The story you are about to read is based on a true story. 

This is my story and what really happened to me. 

This is not a word for word, action for action transcript of what happened. 


This is what I remember and it is from my point of view. 

This story started in the year 2000 but it has been burned in my memory like it happened last week. 

Things like this you don't forget, they stay with you forever. 


I am only including first names in the story to protect the identity of the people involved.

The story is short and bittersweet and has to deal with love and pain and the loss of a loved one as well as suicide. 

If you are or you know someone that is suicidal PLEASE seek help. 

Words can't express the pain someone endures after someone they love commits suicide.

A girl makes the mistake of dating a older man, when she breaks up with him he becomes a crazy stalker. Later when she meets the love of her life her stalker stops at nothing to separate them.

Hey everyone!

Today, I have decided to help some people consider whether a fanfic they intend to write will be receptive by its target audience.

In essence, its quite simple you have to extract the core values that made the Canon version as popular as it is.

Let's look at a few examples shall we?

...

Highschool DxD

The only thing that sets highschool dxd apart from other Harem Anime is the concept of the Devil's Evil Pieces based peerage system.

It's essentially playing pokemon with women with a limit to how many you can officially catch to then battle alongside with in the rating games, the equivalent to a pokemon tournament. 

This goes paired with ever increasingly dire threats to the world to combat, not unlike we all saw occur in Dragon Ball Z. 

Thats it. The only thing that sets DxD apart from DBZ, Naruto and Bleach with is the Peerage System, Team Combat Tournament. 

Likewise the only thing that sets it apart from Harem anime is the typical shounen slugfest and this team combat system. 

With this Highschool DxD scored its own niche. Which is why I am not surprised when I look at the popularity statistics and notice people tend to be more enthusiastic about DxD fanfics where the Si, Oc or Reincarned has his own evil piece set.

This is because this is the main reason for the success of DxD. Meaning that unless you go this route. You're likely to alienate a lot of readers.

The same counts for the USP, Unique Selling Point of other IPs.

Let's look at some more.

...

Naruto

The main appeal of the Naruto verse is Chakra based Super Powers, Bloodlines and Combat.

You will notice that the fillers and shippuuden took a huge hit to the view count untill combat one again resumed.

This is because the fillers werent true to the USPs that made Naruto popular, and Shippuuden drew everything out so much with its flash backs that it had a simular reception. In essence it changed from Naruto to a poor DBZ clone and Boruto then took on the format of the fillers. 

That is not to say that there are no amazing characters or things to be found in these later stages. Just that opportunities and viewers were lost by people no longer feeling the same attraction to the anime they did in earlier stages. 

It is the same reason why concepts like being in Naruto without chakra, being a non ninja in naruto, highschool AU varients with its characters and blind Uchiha / Hyuuga fics tend to have a significantly smaller audience. 

Its because these fics remove part if not all of the USP of the Naruto verse or its USP's

Its also why fics like Dreaming of Sunshine by Silverqueen on Fanfiction got such a huge following when they stayed true to the USPs that made the Narutoverse popular, whilst becoming original enough that it encroaches upon an original story. 

Something The next example will show, is a mighty difficult thing to do and a very intensive decision to make. 

...

Harry Potter

Many of you know that Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find them was significantly less popular than the Harry Potter series. 

So what are the USPs of Harry Potter that make ot unique? 

Truth be told, it doesn't have any that make it truly unique. Its the way in which they are combined. 

Magic School, Adventure, Mysteries, Teen Angst, Absurd logic, Small technical varied magics based in skill rather than slug fests and an ever escalating yearly problem of a different variety resultant of the gradual return of the series main antogonist. 

It is for this reason why everyone sticks to hogwarts and Harry Potter timeline centric fics are most popular.

That is not to say that a fic taking place in any of the other magic schools couldn't be as successful, its just much harder to write because for all intends and purposes it would be a completely new story that if you change some naming conventions could be published as your own kind of thing that Rowling owned copyright has no rights to. 

And thats the problem. If you stay true to the Harry Potter USPs but want to switch it up, you will have to come up with your own storyline, yearly mysteries, adventures and issues. You own characters, teen angst. Its a completely diffrent level of writing and takes an effort significantly larger than a fanfic, a non paid story is worth. 

Yet there are anime inspired by this, who slightly altered the USP, such as Irregular at Magic Highschool, Negima, and a whole slew of others rolling with the magic school shtick. 

...

So looking at al these examples combined. What have we learned? 

- If we want the same target audience as the original works, we need to stay true to its USPs

- if we want to keep the audience, we need to be original. 

- If we become too original, then it might be better to self publish rather than making it a freebie fanfic.

In my opinion, the latter point is worth it if you do not want to be an official author, but simply do this for fun and to relax.

I do not know silverqueen's circumstances or decision making behind why she did so much original content, but it worked and in doing so made her fanfic one of the most memorable Naruto fics of all time.

There are many fanfics out there who set a high bar among the fanfica of the IPs theyre written for but to me, the memorable ones always understood very well what the USPs were and created just enough original content to feel like a unique story without making it so original that its an actual waste not to self publish.

I often found such stories back on fanfiction's golden age by searching on review counts. Its how I found for example the iconic harry potter fanfiction Harry Crow. 

On Webnovel, I find this much harder to do because there is no way to search on review counts or even word count to my knowledge and authors for some reason, even if successful tend to remove their fanfics after some time.

To me thats a bit frustrating, I love how accessible webnovel is as a fanfic READER, even tough I understand what a nightmare it is for an author due to the diffrence in formatting required.

In addition, here on webnovel, you can write the shittiest fic and have the most traction because of the increased marketing options as a skilled craftsman in my own field and an absolute disaster in marketing, i understand very well what pro's and cons either site and their user base's behavioural patterns have for various authors. 

Still, the universal truth of what makes the best fanfics is not limited to the platform your on but in my opinion, its how well you balance your own original content with the preservation of the core Unique Selling Points (USPs) of the Intellectual Product (IPs).

What do you think? Let me know, down below! ;)

Thoughts and Idea's with regards to fanfictions, builds for characters, weapons and more.

I'm not an author, my interests in a concept don't last long enough to write it and I am admittedly not the strongest in writing a decent dialog.

I'm someone who is Hyper Aware of a lot of things, and one of them is if something severely lacks. Whilst I can do art Inspite of that, I just can't bring myself to write dialog that doesn't feel perfectly natural.

That said, I do often write drafts for stories, sometimes I even manage a chapter worth of dialog that any author would be proud to own, but when it's about the baseline that I achieve for my dialogs, then I prefer not to publish.

However, I do have ideas, so many ideas and thoughts on things that I feel the need to express them. Hopefully, they will be of help for authors, who are feeling stuck or unsure how to develop their story, or want to write one but are unsure about what to write.

So, long story short. What follows are drafts for fics and stories. Ideas on how to build a convincingly strong character without needing all those rediculously overpowered bloodlines and abilities.

Ideas on how to develop abilities and exploit them, that you might not have thought to try.

Because let's face it, a creative mind can make even the simplest of abilities into a versatile master piece.

All of those things, you will find here, sooner or later. So have fun, be inspired or horrified at what you read. ;p

[-Deep in the forest-]
 
After witnessing the extraordinary strength and speed of Alliyah, 
 
Including the familiar blood-thirsty look on her face …
 
Joe assessed the situation and concluded based on the things unfolded in front of him, 
 
"YOU ARE A VAMPIRE!" Joe exclaimed.
 
"Yes, I am. So, will you just calm down." Alliyah calmly requested from Joe.
 
"How will I calm down? You are a vampire! And worst of all, you do not look like one at this state and you can walk on broad daylight." Joe uttered in his astonishment regarding the display of Alliyah's true nature.
 
Alliyah tried to move forward and intended to approach Joe but the hunter stepped back in his nervousness and fear of Alliyah.
 
"Arrgh!! Do not get near me …" He tripped to the ground when he tried to step backward in his wobbling knees and landed with his butt.
 
"I am sorry if I kept it from you because I knew that you would react this way. I was forced to reveal my secret because the situation calls for it. Will you just stop over reacting?" Alliyah casually explained and asked to Joe.
 
Indeed it was a shocking revelation for Joe. He tried to gather his wits in comprehending Alliyah's words.
 
"Basically, your sister which we are trying to look for is also a vampire?" Joe asked Alliyah.
 
"No … She is a human." Reply of Alliyah to Joe's assumption.
 
"Impossible! How come she is human and you are a vampire." Joe pointed out his own understanding.
 
There was a loud and obvious deep breath from Alliyah. She went to the nearest tree and leaned against the sturdy trunk.
 
And sat on the grassy ground while the thighs of Alliyah was brushing against the long protruding roots of the tree she was leaning on.
 
She started revealing to Joe everything that she and her fellow townsfolk in their island went through. 
 
Even the horrors and terrors which she and Areej went through.
From start to beginning.
 
Hearing Alliyah's terrifying and sad story, Joe started to feel sorry for Alliyah as he see her tears flowing genuinely.
 
It was his first time to see a vampire crying.
 
Actually a lot of first time which Joe experienced at this moment.
 
[1] Witnessing a vampire walk unscathed on a broad daylight.
 
[2] A vampire that can look like a normal human and transform into a savage and blood-thirsty looking vampire.
 
[3] Crying vampire in front of him. Being vulnerable and normal, just like any emotional woman.
 
[4] And lastly, feeling sympathetic to a vampire.
 
Unknown to Alliyah, Joe has seen many vampires and killed many of them.
 
As time passed by …
 
Based on the true to life horror story of Alliyah, Joe had another conclusion that Alliyah was a victim as well.
 
Bitten by a cruel vampire which desired only chaos and bizarre motives.
 
"I know … it is a crazy story! But Areej is the only thing that keeps me close to being a human. It is absurd to claim that because I am a vampire but … She is all I have …" Alliyah burst into tears at the idea of the possibility losing Areej from another tragedy.
 
Joe get himself up and heaved a sigh for getting into an unbelievable situation.
 
Getting entangled with Alliyah and feeling sympathetic of her.
 
There was a large resemblance of his relation with his younger sister towards the relation of Alliyah and her younger sister, Areej.
 
"This will be a leap of faith for me … I will continue to fulfill my promise to help you. But this what I promise you. Harm any human, I will be the one that will take your head." A serious and fierce look was evident on Joe's eyes.
 
Alliyah could see for the first time the fierceness in Joe's eyes.
 
Then Joe moved close to her and offered her a hand to get her up.
A smile formed in Alliyah's face despite tears falling from her eyes and accepted Joe's hand.
 
"I promise you! I will be the least of your problems regarding self-control. This will be a debt that I will eternally remember." Alliyah wiped her tears and said to Joe.
 
"Let us hurry then so you can finally reunite with your sister." Joe last words to Alliyah before he began walking forward.
 
And Alliyah followed him with a hope in her eyes which she thought was long gone.
 
===================
 
[-In the castle of King Avalon-]
 
After the discussion in the royal court and meeting in regards to their next plan against the humans and werewolves.
 
Their intention to win the war and conquer the central region, including the southern region were their utmost priority based on the discussion transpired in the general assembly.
 
Prince Vincent went to her sister's quarters.
 
He did not even knock and entered casually.
 
"Hey there! Oh dear sister of mine." Prince Vincent greeted Princess Sylvia.
 
Princess Sylvia was combing her platinum hair when her younger brother entered.
 
"What don't you understand when I requested with no visits?" Princess Sylvia reiterated her request of not accepting any visits.
 
Her younger brother just went to her bed and laid down while looking at her.
 
The reflection of the vampire prince could be seen from the large golden mirror of Princess Sylvia.
 
While she was combing her hair, she steal glances of her younger brother which the mirror reflected aside from her regal and immortal image.
 
A certain look on Prince Vincent was obvious which he had something interesting to offer for her sister.
 
It became obvious for Princess Sylvia since she knew her younger brother the most and the way his grin shows.
 
"Better spill it already or else I will throw you out to the window. We both know flight and levitation are not your forte. So, what is it? Why do you seek my presence?" Princess Sylvia blatantly implied.
 
"Impatient as usual. You do not like suspense!" uttered by Prince Vincent.
 
When Princess Sylvia stood and grabbed his collar in a quick manner, effortlessly …
 
From within only seconds, 
 
One second Prince Vincent was in Princess Sylvia's bed …
 
And now he is one second away from being dropped by Princess Sylvia …
 
"What if I tell you … I can help you get close with Sharmaine!" Prince Vincent revealed to Princess Sylvia.
Unexpected revelation from his younger brother.
 
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"Alliyah and Areej against the world remember! You will always be my big sister whatever happens ..." 
~ Areej.

"I will conquer the world, if that's what it takes to keep you by my side."
~ Alliyah.

"Life is like a wheel, sometimes you are up and sometimes you are down. Just persevere and it will not always be as tough as it is ..."
~ Joe the hunter. 


Alliyah is a 21 years old girl who lived as an orphan who has never left the Caragua island.


Until one night, a group of vampires wreaked havoc in Caragua island in which death and chaos ensued.


Alliyah was supposed to be dead but now she became a vampire.


She wakes up no longer a human but a vampire.



What will happen to her? 
How will she survive, now that she is a vampire?

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1 Week has passed since the incident and young Alphonse is sitting under cherry tree of the orphanage's backyard. The orphanage was named Hope Institute located in New Hampshire Ave, Los Angeles. That's rite baby, it's L frickin A, L.A, the place where one dream comes true while hundreds still washing dishes waiting for their opportunities hoping they are another Julia Roberts or Eddie Murphy. Wait, they are not famous yet but this is still an attractive city where they knew it was harsh, dream of fame and wealth blinded them.

Anyway, tis another fortunate things that happened in his life, if he were in another city, he doesn't know how he will got to LA since his body still those 10 years old and would leave the care of the orphanage. Currently young Alphonse is daydreaming, holding a book, pencil, and an apple seem thinking about something while the other kids playing tag, until Toby came over and disturb his thinking.

" Al, come on play with us, after this, we will play a dodge ball, come on come on!!"

"Maybe later Toby, I got something to do and you know the last time we were playing a dodgeball right?." Said Al and eating his apple.

" At least play tags with us, since Harry adopted 3 days ago, we boys need to show our dominance haha."
Yeah, Harry, one of 4 males was adopted by a rich looking pair. At first, they want to adopt Al but he strictly refuse, while telling to adopt Toby or Harry while telling them the good and funny side of them. So the couple finally choose Harry.
" And what are you doing anyway? Is that more important than playing tags?"

" Oh little Toby."

" We are 1 year apart Al."

" And I'm still older than you. Anyway, I'm writing a short story Toby and I'll send the draft to newspaper so they will publish it and get some money from them."

" What, you can get money from writing? And what did you write? Toy Story? Up? Finding Nemo? Wow, so many, since when you can write Al?"

" Since you hit my head with dodge ball Toby, and I got a lot of revelation, like I know when the world ends in 2012 based on Mayan Calendar haha."

" Good, now you scaring me Al -_-"

" Sometimes newspaper had this kind of coloumn Toby, made for creative kids across America, and they will get a pocket money from this. And with this story of mine, I'll fill their coloumn with my name every single month. My name will get some fame by then."

After playtime is over, in evening, Al is visiting Mrs.K on the her office.

" Mrs.K, can you help me."

"What happened Al? did toby throw ball to you again?"

"No, i just need your help to do something."

He bring the toy story manuscript to Mrs.K

"What is this Al."

"A short story, i want to publish it to some newspaper and maybe get some royalties from it."

"Well okay, its rare to see you doing this. are you need of money Al?"

"No Mrs.K , im fine. i think i got talent writing a stories, so i want to made it and maybe i can get this stories to a cartoon or comics or maybe a movies."

Mrs.K began read the story and she rise her eyebrows

"Good story al, this is really well written and interesting plot, i don't know since when you become a good writer but i am sure that this story will be well liked by children but i will tell you first al that if you want to send this to newspaper becareful to accept any of their offer. Some newspaper sometimes cheat the kid like you and took the copyright for themself. well today is your good luck, i know some people in the LA times and i'll make sure you get all the benefit."

"Really? thats great but how do you know about this."

"Well Al, im not really spend my entire life taking care of this orphanage, i retire from job at when im 50 years old and decide to doing volunteer work as caretaker."

"How old are you again Mrs.K"

"You know its rude to ask ladies age right Al"

"Uhm sorry mrs k haha and i got a lot of stories too mrs k and planning maybe release 1 story every week and after i got some fame maybe release it once a month"

"Hmm, my suggestion is to write this 1 story into few parts al, the newspaper coloumn for kid's story is relatively small"

"I think I can make the story into maybe 4 or 6 parts"

"And dont forget, this story is entertaining al, maybe after you release this parts, i can contact few publishing house to make this story into children book, and i dont know maybe you have idea for the sequel story"

"Mrs K, you are really genius! i dont even thinking until then"

"Well, you dont know i had many connection in this field"

"So um, mrs k, do you want to be my manager? i got lot of stories and definetly a top grade one. i belive i can wrote many stories to become book or pitcure book and i need an experience people to do this"

"I am old al, what i need is just easy life and taking care all of you already made my bones on my body cracking"

"Yeah sorry bout that"

"But i belive Mary can, she graduated from ucla in business management major few years ago with good score, but she decided to go back here helping me although she still open consultation service but mostly a small scale one"

"She did!? amazing!? thats why sometimes she was missing for few days!"

"haha, thats correct, she maybe busy sometimes but it was a great help. so the question is for you now al. what based you doing this?"

"Really love film and want to become a famous director mrs k and make a really facinating movies that could conquer everyone hearts. but i need a fame and money to do this. so writing stories and novel is my begining and next become an actor then after that i could learn about filming"

"Are you sure al, hollywood is cruel place. hundreds or thousand people lost in fame and money"

" I am perfectly sure Mrs K"

"Okay if it is your dream al, you already mature enough and what i can do is teach and guide you to stay away from harmful things. the only thing i want from you is always to listen to my advice, i wont control you or made you follow my advice, so every path you chose is depend on you. understand!"

"Crystal clear"

"Good, now my first advice now is clean yourself first, its over 9 pm and everybody must be waiting for you in bed."

" Sir yes Sir"

Don't be too serious while reading this fic.

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A man suffering from pancreatic cancer lay in his bed weakly. Believe that he will never survive, he made a wish on his birth/deathday to become the best filmmaker and become rich on his next life if there is.

A normal boy, who wanted live a genuine life, carrying a mysterious past and future.

Suddenly they woke up in the one body and one mind in year 1980.

Watch him as he becomes the greatest filmmaker and the King of Hollywood

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After seeing 'V' rolling on the floor and laughing his ass off (it's weird to see an immortal and possibly omnipotent being laughing his ass off at one of my jokes), he asked me if there was anything I needed to know before I left.
Me: "I would like to know if the world where I will live again will be based on the manga or the anime, there are some differences after all." (for those who don't know, there are arcs that are not presented in the anime: the ceremony of the inheritance and the curse of the arcobaleno, but in the manga, there are not 2 fillers that are the trials of arcobaleno and the trials of the generation of primo)
V: "The world where you will be based on the manga, so the story will follow its course until the end normally with some elements of the anime. Obviously, this is the case if you don't upset the events too much, especially since you will become one of the main characters of your world, however, it won't be easy, the universes have a tendency to try to correct the events even if it's not always possible. So be careful because the choices you make can influence your future, 'Shoichi Irie' was a pretty good example that gave us byakuran."
Me: "What do you mean by 'correcting events' since the choices will obviously have a butterfly effect on what will happen, especially if I'm not a 5 years old child in constant demand for candy?"
V: "The world you saw in the manga is only one of the possible universes that the author saw, obviously he is not without talent, the manga is based on a universe and coherence with his imagination, his personality, and others, it was the one with which he had the most affinity, so the world will try to follow the story that will be presented because it will be essentially the same, even if there is a variation. But that is not absolute."
Me: "So the plot and plot armor theory hold true...fortunately I'm one of the heroes and not one of the antagonists or I might get in trouble, especially if I try to oppose the Vongola, but don't think about the misfortunes, and if I happen to get nasty for some reason I'll do an 'Rokudo mukuro' to settle it all. There is one more thing I need to know?"
V: "Yes, don't forget that the world of KHR is not only namimori and the story of the manga, this world is real so there is a multitude of people, opportunities and things to discover so little advice, try to enjoy it if it's your choice, but it could also help you one of these days if not... do what you wish, it's your life, and at least you know that you are not limited in your choices"
Me: "Thanks. So when do I leave and how?" (I'm excited, the Bovino family where I'll be reincarnated wasn't really mentioned in the manga, but I know they sent Lambo as a killer for reborn at 5 but considering the case he was I have doubts about the events, I have more the impression they knew reborn would take care of him, especially considering their reaction when they learned Lambo was integrating the Vongola (/The boss of the Bovino's boss was crying with joy it seems). I would see)
V: "Right away". He said with his characteristic huge smile (I'm sure I saw a sadistic smile in it) and a huge hole opened up that swallowed me up to close with my screams in the background.

I reincarnate in a parallel universe of KHR where Lambo has the same age as everyone and... It's ME!!!! (I remind you that it is possible because there exist a lot of parallels universes, for example, one of the alter ego of Byakuran in an alternate universe has a different type of flame)
(This is not my primary language so please, forgive my mistakes)
*I don't own the manga and the characters, they belong to their author, This is just for my satisfaction

➤ Story Evaluations
World: My Well-Wishes.
Task: Evaluate the Story
Genre: Female-Protagonist
Difficulty: ★★
Synopsis: Lucy Hale is just now starting her new life, in a new town, and with people who don't know her. He parents had a messy divorce and she left with her Dad, while her mom started a new life with another family. Watch her Weave and Wave through life in the small town of Sandersville.
 
...
 
A sweet-sounding cheesy story on youth, falling in love, moving on and even going for a happy ending. I Would say it is a story more based not on reality but an idea situation. The female lead who was supposed to be the image of a relatable teenage girl, turned out not to be relatable at all. The book seemed to have wanted to stress that she is and ignored or 'fluffed' the details that so obviously showed she was not.
 
Yes, I know what I said, "Fluffed"
 
Regardless, thought the book does do a way better job of creating a heart-warming tale of youthful love. Its just that it does not translate well in reality, the female lead is gorgeous, but, not average. She is prideful and arrogant, but in the book, she is innocent and new too love. She is also a true southern belle.
 
She won beauty pageants not because of her looks but her truly kind nature.
 
And it only looks like she did that to appear better than she actually is, which total thrown off the how things where supposed to be.
 
As for the male lead, he was the most real character in the book and his character was the only one that translated well from the book. He loved someone and was unable to save that person from herself and her own sadness. He wanted to help her but had no way of doing so, and he acted out because of it. Becoming something like a playboy.
 
So, that he can get passed his affections for another person. He wants to move on but as that same time does not. The female lead did help him move on, but, the relationship allowed him to walk out the better person.
 
Now to say that in the book it was a beautiful happy ending by the lake, but in reality, when the story ended the coupe did not stay together and get married.
 
One years after the install ending, the male lead caught the female lead in bed with another. They broke up and both lived separate lives. What's interesting was that the male lead didn't let her cheating tear him down. He moved on, married, got a decent job, and is a loving family man.
 
The female lead, on the other hand had continuous failed relationship, and eventually she understood why. But, did nothing to change herself. She got married to a rich man and is the bane of her own Son's existence.
 
Evaluation Points:
Story: ★★★★
Characters: ★★
Setting: ★★★
Plot: ★
Rating: ★★
 
Ending Comments: None

My life will Never Change from the ‘Hell’ is it. Even Pain had become a Dull passing thing. I am a coward. I am Such a Coward that no matter how many times I try to take my own life, I couldn’t. That’s Why I was so happy when she pushed me into the oncoming traffic. 

Because surely in death, I will find Peace And Yet……Why?

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Bernard pulled Elica arm even though Elica pull back, he doesn't care after they arrived at his office again. He closed the door after he released Elica arm. He crunched down, leaning against the door, he laughed a little and tears slowly going down. 


Bernard : funny how I cried because of her after years already passed... what a stupid heart you had... Bernard... 


Elica shocked when she heard Bernard named out of nowhere, she wanted to asked him but his condition pretty bad, she decided to leaning against the door beside him. 

Bernard : you can leave... because in one hour after now people are searching for me wanting me to die... 

Elica : what's you talking about.. if you die what should I do with my life? without you my plans would go to wasted after all I'm here to avenge my grandma... 

Bernard : seem like you already reconsider to became my Angel? 

Elica : I don't had to be your premium Angel since after I finished my goals I would just gone from your life and go to the university... acting like a normal girl... 

Bernard looked at her, his dog scratch at his door, whining of dog's can be heard. Bernard forgot he bought his dog along with him, he stood up and opened the door half, he felt something heavy hit him making him fall down at his back with loud thud, he let out hurt groan. 

Bernard : What an actual bloody hell????? 

Elica : you sound like Britain... 

Bernard : jealous? 

Elica saw his dogs but she doesn't flinched at all, she finds all dog cute doesn't care what size it is. They are dog after all, she were amazed by his dog, healthy, good built and massive. 

Elica : need help? 

Bernard : no-no! stay awa- 

Elica stand up brushed her skirt, and lend out her hand at him, what surprised him is she doesn't afraid but what most surprising is his dogs accepted her scent, they usually growled whenever saw someone unfamiliar even with his Eagles and Angels they still aren't comfortable with them. 

Elica pull Bernard up and she crouch down just to patted his dog lovingly, she looked at them and acted like she is their owner and his dogs slowly getting more comfortable with her until they wiggle their tails in excitement. Bernard brain couldn't process faster enough, he then asked her. 

Bernard : impressive, you are the first person who make it alive to take all their approval... 

Elica : wha-what? first one alive...? 

Bernard : oh? you didn't know? they are the rumors dogs of Merciless Monster.. they quite famous but lots of people doesn't know how they looked like... 

Elica : s-so... tell me what is Bernard Treovern, the famous family and the most powerful family son doing in here... I don't know you still alive and how do you know my sister? WHAT ARE YOU DOING WITH MR.LONG? WHAT IS YOUR RELATIONSHIP WITH THEM?!?

Bernard : .... (This girl knew how blabbering non stop) slow down... I will tell you but now is not a good time.. 

Elica saw Bernard about to leave the room, she pull his sleeve and gave him her mask. Bernard confused at first, he went out just to asked Ethan to take his extra mask but then when he saw Elica gave him, her mask, he gladly accepted it. 

Bernard : ah... it's Lady Devonie mask... 

Elica : h-how do you know?? 

Bernard : I make it specially for her but then one day she tell me she would gave it to someone precious... I don't know it's you.. 

Elica looked at Bernard for the first time she saw Bernard gentleness in his eyes, Bernard looked at Elica whom still playing with his dog. 

Bernard : hey, I heard Lady Devonie used to tell you the story of 'The Beast'... 

Elica : y..yeah? what's about it? 

Bernard : You know who's that Beast represent to? *slowly putting the mask on* 

Elica : the story said, the beast was badly injured by his own kind but then another kind whom aren't supposed to get in their world came and help him, but one day they found out the girl help the beast, the villager slowly bullied her because she helped the beast... 

Bernard : what happened to them afterwards... 

Elica : The beast mascaraed whole of her village... don't tell me..


Bernard : Yes, ALL of her story is based on true story... the beast is me... and the young girl is Lady Devonie... maybe she's a bit exaggerated the story a bit... I don't ACTUALLY murder her whole village, I just killed her whole family and relatives... no one ever heard of Levxion family name ever again... since your family decided to call themselves as Devonie.. weird indeed.. 

Bernard leave the room making Elica sweat even more because all the story her grandma told were based on true story, she then remembered the final of the story, after he mascaraed the village, they parted away since they aren't the same kind to begin with, the beast disappear and she never heard about him ever since. 

Elica : HOLD UP! DON'T TELL ME THEY WANTED TO HAD WAR IN HERE?!? I'M I GONNA DIE?!? 

The dog's begin to barks at the door, they surrounded her just like protecting her, they smelled something unfamiliar scents. Elica looking around to searched for a weapon for now, she just shocked how Bernard just leave her in this room! 

Elica : Bernard! you son of- hold up... he's actual father is dead it's not good for bringing the death into this... BERNARD YOU FUCKING BASTARD!!! 

After the door wide open, there she saw three armed people, ready to fire. 

: heh~ he got pretty office in here wondering if he had a girl over...

: I don't know he had such luxurious Hotel in the world!

:are you guys serious right now? BERNARD IS STILL ALIVE! IVEONY WOULD BE PISSED OFF! IF HE FOUND OUT! 

Elica knew her brother in law, Iveony Treovern smell fishy and acting weird for someone a human as him. Elica hiding at his desk, with dog, doesn't know how she managed to put all the dog in silence in this kind of situation, what she doesn't know is, Bernard dog is made for killing people even though they had such heavy gun. 

Elica : hey... why your owner such a dickhead? he left you guys in here

Elica whispered to his dogs, she waited but then she realized they still in room searching for something, odd. They began to scattered all the documents, paper and every inch of room, the last one last is the desk, they haven't checked it yet. Her heart began to thumping really hard until a gun shot fired to one of the man. 

The man collapsed near the desk, making Elica jolted and wanting to scream but she hold it, after another two shot fired and two more collapsed body can be heard. *Thud* they can see finger at the top of the desk, the finger covered in blood, it still fresh. The bloody mask slowly looked at the bottom of the desk making her closed her eyes and holding one of the dog tightly.

Hello, and thank you for taking a look at my story!
This section is for those interested in how the specifics of the system in my story works, and where I am coming from with some of my decisions in the story.
If you are a first time reader, or are not interested in these mechanics, please feel free to skip ahead to the first chapter and (hopefully) enjoy the story! If you want to understand the system before the story begins, or are reading the story and came back here for clarification on how the system works, hopefully this can shed some light on what the system is about!
Note that while I plan to keep my story as consistent with my system explanation in this chapter, there is a chance I may change how the system works in the future, so this do not be surprised if this Auxiliary chapter is updated or clarified as the story goes on.
Apologies if this is a dry read.

---How the System works and why it is how it is---
The system John uses is a personal growth system that allows John to visually see his Attributes, Skills, Abilities, Traits and Titles in an easy to read format. As such, outside of the initial "Boon" given to John at the start of the story, the system has no ability to change John in any way shape or form such as making him smarter or stronger, that change is based on John's own hard work, perseverance, cunning and other such things alone.
This also means there are no such things as quests, tasks, or anything like that to "guide" John in his journey. John must create his own goals and find his own place in the One Piece universe or canon, which includes if he even wants to be associated with the Straw-Hat Pirates adventures.
Because of this, the system may seem pointless or unnecessary which I can understand and see from others point of view, but I am doing this extremely specific system style for 2 reasons.
1). I like system style fiction, so…
2). As a plot related device, it allows John to visualize his personal progress and journey in a very tangible way giving John more efficiency when getting stronger.
For example, let us say John and another random individual are lifting weights to increase their Strength (an Attribute described later) for 1 full year. They start at lifting 10lbs of weights, and both are starting with a Strength of 20. The random individual lifts his 10lb weights for a year without increasing the weight of the dumbbells at all, but their Strength stops increasing at 25 one month into the year. John, being able to see his Strength stopped increasing after one month with the 10lb weight, would then up the weight he was lifting until his Strength started to rise again. By the end of the year (in this fake scenario), the random individual would be stuck at 25 Strength while John would have surpassed him by a lot. 
It should be reiterated that this system used by John is his alone, so no other person has access to visualize their stats in the way he does. This also means that John is unable to see the Attributes, Skills, Abilities, Traits or Titles of other people, unless he witnesses them or finds out through other means, and only then will the system record it properly (or in the case of Attributes finds a suitable comparison number).
For example, let us say a person John encounters on the street looks like a member of the nobility (based on dress, wealth, cadence and so on). However, even though John is certain this person has the Title of a noble (explained later), the system will only display them as (? [Noble?]), because he is only assuming that the person is a noble (which he has not been told is true or confirmed in some other way). The system will not even display the person's name because John does not even know it yet! This also applies to other things as well such as plants or rocks which will just be named 'Plant' or 'Rock' until John knows what they are called (or he gives them a nickname). This is especially problematic if a person has statistics, abilities or other things that are unknown to John since he can be taken by surprise and taken off guard, injured and so on.
             
---How the System displays Information---

Attributes-
There are six Attributes governing John's basic physical and mental abilities and are based on generic D&D Attributes. These Attributes are-
Strength- Physical power and Stamina.
Constitution- Endurance and Stamina.
Dexterity- Agility, Balance, Coordination and Reflexes
Intelligence- Deductive Reasoning, Memory, Logical Thinking
Wisdom- Self-awareness, Restraint, Perception, and Insightful Thinking
Charisma- Force of Personality, Persuasiveness, Leadership
You may have noticed that there is no Health, Stamina (even though stamina is a thing, it is not a tangible stat) or Magic/Mana/Willpower/Chi type Attribute on this list, and that is on purpose. While I find a display of Health to be a great way to create tension in a hectic battle, or Stamina to determine how far one can run until they have to stop, or what spells can be used based on how much magic you have, it feels too artificial to me personally.
Just as low Health can create tension, high Health means there is no tension since there is a systematic way to see when a character can die (and do not even get me started with Health regeneration mechanics). With a Stamina number, a person will only run until their number gets depleted, but what if I want the person to keep going past his limits and collapse on the floor, showing his determination? And why have a Magic stat that is basically a carnival ride? "You must be this tall or have this much magic to ride this ride". To me, that is silly, if my character wants to use a spell they really should not have and almost die because of it, good for them!
So yeah, no Health, Stamina or Magic/whatever Attributes.
It should also be noted that an Attribute common to many RPG and novel systems, Luck, is not present on this list. This is because, according to the story I am writing, Luck is determined by more things than just the individual, which is all the system is supposed to see and give information on. For example, say John flips a coin and calls head. Is John exerting his own Luck on the coin or is it just a coincidence that determines what side it lands on once it escapes John's hand? But what if something like Destiny/Fate exists and decides that it/they/whatever wants John to succeed; was that heads the result of John's luck, or divine intervention? What if a random person slaps the coin out of the air after John flips it and it lands on heads, was that John's Luck that got that heads or did the person who slapped it change it to heads? Or did John's Luck compel this person to slap the coin? But then isn't that some weird form of compulsion, or even destiny?
So yeah, no Luck Attribute.
Attribute ranges are on a 0-100 scale and is based on an average between the "weakest" (whether physically, mentally, or otherwise) intelligent, mortal human-like lifeforms in the world at 0, to the "strongest" at 100. 0-19 is considered "low", 20-39 is "average", 40-59 is "above average" 60-79 is "exceptional" and 80-100 are "Transcendent". It is possible to increase attributes up to 79 through practice and training (such as working out for strength or speaking to people with charisma). Getting to 80 or higher is incredibly difficult to achieve (in some cases almost impossible) and is usually dependent on special conditions (like having certain abilities or traits), genetics (for example, some people have a racial disposition to have higher strength, like giants), or body modification (such as implants, becoming a cyborg and so on).
It should be noted that John can only see the level his Attribute is, not how much experience is required before it goes up a level. This is to help emulate the feel of how in life you are not always entirely sure when you reach the next "level" of something, so John's progression seems more natural and smooth than a sudden level up like in some video-games. Plus, I (the author) hate when half of a chapter is filled with so many percentages and decimals, when really I just want people to know John is getting better at something, not to have myself or readers nitpick over the tiny numbers.
Additionally, these attribute ranges are only applied to those considered human-like because otherwise the system would be too granular and ultimately unusable. For example, one can see a much easier Attribute comparison between a Giant and a Human is, a Giant would (on average) have a higher Strength without training due to the size difference. On the other hand, how would one describe the difference in Strength between a tiny ant and a deity/God? Would the ant be a 0 and the deity a 100? Would that mean the new Human average is now 0 as well, because how would they compare to a deity? Should the max Strength cap just be raised from 100 to, I do not know, 1,000,000,000? But then that makes everything too complicated and precise, and people who care greatly about numbers would get on my case, when numbers are not really that this story is about.
So yeah, I am sticking with mortal human-likes.
How Attributes are displayed-
Strength- 0-100
Constitution- 0-100
Dexterity- 0-100
Intelligence- 0-100
Wisdom- 0-100
Charisma- 0-100     

Skills-
Like Attributes, Skills are listed on a 0-100 scale based on the average levels and proficiencies held by both the weakest and strongest holders of the skills and are also broken up into "low", "average", "above average", "exceptional" and "Transcendent". The ability to reach "Transcendent" level in skills is generally easier to reach than in Attributes since it is based on knowledge, practice and proficiency as opposed to physical or mental prowess. That said, it is still a daunting prospect and the ability to reach "Transcendent" is usually greatly aided by having higher Attributes, certain Abilities, or even creating special or unique techniques that set the user apart from the other skill practitioners.
When learning skills, most skills can be learned without certain Attributes requirements and mostly just with hard work, understanding and proficiency with the skill, with some exceptions. For example, a person wanting to learn the skill (Sword Mastery) can learn it by using a sword at any point with some proficiency, regardless of Attribute. However, there will be a learning penalty if the user lacks the Attribute to wield the sword (such as Strength if the sword is heavy). This experience penalty is described in the next paragraph. Additionally, some skills require certain attribute scores to learn, such as (Observation Haki) which requires a combination of Intelligence, Wisdom and Charisma up to a certain score to use.
Regarding skill experience, depending on the amount of Attribute points one has in a specific category affects experience gains of certain skills. This hidden Attribute cost is hidden to the readers and John and can only be known if it is found out in some external way, like a trainer/mentor pointing out John needs more muscle to do something, or a book or something. Additionally, the experience gain/penalty is never surfaced numerically but can be felt by the individual in the form of increased/decreased physical or mental stress, pain, and other such indicators. For example, if John is greatly above the hidden Attribute requirement, they can run for greater distances at faster speeds for longer periods of time when compared to lower Attributed peers.
How Skills are displayed-
{Skills}
(Running [0-100])
(Sword Mastery [0-100])

Abilities/Traits-
Abilities/Traits covers, well, Traits and Abilities a person may have. The difference between Abilities/Traits and Skills is that Abilities and Traits do not level up like skills do, they are just a part of a person and their skillset.
For example, a "common" Ability in the story would be having a devil fruit. Using Monkey D. Luffy as an example, he would not have a skill for his devil fruit because it is not something that can be learned (and having finesse with it is optional), but it is gained by eating a devil fruit. So instead of having a skill related to his devil fruit, he would have the Ability called (Devil Fruit [Gomu-Gomu no mi]). Additionally, because the ability directly affects his body (becoming a rubberman and being able to stretch), he would get the Trait (Rubberman Physiology) because he can now stretch his body like rubber.
While Abilities and Traits are under the same tab, they are generally distinct in the way that Abilities are usually powers or unique techniques that cannot level as a skill, while traits are usually more physical and individual. Using the earlier example, (Devil Fruit [Gomu-Gomu no mi]) gives Luffy his power as a rubberman, but as his body is physically a rubberman now he gets the trait (Rubberman Physiology) as well.
Note that John can list physical features as a trait in both himself and others, such as if he or someone else is (Right-Handed) he can note that under Traits. John (and by extension me, the author) will usually not do this as it just adds wordcount and "fluff" for no reason, but it can be useful when attempting to note unique features about things, such as if someone needs glasses to read earlier and then suddenly has none at a later point, making John suspicious.
How Abilities and Traits are displayed-
{Abilities}
(Devil Fruit [Gomu-Gomu no mi])
{Traits}
(Rubberman Physiology)
(Right-Handed)
(Poor Eyesight)

Titles-
Titles are basically how John classifies himself or others in the world and is displayed after John's name (or others). Titles generally revolve around two things; what people are and what they are good at. For example, a King of a country would have the title of (King) because that is what he is, or a farmer will be a (Farmer). Titles can also be based on skill proficiency, such as a Prince of a kingdom having the Title of (Prince), but also being a (Swordsman) because he is known for his skill with a blade.
Titles can also be forced upon people if the world generally considers the title appropriate for them. For example, if a person goes around pillaging villages on a ship with a crew of people and gets a bounty, they may gain the title (Pirate), even if they just consider themselves a petty thief or a Robin Hood-esque figure or something.
For John, Titles are useful because it can allow him to gain small experience bonuses to certain Skills and Attributes, or even allow him to potentially learn unique or restricted techniques. For example, if John holds the Title (Swordsman), he can gain an increase in experience when training the Skill (Sword Mastery). Some Titles also allow John to gain certain abilities, which will be revealed as the story progresses.
Note that John can claim any title for himself personally at any time, but there must be some truth for the Title to give bonuses to anything. For example, say John decides that he is a fisherman even though he has never fished. He would gain the Title (Fisherman?) which would do nothing because he has never fished, and the world around him does not believe him to be a fisherman. That said, if John truly decided he wants to try to learn how to fish and has the confidence that he can learn to do it right then he would gain the Title (Aspiring Fisherman) which will give him an experience boost when he fishes, but it will be miniscule.
The Title system is incredibly fluid and weird because it is basically working off John's subconscious mind. Using the example from earlier, if John had the Title (Fisherman?) he would gain no experience boost because it is not true, and he has no confidence in his ability. It would then upgrade to (Aspiring Fisherman) if he gained the confidence that he could learn how to fish properly, and then actually do it. Once his skill is proven either by being acknowledged by others or fishing a lot, he would get the Title (Fisherman) because he has the knowledge and confidence to claim that he truly is a fisherman, rewarding him with further fishing experience gains.
Note that while John can technically have an infinite amount of Titles, he will usually only display the one most pertinent to what he is doing at the time since he is the only one who can see it. If he becomes a pirate in the story, he will already know that, so why would he keep that title displayed at all time? This will also help me (the author) keep word countdown so there isn't just a huge long list of nonsense all the time.
How Titles are portrayed-
John Capet [Swordsman]
John Capet [Merchant]

---An Example Status Screen---
John Capet [Swordsman]
Strength- 20
Constitution- 25
Dexterity- 30
Intelligence- 35
Wisdom- 50
Charisma- 45
{Skills}
(Sword Mastery [50])
(Running [25])
{Abilities}
(Devil Fruit [Gomu-Gomu no mi])
{Traits}
(Rubberman Physiology)
(Right-Handed)

After many years of running a fun yet declining Manga café, John Capet decides to finally close shop as his business is on the verge of bankruptcy. Both proud of his accomplishments as a business owner and sorrowful at the failure of his shop, a regular of the café offers to take the store in exchange for an “adventure of a lifetime”. 

Whatever John was expecting, it was not this.

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This is something I am doing on the side between work and school. I will do my best to write and edit, but please do not expect the story to have a consistent release time. Also, recovering from a broken arm, so expect things to be extra wonky and inconsistent! 

Thanks for taking a look, and I hope you Enjoy!

He discovered Nangong Chong's secret to make time go back?
Yan Chixia and Sun Junlin have travelled in Jiang Hu for a long time and have never heard such things. How come something they experienced become a completely different story? It's almost like a child went out to buy candies in the street and when he came back home, he was told that some demons coming out in the street and a swordsman fought against them, and at last everything quieted down like nothing had happened. It could only be a dream.
The monk did not say a word. Since Meng Qi knew he carried the Ksitigarbha Transgression Script, he tended to believe him but dared not say whether it was true or not. Maybe the Guru of the Sect of Ether made up a story for some other purpose.
Everyone kept quiet. Meng Qi looked at everyone and did not explain the secret but described different versions of how things went like every time when time went back in details, including different scenes of Ning Caichen and Nie Xiaoqian met.
Everyone looked at each other with a surprised look. If it's a fake story, how could Meng Qi explain everything in such details? And their way of talking and personality in the story matched with the reality so well, it almost felt like they just heard a story of another self!
It could not be fake.
Or maybe Meng Qi has reached a level to predict everything. But why would he want to cheat them on this, anyway?
As they were still thinking, Meng Qi folded his hands on his back, looked up at the starry sky, and sighed, "I've realized that Nangong does not belong to our world but from a different world. He entered into our world by the help of a special device and then constituted his body out of nothing. That's why he could control time and make it go back on a small scale."
"Constituted his body out of nothing, time goes back..." Du Qingqing murmured to herself. She knew Chong for a quite long time. How come she never noticed that he had such magical powers.
So is he the incarnation of the Creator? Yan Chixia and others made an assumption. Meng Qi said calmly, "Therefore I let my Primordial Spirit go out of my body, replacing the blue sky with the yellow sky. My Primordial Spirit went through the barrier by connecting with Nangong's Qi Ji and entered into his world."
What? Yan Chixia and Sun Junlin opened their mouth slowly. They never thought that the story would have such a turning point!
Going through the barrier and entering into the world on the reverse side? This has gone far away from their imaginations and was more bizarre than any other stories they've ever heard. How could anyone make up such a story if he has not experienced everything himself?
Du Qingqing, Ning Caichen, and Nie Xiaoqian got even more confused. They felt like they were listening to some kind of story telling.
"Amitabha, what did you experience in another world?" the monk finally opened his mouth and asked.
He had always been careful not to make any quick judgment of truth. Therefore, he decided to ask for more details and then make his judgment by taking all details into consideration.
Meng Qi looked away and said at a leisurely manner, "Nangong lived in a world that is completely different from ours. They invented new devices to explore Heaven and Earth. They study the law of nature and then design different things according to that law. Generally, it means that they create things to help themselves to have a strong, healthy body and live a longer life."
"They made warships that can destroy stars to travel in the river of Heaven. Their daily life is quite convenient, much more convenient than our world. They communicate with each other by something called phones and the Internet. It's a device that can help people to hear each other's voice like they are standing next to each other. They use airplanes and hovering cars to travel. Those devices are so fast that can take people to any places no longer than time for a meal…."
Du Qingqing listened attentively. The world Meng Qi described was so different from her world. And Meng Qi explained everything in great detail. It did not seem to be a fake story.
How come there exists such a strange place? And people living there enjoy such convenient and comfortable life?
Meng Qi smiled and said, "The place I arrived in that world is Nangong's home and he was playing a video game called The Witch of the Black Mountain."
"Video game?" Everyone blurted out except for the monk.
They all knew the word game but it sounded like that it had a different meaning from what they knew. And the name was The Witch of the Black Mountain!
"Just like we call Hen and Chicks a game. The Witch of the Black Mountain was a game based on our world. It created a world of illusion and players will play different roles like eagle or chicken in it. Nangong's role in the game is young hero Nangong Chong," Meng Qi explained.
"If it is only a world of illusion, how come we can meet him and even travel together with him?" Yan Chixia frowned and asked.
Meng Qi nodded his head slightly and said, "I found it to be very strange, too, at the beginning. But after a little research, I found out the reason behind it. Different from other players, Nangong arrived in our world directly and it's caused by a mysterious fragmentation from that world."
Meng Qi did not speak further and raised his right hand and drew a circle in mid-air. The circle displayed a video of his conversation with Wu Youming.
"The Female Monarch got transported reversely?" the Envoy of the Left, Yan Chixia, and Du Qingqing noticed it at first. The monk watched it with a solemn face. What Wu Youming said in the conversation was clear and logical. Though they might not understand the meaning of virtual technology, they knew the words world of illusion. By looking at the whole thing and the details, they could judge whether Meng Qi's story was true or not.
Meng Qi switched the video to another one that was shot when he led Nangong Chong to sneak into the Canopy Game Company and their battle against the Female Monarch. Everyone else watched the video breathing heavily as they all recognized the Female Monarch!
"Later by the help of the government in that world, I destroyed the game company but only to find the Female Monarch already left and the mysterious fragmentation was lost with the special device ruined completely. The Witch of the Black Mountain left this message on the wall," Meng Qi showed them the bloody line. That's why our world went back to normal but Nangong could not come to this side again as his body disappeared automatically."
"Are you saying that Chong is not dead?" Du Qingqing asked eagerly. Now she tended to believe the story to be true.
Sun Junlin suddenly realized something and said, "Master, the video you showed to Laolao before, was it from that world? Was it made by a player in the world of illusion?"
He was not disappointed at the result that his master was not a prophet. If what his master said was true, it meant that his master was able to replace the blue sky with the yellow sky and his Primordial Spirit could travel out of this world and enter another world. His master has already surpassed all the other Great Gurus and was almost the same level with Demons and Gods. He admired his master even more!
"Yes, it was," Meng Qi answered with his long robe waving in the wind.
No wonder! He has been thinking about it all the time how his master knew about Laolao's past life. Now he had an explanation but he soon frowned again and asked, "But if it was a world of illusion, why did Laolao say she had a similar dream?"
The monk and Yan Chixia felt confused about it, too.
Meng Qi replied, "I have been to a place. In the same situation, different people saw very different things but none of them could touch the base of it. The reason behind it was that this place was very unique and above the normal world. It displayed different things to different people but none of those people could touch Noumenon. However, Yin-Yang, front and reverse side, even the law of Heaven and Earth has proved that one thing that makes an impact will be influenced on the reverse. Not touching Noumenon does not mean it will not be influenced, a little change can make the coffin of Noumenon open."
"It is the same theory with Laolao's dream. The world of illusion is made based on Noumenon, where different people will make different decisions. Their different reactions will cause different results. Once that world becomes different from Noumenon's world, that difference will have a reverse effect on Noumenon itself, not a huge one of course. The worst it can do is to cause dreams but those with a strong soul will not be influenced at all.
Ning Caichen was still confused after hearing Meng Qi's explanation. He asked, "I often dream of very strange things but every time after I woke up, I could not remember anything. Was it because of that, the world of illusion?"
"It should be. Sometimes we can even make predictions by making assumptions according to what happened in the world of illusion," Meng Qi cast a glance at Ning Caichen with sympathy.
Yan Chixia got clear on one thing but soon he got another question, "If they can control time and let it go back, does that mean they can kill us if they want to?"
If not now, then just make time go back again and again and try it many times!
Meng Qi folded his hands behind his back and said, "They can only make time to go back on a very small scale. And from what I've learned, those who arrived in the Nirvana Realm can appear in the time of the past, present, and future. Do not measure another's corn by one's own bushel."
"Amitabha. I completely agree," the monk was quite familiar with the Nirvana Realm since he himself had an inheritance of the Ksitigarbha Bodhisattva. He put his palms together, looked at Meng Qi and asked in a solemn tone, "Do you want me to work together with you to fight against the Female Monarch and the Witch of the Black Mountain?"
"Yes. I can not just stand by and let them ruin our world," Meng Qi nodded slightly.
Before the monk could open his mouth to reply, Yan Chixia said, "I still cannot believe the story you told."
This is just too bizarre! He doubted that maybe it was just a lie told by the Guru of the Sect of Ether, who were trying to persuade the Monk Master to help him.
But not only him, the monk and the Envoy of the Left could not completely believe everything Meng Qi said either!
Meng Qi answered calmly, "If you do not believe it, I can send your Primordial Spirit to the world on that side and have a visit there by yourself."
What? Yan Chixia and others were shocked to hear it. He was capable to send people over? Could it be real?
"The Monk Master is here. You do not need to worry about me setting you up," Meng Qi added.
Yan Chixia did not know what to say. Before he could open his mouth, Du Qingqing stepped out and asked eagerly, "Master, could you then please send me over to meet my Chong?"
"You have never been to the Exterior Realm before and your Primordial Spirit is not stable. Once you arrive there, your spirit will soon turn into a lost spirit and disappear. Then you will never be able to come back," Meng Qi shook his head.
Du Qingqing was very disappointed. Her tears dropped down.
Yan Chixia looked at the monk and saw him nodding his head. Then he grit his teeth and said, "Sure. I will give it a try."
Then he sat down on the ground with legs crossed and gradually entered Deep Calm status. His Primordial Spirit slowly separated from the body.
At this moment, Meng Qi's eyes went deeper. Streaks of starlight appeared in his eyes, reflecting bright starry sky.
It was a deep dark corner of the starry sky. No one could see it clearly but everything in this world started from there!
"The yellow sky will soon rise?" the Envoy of the Left opened his eyes wide and got excited at the sight.
Meng Qi waved his hand and everything turned deep dark without any lights as if a crack somewhere has absorbed all the lights and everything on earth.
The Envoy of the Left and Du Qingqing looked at Meng Qi as if he was God and Devil!
…
After arriving home, Nangong Chong felt extremely tired. He took off his clothes and walked into the bathroom. He needed to take a bath badly and then go to bed.
He felt much more relieved in the shower as if the water washed away his exhaustion and tension.
For God's sake, everything comes to an end…
Right at the moment when he was going to turn off the shower, a chilly wind blew through and gave him a shudder.
"Young hero Nangong," he heard a familiar voice.
Nangong Chong was stunned for a second and opened his eyes wide. He saw a vague figure appearing in front of him. It was Yan Chixia!
"What? Another one…" Nangong Chong opened his mouth wide and looked at the ghost with blank eyes. He was at a loss again about where he was now.
Suddenly he came back again to himself and remembered that he was still naked. He hastened to wrap himself in a bathrobe. Being a bit embarrassed and angry, he asked in a low voice, "Swordsman Yan, have you been transported to this world, too?"
"Yes. The Guru of the Sect of Ether helped me to come because I want to confirm something," Yan Chixia was honest in his answer. "I can only stay here for one minute since my body has not come together with my spirit. I have to ask for your help in this."
Nangong Chong grit his teeth secretly and cracked a smile.
"Let me guide you through the Internet!"
…
After Yan Chixia left, Nangong Chong went back to the bathroom, sat down on the toilet seat and cursed, "Is this done? My home is not a transfer station."
Another gust of chilly wind blew through. An old monk appeared in front of him.
Nangong Chong suddenly froze and bowed subconsciously.
"Monk Master…"


I care not of my past and neither of my future.
Conquering all heroes and foes while looking with disdain at the horrors of the Samsara, I yearn only for a life of thrilling wonders!
History will repeat itself after many ages as the menace of the Great Calamity rises once more.
Which will rise with triumph in the face of adversity; the Golden Form of the Great Buddha or the invincible Heavenly Taoist Form?
Which will seize all glory amidst all struggles; The Buddha's Palms or the  Seven Strokes of Heaven's Interception?
From the sanctum of the Shaolin Temple, Meng Qi's adventures and struggles through the Samsara begin as we follow his climb to claim the title of "the Unrivaled and the Invincible One"!


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