I make a character, I talk about it.. maybe if you are lucky, there can be a story to be told

Max is an addict. Not a drug addict though but an addict of Boys' Love fiction. And the only person he really likes is none but Austin Grant. The actor who portrayed the character "Patrick" from "Our Love The Series". He plans to go to Thailand and meet him in person. But will he ever get a chance to see him? or he'll find someone new to love?

What if one day you have to make the most famous villain in a novel...become the most popular character? 

Cecily Florence, an 18-year-old Harry Potter fans, a teen with the dream of becoming the best makeup artist of her era, one day meets a strange make-over system. 

Eh? The system transported Cecily to Harry Potter world? She needs to make Voldemort handsome again?? 

Wait– she also has to make that bald, no-nose man become the most popular character in Harry Potter?! 

No, no, impossible!! 

Unfortunately, Cecily can't go back to Earth before she finishes this noble mission with the reward of becoming the best makeup artist in her era. 

Can Cecily approach the villainous Voldemort, give him a full-body transformation using her makeup skill and finishes her mission despite being a muggle? 

Will she be able to come back home? 

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"Lord no-nose– I mean Lord Voldemort, I swear on my eyeliner that you will be the most handsome man in this world!" 

"...off with her head." 


PS: I don't know when I'll continue this story so if you like my writing style, please search Zehell2218 (author) and read her books. This account is an alt of that one. ^^

Takumi Kazuma is your average(?) high-school boy who loves Anime and stuffs but after he left his own game open and has fallen asleep, he wakes-up on that same game as a (not so) average new (mob?) character.
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Now let's follow Kazuma as he start a harem (of girls of course) in a Otome game!
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Author: Hey I know what you're thinking but don't judge the cover if you know the source of it....
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If you know what I mean~

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What if one day, you was suck inside a book and became a book character that would make the story change itself due to your appearance, then it happens that you love being one of them. Will you remain as a book character or go back to the world were you belong?

Firstly, let's get the definition out of the way:

{A kuudere, sometimes written as kūdere or just kudere, refers to a character who is often cold, blunt, and cynical. They may seem very emotionless on the outside, but on the inside they're very caring — at least when it comes to the ones they love.} -Ripped straight from Google.

Now, why add this sort of character to a story? The answer is that Dere tropes exist. People just really consistently love certain types of female characters that fit their fetish. The Dandere (Silent Lovestruck) is for the dom's type out there~

As for those who like Cool Lovestruck type of female character, they are normally the type who want to see the eccentricities of said girls. The Kuudere's deadpan face and awkward way of expressing herself matches some dudes out there in their high school days where they thought having an expressionless look was totally cool~

It isn't in real life, by the way. When trying to handle this trope, try to imagine a character who isn't an alien but more like a girl who internalises 'love' in a different way from others thanks to her upbringing.

Although some find her defenceless figure with her naive optimisms or straight up ignorance of the protagonist's thought, it needs to be said that someone would have assaulted her already if she was cute and doesn't know frickin' social distance.

Writers love to get away with 'but she only does this with the main character (who is unable to commit himself and is shockingly 'virtuous') so it's fine'. But really... it's not. The Kuudere does not have a cosmic detector for her future life partner.

If you want her to seem like more of a person that can exist in reality, give her some cautiousness and portray her 'Lovestruck' antics in a more personal way. For example: Through their blunt attitude.

The appeal of a rare girl who is emotionless on the outside but sweet and caring on the inside is a fantasy for Otaku who want to believe that the deadpan classmate they likes also likes them back.

Some think that Kuudere wants to be that way.

But in real life, people are idiots only in high school and become more well-rounded as individuals after gaining enough experience and becoming proper adults. The Kuudere's bluntness and cynical way of talking isn't welcomed in more 'normie' groups.

That's why it's up to the main character to be there for her and be the warmth in her otherwise 'cold' life. The only requirement for a character to be shipped with a Kuudere is either that he could break her trope-y attitude or make her feel at home when they are around. Make it look like they compliment each other through their daily life.

Of course, there are other ways to do this as well and I don't see why writers can't be creative when using this. Just don't use the trope as an explanation and more of a point of reference, as it will stop your character from looking like a walking Dere Trope who has a background attached just for making an excuse for her behaviour.

In order to stop and explanation sounding like an excuse, make sure it comes early in their introduction why they act a certain way. As long as the reasoning is understandable, no one will point fingers and say you are making a flat character.

Just be sure that unless it has a slice-of-life added into it, don't make personalities the man focus.

Keep things in the background if you want to be subtle and focus more on driving your plot.

If not, I highly recommend you at least make sure there are other characters she can bounce off of coldly. After all, if you only show her being nice to her loved ones all the time (even if it's the main character), then the trope will become forced.

There doesn't need to be a big explanation for her being blunt and cynical, all she needs to do is be herself and let the other characters be themselves too. It is fine to show the unpleasant side of such a trope-ish character, as it makes them more 'real'.

The bluntness of a Kuudere is almost like the bluntness of a muscle brain sometimes but you can always decide how snaky they are on through the things they say and don't say. The deeper level of their character is expressed in their choices.

And to characterise someone, express the way these character's see others through the eyes of others. After all, going from her perspective alone would lose the air of mystery around her.

Is she caring towards kids? Does she hate the rainy days? When does she empathise? Or be ignorant?

Character choices play a big part in showing what a character is about, and Pet the Dog and Kick the Dog moments are good material to use (I mean the tropes. Look the two up). Either way, how they react to circumstances say more about them.

The Dere Tropes are only surface level judgements on characters anyway, so making a character with the trope as a guide rather than a reference would make an equally shallow character. Don't add mystery aspects to her if there is no payoff.

Remember that the Kuudere is 'cool and sweet', not antisocial. You can picture her as the heroine of Yamada and the Seven Witches as she is the one who can totally live without the main character.

Even if they didn't meet, she would still be a fully functional 'cool' girl who may be misunderstood by some but best friends with others. The caring side she shows to the main character might not be a side she only shows to him but all those she loves.

Contrarily, there may also be a Kuudere who is truly emotionless on the inside and needs a lot of lovestruck therapy before she can open up even a little to the main character. Even when the Male Lead hugs her, it might take some time before she's able to bring herself to hug him back and really show her affection. Though this is sometimes flipped with her instantly wanting children the moment she realised her own feelings for him.

I'm not a fan of the 'You are so kind = I suddenly love you' scenarios as makes my jaw drop whenever girls instantly fall for our Eroge Protagonist MC just because he's a little bit nice.

I mean, have some creativity or at least make the reasons girls like the Male Lead at first something shallow so you can slowly unravel the romance as she gets to truly understand his deeper emotions.

There's nothing wrong with liking a guy for his looks, money, fame, or just because the character is his fan. Anything is fine as for the beginning of a romance as long as they start to 'want' each other's company and like having them around.

Anyway, that's all I got. Just remember she is who she is and slowly unravel her character. Peace out!

(Cover by Darkstar Dust)

This is a story I worked on ages ago that has been refined and edited by adding foreshadowing to events while also simplifying the power system better than before. This story can be considered a prequel to An Adventure Beyond Greatness as it takes place years prior to the events of that story.

Short Synopsis:
After retiring from the battlefield, my life became empty and lifeless. The regrets of my past haunt me in my sleep. Then a change occurred, a King from another world summoned me to fight for his kingdom, but I died even before I could give him my answer. Now, after a fake God allowed me to reincarnate (albeit imperfectly) with my memories intact, into a world filled with magic and swords.

Long Synopsis:
This is about a flawed protagonist who only knew to rely on others and not socialise who gets a second chance to change himself in order to live the life he aimed for in his past life. The narrator isn’t exactly trustworthy since it is purely in his bias perspective while other perspectives given by others fill in the blanks that he either leaves out or twists to suit the situation.

The story itself can be considered a parody of Isekai’s classic tropes which are given a sense of reality as time goes by. As there exists no ‘Demon Lord’, there is also no black and white, only characters opinions and counter-opinions throughout the story.

YAGOO, but a girl. The world also has a supernatural side (for example, Fubuki is a fox  all the counterpart of Hololive members to  doesn't exist. The Main Character is a girl that is reincarnated and on a mission to search for all the counterpart of Hololive members to make the Hololive group. She's pretty much YAGOO, but a girl. The world also has a supernatural side (for example, Fubuki is a fox girl in real life). I'm just a reader who thinks that this novel should be noticed by Hololive's fans. That's it. Lol!There is a fan-fiction novel about Hololive on fanfiction.net called 'Isekai Vtuber' from 'Levelgap'. The story is about the founding of hololive in a world where Hololive doesn't exist. The Main Character is a girl that is reincarnated and on a mission to search for all the counterpart of Hololive members to make the Hololive group. She's pretty much YAGOO, but a girl. The world also has a supernatural side (for example, Fubuki is aYAGOO, but a girl. The world also has a supernatural side (for example, Fubuki is a fox  all the counterpart of Hololive members to  doesn't exist. The Main Character is a girl that is reincarnated and on a mission to search for all the counterpart of Hololive members to make the Hololive group. She's pretty much YAGOO, but a girl. The world also has a supernatural side (for example, Fubuki is a fox girl in real life). I'm just a reader who thinks that this novel should be noticed by Hololive's fans. That's it. Lol!There is a fan-fiction novel about Hololive on fanfiction.net called 'Isekai Vtuber' from 'Levelgap'. The story is about the founding of hololive in a world where Hololive doesn't exist. The Main Character is a girl that is reincarnated and on a mission to search for all the counterpart of Hololive members to make the Hololive group. She's pretty much YAGOO, but a girl. The world also has a supernatural side (for example, Fubuki is aYAGOO, but a girl. The world also has a supernatural side (for example, Fubuki is a fox  all the counterpart of Hololive members to  doesn't exist. The Main Character is a girl that is reincarnated and on a mission to search for all the counterpart of Hololive members to make the Hololive group. She's pretty much YAGOO, but a girl. The world also has a supernatural side (for example, Fubuki is a fox girl in real life). I'm just a reader who thinks that this novel should be noticed by Hololive's fans. That's it. Lol!There is a fan-fiction novel about Hololive on fanfiction.net called 'Isekai Vtuber' from 'Levelgap'. The story is about the founding of hololive in a world where Hololive doesn't exist. The Main Character is a girl that is reincarnated and on a mission to search for all the counterpart of Hololive members to make the Hololive group. She's pretty much YAGOO, but a girl. The world also has a supernatural side (for example, Fubuki is aYAGOO, but a girl. The world also has a supernatural side (for example, Fubuki is a fox  all the counterpart of Hololive members to  doesn't exist. The Main Character is a girl that is reincarnated and on a mission to search for all the counterpart of Hololive members to make the Hololive group. She's pretty much YAGOO, but a girl. The world also has a supernatural side (for example, Fubuki is a fox girl in real life). I'm just a reader who thinks that this novel should be noticed by Hololive's fans. That's it. Lol!There is a fan-fiction novel about Hololive on fanfiction.net called 'Isekai Vtuber' from 'Levelgap'. The story is about the founding of hololive in a world where Hololive doesn't exist. The Main Character is a girl that is reincarnated and on a mission to search for all the counterpart of Hololive members to make the Hololive group. She's pretty much YAGOO, but a girl. The world also has a supernatural side (for example, Fubuki is a

Add a scene where a character runs into a childhood friend.
Your character jumps off something very high for the fun of it.

Make your main character spend an hour untangling electronics cords.

Have a non-important character say the most memorable quote you can think of.

Your protagonist's best friend goes missing. 

Write a chapter that takes place in only a closet.

Reveal the middle names of three characters.

Have your character spend a few hours home alone.

Write in a character who is constantly quoting books or movies.

Have a character unexpectedly burst into song.

Your character is convinced it's a different day of the week.

Make your characters participate in some kind of a race.

Your character finds an animal that does not belong in their part of the world.

A character suddenly can't speak in your next chapter.

Give your main character doubts about their mission.

You wake up thinking it's going to be a regular day, watching TV, playing with Bolt, your dog. Which you don't know is that it will never be "normal" from that day on for the rest . . . of . . . your . . . life. Get ready for an action-packed story with lots of boom and bangs! Romance! Drama! Demons! Come on, I know you wanna read it~

Over the past three days, Roan kept coming to Auron's place to persuade and accompany Auron. And, Auron always declined Roan's persuasion by saying "I will think about it later". However, Roan still not giving up, he kept telling Auron how big the reward was, How they could get their revenge, etc. Roan even gave Auron some called at night.
One hour before the update begun,
"Okay, okay, I will play again after the game updated." Auron finally giving up, "Please stop saying the same thing over and over again, I will have a nightmare. Be safe on your way back." Auron said to the leaving Roan.
"Really? Don't you lie to me, I will wait for you after the update. I have a big surprise for you. See you later brother" Roan said excitedly.
"Hah." Auron sighed, "I am grateful to have such a caring brother." Auron felt warm and thankful for the past three days, he wasn't lonely. When he was stressing thinking about all of his debt, Roan called and cheered him up.
"Without Roan, I might have suicide." Auron thought, "Well, there's still one hour before the game updated, I might just make a new character." Auron started to move into his room. He sat on his bed and thinking about what class he will make. Should he play over a new class or should he choose his class before, swordsman?
"Well, I will just make swordsman since I am very familiar with this class." Auron decided. He started to move into the game capsule and entered into the game.
[Welcome player, it looks like you don't have a character yet. Want to make a new character?]
"Yes," Auron chose.
Then, Auron warped into a circular space. In the middle of the space, there was a girl with a bunny's ear sitting on a strange machine. This was Aurelia. She was NPC assigned to the player. She helped the player in character creation and some basic control for the game. Even if you delete your character, you still will meet her when you create a new character.
Auron walked to the middle of the space to meet Aurelia.
"Hey, Aurelia." Auron greeted her.
"Oh hey Auron, you want to make a new character right? Do you want to start over from questionnaires or you have chosen your class?" Aurelia asked.
There are six classes in Two Worlds, Swordsman, a melee class with all-around characteristics. Mage, a magic class using spell and curse as it's attack. Cleric, the healer class, it usually acts as support. Archer, a ranged class using bow as their weapon. And the last was Thief, a melee class with inclination to its speed and stealth.
Every time a player wanted to create a new character, they could take questionnaires. They will answer some questions listed from the game. From their answer, the game will give a class recommendation to them whether they took it or not, it was left to the player. When Auron made a character for the first time, he used these questionnaires. He was recommended to take swordsman and he took it.
Along his journey, sometimes, he felt jealous of other classes. He wanted to attack from ranged like archer. He wanted to have a heal skill to reduce his spending for a healing potion. He wanted to use curse magic. But, in the end, he still played his chosen class up until becoming the number one player in Two Worlds.
However, this time, Auron had made up his mind to choose a swordsman. He only played because of Roan's persistence. Because of this, he didn't want to take it seriously and only played to farm for money to pay his debt. So, he chose the class he knows best, swordsman. If he chose another class, then he needed to learn over again and it would waste his time. "No need, I will choose swordsman as my class," Auron replied Aurelia.
"Okay. Then, what is your character's name?" Aurelia asked another question.
Auron pondered for a minute, "Should I use my previous name?".
"No. Let bygones be bygones." Auron decided. "Sword of Life will be my character's name".
"Sword of Life", inputted the information Auron provided. "Do you want to enter training camp and learn the basics again?"
"No, skip it over," Auron answered.
"Okay, I will now create the character" Aurelia started to type and clicking on his computer.
In Two Worlds, the player's character's appearance will be the same as the player. They couldn't change any feature of their body and face. So, if they were ugly in their real life, their character will also take the same characteristic. Because of that, many ugly people, who feel not confidence, will use cloak to hide their appearance.
What players could do was to choose whether they will get rid of their body scar, if they had any. Two Worlds only made some exceptions for disabled people. They could design their part of the body which was maimed or missing. Although Auron was not a handsome man, but he was also not bad.
"Hmm..." Aurelia mumbled. "Congratulations Auron, you met all requirements to received a hidden present".
"Huh..." Auron felt confused and surprised. "What requirement?"
"There were several requirement need to be fulfilled. First, there is only one chance to get this present, so you must be the first one to get this. And, you are the first one to meet the requirement. Second, you need to permanently delete your character and start over again. Third, The deleted character needs to be maxed leveled. And the last was your deleted character need to be ranked in the top 3." Aurelia explained. "You met all the requirements. You are so lucky, if you made your character after the update you will not get any of this since the maxed level is raised."
"However, since your character previously only ranked 2, the prized level will be lowered," Aurelia felt pity. "Don't worry the prized still unique. It will only get reduced effect."
"You can check it when you enter the game. I will put it in your inventory. Be ready to enter the game in 5... 4... 3... 2... 1..." Aurelia didn't care about the shocked Auron and continued to transfer Auron into the game.
Surprised and confused could be seen on Auron's face, but he could not care about it since suddenly his vision turned black.


The no. 1 player in VRMMORPG, Two Worlds, fall under the scheme of his lifelong enemy. From the top of the heaven he crashed to the bottom of the world.

Being laughed at and with huge debt in his shoulder he try to get his revenge and conquer the game so no one will looked down on him anymore.

With his best friend, can he conquer the game?

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Release rate: 7 chapters / week with a random bonus chapter release. (GMT +7)

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What can ruin a great system story is when the main character has harems for no apparent reason or for reasons that make the readers disgusted by the main character. This applies for both male and female main characters.
Feeling someone up while they're sleeping and hoping that they wake up and like it isn't how you interact with someone that you're attracted to. It's literally illeg(al). Seeing a main character that is that predato(ry) makes it a real turn off to read a novel. This includes aphrodis(iac) that forces characters to engage in activities that make them "bound" by another person. It's such an empty connection between two people.
I would personally recommend to never include a harem in a system novel. That's just my opinion but for good reason. Most writers of systems novels are vir(gins). Extra olive oil type vir(gins). I had to stay it. And if they're not, then they sure think like they lack life experience with dating.
You don't just save someone or say a witty line and then have someone on their knees. Unless that person has an illness upstairs in their brain which is totally fine but should at least be mentioned, no sane human being does this. The only exceptions are if the main character is famous or rich, in which case, it's a possibility but most people still have self-respect to where it's a process. Another exception is if the story is purposefully written an exaggerated way as satire.
For example, when a male main character is completely unlikeable and then has these two-dimensional characters who hate him but somehow are in denial of being madly in love with him for no apparent reason at all, it leaves a sour taste in the reader's mouth. Just because someone likes a character doesn't make them a moldable idiot. You can have a rational character who's wise and has self-control and is still in love with the main character for good reasons.

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