
Open now Y/N? /

'Yes Obviously'

/Gained: 500 Credits, 500 System points, CR90 Corvette Blueprint/

Hi, my name is Alex Barter I died in a Car accident and yeah, I’ve stayed so long in this dark space that I started talking with myself just to pass time. I also felt that my memory is fading away, so I decided to list in my mind what I still remember, as said I died in a Car accident and landed here. I was on my way back home form a friend of mine, we both loved Si-Fi and novels, on the faith full day we watched all the star wars movies in one go it took the whole day so it was pretty late when I was on my way back… and that’s basically it more I don’t remember. It’s not much but I at least remember something right?

Disclaimer: I only have the rights on my OC'S
Title Picture is from Pinterest if you want me to take it down just notify me.

Two days ago, it struck me that I wanted to write a book. I have no experience writting one, hell in the last six years the longest thing I've written has been an email. This story is my sounding board, my laboratory, and my test group. 

There is no major plot at the conception of this adventure. There is only a dream to one day create a world and a timeline such as Star Wars or Warhammer. Where others can build their stories in this world and we can all enjoy in the journeys and adventures that take place.

Spartan
March 18, 2020

All chapters are subject to change; this is a rough draft.

What happens in a world where mortals only gain the power of magic through the consumption of dragon blood? More importantly, how would you react as a dragon, hunted by the creatures you've looked down on throughout your race's entire existence?

Maybe it's time to torch the world to clean out the parasites. A cleansing flame if you would.



The R-15 tag is simply because I find I have a rather gruesome way of describing fight scenes. Wouldnt have a 13 year old watch the beginning of Saving private ryan now would we??

Image is "Fire Drake" by Sansyu
(Fantastic uploads Sansyu)

I post these since a majority of my readers read this story I just want to ask you all some questions I hope you can answer.

I dont plan to drop these stories actually I was going to write my star wars fic but a very negative reviewer cought my attention so I wish to know who else shares his opinions.


Do I have weird Grammar? 

This is his words that I have weird grammar whatever that is supposed to mean.


Edgy mc with edgy music taste?

And lots of edgy clothes he hasn't worn?
 which by the way I do plan on him wearing them again I just didnt want to follow a cartoon character trope.

What I got from this part is my taste in music is bad which I also like music from the 90s 80s and some 70s songs, its just none of this music matches with my story and is not what I listen to alot of now a days since I'm usually not in a good mood.


And he or she asked me is this the type of story where the mc follows the plot but with edgy thoughts.

And a big fat no to this, I have plans for after gravity falls, and everything else I have some ideas how this person has gotten these thoughts but I mean the divergence ein episodes to gain things I even had a chapter planned for meeting the sea monster and finding s ok me uses for it but apparently these aren't good enough, I'm just using these events for a timeline and some will be skipped, or some will.be changed heavily, this is plain and simple, like the manly man episode where Dipper finds those minotaur like creatures which I'll look up the name later will not happen and he will meet them some other way either sooner or later.


And is my mc acting like a wimp and hes on some side quest nobody knows about just to be extra edgy and go back to being a wimp too look normal .

Exactly what the reviewer said do you guys think this aswell because I just wanted to develop his character so he isn't depressing all the time, is being emotional really that bad? I have no clue.


And if you want to see what was said and how I responded I'll five tou his name hes also the only one with a low review of course I will never silence someone like this he or she has the right to an opinion and I just want people to see it and make they're own any other way would just be unfair.

Do let me know what you think please tell me your thoughts on these statements/ questions because I really need the feed back is my story really that bad? Anyways I'll go write my star wars fic and then my Scp one and maybe write some more chapters for my hidden story that I will release some day.


It's just my story that gives me a break from the backlash I get from this story sometimes.


Bye guys I hope I can update this soon.



A heads up the first few chapters maybe confusing but alot of the content in them is explained and will be explained later so bare with them.



Without further ado I give you this stories synopsis.




A boy named Dipper pines goes to a place in Oregon called Gravity falls to see his Gruncle Stan, a few weeks before he has to go to Oregon he discovers this website on the occult, he gives a sacrifice of sorts and utters a chant then he blacks out, and when he wakes up he discovers a book and begins to learn the inner workings of magic, but it's not as simple as that read to find out more.


It's a reincarnation of sorts it was a normal person who was reincarnated no wishes no knowledge nothing but maybe the occasional vision from his past, and who was reincarnated and who reincarnated him that's a secret until its revealed.

And just a heads up it's a darker Dipper, this dipper went through years of being ignored and in that time he trained in some martial arts muay tai and the likes, and due to mor having many social interactions holding him down and other factors he was online and it reading alot researching all manner of subjects until one in particular took his fancy, and that subject was the occult it amazes him with intricacies of magic, demons, and concoctions they wrote these based on science and seemed completely believable, and he started making it his goal to become apart of that world, that seemingly imaginative world, and adventually he got what he desired most, now shall we follow him on his journey.


______________________________________________


Now Here's a quote from my people DO YOU KNOW DAE WAE?

By the way my name is *Tongue click* ELAE and I do know DA WAE.

I know it's a dead meme but it was my favorite meme at the time of writing my old synopsis still is one of my favorites so live with it, my people have spoken.

Anywho jokes aside have a very nice day and enjoy my hard work, that is all I ask for and all I strive for is to write quality content for YOU the reader that is all, I hope this synopsis proves adequate, perhaps it isn't but push on through the first chapters and you will
 enjoy pretty decent quality writing.

Well seeya around readers.

-1600 BC/ 2400 URE
Greece has finally been established meanwhile the rest of the world is playing catch up while Japan and Korea enjoy leisure as we continue to advance in technology. Using all the information I bought from the system we built a labor force of robots with tech from Star wars, fallout, halo, and DBH making them really fucking smart and thankfully loyal slaves like all robots should be, even if some of the more human ones get a little snippy with their words they can't actively hurt a human being or deny an order from their owner along with making sure they don't develop the ability to be self-aware.

The robots and AI that can develop self-awareness haven't been mass-produced much less produced because the government has been in like a constant debate about whether they should have human rights or not halting the production of such. However, we aren't hindered by it thanks to just how advance Halo's forerunner technology is to have AI efficient as Cortana that is perfectly loyal save for rampancy or miscommunication in orders.

We've expanded once again also still sticking to places that aren't very far inland however rather than going straight for China we decided to head out and colonize other islands up and down the coast of Asia and Australia like Taiwan, Philippines, Indonesia, Papua New Guinea, and also Hawaii, however, I have yet to learn the new Japanese names of them or maybe I did and forgot. We also went up into space (around -1920 BC/ 2080 URE)  which wasn't very hard from a mix of star wars and halo tech streamlining our path to the stars allowing us to set up a satellite system for us to easily communicate long distances without much trouble and spy on the outside world's development.

Thanks to the satellite imagery we learned the greeks are a basically brand new thing along with a bunch of other primitive civilizations like China and Eygpt which are among the ones that will survive until modern times. I also made us thoroughly search for and locate Atlantis which took a couple of years but eventually we located it now it is just a matter of making contact the same way I'm considering making contact with Mars not that I'm 100% sure which timeline this is so they could be dead by now? Speaking of Timelines I've also set up Hoshi (star) labs a couple of hundred years ago (around -1970 BC/ 2030 URE) that basically keep track of both dimensional and time disturbances but so far we haven't recorded anything that can be alarming besides a few minor disturbances caused by noble phantasms or magic that aren't worth noting. I will be waiting for any time travelers trying to get me when I'm young or say the flash dicking around as one with the speed force does.

Not like time travel matters too much as I'm slowly beginning to lose my grip on not affecting the future via butterfly effect. I mean Japan's got the west & east pacific theater on lock and considering we have the tools, population, and need for resources that probably might continue expanding eventually getting rid of most of modern history especially big events like the world wars and if they do happen they might be even more violent if people can get their hands on our tech.

Doesn't help that while Japan itself isn't a major player in the global theater in early history it becomes a huge deal late game which I have made us jump forward to with basically cheat codes. Our options of expanding manifest destiny style are north into freeze your ass off Russia, west into communist (not at this time) China, south into I didn't know spiders can get that big Australia, and east to the birthplace of the Big Mac America. 

Honestly, nobody wants to go north but we can make do thank you modern heating in exchange lots of land plus resources, west more land resources and people that breed like fuck rabbits considering how big the population of modern china is, the south still sucks heat and everything is out to kills you but resources, and east is a little bit of everything from cold Alaska & Canada down the coast to California finally ending in Mexico with the native Americans spread out here and there.

Honestly, I don't know what to do at this point as far as the future of the world at large. I mean besides waifu collecting gotta be there for the Ulster cycle at least so I can get me some Scáthach maybe saber depending on which version of Arotoria this is. Maybe I will make friends with Achilles while I'm at it he is one of my most favorite heroic spirits after all.

One fresh off the grill (of a truck) soul with three wishes then hits the randomize button on his reincarnation

BECAUSE ENOUGH IS NEVER ENOUGH
-----
When I had first started remembering my past life, I had been seven years old. Or 29, from a certain point of view. Being seven years old, and thus fairly stupid, this had first resulted in amusement from my parents, followed by my uncle getting yelled at because they thought I had somehow gotten into his 'stash.' Once more of my memory returned, I wised up and shut up. The events leading up to me getting transplanted to a galaxy far, far away were fuzzy at best, I had no idea how my previous life had ended. Or even if it had ended, for that matter.
My parents put me through school, had me raised in the world of intragalactic commerce. I snuck a few courses in engineering and got tutored in the basics of using a blaster. I wasn't overly familiar with the timeline for Star Wars in my previous life, but the Republic was still a thing, and discrete holonet searches revealed that no Droid army had ever invaded Naboo, and the Ruusan reformation was a long time ago.
I wish I could say I had been born... reborn? Yes, reborn during the golden age of the Republic, and died of old age before Palpatine was born and everything was ruined forever, but I wasn't that lucky. Nor did I have the Force. Also, my memories had given me a gift in the form of psychosomatic leg pain and a limp. Nice cane though.
"Captain, pirate ships are demanding our immediate surrender," a droid's synthesized voice said.
Oh right, forgot that detail.
"Pick the largest ship and ram it. This will be an adequate test of our new shields."
"Roger roger."
Of all the species I could have been born as, I was a fucking Neimoidian.

Being thrown into SW universe in time before the Blockade of Naboo, our MC finds many ways how to derail the timeline and break all breaks and directing everything into the unknown.
Follow the story of our hero, of how he kriffed up the galaxy.

"I will be updating this novel from the forums once a month(if there is any), so don't complain if there is nothing to read, I'm as big of a reader as any of you are XP"

This novel I bring to you from forums that not so many had visited and it's hard to find constantly updated stories.
Forum stories of origin:
https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/screw-the-force-i-have-money-star-wars-si.649535/reader/

All right for star wars and etc are reserved by their respected owned, this is work of fanfiction and made by [QuickDeath007] Author!!!

Hey guys it's been a long, long time. Merry Christmas! Unlike last year I haven't been able to do something crazy such as create a 40k word chapter, only around a 20k chapter.  Now I hope you guys aren't too disappointed with the chapter, I took a long break from writing over the year which has delayed the release of this chapter, as well as the fact it was meant to be an intermission chapter has really restricted how long it was going to be.

When I say intermission, I mean all this chapter was supposed to be, was a set up for many different story arcs later in the novel. This can be seen with over half the scenes alluding to something that will come in the future. Some faster than others.

Now I wanted to get this out of the way as well. The first scene and last scene in the chapter and any other chapter I generally do, are likely to not be in chronological order. As can be seen with the Shmi start to the chapter, followed by the council meeting.

If you were to look at a timeline of events the council meeting happens before the Shmi scene when she arrives on the planet. I have done this so it's harder to determine a proper time line, generally because this gives me a little leeway in what I can put into each chapter.

I think that having the first and last parts of the chapter, possibly being out of chronological order gives me a lot of opportunities to set things up in the future. Almost always I would say the last scene in the chapter will be set outside the timeline of events that happened in the chapter. Ranging from weeks to months into the future. 

Of course in the case of this intermission, there is a little chronological order in the timeline of scenes, but it is hard to tell because there is nothing so connected that you can tell. Outside of the first two scenes and the last scene. (Honestly hope I'm not confusing you guys too much here)

Now moving on, as I haven't been writing at all this year, outside of a few small chapters I really would love to hear what you guys think. I believe that the council scene wasn't bad, as well as the Shmi scene. Though my forte does not lye with political scenes and I find them hard to write, especially the planning that happened in the council scene.

Other than that I also think I did a not too bad job with the self-realization with Aayla, though I think I could have possibly done it better. The mental image in her head that she fights was very hard to write in my opinion. Also I'm sure a lot of you noticed who cameoed there.

Speaking of Cameos

In regards to the Commander of his forces…. I dropped about 3 hints into that part of the chapter, 2 small one and a major hint. For those that figured it out. This is going to be an amalgamation of both canon and legends that I'll be working with. I want to make the character more logical and impersonal; really give off a power went to his head kind of vibe to him, which will change how his back story and name are given to him. It will be very fun when a certain (Hint), Demi-god and Living-God meet… I'm thinking (Foreshadow) The battle of Hypori.

So as in regards to Ventress. Yes she will be in the story in the future as an apprentice no less! But who's apprentice shall she be?…. I mean I think a few people can make logical jumps to figure it out. It's pretty damn obvious when you think about their personalities and how they match up. But again this is really just a set up for her, like everything else in this chapter. Now onto the main point here. I don't know her full backstory, I'm still going through it right now. But to those avid Ventress fans, no I don't know which version of her back story I will use, legends or canon. There are good parts about both. In regards to her father figure/master I'm still deciding if I should have it that he killed her first slaver/father that she grew attached to. I think it's a good story point to explore, just don't know if I will.

Finally on to the mysterious planet and the queen. As I have said already in the other notes, all of these little scenes connect one way or another into story lines that will play out with the main characters/companions. So going off that some might figure out who this connects to. Really only 2 people that I could be talking about.

This is an original created planet, in that I mean, the planet name when revealed will be from star wars, but their culture, political structure, military, religion etc. will all be fiction made by myself, which is something that evolved from events mentioned in past chapters. Take your best guesses in the comments, sadly I won't be able to confirm or deny whether you are right until a later date.

Finally I know I'm going to get some hate, but I obviously put in a scene about Rey. Yes I will be doing a story line with her. Yes a future version of her, yes a young version of her (Which means I can turn her into anything, don't immediately jump the gun on hate… and yes I have thought about other people in the clone war periods that I could use instead of her. Yes I will be using most of the ones you will list for different story lines, Best example right now Ventress herself.)

Other than that I also think I should mention I might tone down the introduction of new female characters specifically. I mean I feel like I've just been introducing way too many of them. When it came to the 'Golden Twins' in this chapter, I originally had it that they were both sisters, but almost changed it to a brother/sister relationship. It wouldn't change much. It was just after thinking about it, this story really does have a lot of female leads, even though Mace is the main character, I have focused on, Aayla, Nadia, Padme, Jaesa, heck even Rey.

I would like to know what you guys think, I find I've done that with stories in the past, introduce a lot more female characters compared to male ones. Now that's not to say I don't have any Male characters I will be introducing, actually next chapter I'm going to be introducing one. It just seems like there are a lot of females right now. Your thoughts? 

PS. Ventress is like around 12 or something like that for people that are wondering. She is still young and there are 10 years before the start of the clone wars, so lots of time for her to grow.

PPS. For those wondering, the armour used by the Royal Guard is based on the SWTOR Exiled Padawan Armor Set.

Next chapter: Temple Ransacking (Working Title)

Now I'm very tired, excuse me while i go sleep!

Zevren out!

Mace Rook, Dark lord of the Sith, The Emperor’s Wrath, The outlander, The alliance commander, a Person with too many titles to count. On his way back from a mission to quell a group of insurgents the force rages and he and his current crew are flung 4000 Years into the future.

What happens when a crew of powerful force sensitive Sith are flung into the blockade of Naboo? How will the Jedi react to this new force in the Galaxy? How will the Sith? How will Mace and his crew? Will they let the course of the galaxy continue unhindered or will they make changes that reverberate through the force forever. 

**************

This is an AU based on the game SWTOR, some things have changed, but if you haven't played the game there will be a few spoilers, with character names and affiliations. But as this is an AU they are different from the game characters in some ways.

*************

This is a very slow release Novel as i have other stories i will be updating. This novel will be worked on when i can't be stuffed with the others. 

*************

(Disclaimer: I do not own Star Wars or any of their intellectual property. I also do not own Bio Ware or their IP)

(I don’t own the picture displayed. If the original author would like me to take it down please message me and I will gladly do so.)

star wars timeline novel

Star Wars Reborn Reborn

Kriffing Up the Timeline

Star Wars: Phantom of Old Mandolore

Star Wars: Fan Fiction

Child of the Force - A Star Wars Fan-fiction

Cleansing Flame

Gravity Falls: The Lord of Darkness

Sword Emperor in a crossover world

Screw the force, I have money! [Star wars SI]

Star Wars: Wrath of The Force

People search star wars timeline also like: