A light novel by Satou, D.


 Good Girl Gone Bad


Synopsis:



One day a God-fearing woman was forced by a devil. Her life changes until then. Her freedom to live happily with a man died out, just because of one reason,


“I don’t believe in fantasy and romance.”


This started out because she hated the author of the novel, "Is there "A Reason Why?"


Before…


Lia, a woman in her 20’s started her first trial read about fantasy and romance. Then one day, a falling star passed by.


“Fantasy and Romance are not true,” Lia said.


Yet after the day she said that she was forced to do what the devil says. 


 


Of course, Lia chooses to live.


Yet that was the only beginning. The devil forces her to choose again.





or





Which is which?


Help Lia choose the best.


After…


Will the God-fearing woman turn into a devil?


Can Lia escape the devils grasped or let Lia discover the world of fantasy and romance?


Help Lia to uncover the secrets of the devil.


Good Girl Gone Bad


(Original)

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Volume 1: Choose Life

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"Chain Story: Is there, "A Reason Why?"

 

The synopsis:

One day Lia read a novel. In her purple room, she gaped. A life that she needs to take. A life that she needs to change.


/Choose one/


"Do you want to change her life or Do you want to change his life?"


/Choose one/


"I---" 


“This will change your life! Are you sure?”


"I---"


Which is which? 


Help Lia choose the best.


Of course, that was the only beginning. 


Find next, "Is there "A Reason Why?"

 

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 Volume 1: Choose Life

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A light novel by Luis Juarez

Zoe Leahnor as a Tania Maria Amor her last name will lead her to disaster. The Leahnors had the highest rank in their clan.

She was a good girl, with a good heart,  and faith in her soul, but suddenly she turned off her emotions.

despite all the trouble she still wants to fall in love, be happy. be contented. be complete.

But the love
That was reserved for her. will be seized by others.

And the love of family
Was deprived of her
he only asks for one.
but of due to request not granted.
he was willing to give his life.

“Who know’s your crying every night?
  Who care’s you’re hurting everytime?
  Who’ll believe you’re too weak to take this life?

 "I would still be ready
To give everything for you
But the fight has not yet begun
You left me. of not saying goodbye
Look forward to your return.
I am no longer what I used to be.
because the love is gone.
the past is burn
the love shared. is gone
Sorry. Goodbye. that to the two of us.
there is nothing to blame. “


“You choose, You decide
You choose to lose me.
You decide to broke me.

I Choose to Change
I decide to be fucking numb. 
Now.. I’m good girl gone bad.”

-Zoe Leahnor

Darton’s life was utterly thrown off the scales when he moved to this new school. He not only missed an important announcement, got lost on his first day, got darted by some drug, and almost fell to his demise, WORST, he actually...raped the Student Body President!?! xD

Cover: On the cover, you can see a girl on a swing and the background is blue. It is an animated cover with the title of the book and the name of the author on it. It is a short and sweet title that conveys the message of your book- that it is a collection of short original stories written by you. It gives me dreamy, fairytale vibes but not all of your stories fall under that category. I think that if you make a collection of tales, then the cover should be suitable for most of the tales, if not all.
Chapter 1: Christmas Rollercoaster
Title: Reading the title the audience can immediately get an idea about the theme of the book. I predicted the book to be about a Christmas filled with emotional rollercoasters. Technically, I wasn't wrong because Nate has gone through emotional rollercoasters due to his medical condition but at the same time, I was not expecting what I read.
Blurb: In the blurb of this chapter, you included a short excerpt from 
Plot: This is a short story and the plot is fictional. It mostly follows Nate and doesn't show much about his wife and daughter. I would have liked to read a little more about them. I was a little confused when the first transition from real-life to alternative life happened. The beginning was a bit confusing but it all made sense in the end. I like how the real Nate understands the value of family over money at the end of the story.
Theme: The theme of the book is Christmas, regret, grieve, family, and priorities.
Grammar and Writing Style There were absolutely no grammatical errors that I could find. Your writing style is quite captivating indeed. If you would like to experiment in your writings further, I could suggest using some more jargon words and descriptive words in your story.

Chapter 2: Shining Through His broken Pieces
Title: I figured that it was about a guy whose heart had been broken but the title doesn't give away the plot completely, which is great. It gives a tiny glimpse of the theme of the book but not what the reader would be expecting.
Blurb: The blurb doesn't tell you enough about the story, I think. It has a few sentences from the story but I believe that you should add some more mystery to the blurb and maybe give an abstract introduction to the main character. Leave some room for the imagination of the reader.
Plot: The chapter follows a young man and his story about meeting a girl who breaks down his walls. I think that most of the beauty of your plot was because of your choice to make it character-driven rather than plot-driven. It followed the young man and his emotional journey rather than the events of the story which was a great choice. I would have liked to read more about his childhood and his home. That would have given the reader a better idea about the trauma that he has been through, allowing them to be more connected with the character. I think that it is important for a reader to feel connected with the characters for them to fully enjoy the book. I think a little more detail about the girl would have also been a great addition to the value of the chapter overall. 
Theme: The theme of this book is trauma, first-love, emotions, and identity crisis.
Grammar and Writing Style: Just like your previous chapter, I did not find any grammatical errors, but when I tell you that I loved your writing style in this chapter, it is an understatement. The way you described his emotions and his thoughts, is so beautiful and engaging. I couldn't stop reading and how I wish it was a full novel instead of a short story. I also liked how the characters were anonymous like their names had not been mentioned even once. 

Note: This was my opinion on your work and the aim of his review was to provide constructive feedback. Please remember that it is just the opinion of one person and these statements are not facts. I know that the word count does not match the promised word count but the reason for that is that I usually review books on Wattpad. The books are usually novels or the starting of novels. I can talk more about the character development, the originality of the plot, and other points in those reviews but since this is a collection of short stories, there isn't much to talk about them individually. If you want me to further clarify any of my statements, please feel free to DM me on Fiverr. I hope that my review was helpful and satisfactory.



Kai keeps on staring at her , from the dark while observing each and every change in surrounding.Well, it’s not like she is his responsibility. Even if anything happens to her tonight. It would be completely her fault, right! 

He consoles himself. And as expected, within a few minutes; people approached her. Their target, the dragon tattoo guys. Well, both Kai and Saheeda and Kai were expecting a fight, which was normal in such condition. But then , when have things gone as planned or expected by Saheeda, to begin with. 

And she just waited, while one of them came really very close to her and asked in a very charming, sweet voice: “ Hey! Girl! Out for fun!!!!” 

[ Well, she was drunk, firstly. Secondly, She doesn’t need the so-called balance for shooting, as she can even do that while lying on the ground, as it’s her area of expertise . Thirdly, she took the advantage of their dazed state to kill them. 

Fourthly, she was still drunk and was struggling with herself.] 

Saheeda, who was getting difficulty even standing up ; while struggling her best to keep her eyes open, replied back which sounds more like a murmur : “ Ugly Lass! None of yer business.” 

And Kai, who was being tense every passing moment, ended up smiling; she called that ‘ Cute Baby Face Boy’, ‘Ugly Lass’... wait a minute… ‘ A Lass’ , isn’t that the way to address a girl. And a certain agent, who was supposed to act like a hero, in this plot, was busy deciphering the difference between Lass and Ugly Lass. 

And just like him; the 5 men didn’t know whether to focus on the term ‘ Ugly’ or ‘Lass’. Like seriously, this guy in their group was famous for hooking up with cute, little, shy types of girls. But, here they are actually witnessing a day, when he is getting humiliated by a drunkard little girl. 

[Although the question here... or the most normal and common question here should be… why on the Earth aren’t they fighting like cats and dogs in this plot,to begin with? 

She just killed 23 brothers of theirs. Yet, they are using their honey-tongue rather than the arm force. Like seriously. Just what type of plot is this. Author, don't you think we deserve an explanation here.] 

Author : ‘ Dear Reader, it's a little complicated… As you can see, the hero who was supposed to save the beauty in this plot.. Is .. umm.. What they say… busy.. Nope… little busy… yep. He is little busy differentiating between lass and ungly lass. 

 And about the beauty in the plot… well she indeed was supposed to fight… and then let the hero help her… to deal with these people… but the problem is… in the guards… they still aren’t taking our little beauty seriously. 

 

 And trust me if this bitchy missy finds out, then I would be either six feet under the Earth or my poor writing career would come to an end. As I am not rich person to begin with. ( T _ T ) (T _ T ) (T _ T ) 

 I SERIOUSLY DON’T KNOW, WHAT’S WRONG WITH EITHER THIS PLOT OR THIS STUPID IDIOTS GUARDS OR OUR MISSY OR OUR HERO. But please don’t blame the author, as the author is busy searching for an explanation, too. And expecting an explanation either from this cold fellow, or thi heartless beauty would be like smashing my head on the nearby wall.’ 

~~ 

And so this untwisted plot continued. 

“ Ugly like seriously, cutie.” Another tried. 

“At the very least, he is just an ugly lass. But you… just a glance at your face made me feel like wrenching my gut out.” she said in such a cute and lovely voice.But damn, that savageness still didn’t falter, not even a bit. 

That they didn’t even know, to whom to find fault with, her or themselves. 

“Then, what type of guy do you like, sweetie?” one of them asked. 

“Me… hehe… I like my husband, grandpa.He is very... very cool, you know, he can show hell to anyone.. But always shows paradise to me. Hehehe.”She said sweetly. 

Everyone : “...” Hero : “...” Author : “...” [ How come, i don’t even know my character is married!!!! How? Am I still the writer of this plot!!!! I demand an explanation.] 

“You are married?” Tattooed man asked, after finding his voice with difficulty. 

“Yes…” she said with a bliss creeping all over her face, which could temporarily blind people easily. [ Author : ‘ I still haven’t assigned any husband to her. So, for god sake, don’t come to me… or ask me.. Who on the earth is this so-called husband of her is. Okay.] 

“Were you forced?” one of them asked in concern and curiosity. But within minutes, he realizes his fault. She just killed the people, as if cutting the vegetables or grass. Can she be forced in the first place to begin with? 

Then, won’t the person , be legendary. 

“Hmn? Pardon me.” She asks for repetition. Even Saheeda was confused, it’s fine if they don't fight. But she still is itching for a fight. And here these fools are trying to save themselves, with this stupid flattery and praises. 

Author, what kind of plot is this!!!! Saheeda demanded. 

As for the poor author, who accidentally created two strong characters as the protagonists.. And was now regretting to the core: “...” 

 Come on, some authors control their characters. But here characters are even intimidating their very own creator. Could things go any worse, that this? 

Luckily, Kai is the few word type. Otherwise, the author would have soon announced the retirement plan. 

“Were you forced in this marriage?” the guy asked again.After all, girls always fall for his looks, that he doesn’t even have to try anything. So, it really was difficult for him to try something like this. And so he asked, the most not-so-obvious question 

“Forced...Uhm!!!! Let me think… !!!! Oh!!! 

Now, after thinking about it; I realise. I actually realised; Ahjhussi. It indeed was a forced marriage. 

 

But, it was me who kidnapped him and forced him to marry me. Why? What’s wrong?” she asked innocently. As if she hadn’t just dropped the nuclear bomb on the ground. 

While, the six men; five in the front line dropped their jaws to the ground, in astonishment, while one in hiding rolled his eyes at her. Like seriously, what is she? Dara Singh!!! 

How could she even think of something that stupid, to say nothing about doing it, in actuality. But, after remembering the diamond card from earlier, the 5 men didn't find it impossible either. 

After all , anything is possible in this little world, with money and power. The reason why they were trying to get along with her.

The world is on the verge of apocalypse, all no-thanks to the newly elected leader of TTO (The Terrorist Organization), who wants to conquer and rule over the world, by spreading terror [ the utmost form of fear ] all over the world.

Within last 20 days ; 4 countries had already gotten hit by it. 
The blast in the industrial area of Country C, Chemical gas explosion  under the thermal plant of Country A, Hijacking of airports area of Country NZ and today The disappearance of 5 high tech public service planes of Country H.

Within just 20 days; millions of innocent people had already lost their lives , under this mass slaughter. But TTO won't remain silent , it will attack again , as for when and where, that's an underlying threat , a mystery which needs to be solved and needs to be stopped.

But, what will happen , when the people who actually have the capabilities and powers to stop this apocalypse from happening , are SWORN ENEMIES of each other.

Two agents; Agent S and Agent K ; who are the highly formidable and undefeatable foe of the entire world, who actually have the abilities to stop this apocalypse together , are actually each other's arch- nemesis.

Two agents , who can't even tolerate to breath the same air as other, who can't even tolerate to pass their day without planning the strategies to kill each other.

What will happen, when they will have to work together to save the world from this apocalypse ? Will they be able to stop it?
Will they kill each other? Will they be able to join hands and work together?
Will they be able to stop the next attack as well as to kill the leader of TTO, without killing each other at first?

To know more , please read the story.
Thank you.

They have a good relationship, their first love is beautiful, and their relationship is simple.

Tian Mi really likes Rong Yuchen, but she still has a trace of reason. She was struggling very much in her heart. She knew that she was not worthy of Rong Yuchen in her capacity. Every time she got along with Rong Yuchen, her heart was hurt.

At the end of the senior year of high school, Rong Yuchen discussed with her which university to take the exam. They even said that they would get married when they graduated from college.

She really feels very happy, and even thinks that she will work hard to improve her identity and strive to make herself have that capital, worthy of Rong Yuchen.

A sudden accident interrupted all her plans.

The mother is sick and must be operated on immediately. But the operation fee is so expensive, where does she go to raise money? Mother persuaded her to give up and ask to be discharged from the hospital, but how willing she was, she didn't know who her father was since she was a child, and depended on her mother for life. If her mother left, she would have nothing.

A girl about her age found her and told her that she was willing to pay for the surgery, but the condition was to leave Rong Yuchen.

She was reluctant to Rong Yuchen, but she was even more reluctant to bear her mother. So she chose to agree.

The girl sent her and her mother to Country F. She said that the medical team there is stronger and the success rate of surgery will be higher.

She did not take the college entrance examination and went directly to country F.

Later, the mother's operation failed. The doctor said that her mother had a sudden shock during the operation and the operation failed.

She remembered what the girl said, even if her mother's operation failed, she would still keep her promise and stay in F country. It was just for the sake of her plan that she had to work hard to improve herself, so that she had the capital to be worthy of Rong Yuchen.

In the past six years, she had never contacted Rong Yuchen, never thought, or dare not, whether Rong Yuchen would wait for her.

When she became the design director of a world-renowned brand design company, when she thought that she was worthy of Rong Yuchen and returned to China to find him. The first costume design she returned to China was to design a wedding dress for his fiancee.

Suddenly, she felt that her efforts, her persistence, her beliefs, and her world had collapsed.

She went to see him, in the name of asking for advice on wedding dress design.

When he saw her, he was just stunned for a moment, and quickly returned to his senses. The look in her eyes was like looking at a stranger. And the fiancee next to him was the girl who let her go back then, Xia Zhi. The only daughter of the Xia Group.

Really, a talented woman looks good. The two are a perfect match.

She endured the sadness, and after asking the two of them for their opinions, she fled away.

The memory is over, the memory of the body makes Tian Mi a little sad.

Recalling the plot, that Xia Zhi was just a vicious female partner in the original plot. However, the whole vicious female partner has been traversed, and the girl who penetrated her body has read this novel and is inspiring to catch up with the male protagonist Rong Yuchen. In the plot, Xia Zhi successfully counterattacked. And the original heroine Tian Mi, became the first girlfriend of cannon fodder.

In the original plot, Tian Mi was also forced to go abroad, and her mother's operation also failed, but it was not an accident, but an 'accident' caused by Xia Zhi's bribery of the doctor.

Tian Mi Xuecheng returned to China and met the male lead. After the two had a sadomasochistic relationship, HE. Moreover, Tian Mi was actually Xia Zhi's half-sister, and finally recognized her father.

In this plot, Xia Zhi still bought the doctor and made Tian Mu's operation fail. However, she is not as stupid as the original female partner.

She frankly told Rong Yuchen that she had found Tian Mi because Tian Mi needed surgery fees, so she asked her to borrow them, and told her that as long as she had the surgery fees, Tian Mi would voluntarily leave Rong Yuchen and never show up again. So she gave it.

This made Rong Yuchen feel that his feelings could be bought with money, so he calmed down on Tian Mi.

Tian Mi still loves Rong Yuchen. Although Rong Yuchen did not fall in love with Xia Zhi, because Xia Zhi has been by his side for six years, even a heart made of stone will be covered in heat. So, he finally chose to marry Xia Zhi.

Tian Mi was finally discouraged and married Ji Mingfan. She originally thought that although she didn't love Ji Mingfan, she still wanted to live with him.

But Xia Zhi didn't want to make her feel better. In the original plot, Xia Zhi was killed by herself, and finally became disabled in a car accident. But Xia Zhi, who was traversed, blamed this on Tian Mi's head. She couldn't see enough of Tian Mi as Mary Su. Therefore, I also want her to taste the taste of becoming a disabled person.

So he bought people and went to hit Tian Mi, but in the end he started a little harder and directly killed Tian Mi.

Tian Mi was dead, and Ji Mingfan was in pain, but the police said it was a traffic accident. Later, Ji Mingfan returned to Country F with her ashes.

Rong Yuchen was also a little sad. He always had Tian Mi in his heart, but he grew up more rational. He always felt that he and Tian Mi were inappropriate. Perhaps, in his heart, he just didn't have the kind of passion that he wanted to fight for Tian Mi.

Finally, Xia Zhi and Rong Yuchen HE. The original female partner successfully counterattacked.

After traveling through several worlds, Tian Mi feels that what she hates most is the heroine in this plot. You want to counterattack, well, then you will counterattack. Haven't you succeeded in getting a male lead! The original heroine is already married to the male partner! Haven't everyone already planned to leave Country Z! Why did you refuse to let her go! ——Over——Min——!

The last wish of this body is just to resolve the misunderstanding between her and Rong Yuchen. She hoped that Rong Yuchen knew that her feelings for him could not be measured by money.

Well, it is very easy to achieve, Tian Mi secretly gritted her teeth. Xia Zhi, do you want to counterattack? ? It also depends on whether I agree.

The game has just begun!

The next day, Tian Mi directly asked the company for leave, and then called Rong Yuchen to meet.

Although Rong Yuchen was a little surprised, he still agreed to meet.

Ding Dong——

The doorbell rang and Tian Mi walked out of the kitchen to open the door.

Rong Yuchen stood outside the door, holding the soy sauce Tian Mi called ten minutes ago to bring him.

Tian Mi smiled at him, took the soy sauce in his hand, and handed him slippers: "Sit a while and watch TV, the dishes will be ready soon." Then she turned and went into the kitchen.

Rong Yuchen felt that Tian Mi today was a bit strange, but he couldn't tell what was strange.

After changing his slippers, Rong Yuchen looked at everything in front of him, the light pink sofa cover with small floral patterns.

The glass coffee table has a glass vase on it, and green water plants are cultivated in it. The decoration of the living room is few, simple and fresh.

The breeze swept in, as if the irritating heat was gone throughout the summer.

Turning his head, he can see the busy back in the kitchen at a glance. This kind of atmosphere, how it looks, how warm.



DESCRIPTION:

"Drip - sensing a strong will to survive,"

"Drip - reading brain waves -"

"Drip - checking to see if it meets the requirements -"

"Drip - requirements are met, invading brain waves -"

"5-4-3-2-1 successful invasion"

"Host Hello! I am the upgraded version of the Raiders System No. 0051, I am very happy to serve you, then we will get along for a long, long time~ I hope we get along!"

As one of the three major comics journals in Los Angeles, Man Ying has sold more than 300,000 per issue. If a comic can be ranked first in the reader's popularity vote of the three major journals, basically the author of this work is in the comics industry in Los Angeles. It can be called a well-known cartoonist.
　　If you go further and can regularly vote for the top in such journals, then the author will already be at the top of the comic book industry in Los Angeles.
　　Dong Yun, who transferred Cuttlefish from Fengyu Comics, is a cartoonist of this level. In Los Angeles, she is already a top cartoonist. If she wants to further her influence, she can only look at the magic city. Or RB Island.
　　Dong Yun is a very ambitious woman. From the beginning of drawing comics to the present seven years, she has managed to achieve her present status in the comics industry in Los Angeles. From the outside, it seems that her career as a cartoonist has been smooth sailing. At the age of twenty-six, he became famous in the comics circle of Los Angeles and stood at the top.
　　But only she knew in her heart that her current achievements could be considered top-notch in Los Angeles, but looking at Long Nation, it was nothing at all.
　　So when she learned that her work had been lost to a newcomer's work at the Cuttlefish Comics Club's serialization meeting, her first reaction was not to find it ridiculous and incomprehensible.
　　On the contrary, she felt heavy in her heart at the time, unlike the somewhat arrogant Song Jiayu. Dong Yun knew very well in her heart what kind of existence the so-called newcomer was.
　　After all, she also relied on newcomers to make her debut back then, stepping on a group of old seniors to reach the top of Tianyin comics.
　　Now she knows well about the two popular works of Cuttlefish Comics, Mo Jing and Tian Shu. Only after the first episode of her new work Hidden Girl was published, it has surpassed Tian Shu in popularity and ranked second. As for Mo Jing, she has confidence In January, the popularity vote surpassed the Demon Realm, and it has been on the top for a long time.
　　In that case, after the completion of this secret girl, she won first place in two top journals in Los Angeles. This will be of great benefit to her future development in the magic city. With such achievements, coupled with Song Jiayu's promise Help, she is confident that she can stand firm in the magic city.
　　The only variable is...
　　Rurouni Kenshin Remembrance!
　　Dong Yun looked at the latest issue of the ink shadow in her hand.
　　She flipped the book to the position of Rurouni Kenshin Remembrance.
　　To be honest, for ordinary people, the first forty pages of the first chapter can't tell what is famous, but Dong Yun doesn't know why. Looking at the comics in the Remembrance of Rurouni Kenshin, he feels very A strong sense of oppression.
　　...
　　Time passed in a hurry, and another week passed.
　　Sun Ji, a six-year-old book fan of Manuscript, basically buys every issue of Manuscript.
　　In Sun Ji's opinion, the latest comic magazine is undoubtedly of high quality. It not only has the old popular comics Demon Realm and Tianshu, but also the new work of the top cartoonist Dong Yun in Los Angeles, which was officially serialized in the previous issue.
　　But in addition to these three comics, Sun Ji is also very concerned about a comic called Rurouni Kenshin Remembrance that was serialized in the previous issue.
　　It tells the story of a swordsman in troubled times during the change of times on the island of RB more than 100 years ago.
　　The drawing is smooth, the plot is fluent, and there is not a single page of comics that is talking nonsense.
　　Although the protagonist is not very immersive in the work of the largest ethnic minority Yamato Nationality in the Long Kingdom, after seeing it, I feel that this work is really good-looking.
　　Killing in order to save people, killing people in order to save troubled times is inherently contradictory.
　　It is very different from other works on Man Ying. He feels sick when he reads those campus comics!
　　After reading the new chapters in the three works of Demon Realm, Tianshu, and Hidden Girl, Sun Ji also turned the manga journal to the latest chapter of Rurouni Kenshin Remembrance.
　　The memories of Kenshin and his master are interspersed in the plot, and how Kenshin complies with the ideals of saving this era in his heart, and finally comes to Kyoto and becomes a swordsman who has changed the color of the people of Kyoto...or an executioner. ...
　　Gradually,
Sun Ji's eyes became serious.　　The girl who left in the tavern, Jianxin who was attacked in the rainy night...
　　In the end, Kenshin cuts down the powerful enemy under the assassin's attack. It is clean, neat and not muddy.
　　Suddenly, Sun Ji's blood boiled over.
　　This is too handsome!
　　But in the next scene, the fierce, handsome and bloody battle style changed.
　　In front of Kenshin, there was a woman holding an umbrella, wearing a white kimono, on the umbrella, on her clothes, and on her face, it was only when Kenshin killed the killer that she splashed on her.
　　The wound on Jian Xin's face is bleeding again...
　　He raised his head and saw only a beautiful face stained with blood.
　　"You really..."
　　"Can summon... a bloody storm!"
　　Although the woman in the comics has blood stains on her body and is in the scene where Jianxin killed people, this picture makes Sun Ji feel an indescribable beauty.
　　Sun Ji couldn't wait to scroll down.
　　Who is that woman?
　　What kind of story will happen between Jianxin and her...
　　But immediately, Sun Ji's face froze.
　　The comic on the next page has only seven characters.
　　The first act, the executioner, over!
　　What?
　　Gone?
　　Author, what are your morals?
　　The originator of the broken chapter world?
　　For a while, Sun Ji's complexion was not good.
　　But his heart is itchy, this kind of plot is suddenly gone when the climax, that feeling is really uncomfortable.
　　Can I only wait for next week?
　　The moment when this thought came into being, Sun Ji also noticed the change in his mentality. UU reading www. uukanshu.com
　　He was thinking about it for a while. After reading the latest words of Demon Realm, Tianshu, and Hidden Girl, he just thought that these three works were not bad, but he didn't have the eagerness to watch them.
　　But after reading the latest episode of Rurouni Kenshin Remembrance, it was completely different, a sense of anticipation that hadn't appeared in a long time.
　　"Interesting!" Sun Ji whispered.
　　I read a lot of comics, and my resistance is much stronger. It's been a long time since I encountered a work that made him impatient to follow up.
　　"Yes, is the author named Shui Xin? I remember, today I made an exception and wasted some time to vote for you on the website!"
　　....
　　The same scene also appeared in Ming City, and even in various places in Los Angeles.
　　Rurouni Kenshin Remembrance Because the length of the first issue of the serialization has been lengthened, the first and second chapters of the manuscript were merged into one and published in the previous issue. Therefore, the second chapter of this issue is actually the third chapter of the serialization meeting. , Ending with the first meeting of Xuedaiba and Jianxin.
　　Originally, after the comics industry in Los Angeles came out in the last issue of the comics, they watched this work with anticipation, but found that the whole story was about the characters on the scene. There was no conflict in the plot at all, and it was plain. In addition, the voting results of the first episode of Rurouni Kenshin Remembrance were very mediocre, and I was a little disappointed for a while, and thought that the Cuttlefish editorial department collectively took a look!
　　But after reading this, it is true that almost everyone has an idea in their hearts.
　　"so amazing!"
　　No wonder, I was able to defeat that Dong Yun to get a serialization opportunity.
　　For a while, many people in the comics circles in Ming City were asking where did this newcomer named Shui Xin come out?
　　Also, is this kind of work really painted by a newcomer?
　　Isn't that old cartoonist who changed his vest and came out to start a new work?

another work published by me {My Cartoonist Guide}

　Chu Yu, a senior two-dimensional fan, a dead house in the eyes of others, and a cheating comic book author in the eyes of readers!
On that day, he obtained the system that carries many excellent comic works on the parallel world earth... and
began his life as a comic artist who considered himself a legend, but was actually a silly comic artist!
Reader A, "Teacher, please, please finish drawing the full-time hunter first and then open a new hole? It's been three years, and three years later, three years have been opened for ten years. You want me Will my son burn me the full-time hunter's final chapter?"
Reader B, "Old thief Chuyu, you know what a fart cl. If you don't resurrect Furukawa, I will send you the blade tomorrow!"
Reader C, "Hehe, Xiangbei is down !" It's over in the top eight in the country? Chu Yu Lao Kengbi, do you want to pass by saying "the dream of youth is imperfect"? I swear, I will die for your works in the future, outside of death, from my house If I jump down, I won’t look at it again!"


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"They're talking so much."
"What are they blabbering about?"
As they were taken back to the Dog-headed People Mountain Village while being trussed up, the five players saw a bunch of dog-headed people pointing at them in surprise. They spoke the dog-headed tribe language that they did not understand. The players were puzzled.
One of the girls tried struggling, but the rope tied around her body was just too solid, so she could not move at all. "How come we can't break free?"
One of the grumpy men checked the time and said angrily, "We're still bound after half an hour. I'll log out of the game and complain to the game company. F*ck!"
The team leader advised immediately after realizing that someone was eager to log out, "Don't go just yet. Maybe we've activated a hidden mission!"
The grumpy man and the girl, who were tied up, were stunned when they heard that.
It made sense. They had never seen such a phenomenon whereby the imprisonment time was so long in other games.
Perhaps, they had activated the legendary hidden mission and were going to witness the opening of an epic plot.
The five players could not help but feel joyful as they thought about it to themselves. They believed that the ugly dog-headed people looked less insufferable now.
They did not think that they were annoying no matter how loud they were blabbering. Instead, they thought that was the clue to the hidden plot.
While the five players listened carefully, one of them turned on the recording function that came with the game and recorded the bunch of dog-headed people's chatter. Unfortunately, the players could not understand their language.
This game was a newly launched online game, so there were very few people playing it. The game itself was more on the hardcore side and was rather difficult to play.
　　
If the mission list did not show the captions, nobody would have known what language the monsters in the game were speaking.
The game had no translation function which was considered one of the game's flaws.
At that moment, an elite monster with 'dog-headed counselor' stated above its head squatted down. He began searching the male leader carefully and soon removed the dagger at his waist.
The leader hummed and checked his equipment slot. His weapon slot was empty.
'Where did my equipment go?'
The leader was dumbstruck when he watched the dog-headed counselor take his dagger away.
"The little monsters stole my equipment!" the leader lost his composure and fumed. It was his first time finding out that little monsters could steal equipment.
The remaining four teammates were shocked to witness that.
The game's interaction mechanism sure was powerful. They could not believe that the little monsters could remove the players' equipment!
The dog-headed counselor mumbled and tossed the dagger aside. He stretched his hand into the little pouch on the leader's waist and took out blood bottles, potion bottles, and other stuff from the pouch…
The players had equipment slots of their own. They would place their items in their backpack since usually, nobody could steal the items in the backpack.
Never had he thought that the dog-headed people would have taken out the items in his backpack from the pouch on his waist.
The adventurer leader felt mindblown.
How were the little monsters here so powerful?
In reality, the dog-headed counselor was also shocked. He could not believe that these adventurers' pouch could contain so many things. After all, it seemed like a tiny pouch.
The dog-headed counselor was excited. This looked like a really rare piece of clothing. He made up his mind to give the adventurer's clothes to Boss Ke…No, wait, he could not do that.
'The pocket on this piece of clothing is so small. The evil god is such a great existence. If He has hands, He might not even be able to put them in, so this can't be used as a sacrifice. It's just too small since the pocket is only three to four centimeters wide.'
The dog-headed counselor walked to the next adventurer after he was done searching the first player's items. He did the same thing whereby he removed the weapons and stretched his hand into the adventurer's pocket to remove the items inside.
The remaining three players looked at each other as they felt like something was wrong.
"I'll go offline first. I'm worried that he might molest me." The girl frowned. She was afraid that the dog-headed people might touch her body.
It was a virtual reality game whereby the experience in the game was pretty real. Although the girl could adjust her body sensation to the lowest, she felt mentally uncomfortable.
"I don't want to be touched too," the other girl said on the chat screen.
"I don't mind. I'll just let him throw my stuff away. I want to see the hidden plot that'll happen next. You guys go ahead and go offline if you want."
The assassin player 'Qing' seemed really excited. It was his first time encountering the little monsters stealing equipment. On top of that, the little monsters took all of his equipment.
　　
He could definitely earn many views when he uploaded the full video of him being captured in the game onto the internet.
Soon, two girls in the five-player team went offline in the middle of the game.
According to the usual game rule, players in battle mode could not go offline. However, they were playing a virtual reality game, and the player's safety was the priority. Therefore, they were allowed to go offline in the middle of the game.
As they went offline in the middle of the game, the game characters remained in the game world. They would suffer a decrease in their tier if they died, and there would be a chance of them dropping their equipment. However, the chance of that was 100% in the presence of the dog-headed people.
　
The three of them left behind were all guys. All of the equipment they had were taken away by the dog-headed people. Everything was placed on the ground.
The leader and two players looked at their equipment and items while feeling like they were bleeding inside.
However, they seemed very excited as they thought about the hidden plot that would happen soon.
The bunch of dog-headed people was picking and choosing on the ground as they mumbled in their dog-headed language that the players did not understand. They seemed to be commenting on the players' items.
The assassin player in leather armor struck up a conversation. "Why do you guys think they're looking through our equipment? They don't know how to use it anyway."
"How would you know that they don't know?" The leader glanced at the assassin player.
"I'm just guessing since we've got nothing to do anyway."
"That's right. We've been imprisoned for at least an hour. If they don't release us, won't we be imprisoned forever?"
The three of them lay on the ground while waiting for the plot to unfold.
A couple of hours later, the sky turned dark gradually. The night crow cawed in the sky.
"It's happening. They've put on their costumes."
At that moment, the little mountain village was covered in darkness. However, the dog-headed people did not light any torches. They stood by the well just like that in silence.
All of them wore black robes while each of them had a dog-face mask on. They covered their heads entirely in the hood, so their faces could not be seen.
The sky was turning darker. The tens of dog-headed people stood in the empty land where the well was. The three adventurers and the two players who had gone offline were bound next to the well with their heads facing downwards the well.
The black-robed man with 'Dog-headed Priest' stated above his head walked over with a purple pouch in his hand.
He took out some glowing substance from the pouch. It looked like some blue powder, but there was no scent. 
He scattered it onto the ground softly and made a magic formation of eight-pointed stars with a circle. A candle was lit on each of the eight points together with some strange spices.
Later on, the villagers opened their mouths to worship passionately in a language that they did not understand.
Their voices were extremely loud and the pitch was very high at first. Although they did not understand the language, they thought that it sounded powerful.
After chanting for a few minutes, the villagers' voices became messy without sequence. There was ringing in their ears as if there were hundreds of people chanting sacrificial chants.
For some reason, the three players heard ringing in their heads while they felt their bodies go cold all over.
"How did the temperature drop?" The leader lifted his head in a stiff manner and saw the moon being engulfed by dark clouds. It was gone.
The little village became even darker now. The crow that was cawing at the village entrance suddenly shut its mouth. It closed its eyes as it stood on the treetop, pretending to be dead.
The fluorescent powder was like a light in the dark. It seemed to be alive as it appeared to be breathing while it glowed bright and went dark alternately.
The Dog-headed Priest walked around the edge of the circle in the magic formation in his dog-face mask. He was jumping around while dancing. He shook the wind chime in his hand and worshipped His God's name.
At that moment, the people saw the fire on the candles quiver intensely, turning into creepy green flames.


Every time he goes to sleep, he will enter a game's Ultimate Boss' body. 
He's the Sleeper of R'lyeh at the bottom of the ocean, the Great Old One in the game, the master of the dream that makes one fall into madness—Cthulhu! 
Due to the rising of the game, more and more fanatics call upon His name. There will be a strange item at home every time Ke Meng wakes up. It's quite a trouble for an unboxing video creator like him...

Elsewhere, Wang Ming was still leading the small team's operation to help His Majesty Beast King clear the game.
The storyline for "Detroit: Cultivation" branched off in a lot of complicated ways, and each choice would affect the way the plot developed.
The game unfolded according to how the stories of the three main characters intertwined. There were three characters that the player had to operate, Connor being just one of the main characters. The other two storylines revolved around Marcus, the male housekeeper robot, and Kara, the female robot… 
"Everything was as Little Silver expected; Beast King deliberately chose the odd answers to make the plot veer off in a bad direction. He never planned to win from the start." After narrowly passing the first storyline, Odd Zhuo let out a sigh. It was obvious that if they wanted to help Beast King clear the game, they couldn't use regular means.
The second story revolved around the housekeeper android Kara, her male owner Todd, and Todd's little girl Alice.
According to this storyline, due to the emergence of smart androids, Todd lost his job and then his wife left him. He became an alcoholic, gave in to despair, and even started to take a new type of cheap drug which caused his temperament to turn abnormally violent.
At the start of the story, Todd had gone to a Membrane Control Life specialty store to pick up his bionic robot Kara, because two weeks ago, she had blown out when he had beaten her with his fists in a fit of rage after taking the drug.
"How are we going to clear this storyline? Want me to continue crossdressing?" Fatty Luo asked. For some reason, he seemed to be viewing crossdressing in a different light… 
Little Silver was so scared his body trembled. "No… it's fine…"
He had been badly frightened by Fatty Luo's crossdressing earlier. It really stung the eyes, even more so than Kuxuan crossdressing – at least Kuxuan in women's clothes was still tolerable[1]! But not Fatty Luo! The Silver Grand Champion on the fan rankings was proof that Kuxuan in women's clothes was really cute[2]!
This ID was very sincere!
"I downloaded and analyzed the entire storyline earlier: the key point is that Todd will start to beat the little girl under the influence of drugs. Kara will firmly protect Todd's daughter Alice, violating Todd's command not to interfere. Finally, she successfully rebels and takes Alice with her as they escape Todd's place."
Wang Ming said, "The key to the storyline is that both of them have to get out alive, and at the same time we have to be careful not to kill Todd while rebelling against him, otherwise public opinion in the plot narrative will drop and the final outcome won't be very good."
"So what should we do?" Little Silver asked.
"That's easy," Wang Ming said. "When rebelling against the domestic violence, Kara can choose to use a weapon to kill Todd."
Little Silver: "If it's His Majesty Beast King, he would definitely choose that…"
Wang Ming chuckled. "So I replaced the weapon in this storyline with one that is basically non-lethal. In short, as long as this storyline's NPC traps Todd but doesn't kill him, and then gets Kara to escape with the little girl, then the storyline will develop a happy ending!"
"What's the weapon?"
"Unbreakable Seven-Day Love Lock[3]."
"This is…"
"It's a type of magic treasure that can be used to firmly trap a person. Trap him but not kill him, graceful and no less beautiful."
"…"
Since Wang Ming had relied on his skills to "sneak into" Beast King's game world, Beast King wasn't aware of their infiltration. However, Little Silver was very worried that Beast King would finally notice as the plot continued to mysteriously change.
Beast King originally thought that these changes in the plot were associated with the game's latest pack update, but the further the plot developed, the more he felt that there seemed to be many unreasonable instances in it… 
Previously, there was no way that the plot could jump around like this!
So, it was in the third storyline, which had to do with Marcus, the last of the three main game characters, that Beast King finally sensed that there was a problem.
Instead of triggering the next mission, he deliberately manipulated his character Marcus into staring at the air on one side.
Beast King's intuition enabled him to almost immediately detect where Wang Ming and the others were. "I know you're on the side. Since you're already here, then come out. Don't hide any longer."
Beast King's voice was very low, but it carried tremendous mental pressure which pushed down on Wang Ming and the others.
"How powerful…" Little Silver marveled.
"I'll bear it."
To everyone's surprise, Odd Zhuo unexpectedly took the lead and stood at the very front.
"You can't bear up under it with your realm, can you?"
"It has nothing to do with realm."
Odd Zhuo shook his head. "I'm wearing long johns."
Everyone looked like they had suddenly seen the light, and their expressions were unsurprised.
Wang Ming sighed deeply. It seemed that as his stupid otouto's disciple, this Odd Zhuo indeed genuinely loved his shifu. He actually wore the long johns all the time!
But this incident had certainly taught Wang Ming a lesson when it came to the long johns.
If there was another excursion next time, Wang Ming felt that it was still more reliable to wear the long johns so that he wouldn't be caught unawares when he encountered danger like this again.
Since Beast King had already sensed them, Wang Ming and the others didn't plan to continue hiding, and directly revealed themselves.
Tremendous mental pressure poured over them, like the massive storm stirred up by Typhoon Mangkhut. Everyone felt pressure pushing down on their shoulders, and struggled to even open their eyelids.
But after Odd Zhuo stepped to the front, this pressure instantly eased.
Beast King stared at Odd Zhuo in utter amazement.
This young man was clearly only at the Golden Core stage, yet he could take on the burden of this mental pressure in Beast King's game world?
No… 
This absolutely wasn't the young man's own strength.
Beast King had already sensed something wasn't right, and he operated his character "Marcus."
The next moment, his eyes turned a golden color as they shone with a holy radiance as white as jade.
"Holy King Eye!" This was Little Silver's second time seeing Beast King's Holy King Eye. The first time he had seen it was as a child during the holy beast festival, which was held once every century.
"Little Master! Be careful!" Little Silver warned Odd Zhuo.
But in the next instant, Beast King's hand was already reaching for Odd Zhuo.
He had already detected the long johns on Odd Zhuo, and had unexpectedly decided to directly stretch out his hand to tear them to shreds… 
[1] Kuxuan, the author of this novel himself, speaking from experience.
[2] On Qidian, a fan who rewards the author a million Qidian coins in one go, equivalent to 10,000 RMB, is given the title Silver Grand Champion.
[3] From the Chinese cartoon "Killer Seven," and is a head and body lock used on an opponent and which lasts seven days


As a cultivation genius who has achieved a new realm every two years since he was a year old, Wang Ling is a near-invincible existence with prowess far beyond his control. But now that he’s sixteen, he faces his greatest battle yet - Senior High School. With one challenge after another popping up, his plans for a low-key high school life seem further and further away...
Wang Ling: I just want to eat my crispy noodle snacks in peace...
Father Wang: If you're careless enough to destroy the country, it’s coming out of your pocket money. 
Wang Ling: It’s not my fault that the backlash from punching me kills you.
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Tags: comedy, school, cultivation, tsundere, popular culture, almighty protagonist, action

X    LIAM POV    X

( FRIDAY NIGHT ,  AFTER THE GIG)


I woke up in the middle of the night sweating, I had a dream of Jay shooting someone. A guy that had been talking to a women in a kitchen. I was sweating so hard.

     I don't know what it was about Jay, I only met her 3 days ago and I have dreams about her every night now. She just wasn't like other girls, maybe it's her fearless-confident-not-cocky personality. 


      At school on Monday I wait for her, she had been taking the school bus. I don't know why I seemed attached to her, it's just- she always gave me butterflies when she comes around. She didn't end up coming.


     
      This wasn't Jay, she would never seem like anyone's "dreamgirl". She was more like a hot, bad girl that guys didn't want to piss off. She would never smile nor seem cute, she was just a beautiful, badass, trouble maker. A no good, trouble making runt...right?

      For the rest of the week she was completely gone. The crew noticed too, she didn't talk during our discussions in a group chat we had made. Nine times out of ten she never even texted back. By Thursday it was completely weird when she stopped even answering calls. What ever happened.. I don't think we can bring Jay back. She seemed unlike herself, whatever happened after Friday, it changed her.




A/N ; Yeah, this chapter is short buh it'll make sense. This season is almost over and Baddie 2 should hit after August. Every single plot in this story is there to make up this huge plot twist.

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