Shinzu Kaname Was 22 When He Quit Playing  [ Death Sky Kingdom ] A Popular Game that was Sold Over 100,000,000+ Copies WorldWide, the Package of the Game Contain a CD Disc. After Inserting it Into your Computer, You will be transported to a Fantasy World, Where Millions of Players Will Receive A Message From the System and Ordering Them to do a Quest. Only 600,000 Players were chosen to have a Different Message and a Task From the System.



Shinzu Wasn't chosen at that time, but he had fun Playing Death Sky Kingdom for 5 years, After that, he quit Playing, and focus on his Job to be an illustrator to earn a little income. At that time, His older sister Was missing in Her Apartment, Shinzu Then Entered To her Apartment, and He saw Her Computer Charging While it Was Opened.



Shinzu saw her sister status through the monitor, And Was shock when He saw His Sister Potential Was Marked As [Unknown].

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       • Name: Elicia Kaname

       • Age: 24

       • Level: 65

       • Potential: [Unknown]

       • Race: Elf

       • Quest Finished: 347

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It Was Night When Shinzu Got Back Home, And thinking, If Chosen Players will Come Back to the real world, and Will He Return and Play Death Sky Kingdom again?.

Shinzu Kaname was 22 when he quit playing  [ EdelWeiss Online ] A popular game that was sold over 100,000,000+ copies worldwide, the package of the game contain a cd disc. After Inserting it Into your computer, you will be transported to a fantasy world, where millions of players will receive a message from the system and ordering them to do a quest. Only 600,000 players were chosen to have a different message and a task from the system.

Shinzu wasn't chosen at that time, but he had fun playing EdelWeiss Online for 5 years, after that, he quit playing, and focus on his job to be an illustrator to earn a little income. At that time, his older sister was missing in her apartment, Shinzu then entered to her apartment, and he saw her computer charging while it was opened.

Shinzu saw her sister status through the monitor, and was shock when he saw His sister potential was marked As [Unknown].

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       • Name: Elicia Kaname

       • Age: 24

       • Level: 65

       • Potential: [Unknown]

       • Race: Elf

       • Quest Finished: 665

       • [ Playing Now ]  •

                                              •Online

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It was night when Shinzu got back home, and thinking, If chosen players will come back to the real world, and will he return and play EdelWeiss Online again?.

I teleported to a world with magic and sword, but it seems that my role is not to be the hero but the villain who will dominate the world through an incomparable force.

The world of pangeia is not small and I can not dominate the world without having a right crown?, So a kingdom will be created, my kingdom, the kingdom of the Imperials.

But this walk will not be easy, I'll have to face some friends of mine who have now fallen into darkness, maybe in those hours I might even be called a good guy, but maybe I just let them destroy everything they want while in wearing a leash !!

((Paused))

The day of battle had come and all preparations had been completed. The soldiers were on their horses and they were waiting for the Queen to give them orders. The Queen arrived shortly with her horse and beginned to speak in front of the soldiers.
"This war is not a war like any other. In this battle we will face the army of the God of death. I want you to do the impossible. The world remembers not those who give up,but those who persevere. our Kingdom will accomplish the impossible and make history.
ride with me for the vengeance of our king and the peace of our people. and the soldiers begin to exclaim their enthusiasm. "for our Kingdom!" then they start riding their horses.
Jiiku, Kiroy and Riku flied from above together and they followed The Queen. They kept going for 7 hours. After traviling for hours The Queen slows down her horse, then she lifts her hand and orders her soldiers to stop. 
Then The Queen starts shout, "Let's spend the night here. we'll continue at dawn tomorrow."
The soldiers quickly set up small tents and set fire to the middle of the tents. Jiiku and the others gathers in the Queen's tent. 
The Queen asks," How long have we got to go?" 
Jiiku said, "If we go at this speed, we can reach death row in a day."
The Queen said, "Well, then let's review our plan one more time."
"My soldiers can take down the creatures and the enemy soldiers, but what are we going to do with the team Kronon and that Three-Headed Monster?"
The Jiiku "The Kronon team consisted of ten members but since you defeated three of them, there are 7 members left. but these 7 members are stronger and more agile than the trio you defeated, and there's the favorite man of Hecta."
Jiiku "and that favorite member I mentioned is Neffu,the leader of the kronon team, whenever the god of death wants to destroy a powerful kingdom he only sends Neffu. Do you know the legend of the evil bull? he was the man who defeated the Fasıt bull."
Just hearing that he defeated one of the mythical creatures filled them with a little bit of fear. 
Kiroy asked,"Do you know what kind of power he has?" 
Jiiku said "Someone with 4 arms, 2 feet tall and long black hair. Just like the other members, The God of death took him with him when he was a child and trained him, but Neffu became more different and stronger than the others.
Another problem is that the legendary creature of Hecta, his giant Three-Headed Dog Xeno, is an incredibly powerful creature. It is a more powerful and ruthless being than Neffu, and if it hits you with its green fire you will die.
And finally, there is Hecta, The God of death, he has an unstoppable power, many times more powerful than the other two."
Kiroy grinned. "You want to fight him one-on-one, right?" 
Jiiku said "I have to do this, even though it's hard."
Zen said "So what do we do, boss?" Jiiku looked at Zen "each of you will fight a member of the kronon team. Kiroy and Riku will take care of the monster."  
Gorou said, " What about Neffu??"
Jiiku said, "There's someone else to take on him." 
Everyone looked at Jiiku the atmosphere was filled with mystery. a day later, at dawn, the army sets off again.
Riku and kiroy begin talking on the Dragon. "Do you want to tell me where your help is?"
Kiroy replied, "Help will come on the battlefield." Riku looks up at the sky. "Tell me about our grandfather."
Kiroy replied. "At first I was afraid that our grandfather would be as tough as the leader of the fire clan, but when we met for the first time, he hugged me with his eyes full."
"Our grandfather, lost his family at an early age like us. and had to take over the ice clan. After a while, our father came was born. our grandfather taught him everything he knew. The clan grew stronger every day. Our father's fame spreaded quickly. And the enemies of the ıce clan were not happy about it. then our grandfather gave our father a mission. our father had to go to a village to complete the mission. When he arrived at the village, he saw a woman who had been bullied and saved her. Our father fell in love with the woman he saved and she fell in love with him too, and after a while they married. And they had two boys. our grandfather was so pleased to hear of us.
One night our clan got attacked. Our father fought to save the clan but failed."
"The sun god killed our father,our mother and half the clan. My grandfather attacked the sun god with all his might,his battles were heard everywhere. But Zaldra realized this and stopped the war. he cursed our grandfather and punished us by separating us from him. you already know what happens next."
Riku looks at Kiroy. "Do you know why the sun god and the fire clan attacked us?"
Kiroy replied. "In ancient times,the leader of the first ice clan has had an incident with the sun god, and since then we have been enemies with the sun god and the fire clan. even our grandfather doesn't know what happened in the past."
Riku asked "What if zaldra wants to stop this war as well?"
Kiroy replied, "He can't stop this war. Because he needs you for the next event, and Zaldra doesn't like the God of death, because he knows he wants to take over his throne."
One of the soldiers started screaming. 
"look, there's the death row."
everyone looks at the death row and their mouths remain open.
The whole enemy army was waiting in front of the cellar. 
There were too many armored enemies in front of the cellar. There were almost 20,000 enemies.
Armored Dragons, armored creatures, armored giants they all were ready awaiting the command of The God of death. a black-colored pegasus flies above the enemy army, The Pegasus had blue feets, a blue tail, and blue eyes. The person who rided the pegasus was the God of death.
The God of death was a 300-year-old man with blue blazing flame hair,black coat,black eyes,power to control spirits. Jiiku lands next to the Princess. 
Princess says "There are more than we thought." 
Jiiku says, "I know but we have to stick to the plan, Everybody take your positions, we will attack on your command, Rose," he flies back to the sky with pegasus and takes his position.
on the other side, The god of death was talking to his army.
Hecta gets in front of his army and starts talking. 
"No mercy, you know what to do. and I will reward whoever kills 100 First." 
The God of death grins. "go ahead and honor me."
The enemy army begins to attack. The Queen turns to her army and shouts. "Attack!" 
The Queen's army starts to attack aswell. Two armies collide. The armored Giants begin throwing huge rocks, armored dragons start blowing their flames and armored creatures attack The Queen's army using their swords.
Riku and Kiroy use their power to inflict incredible damage on the enemy army. Kiroy's dragon attacks by blowing ice,while Riku attacks by creating giant ice floes from behind the Dragon. with this tactic, they quickly defeat many enemies. Zen was attacking the enemies at the top of the cart with the gun he designed. 
Zen laughs and shouts, "How does it tastes, assholes?"
Lara shoots enemies with arrows on the horse without stopping and without missing. 
Arito uses his speed to kill the creatures one by one easily. 
Wendy takes down the two giants by attacking with her magic. 
Gorou hurls his axe on his horse and kills many enemies. 
Cuno climbs to the top of the Giants, finishing off the Giants one by one.
Jiiku kills a large number of creatures using his lightning in the sky. he then goes on a downward descent with pegasus. Jiiku does incredible damage to the opposing army with both his sword and his lightning. The God of death was watching with his hand on his chin. 
The God of death sighs and says, "I'm getting bored." 
he then whistles. a silence was formed due to the whistle, but then someone comes out of the death cellar, and those who came out was the members of the kronon team and the giant three-headed creature was with them. the giant three-headed creature beginned to roar as soon as it gets out.
The three-headed creature was a 25-meter tall black-coloured,green-eyed creature. 
Riku and Kiroy heard the creature's voice and moved in the direction where the sound was coming from. on the other hand others had already faced members of the kronon team.
Jiiku, saw that everyone has worked out the plan in harmony, and beginned to move towards the God of death. The God of death grinned and said, "Die, little bug." 
The God of death slowly raised his hand and pointed at Jiiku. Purple flames beginned to emerge from the hands of the God of death. When Jiiku got close, it was too late.

In a world ruled by kingdoms and gods, there were two young men. one of the young men was named Jiiku Hayakawa, and he is the disciple of the most powerful God and the owner of the red lightning. the other young man is Riku Kabayashi, the brother of the Ice King, and he is a user of the purple ice. one day, Zaldra, the God of lightning, the most powerful God, deviates from his path, and his disciple Jiiku notices this and they get into a great encounter. their war lasts for days. the world is destabilized. even planets play during their fights. but Jiiku loses. Riku, on the other hand, was tired of the atrocities in the kingdoms and felt that the kingdoms should be reined in. in this way, the two youngsters joined forces and formed a group. this is the Story Of Legends.

[Legendary Superstar (Peak Mortal Grade Skill)]
It was the name of the skill Kritos created before the arrival of Lakhan and Sanju.
It cost him almost 15 SP, Kritos was shocked that this skill is only a peak mortal grade skill.
Although it does not directly affect the target, it could be used in schemes and for fooling purposes.
This skill lets him efficiently enter into another character/ personality and fool the audience. It also wraps the aura of confidence around him and increases the confidence of the user.
Moreover, with this skill, Kritos can change his voice into different voices.
In some sense, he could be a good vocalist.
Nevertheless, it is not an offensive or defensive skill. It is a type of Support passive skill.
"Karen, did you erase all the remaining evidence on the passage?" Karen suddenly asked, according to Kritos, they use illusion magic to divert his ability.
"Yes father, before you arrived here, I already tore their clothes and the remaining thing which could be related to the Mayank Group without touching them. It would give a good reason, how they died there?" Karen soon replied.
Kritos was himself quite shocked upon learning his uncle's plan to counter everything.
Karen decided to tear their clothes without touching them instead of erasing the evidence.
It will give a reason, how Mayank and Manvi suddenly went missing from Rewa city. 
Additionally, if there is someone who knows the exact truth of the incidents would also believe in this reasoning.
As Kritos was only a peak apprentice and also in the weak stage after using transformation ability, no one will suspect him for their death.
Most probably, people who know the exact truth think that there really exists a monster or demon which killed them before they could execute their plan.
In such a way, even if they leaked the real scheme, no one associates their death with Kritos.
Furthermore, if this happens, they would be in the upper hand.
From anyone's perspective, Kritos will also be a victim like them.
Nonetheless, a plan couldn't be 100% full proof.
There may be some mistakes or Karen and Kritos negligence that could lead to the fall of their plan.
"Good!" Upon learning their full plan, Lakhan couldn't help but widely smile.
He doesn't feel bad for their death. In his view, they deserve death for scheming against his grandson.
While they were talking, an uproar was rising in the entire city.
Some people already learn the reason for the temple bell ringing. So, people near it begin fleeing in the opposite direction with their precious things.
City guards were helping the citizens. Their strength was not enough to take part in the extermination force. So, they were ordered to protect and help the citizens of Rewa city.
This was one of the reasons why ordinary people prefer to stay in the Clan dominated city rather than the noble dominant city.
Most of the nobles first look for their safety than their citizens. Besides, there were some cases where they completely abandoned the city and ran for their life first.
Who knows they may have used some citizens to test the strength of the dangers.
It is not like that every noble family is terrible. However, most are.
"Karen, let's prepare, we also have to go in the passage." Lakhan solemnly said.
Before Lakhan could take off his leave, Karen stops him.
"Father, wait… there is something which I found in the passage. I think it may be the reason for the illusion that Kritos encountered."
After saying, he takes out a box that has some crystal embedded in it. From afar, it may look ordinary but the closer you get, you could see the beauty of the box.
"Nero hallucination box!"
As Karen heard these words, a surprised expression appeared on his complexion.
He had never seen this Nero Hallucination box, but he heard its name.
The price of it is not much high. Yet, it can be brought by ordinary means.
Its demand is on another level. All the merchant's group used it as their protection.
It may not have any offensive damage, but the illusion is on a scale of realism.
The illusion created from it is perfect in such a way that, It is hard to find if it is an illusion or real.
Nonetheless, Core Realm cultivators could easily find a flow in its illusion.
At Core Realm, cultivators' eyes evolve into spiritual eyes, which greatly help them to discriminate between illusion and reality. Besides, with the help of spiritual eyes, they could detect the area where there is an abundance amount of Qi.
This realm was also the base in which cultivators perceive the force(A.K.A gravity) that bound them to the surface of the Sincromas world.
"Karen, where did you find this treasure? You know it is meaningless against the Treasure which can detect illusion." Lakhan abruptly asked.
All of the three clans have treasures that could detect low-level illusions. Besides, the use of Nero Hallucination box is forbidden in the Star Kingdom.
Illusion treasure is something that every current king of a country hates. So, it is forbidden to use a treasure related to Illusion.
What is funny is that Star Kingdom's current generation Royal family used some high-rank spiritual illusion treasure to overthrow the previous Royal family.
Everything is done to gain the upper hand in politics. The current Royal family just fears their own scheme.
"Father, I think they used this treasure to deceive Kritos. I found it on the scene!" Karen retorted.
"Huh!" Lakhan remains silent for a second, then said," They really used a perfect scheme to murder Kritos without anyone suspecting them. If Kritos was not helped by those extraordinary bats, he probably died, instead of them."
Both Kritos and Karen nodded their heads.
Lakhan quickly took the Nero Hallucination box from Karen's hand and said," Let's leave."
They already spent enough time in the clan hall. The elders were waiting outside for the Clan head order.
Thereupon when they reached outside the clan hall, they saw a small group of cultivators.
Almost 13 Foundation Realm experts are waiting outside for the clan head order.
"Lakhan, out of 17 Foundation Realm experts only 13 people could come out for the mission." The first elder shortly said.
Even Sanju was one of the people who were present in this group.
After an abrupt increase in Sanju's cultivation, he had taken many missions from the clan. So, it was normal for him to present in this mission.
Upon looking at him, Kritos just smiled. 
"Hmm...Samuel, where other clans decided to meet us." Lakhan asked.
"At the entrance of the passage. Moreover, after they learn what happens in the passage. They want Kritos to present at the scene with us." The first elder replied.
Lakhan glanced at Kritos, who stood behind him. He originally wished to let him rest in his house, but again he also wanted Kritos to stay with him. In this way, Lakhan can protect him in this chaotic time.
Whatever, no one can harm his grandson in front of him. Besides, there is no danger in the passage. He knows the exact truth that there is no monster in the passage.
"Kritos, what do you think about it?" Lakhan asked, nonetheless he wanted to know about Kritos decision.
"Grandpa, it's ok. These injuries are nothing." Kritos replied.
Kritos was also thinking about going with them.
Before going there, he just wants to tell his parents that he is fine.
"Fine, let's quickly meet them. I think we are already late." Lakhan ordered them.
"Yes, Clan head!" Everyone said it together.
***
The Dwivedi Clan didn't take much time to arrive at their destination. 
Upon reaching there, they saw a group of people waiting for them.
"Lakhan, We didn't detect any monster in the passage with the resolution crystal. Was your grandson really saying the truth?" The clan head of the Vishwa clan asserted.
After the Challenger League, he really despises Kritos. He can not forget the scene where Kritos humiliated his lovely granddaughter in front of everyone. Moreover, Manvi locked herself in her room for an entire day after the end of the challenger's league 
She even called her grandfather a coward. 
"Bastard, my grandson is dead due to that monster, and you are telling, he is not there." The first elder furiously replied.
He was already insane due to the death of his grandson. So, it was surprising that he actually abused someone.
"Samuel, watch your tongue. Clan head was just telling the fact." A small man fiercely asserted.
He was the first elder of the Vishwa clan.
"It's fine, Vishwa Tim. He is mad due to the sudden death of his grandson. Yet, it is surprising to see that Kritos is fine whereas his grandson is dead." The clan of the head of the Vishwa Clan indirectly mock him.
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Check out my second novel: The Supreme One
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What will happen-------

 WHEN YOU HAVE A RIDICULOUS DREAM?

 TO BECOME RULER OF THE WHOLE UNIVERSE.

But life gives you no chance ----

Born in a poor family, no bloodline, no soul beast, and a trash talent.

And a destiny to become someone slave.


Will he let his fate decide his path? or
he will control his fate and break the shackles of destiny.

Will, he ever solve the mystery of his nightmares.

Will the youngest race ever free themselves from the ancient restrain.

There was a saying in the human race since ancient times, " Supreme human will return one day, and he will take his vengeance.

A protagonist with a mysterious system.

An Antagonist who was once hailed as a hero, a myth, the god of time and space, and the progenitor of his race. 


Hello guys, it is my first time writing a novel, and English is not my first language.

Initial chapters have some grammar problems, after that chapters are pretty goods.
Give it a try to chapter 20 at least.


(PS: The cover image belongs to the person who draws it)

Di Fuyi offered his help to make her the next Monster King, but in return, she had to become his concubine.
Tu Shanying was a little reluctant at first. She confessed her love to him again and asked if she could be his legal wife instead. Together, they could both rule the Monster Kingdom together.
To which, Di Fuyi replied very frankly, "The Monster Kingdom is not all that I am interested in. This is my only offer. If you agree to it, I will help you with all that I can, or get someone else to help you achieve your goal."
"Are you going to marry another woman?" Tu Shanying was quite disheartened.
"Of course. I will only have one wife. The rest will be my concubines."
Tu Shanying thought about the offer for quite some time before agreeing to him. At a loss for words, Gu Xijiu stared at the screen blankly.
Suddenly, the whole setting displayed on the mirror was changed to the Celestial Kingdom. The Emperor Immortal could be seen drinking with Di Fuyi. However, the content of their conversation remained quite the same.
Di Fuyi was asking the Emperor Immortal if he could have the princess as his concubine. In return, he would be at the Emperor Immortal's service to rebuild the Celestial Kingdom.
The Emperor Immortal accepted the offer immediately and even went into details to discuss their collaboration.
"Little Jiu, how do you feel about it?" Meng Wuya looked at her fixedly for an answer.
She did not know that she was obliged to review the show. Nevertheless, she was also curious, "Why must he use these concubines to secure his success?" She finally revealed her concern.
Meng Wuya answered with a hint of sarcasm, "It is a prevalent tactic used by most rulers to increase their influence. Royal marriages are not a union of love, but a game of power. The royal officials will only swear their oath of loyalty to the king when their daughters become part of the royal family. The king has to keep the marriages going to spread his power evenly, apart from extending the royal bloodline. Di Fuyi intends to rule the six worlds but has never ruled a kingdom before. However, his status was even nobler than royalty everywhere else. Once the fragmented world is united, all rulers will bow before him as submission of their loyalty. His marriage with the princesses will serve as a promise in return that he will always have their backs."
Gu Xijiu could not agree more. Most emperors from the mundane world had been doing the same for years. "I see," she answered, seemingly with a clear understanding of the situation now.
Meng Wuya was at a loss for words. Her calm response certainly came as a surprise to him. He actually thought she would be devastated or even overwhelmed with a sense of outrage. Neither happened. She only seemed enlightened.
"Aren't you jealous?" Meng Wuya studied her expression intently.
Frankly, she did not even know what jealousy felt like. If anything, she just felt slightly uncomfortable. Therefore, she dismissed his concern right away. "No." 
Meng Wuya got the hint. "It seems that you do not really love him." 
Indeed, there was no love. It was just a show, one which was about to be discontinued. In fact, she was already looking for someone else to take the role. Quietly, she had studied Meng Wuya while listing down his strengths. He was capable, good-looking, and very charming. He had fulfilled all the qualities to be her next candidate, except for his lack of sincerity. His heart was obviously not in the right place, to begin with. 
Having him around would possibly cause her more problems. Nevertheless, she still stuck around as she had not found out what he wanted. 
"It does not matter if I love him or not. As you said, men are all the same. It is a fact that I cannot change," she answered while keeping her eyes away.
"No, you have a choice!" Meng Wuya exclaimed excitedly.
"Hmm?"
"Not all men like the custom of having more than one wife."


In a modern world, a professional assassin was murdered by her beloved and found herself revived in an ancient world as a general's daughter with a weak physique. She was engaged to a prince, but because she did not have a nice appearance, her fiancé and sister attempted to kill her. Although she had to struggle to survive, there were also those who unconditionally loves her that supported her in her time of need. 

How does she intend to adapt and survive in such a foreign and hostile world? Follow Gu Xijiu on her journey to discover her one true love!

The world i live is beautiful but only only for those who has power of noble blood or strength as a mage but i never had both of them so after all these years of suffering i got a job of a helper of a guild's unit. And today was my 9th quest but i never knew that , one day i will use that spell.............. Aaris Ralkier
Kurg a village located in the outskirt of the kingdom Esnair.
"So this the place let's kill those monsters and make some gold, donkey!!" (Kyle the leader of Minatours guild 8th troop, a 3rd level beast strength mage) screamed at me,
"Quit standing idle and do some work, don't tell me you can't even carry these bags" he said  to me
"No it's not like that" I said replyed to him,
"You should be thankful to us that we are feeding a good for nothing like you so show some gratitude instead of showing us attitude" he said,
"Stop wasting your time on him and lets go he is useless yet so full of himself" (Rute 3rd level flame mage)
"Well he is useful thanks to this donkey my cost of shoulder pain medicine is lost, good work donkey."
(  a weapon mage axe of earth style user of 2nd level Tesol.)
"Oi! keep attention to your surrounding this is not a time for jokes this is an important quest"
(Polmung a spirit summoner of 3rd level.)
"Some dead monsters are seen here and few villagers were killed while going into forest if I remember correctly village chief said they vanished near the old temple in the forest" (Folia healer of 2nd level.)
"It cans an be an illusionist or beast/spirit user bandits playing tricks to take shelter here" said Rute.
"Yes master said we also had quest to catch some bandits in this area" said Tesol.
"Are they jokers or just stupid to think that they can pull tricks on us the minotaur's 7th strongest guild in the kingdom" said Kyle
"But still we should be care full" I said
"Huh "we?" you're the one with a level which is not even 1 I anyone who should be care full is you" said Kyle.
"Aaris is right we shouldn't be in such ease didn't you notice" said Polmung.
"There were no monster even came this deep in a yellow area" I said.
"Right I didn't notice you are sharp, Aaris" said Folia.
and I blushed after all she is the only one who complements me.
and we reached to the old temple it was huge still not big enough to be pointed from some distance it was more like a ruin and it was giving a scary aura, we reached and said our prayers and went inside.
"By the way you are okay you're brother is still in coma right?" I said to  Folia
"Yes Docter (medical mage) said there is still hope of him waking up" said Folia
"Treatment like these is expensive right?"  Kyle to Folia
I was surprised Kyle was not a type of guy who worries about someone else i thought he had an ulterior motive ,
and ....i was correct,
I saw his hand was going touch the butt of Folia.
"AAAAAAA!!" I screamed and everybody turned to me startlingly.
"what happened?" asked Tesol
"ah..... hmmm....cockroach" I said,
"oye princess get your act together I know your useless but a pussy too" Tesol laughed ,
"lets go" Rute ,
"thank you" said  Folia to me.
"no prob" I said with a smug.
then after some exploration we saw some downstairs on the entrance i saw some words i thought i have seen them somewhere and the Kyle said let's go downstairs,
and we went slowly downwards,
and at last we reached a the floor but the room was so dark like it was denying the existing of light,
Rute chanted the spell and activated
fire style
[FIRE FLIES] it was a 1st level magic to light up a room,
and then little fire ambers came out of the magic circle on his hands filled the room with lights.
it was beautiful to see them flying and filling up the room my eyes was chasing them i always  loved magic because to me it  was like a  impossible dream,we looked at the ceiling it was as big as a castle court it was an underground construction and slowly I looked at the floor and my heart skipped a beat,
it was red, because of the dried blood.
I was shocked and i tried to observe the whole chamber and the only thing I saw was the dead bodies of the monsters and human, in a state so horrible you can't even tell that, he was man or a woman everyone was scared now and trembling they may have completed many quests but  never has seen something like this, and thought what would've  happened here and then I looked at Folia she turned blue by this sight and started vomiting,
and then suddenly we felt a pressure an aura in air so dominating and dangerous it was definitely a monster.
and Fiola screamed "run!!".
Kyle yelled "no we ain't weak some puny monster can scare us".
Rute said "its best to flee for now whatever it is didn't noticed us yet, let's get out and call for backup"
Polmung "I agree lets go"
"no I am Kyle one of the strongest minotaur's" and he activated a beast spell
he bumped his fisted and yelled
[SILVER WYVERN]
and his body was covered in scales he was looking like dragon men
Rute yelled "no don't release mana it will notice u-"
kyle thought why he stopped and thought something entirely different "why you stopped why are you looking so scared in front me don't worry I won't hurt you" said Kyle,
not just Rute we all was scared not because Kyle but because some something dark was standing behind him and it seemed like Kyle didn't noticed it when it closed up to Kyle it screamed in a horrifying sound.
we took few steps back from Kyle, but
Fiola ,she fainted because of fear I took her in my arms and backed up
Kyle turned to it and said "I don't fear the likes of you" and without any second thought charged at that monster no,
it was demon and what makes it more horrifying it was a lost soul demon I read about in my mother's book a demon who became a cannibal and who ate other demons but 1000 years ago Cannibal spells were made forbidden, then how he did that, and destroyed itself going berserk by absorbing power beyond its control and fell into despair a demon like this should not exist why nobody destroyed it when he was weak.
I had several question my mind but there was one thing that was clear that we will never be able to beat him alone no matter what we do.
but Kyle was persistent he charged at him without any second thought and punched him but it was useless and then  he took a closer look at him a big pitch black body with red eyes and long horns his face was like it was crying blood and mouth slited ear to ear his body was like a black armor is melted and got sticked to it's skin and there was red veins like marking on his body and then he smiled at Kyle.
In fear he activated another spell
[ SILVER WYVERN BEAST RAGE]
His body became larger and more beast like and armoured wings came out of his back and then with concentrating all his mana he used,
[RAGE OF THE BEAST]
he tried again to hit him with his fist but this time he caught his hand then pulled him towards itself and then in one swing he severed Kyle's head from his body, at this point,
it was clear today is going to be our last and then it picked up Kyle's body and head and swallowed it whole, , and then with that slited mouth it smiled again it  was like death was making fun of us,
now it was clear to everyone that it's hopeless. we cannot defeat this demon alone, we don't know that can we escape or not but it looked like the deads were telling us No,
and I thought finally my day has come but,
THAT  WAS  DAY MY FATE CHANGED COMPLETE LY.
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Authors note :- (Thank you for reading BLOOD SILK this is my first novel so there many mistakes i know i will fix them whenever i got chance so please rate, and comment and  write  a review of whatever you think and please  support.)
(1. THE AREAS ARE CATEGORISED INTO 5 TYPES
1. GREEN SUITABLE TO LIVE
2. YELLOW :- SUITABLE TO LIVE but RARE SIGHTING OF MONSTER
3. ORANGE :- FREQUENT REPORT OF MONSTERS IN AREA HOSTILE AREA ANY MAGES CAN ENTER BUT NOT NORMAL CITIZEN
4. RED :- HABITAT OF DANGEROUS MONSTERS HOSTILE FOR HUMAN ONLY HIGH LEVEL MAGES CAN ENTER
5. DARK RED :- MOST UNKNOWN AND FORBIDDEN AREA  FOR MOST OF THE PEOPLE. ONLY FEW CAN ENTER)

Aaris Ralkier is the son of the lowest witch, He was the weakest in the world that is governed by money and strength.
Since childhood, he was bullied by the nobles,

Never went to school because of his poverty and was declared useless by having the weakest mana strength.
But his mother always believed in him and taught her.
Two spells she knew, one was useless and one that is forbidden to use.

In the end, he joined a guild but served no real purpose, he was only labor to them, in the end during a quest he found himself doomed by the hands of a lost soul demon and finally he was left by his companions to die there,
While waiting for his tragic end he used one of the two spells his mother taught him,
Blood silk
Now he was ready to die along with this demon,
 but fate has something else for him.

Local newspaper:

The world famous detective Lawrence entered the case, it is said that no one knows the detective others say he does not exist, well those are speculations.

What is known is that he will participate in the investigation of the murders between February 5 and July 15 nominated so far by the agents as the case of phantom death, being the common thing in these cases that died from internal bleeding and brain seizure.

The police did not want to give more explanations.

"""

"Sweetheart, I came back," the woman spoke.

- Mother! - yelled happy Uriel.

That day, Alice's return was the Indian of everything that would happen in Uriel's future.

10 years later ...

In the present.

The Afthon family consists of the married couple Atlan Afthon and Alice Afthon with their two children Uriel Afthon and Athanasia Afthon aged 17 and 14.

He lived peacefully.

Alice forbade Uriel to speak of Vincent or Ana in front of her after the day he returned home.

I remember 9 years ago ...

Alice Afthon returned home.

-Mother! - Uriel shouted with joy.

- Uriel darling come back, take my little Athanasia to her room for me, she is tired from the trip.- her mother said showing her a girl who although she looked like her little sister was not her.

Her sister was shorter in stature and had lighter hair was brown not dark brown although she admitted that she looked alike and her eyes were like his not black her sister's were black.

"Mother, Athanasia ...." said the minor uncomfortable.

- I know you worried about Athanasia but she is fine Uriel now take her to her room, go with your brother my little Athanasia and Uriel be a good boy and do what your mother tells you remember to be perfect I will review your notes from when I left. - Said the oldest giving a kiss to the girl's forehead.

"Yes mother, let's go Athanasia, I'll take you to your room," said the boy.

"Yes," said the uncomfortable girl they had not called her by name since her aunt took her.

"""

- Look Atenisa, Athanasia left recently and mom can't accept it, that's why you should call her mommy that's what my sister used to say, to your uncle my father you must tell daddy and my little brother you understand.- he said looking seriously at the girl.

-Yes .... little brother ....- he whispered.

- Well, then remember ....- he did not finish speaking when his desperate mother arrived.

- ATANASIA! Are you okay love? Uriel! What are you doing here ?! You are forbidden to be near Athanasia if I am not with you! It is understood! - Said shouting at the boy as he slapped him.

"Yes, mother, I will retire," said the minor, trying not to cry while listening to the consolation of the shinigamis.

- Calm Athanasia, do you remember that you were going to teach me how you wrote your name and birthday? Well let's do it now! - The older said cradling the girl in her arms.

End of memory.

-Brother will you teach me algebra? - Asked Atenisa.

"Of course, let Mom know she hates seeing you with me," Uriel said.

- Mommy! I'm going to study Uriel's room! - He shouted seeing his mother.

- Not athanasia! Uriel why are you doing this to me again! - I shout as I slapped him and cried.

"I don't ..." Athanasia said nervously.

- I'm sorry ... I must go to my afternoon course. - said the young man excusing himself.

"" Months later""

Lists of Suspicions:
1. ...
2. ...
3. ...
4. Uriel Afthon.
5. ....
...

-Wilian prepares a flight we will go.- said the detective.

""

"Mr. Afthon installs cameras in your house." Said the detective, looking at the nervous man.

Well, his family was blurred, there was part that he did not find in any registry.

How the adoption of a four-year-old girl, Uriel's visit to the psychologist and among others.

- Detective could tell you something? - asked the man.

"Of course," she said, inviting him to continue.

- In private.- I comment.

"Follow me," he said, taking him to a secluded place.

- Well I'll tell you about Athanasia I must tell you that my wife and Uriel sometimes fight and above all I warn you that you will see both fight.- said the man.

"I understand, don't worry Mr. Afthon," said the man.

" After installing the cameras"

Uriel enters the house ...

- Something happens? - Asked the eldest son of the Afthon children.

(L: who is Uriel talking to? -I ask. Atlan: with his friends next).

- Did someone come into my room? ... I told you today it was Vincent, I promised you traitorous apples! - He said angrily.

(L: Mr. Yagami does this often happen? - I ask. Athan: no, my wife hasn't arrived yet for sure, she talks to herself without everyone's presence.)

- So how many cameras ... it has microphones! - I scream at the end.

- I don't know who you are but I know that only in my room there are 64 microphones and cameras, please retilenlas my father did not tell me! - I shout angrily.

(Detective: he discovered it quickly .- said firmly. Atlan: Detective my wife will arrive soon .- notice).

-I'm reading page 35 of the book: "The caprice of death" .- replied the boy to nothing.

And the death that was very naughty thought: 'what will it be like to be human', 'have a short life full of adventures', 'it must be fun', he thought.
"Then he descended into the human kingdom and with his powers he transformed into a human. How happy was death, but every time he approached someone he died."
"Death fell in love with a girl with beautiful eyes and straight hair, a fiery smile and great charisma, from that unfortunate love a child was born, a monster that took the life of the woman."
"The ignorant death of life fled leaving the child with a broken heart and tears in his eyes."
"And a child grew up ignorant of life, he never felt cold, hunger or despair, he never felt anything, if he was hungry he ate whatever he found, if he was cold he sheltered himself with whatever he found and never felt despair calming his crying with the songs of the people. And that's how the child grew up, called "The abandoned one of death" because he never died and 300 years later you can still hear a child call to death because he feels nothing but he knows that death is the end and the he wants to know him. Never go near the child who will steal your skin coat, he will satisfy his hunger with your insides and calm himself like a lullaby with your despair. "

Death likes to do mischief and being with humans is his favorite joke because monsters are born from them, no one can stop them and Alice Afthon was no exception.
Uriel Afthon was the worst phenomenon that has ever hit the earth, or so the famous detective Lawrence believes and he will discover the reason for the anomalies.

Hello Dear Readers,
I would like to give my sincere gratitude for the time you gave in reading my first novel volume.
The Volume One of Villainess No Yume ended in chapter 40 with more or less 65,000 words.
You can skip the notes below if you want, but it will help me if you decide to continue reading.
***
Again, thank you for your time.
I want you guys to know that I wrote this novel to practice and get feedback from the readers. Your sharp critical minds and eagle-like eyes would have a different perspective than mine, the author. Which makes readers an important part of my growth.
For the future of this series, these are the things I would like to ask and discuss:
1. Review
2. Hiatus
3. Plan for Volume Two
***
1.) Review - This is optional.
It doesn't matter if you could give me a full review, put it in a chapter comment, or just private message me. But please note that the review you will make will be most cherished.
Please write anything you want. Anything you like or hate about the story.
1.A.) Writing Style. Is my writing style so bad that you want to hammer me to death? If that's so, just write it.
But please don't forget to tell me why, and how do you think I can improve. Bad criticism will only make me feel awful, but a constructive one will help me know my flaws and make me happy. Since I truly desire to improve more.
1.B.) Characters. Are the characters so dull that they bored you to death? Do you want more characters? Should I name all characters? Bad character names? More character background? Just write it.
1.C.) Story. Is it too fast? Too slow? Cliche? Or the story is just so weird that you can't understand what's happening? Just write it.
1.D.) You don't know what to write? It's fine. Just say hello and I would be happy.
I will take anything you throw at me. Don't worry, I already wore my level 10 anti-slap helm of domination.
***
2.) Hiatus - I would need at least a month or two to consolidate my work.
As a non-native English author, there are still a lot of things that I have been struggling to learn. (Now I regret not concentrating on my English classes when I was still studying)
But all of that was already in the past. Continuing to regret will only hinder my future.
That's why:
2.A.) Learn more writing skills. I started to watch tutorials and play English Vocabulary Games to increase my knowledge. This will take time, but it will surely benefit in the long run.
2.B.) Consolidate my work. I will need to read my work again chapter by chapter and note down important events that happened, all character personalities, and the consistency of the story.
Which I realize that I should have done more thoroughly, now that my work is getting larger, there are things that I might forget if not noted down.
In the process, I would also try to edit some lines that would correct errors or explain more in detail. If possible, hiring a book editor to iron out my work.
However... It all depends on how great my money-saving skill will be in the next few months. (A new and better book cover would also be nice)
Either way, I'm excited.
2.C.) Giving my brain some rest. For someone like me who is still struggling with writing, I will need to give my mind some rest and refresh it. So that all I learned will sip into my brain, and it will be prepared for volume two. I would like to avoid having Writer's Block which is a condition that could kill my enthusiasm.
Disclaimer: I might not improve much shortly. But even if it's a baby step. I will move forward little by little.
***
Warning: Some spoilers might be here. But I'll assure you not to reveal anything that could ruin your mood. I hope it will be good news for you instead.
So If we ever decide to continue Villainess No Yume:
3.) Plan for Volume Two - I will allow you to take a quick peek so that you can give your opinion if this series is worth continuing.
3.A.) Volume Two. This will be about the expedition and the most awaited judgment. But this will surely not be the end of the series. Because there will at least be four to five volumes before this story end. (Probably)
3.B.) Volume Three: the Xan Kingdom, Marriage, the Zen Kingdom.
3.C.) Volume Four: War, New Generations, The Abomination.
3.D.) Volume Five: Final Battle, Epilogue, Side Stories.
I will try to limit myself to five volumes. Maybe in the future, I can be like those world-class authors that can do 50 volumes in one novel. For now, nice and slow.
***
So... What do you guys honestly think?
Note: I will delete this when I upload the first chapter in volume two. So new readers wouldn't be able to see how I was requesting my readers to teach me.
Don't forget to follow, like, and subscribe. (LOL)
That's it for now. See you all when I see you.
Love,
Konpeki Sensei

Ryuu-jin Aoki, one of the top 10 powerful people in the world, found that his favorite character in the novel named Yume suddenly became a villainess.

For this reason, he used his wealth to find the whereabouts of the author. But to no avail, he failed.

One day, the newest chapter of the novel, condemned Yume, who was punished into slavery.

This is where Ryuu-jin's patience got broken.

Luckily, a miracle happened where he was given a choice to live in her world and save her.

So he became Ryu Xanastre, a self-made male lead who will save the damsel in distress.

"Wait for me my princess," he said, "if the male lead abandons you, then I'll be the second male lead and protect you."

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