Umbrella academy AU
What happens when instead of Klaus being kidnapped Allison and Diego get kidnapped and brain washed, when they return to the others one is fully gone but the other is fighting between their self's and who they where brain washed to be.

Part two

This is a continuation of my 1st part of change of mind which is an original story.

allison and deigo have another run in with the commission, they make a deal for five they would be granted anything they want. But first they had to bring five to the commission, they do their part and the commission send them to their new timeline. They have both regrets for what they did but it was already done.

May include sensitive content intended for a older audience Story revamped

JAG excerpt or history parts 
Just for those who want to look at organized
Starting Excerpts from my Story It's Just a Game.

TW Warnings will be on the Part Title!! 
I sense a sprit, yet it felt different unlike the rest. I felt a heart beat....
Was it a sense?
I enter the room and suddenly feel electricity,
then a vision...
Her.
I've been seeing her recently and I didn't understand why.
Who was she?
I had no one to tell.
Whoever she was, or whatever she was..
I had to know.
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This book is a fanfiction of mine about Sal Fisher getting his happy ending, and yes, I am writing about almost all the parts.
Even the one when he goes on a rampage. 
Trigger Warnings on some parts, and yes smut >.

TW Warnings will be on the Part Title!! 
I sense a sprit, yet it felt different unlike the rest. I felt a heart beat....
Was it a sense?
I enter the room and suddenly feel electricity,
then a vision...
Her.
I've been seeing her recently and I didn't understand why.
Who was she?
I had no one to tell.
Whoever she was, or whatever she was..
I had to know.
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This book is a fanfiction of mine about Sal Fisher getting his happy ending, and yes, I am writing about almost all the parts.
Even the one when he goes on a rampage. 
Trigger Warnings on some parts, and yes smut >.

Short stories about many key parts of amourshipping uwu

This book is a compilation of different stories ranging from 2 to 5 parts. When one story has ended, another story will begin.

this is a story about rin and his traggic life and how he became a great general in QIN a big part of China while going to war with other parts of China and some parts of the planet trying to make with with there ruthless king ming no a bloodthirsty ruler and a fearsome warrior

Acoustic Hearts is broken up into three parts: first, we follow a heartbroken girl, Taylor Wollen as she navigates her heart through a breakup while she is still a little under the weather. 

In the second part of the story, we follow our awkward boy, Tim Bayfield, who, after talking to himself, decides to make a tough decision. 

In the third part of the story, everything culminates together!

In a parallel universe, on a planet just like Earth but one filled with many other races, magic, uncharted territories and untamed beasts there exists a country called Idopia (countries names have been changed) famously known as the Land of the Free or Land of the People. After a working class revolt that occurred in year XXA43 70 years before the initial timeline of this story the Tyrannical King was dethroned and The Council was formed, with an idea that is similar to democracy. During the initial years numerous beings from all the races started to migrate to Idopia after being attracted by the idea of having no King, the idea of a free state. Following Idopia another small kingdom where the king had oppressed the it's citizens fell to a revolt when a commoner of the a underprivileged class became a supreme mage, but unlike Idopia he took the throne and became the king.
Fearing their kingdoms would suffer the same fate many kings and queens banned any and all types of contact with Idopia. 
The Council has a capacity of 347 people, most of them constituted of labor class representatives (from all the races) and the remaining powerful mages from all the races. The person at the helm, the Head Councillor would be chosen by the remaining councillors who in turn would be chosen through elections, where any person with the rights, living in Idopia can cast a vote. 
The Council system was initially a success, the country was developing quickly and even managed to establish some trade connections outside the land. But then over the years the councillors greed started to grow they wanted power, they wanted wealth. Corruption started to grow and the roots of Idopia started to rot and by the present time Idopia became a political mess. Many Kingdoms then started showing support to Idopia preventing it's fall but at the same time trying leech resources from it.
Now, let's talk about the races, magic, beasts and the protagonist. This world consisted of three main races, Humans, Dwarfs and Elves. It is to be noted that there are further subspecies that will be introduced later in the storyline (like first elves and sky elves). All these three races co exist together with not much differences (other than the occasional racial fights) but there are also minor kingdoms that belong to just one particular race. These are also some minor races like that of the demons or fallen angels or bikoi, some of them coexist with the three main races while some either live in small settlements or in uncharted territories. 
Now, the magic system, in this world the bodies of all living beings are a little bit different, other than blood and their veins carry another substance, Mana. It is known by different names in different parts of the world, Chakra in Idopia and the central planes, Qi in cheen and the eastern parts of the worl, Mana in some western parts and Aura in some western parts. This Mana when reached a certain level imbues markings on the heart of the individual and it is these markings that act as a symbol of one's level of profeciency. There are three divisions in magic in this world, Elemental magic , Existence magic and Advanced magic. Elemental magic and Existence Magic is something one is born with (affinity can be towards one or more).
Elemental Magic is divided into Terra (earth), Aqua (water), Pyro (fire) and Aero (air) Magic.
Existence Magic is divided into Cosmos (space), Chrono (time), Divine and Devil Magic.
Advanced Magic is a combination of elemental magic or in some special cases elemental and existence magic and is often learned by beings at later stages of their lives. Gyro(ice), Magma(lava), Metal, Blood, Electro, Toxic(poison), Chloro(plant) and Vibra(sound) are some Advanced Magic types (More types will be introduced at later parts of the story). Advanced Magic is something that is similar to a sub type for a being. They learn Advanced magic based on the affinities they have, for example high Pyro and low Terra affinity when combined gives Magma. Similarly when an individual with high Aqua and low Aero magic manages to fuse these two magics it will give rise to Gyro(ice) magic. Learning advanced Magic isn't compulsory to any character in the novel as all types the different magic are equally powerful with their own short coming.
Beasts/ Monsters are basically the animals of this world but as they access to Mana they also are different to the ones from Earth. They have a lot species some domesticated for various purposes while some through the chain of evolution have taken human like appearance (Beast People- won't come into the story till a later arc so no more explanation). Some beasts are tamed while some are hunted for their cores or hide or any other body parts. A lot of these beasts are very ferocious and strong.
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(*_*) The protagonist of the story would like to say a few words.(Z: a lot)
" Hello everyone, I am Zeke Asad. My great grandfather was a patriot and he fought hard against the old king. After overthrowing the king he changed our surname to Asad which means Free. 0_0. My mums name is Zoe and dads name is Yoel. I have no siblings. Ooooo I have some really good friends one of them is a dwarf called Yigral and the other is a human Nick. I do have other aquitances but the author asked me to not reveal anything else. Oh I have affinity to ****** magic (A:you can't reveal it yet Zayn) and also a minor affinity to another element which you'll get to know in the next chapter. I am selfless when it comes to my family and friends but I am actually a very selfish guy :p I want everything. I am not really a fan of Idopia '_' it's rotting and a lot of talented individuals are leaving the country. Even I would want to experience other kingdoms (A: Idopia is referred to as country as it has no King) I have heard great things about those Kingdoms from my aunt who is a travelling addict. Idopia is biased to the so called underprivileged and it keeps making life tougher for everyone else. So I wanna grow strong and explore all the options that I will have in the future. Join me in my story to achieve... idk, idk what I want to do when am strong(A: that's me saying I have no clue what I will do with this story) but the road to grow strong isn't easy so let me grow strong first" 
That's brief introduction to the protagonist, there will be other important characters which will be introduced slowly in the later chapters and more information about the hero and the backdrop of the story will also be slowly revealed.

Read Prologue Please as it gives an entire overview of the story backdrop.

Hello! Thank you for reading this story! I do plan to continue the story for those who may or may not be constantly waiting for the next chapter (This might have disappointed some people...). Before I do continue, I do have some announcements and/or questions for the viewers.
First, I have noticed in the comments that the current novel has some bad parts or parts that may or may not make sense. I would love to go back and fix them or make the parts a little better. Some parts include the beginning of the story and how it lacks plots for a couple of chapters, the EXP system, and how the system works or what he gets with the system. Some viewers also disliked the nullification powers since it makes him more Omnipotent than he already is (Which I like or want to make him more Omnipotent... maybe).
Another weird part is the character Haya and the intro to the academy. I do wish to fix the character and make the transition to both things more chaotic and enjoyable...
Now, I have some questions for you, the viewer. Please comment your answer below if you would like! Your comments/answers will help develop the upcoming chapters and fixes to the novel.
1. Should the main character be more OP? What I mean by this is that I want to fix the system and make the MC way more OP. For instance, make the MC get more EXP or lessen the EXP cost for a lot of skills. The original title of this piece was called, 'Maxing out everything at the start' or something similar but I changed it to fit the title a bit more. The story was originally about the mc maxing almost everything once coming to the new world - which you probably know already...
2. Should I alter the starting scene/change background when coming to the new world? What I want to do is change how the parents react and their background. For example, the part where they would get a daughter to pass down the special trait. I don't want to give away a lot of information but that is the gist of it.
Those are the main two questions that I had. Now, referring to the continuation of the story, I do plan to continue it while fixing, or after the fixture (The novel is currently short so the fixes should be fast but would be very different so you might want to read the fixes...). I have already moved one of my novels to another site, since it seems better and was easier to fix that novel, so I was thinking of doing that with this novel and create a schedule to post chapters of this novel. If you would like to see that, comment as well! The migration would be to Royal Road. I think the format and writing chapter would be a lot easier and flexible on that site too (Is since I have already used it for a week...).
Anyway, thanks for taking the time to read this not chapter and leaving a comment! With no response, I will probably go ahead and migrate but I wanted your comments aswell. Thanks again and I hope you enjoy the new chapters!

Okuma Sho is a serious MMORPG gamer and is consider a NEET. One day, his parents demanded him to get out of the house and travel to town to get groceries. On his way to the city, a plane crashes onto him, which kills him. He awakes into a dark room with white text. The text tells him that he dies and that he will be reincarnated into another world. Then the text tells him that he will get a set number of wishes based on his past life, which he gets only one. Sho's wish was to keep all of his memories from his past life. He awakes back as a baby named Nii Sho. After a few years, he discovers that magic and skills work as those in his games he played; they're based on a point system. He also discovers that he has points more significant than the average person and that his father transfers his points onto him. What will he do with these points? How strong will he get? 

*** Migrating to Royal Road! The migration will bring a few changes but I hope you will enjoy them! ***

I just felt like I should talk about this.  I'm not dropping this novel to any of the little reader actually reading this.  I'm just barely inspired to write making me take a couple days before I write.  It also takes me a while to write a chapter with one of the main reasons being that I'm writing this on a phone instead of a computer where I can type faster with fewer mistakes.  


Another things is to tell people that I made some changes to past chapters making Gina, Noah's sister, have a daughter and a fiancé.  I then also phrased things differently when I looked back at certain parts of old chapters fixing grammar for some.

I'm using this novel to find techniques I could use to reduce writing things I feel like are redundant.
Lastly, when I think about writing something I'm usually thinking about other novel ideas I want to write, but don't because I don't want to ruin it with how I write the story.  This is why I made this novel, to practice trying to write a good novel.



I just wanted to tell any readers what I'm thinking about for novels.
here are my current ideas ranked by how much I really like it:
1. A novel like Vampire system(where someone gets a system that makes them non human)  I want to do that, but change how it is like to make it be inspired by it instead of a copy of it.  This story is going to be about a boy who gets a system turning him into a droconian basically.  He gets the ability to turn people into Fantasians.  A race that is made up of groups like werewolves and elves.  The setting is going to take place in multiple academies for some of the parts and the outside world in other parts.  There is many changes that I don't want to spoil, but I feel like it would definitely make it different from the novels like it(Vampire system and Great demon system).  The characters are going to change, but the overall mood and tone of the characters should still end up being similar to how they are at the beginning (this is just my way of saying don't leave when a character becomes too dark. Its just an important phase that should not appear again.)  This is the novel I really thought the most of and what made me want to write, but like I said I don't want to ruin it with bad writing.(this doesn't necessarily mean grammar)


2.This is like Legendary Mechanic, Monster Synthesis, Supreme Sage, and maybe The Game of A Blood Mage(player turns into a npc in a game they played along with getting sent back to before the game started)  The mc is mostly a mage.  He does some close fighting, but ultimately he should be an actual range fighter like a mage(he has almost all the abilities of a mage with a few extra).  He gets an exclusive class that allows him to use many element unlike normal mages along with unique ability other class could have(yes there are class that are like mutants/esper and basic classes that were in Legendary Mechanic and then more classes along with those)  This mc will not be monopolizing the players and will actually struggle against them sometimes (this doesn't mean that there will be players stronger than him just that there would either be a lot he has to fight, there are people fighting him too, or he has a disadvantage).  I'm not sure I want to add another part to the story with the mc becoming/gaining a trait related to a god of fear or if I want to make a separate novel related to this theme.  To make the starting world unique I felt like there being an apocalypse(I know there is an apocalypse in both).  There is going to be a zombie apocalypse that the mc is going to solve with him also not completely ridding the virus (he changes it to make it beneficial).

3.It takes place in a vrmmorpg.(This is going to be like Overgeared and Legendary Moonlight Sculptor)  At the beginning the mc completes a quest that leads him to experience a village getting annihilated.  The quest allows him to meet all the gods in the world.  Each major god is related to a class in the game along with minor ones related to the element types.  After realizing that the gods had the power to easily stop the slaughter at the village, the mc refuses the gods offer resulting in him angering them.  They punish him by erasing everything off of him and making him unable to get any of their classes and their variants.  This event with the village and the gods make him realize how bad of a human being he really is.  During the story he helps his sisters in the game and secretly as most of them do not trust him along with help his eldest sister with taking care of everyone.  He has to make his own path by getting inspiration from most classes in the game to make his very own allowing him to become a god.  For him to make his own class powerful he has to be talented and hard working along with someone luck.
These novels I really liked the ideo of it making me to want a story that is exactly as how I picture/thought it.  There are other novels I'm thinking about writing a novel like the God of Games novel, another novel where the mc is a god the makes a world and has to fight/defend his world from others like him [another idea is that mc becomes god of current/future earth and turns it into a world with a system, and an apocalypse novel.  This type I'm going to make more upbeat than the ones that I have seen/read.  The type of mood/ideology(this part is a kind of) really tires me out after 20 chapters.  So I will add more relaxing parts and pre-apocalypse semi-normalcy scenes to it along with not making the characters as grimm and dark.  They might be a little crazy though,  but not laugh from watching a genocide of people type of crazy.
(BTW, if someone does use this idea can you comment on this announcement its name so I could read it)



This is all my thoughts related to writing and where my inspiration for writing juggling between.  This novel I thought of to improve my writing.  This doesn't mean I want it to be bad, but just that I really want people to comment about improvements or parts/moods/themes/moments that was not that good in the story.  So I would really like some criticism for this novel.

1000 years ago, the world experienced a disaster when portals appeared from the world's energy expanding. This also leads to the creation of hunters, who go in and delay portal outbreaks.

 Noah awakens a weird non combat ability, Market, and a devastating penalty that makes him need 10x as much exp than other hunters to level up. Along with many other things that makes him unable to become a hunter. Or does this ability allows him to become the strongest protector?

BTW this is my first ever novel and I have many more ideas for novels, but I do not want to ruin them until I get better so please critique this for me to get better. Also expect slow updates(pretty lazy sometimes and have to think about how I want to write)
P.S. I do go back and change things a little(nothing to drastic. More like adding an explanation I forgot to add, changing a skills name, fixing grammar, changing sentences to make them be more interesting, or reducing what is considered normal if I accidentally raised something too high.)

parts of a story novel

Change Of Mind Parts 1 & 2

JAG excerpt or history parts

Kara (A Sal Fisher Story)

Our love story

Story Collections

the new kingdom

Acoustic Hearts: A Short Story

Journey Of A Legendary Mage

Maxing Out From the Start

Hunter Market

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