Lúcien Dantalion, a handsome young man, 12 years old. I have lived a simple life, until one day, in sleep, I have met God.

This God, unfortunately, was betrayed by his companions and was looking for an heir. Found the Protagonist, they made a deal, where if the protagonist, passed all tests, he would inherit his most precious lineage, the "System".

Follow, Lúcien, while exploring every corner of the universe, gets revenge against strong and unknown beings, and also tries to find his mother, who unfortunately disappeared years ago.

In this adventure, he will make new friends, enemies and even create a sect that will be known by everyone in the universe.

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Tags: Romance, Cultivation, Strong Protagonist, Intelligent Protagonist, sect Creation.

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Copyright, 2019;

This story will have mythologies of diverse countries;

(+17) Strictly prohibited for children under 17;

the protagonist transported to Resident Evil, with nothing but typewriter to save. I tried to make the protagonist as realisticly as possible. just any guy trying to make it through ?

Ming Shu waited Jin Dongyi to fall asleep and then she secretly climbed over the yard wall. Seeing Ming Shu come out, the little grass in the corner screamed with excitement immediately. Ming Shu was speechless. Thankfully not everyone could hear its dissolute voices. 
This evening Jian Ying would have a big show to play, so she needed to go to watch and gain some easy Hatred Points. 
There's also a very important issue now — buying snacks. 
Poop-picker, do you have money?
No!
That's why I decide to play a hero and save the beauty. 
Two hours later, Ming Shu appeared in a quiet alley with some snacks in her arms, which were all gifts from good people who had received her help. 
On a dark and windy night, it's just a good time to eat snacks… sorry, to watch the male protagonist and female protagonist meet each other. 
Ming Shu didn't see anyone in the alley. Thinking for a while, she lifted her foot and steeped into the alley. 
The light was dim, so Ming Shu could only search around very carefully with eyes. Finally she spotted on some waste boxes piled in the alley. 
Ming Shu spread the boxes open to see a black cat curling into a ball inside one of the boxes… that's right, this is our lord male protagonist — Ye Ling. 
He's an evil spirit, and being the male protagonist, he certainly wouldn't be such an ordinary species as the cat spirit. Probably he just happened to transform into a cat shape, although Ming Shu didn't know why. Perhaps it's because the female protagonist liked cats? 
Ye Ling was in a very weak condition right now. But hearing the noise, he still looked up alertly and saw an… evil spirit appearing before him. 
Ming Shu reached out to lift it up on the neck. As soon as she pulled it out, Jian Ying's voice sounded behind, "What are you doing?"
Jian Ying ran over out of breath. As she got closer, she recognized the person who was carrying the cat and changed her expression a little. Why is she here?
This person was none others but the evil spirit she had seen in the daytime. 
Why is he here?
Didn't captain take her back?
What does she want to do to Ye Ling?
Jian Ying's thinking fell in a muddle and she struggled to memorize the plotline she read before. She arrived here ahead of time, who knew that the female protagonist didn't come, but an evil spirit appeared here. This was not included in the book she read… Was it before the female protagonist met the male protagonist, this evil spirit also came here?
Jian Ying looked at the black cat in her hand and swallowed. For the male protagonist, Jian Ying plucked up, "That's my cat."
"Your cat?" Ming Shu walked down from the waste boxes and raised her brows to look at Jian Ying, "How will you prove that?"
Jian Ying was a little scared. After all she was facing an evil spirit, but she didn't want to give up easily, either. This was a great opportunity. If she saved Ye Ling, would he still be with the female protagonist? 
She didn't want to end like Jian Ying in the book. 
So she continued with fear, "I was held up for something just now and put it here. You need to give it back to me."
"What if I don't?"
"You…" She is an evil spirit. I'm not her match so I can't irritate her. But how can I get Ye Ling back. 
If she subdued the evil spirit in the shopping today, she wouldn't have been so passive now. 
Jian Ying's brain began to work with countermeasures in an extreme fast speed. 
"How can I get it back, what do you want?"
Jian Ying decided to take a step back and asked Ming Shu to make a request. 
Ming Shu smiled as her soft and tender voice spread out in the tranquil alley. "What about I give you a beating?"
Jian Ying: "…" What is this weird request?
Ye Ling was silent the whole time and lifted by Ming Shu in a cat's posture. 
The girls who lifted it in hand was surely an evil spirit, but the human on the opposite…
"What, are you scared?"
"Why do I have to accept that? You need to give back my cat right now, or I'll call the police." Jian Ying remembered she could call the police!
If the evil spirits disturbed the order in the city and got caught, they would be put into small dark rooms. 
"Go ahead." Ming Shu was as cool as always, and she even urged her with a smile, "Call the police right now, and we'll ask the policemen to decide whether this cat is yours or not."
Jian Ying: "…"
"It is originally my cat. Why do you behave like this, is it fun for you to grab other people's things?"
"Hey, did you hear that. She called you a thing." Ming Shu poked Ye Ling's cat face. 
Ye Ling glanced at Ming Shu with sharp eyes, and then stared at Jian Ying gloomily. The oppressive atmosphere spread over as if someone had vacuumed the air. 
Jian Ying met with Ye Ling's sights and was startled in panic. 
She knew Ye Ling was not some type of obedient or kind evil spirit. 
She became a little reluctant to continue this. But driven by the inner desire, she uttered and tried again, "What do you want to do to my cat?"
"You only need to know that I won't give it back." Just get angry now, hate me. 
It was impossible for Jian Ying to grab. Ming Shu walked toward her, and she was a little scared, "What do you want to do?"
"I want to beat you up."
The voice as soft as a whisper fell to Jian Ying's ears, and she widened her eyes disbelievingly. The evil spirit… some of the evil spirits would not determine their gender until when determining their mates, so their appearance was unreliable. 
"Don't come near me…"
Jian Ying's voice trembled. She had no time to think about Ye Ling or what else now, as she could barely protect herself at this moment. 
"Don't be afraid, I'll beat you lightly." Ming Shu spoke out the fluent rogue lines and approached Jian Ying. As Jian Ying was about to turn around, she caught on her wrist, "Don't run."
You haven't donated any Hatred Point, so where do you want to run?
"Don't you want this cat very much? You don't want it now?"
"I don't want it. You can keep it." Jian Ying's face got very pale. She relied on the known storyline before and held a sense of superiority, but now in the face of a plot she didn't know, she was very regretful. 
She shouldn't have been so rash like this. Perhaps this evil spirit wouldn't do anything to Ye Ling, and things would go well if she waited her to leave. 
"It's too late. I'm going to beat you up now."
"W-why, I don't want it." Jian Ying couldn't help stuttering. 
"Because you look cute."
I… ahh…"
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Ming Shu didn't expect to run into Hua Jian when she beat up Jian Ying. 
Hua Jian stood on the other end of the alley, and the solitary street lamp shone lights upon his body, producing a fuzzy shadow on the ground. Half of the shadow was swallowed by the darkness, which made the entire scene look very cool. 
Jian Ying couldn't stop her tears. She saw Hua Jian and shouted to him as if she saw a savior, "Captain, help… she's going to kill me. Captain, help."
Hua Jian walked over from that end. His leather shoes stepped onto the floor, making some light noises. 
"Why do you beat her?" he asked. 
"I don't like her," Ming Shu stood up and answered. 
"Captain…" Jian Ying also climbed up from the ground and ran to hide behind Hua Jian with a pale face. "Captain, she beat me on purpose. She's an evil spirit."
"Ei, boss, I was looking for you. Why do you come here?" Lu Jiu's voice came from aside and he ran over. "Hey, Sister Jian Ying, why are you here, and this little girl, what's going on here?"
Hua Jian uttered to stop him, "Lu Jiu."
Lu Jiu still felt strange, "Yes, boss?"
"Send Jian Ying back first."
"Captain, she…"
Jian Ying tried to explain more but was stopped by Hua Jian's scary eyes. She swallowed the following words. The most scary one in the Evil Spirit Office was Hua Jian. 
Jian Ying trembled and wondered why the captain let her go the whole time. She's an evil spirit!
Wasn't it true that this man was the most cruel to demons?  


Imagine having the opportunity to be able to enter different worlds created by numerous novels and stories. Which kind of role would you like to play? 

Do you want to be the illustrious protagonist, either good or evil; or just be a supporting role standing behind the protagonists? 

Our villain boss Ming Shu would, however, choose none of the above. Claiming missions from the Harmony System, and driven by her endless passion for snacks, the world traveler, Ming Shu, embarks on the path to make the mission target hate her as much as possible by gaining Hatred Points. But it turns out she is not alone on her journey… 
 


His author was actually an antagonist to the original story. The question now was did Frozen Milk love his protagonist inside the book more or his transmigrated author character? This was not even a competition? How could such an obvious and biased result even be called a competition?

It was clear, his author was scum, he had to stop him. Frozen Milk had a new mission and goal: become a monk, get their powers and stop his evil author character.

Frozen Milk finally knew what it meant to take responsibilities, he created this abomination of a character, he as the parent had to put an end to it. 

Frozen Milk looked at the back of his true, one and only protagonist and swore he'd protect him and even the villain who tried to kill him. Frozen Milk felt like he finally shed the image, the personality of being a scum like a snake and was reborn. He was given a second chance to do good and he would take it and exceed all the expectations.

He was proud of himself and felt the readers would actually encourage him and shower him with praise.

Frozen Milk was so absorbed in his thoughts, he didn't even notice it was already dark. His protagonist stopped:
"Let's find a place to spend the night. It's getting late and dangerous."

Frozen Milk nodded.

It wasn't long before they actually found a small abandoned cabin in the mountains. It was a small one-room but the floor was big enough to have two grown men sleep on it and even house the toilet.

"Where should I put this?" the protagonist was sincerely worried where a good spot to put this esteemed trophy would be. 

Frozen Milk went blank again and all he could say was: "Seriously?"

It just came out like well-lubed sticks, he didn't even mean to say it.

"Sorry, did I offend you? I was trying to figure out where I should put this expensive, glorious thing. The ground is too dirty."

Frozen Milk's facial features melted into three straight lines, how was this protagonist so gullible? It wasn't even funny anymore.

"Just put it down, it's alright. It's fake anyways."

"Ah," his protagonist put it down and shot Frozen Milk a pitiful look, "I'm sorry, you must've been scammed. Many newcomers come here but to see someone being scammed to this extent is really amazing."

What the hell are your eyes glistening like this for? 

Frozen Milk wanted to bash his head somewhere.
His protagonist seemed genuinely amazed by him. He was excited like a puppy that watched his owner doing an amazing trick.

"Don't be amazed by something like this!" Frozen Milk couldn't help but shout as he looked into his protagonist's big innocent eyes.

"Ah, I'm sorry!" the protagonist sat on the floor.

Frozen Milk also sat down and constantly stole glances like a teen girl wanting the attention of her crush. Frozen Milk was in disbelief, he actually dared to kill off this gullible protagonist? 

He indeed made the protagonist as naïve as possible because he thought it was fun to add more poison into the toxic pot he was cooking for the readers but now that he saw his protagonist, his son he couldn't help but to feel a little attached.

"Why do you want to go to the top of the mountain?" his protagonist was curious.

"To become a monk."

"A monk? Why?"

To help you survive-

"Of course, it's to serve this world and act as a mediator to stop the divide and war," the bullshit was just exploding out of Frozen Milk's mouth. Once someone was twisted, their diarrhoea would come out of the wrong hole. It was no help that there was a toilet next to him.

"Wow! I also have the same goal!"

"To become a monk?"

"No, to unify the world," the protagonist seemed to be in his element.

My son, I don't have that big of an aspiration. Which of my words came out wrong and entered your ears as me being a holy saviour wannabe?

"That's amazing! If it's you, I know you can do it," Frozen Milk couldn't help but praise this little puppy.

"Really?" 

Frozen Milk could see the little puppy ears sprouting out of his protagonist's head standing up.

"Of course, of course! This amazing creator here knows it all haha!" and with that Frozen Milk's ego was back.

The shame, guilt and realisation he felt before was all flushed away with the amount of shit that piled up in Frozen Milk's throat.

"Then let's save this world together!" his protagonist's excitement couldn't be contained anymore. 

Frozen Milk sighed at the cliché line 'save the world', did he really write this?

"You know, no one took me seriously and they even made fun of me! I know it sounds impossible but-"

Frozen Milk regressed into a snail. He wished he could hide in his snail house and not face the protagonist. 

As his protagonist rambled on about how everyone was against him, memories off Frozen Milk's evil nights of torturing his protagonist resurfaced. One of his guilty pleasures brought so much pain to this innocence in person.

"I'm sorry," that was all Frozen Milk could choke out.

"It's alright! I'm fine!"

Indeed his protagonist's mentality was strong but that was the only good thing Frozen Milk gave him.

"Let's fight together!"

Frozen Milk coughed blood at another cliché line, he hoped he wouldn't have to endure his protagonist turning into a walking trope spitting machine. He wouldn't be able to continue to live if he had to hear more of those horrendous lines he wrote, coming out of his protagonist's mouth!

Frozen Milk listened to the snores next to him and slowly drifted off to sleep himself. He was actually starting to change the storyline and he even had the honour of becoming his protagonist's first buddy and companion who'd fight for the sake of the world.

Frozen Milk couldn't help but feel a bit excited himself, after all before he turned into a twisted bastard he indeed wanted to experience being transmigrated, and now this actually came true.

Was it a blessing in disguise?

To lighten the wrath of his blackened readers, Frozen Milk was forced to transmigrate into his own novel to witness what *** he wrote.

What's this? One plothole, two plotholes... plotholes everywhere!

How do you counter a novel full of plotholes? 
Of course, with constant bullshit, constant crap and constant nonsense!

It shouldn't be working but the result?

Terrifying!

Long live holy creator Frozen Milk!

"Damn! What the hell is this?? Wasn't this supposed to be a comedy rip off? A parody? So, why are all my characters leeching onto me? Do I look like a bamboo stick to climb and eat? To stick in between your cheeks?"

"Hello? System help?"

"System is currently on holida- undergoing maintenance, host."

"%$@#!" 

Frozen Milk was nearing his despair. Bent, straight, bent, straight, bent, STRAIGHT!!!!

Be ready to have your brains fried, your life questioned and above all your integrity disappear!

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"Muahahahahaha!" cackled the voice throughout the dungeon, "I've finally succeeded!" 

"Pap!" a bubble popped inside the small little world, sending the antagonist back through time. 

"Gotcha!" Shouted the protagonist who popped out of the dark corner. He caught the object, eyes gleaming in madness, "I am IMMORTAL!" He gulped the concoction down his gullet, chucking the small vial (now empty) at the stone wall. 

"I win Rasputin! Take that!" He screamed, jumping up and down, "Hmm, now I'll go and kill his henchmen." He flew out of the room, causing papers to flutter about the chamber. 
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Ten years before:
Rasputin awoke, ten years earlier. His head felt like it was about to split open. "Shit, my head hurts!" He screeched, frantically searching about the dim room for a glass of water.

Crawling about, he continued his search, finally finding the water jug a few minutes of pain later. Rasputin reached for the flask, accidentally knocking the fragile glass to the stone floor. 

"Crash!" 
The jug shattered, the water splashing onto the floor, which greedily sucked it up. 

It must be known that this room was his evil layer, and had multiple defenses against certain enemies of his. The drinking floor was one of them.

Rasputin, seeing his one way out of pain gone, sat in the corner and cried. "Fuck this." He lamented, "I'll leave this world. Also, crying makes it way worse!" 

He cried for a long time. His path to immortality was taken away by the protagonist "Jed" who was a bit insane at times. "I just wanted some immortal coffee." Rasputin howled, "Immortal coffee... I have to get some now that I have a second chance!" 

"Mmm, yes, EVIL immortal coffee." he chuckled, laughing evilly. "MUAHAHAHHAHHAAHAHAHAHHAHA! I will have my EVIL IMMORTAL COFFEE IN TEN YEARS, OR I WILL NOT BE HAPPPPPPYYYYYYYY!" 

After getting hyped up to train, Rasputin decided to get some coffee (not immortal, or evil) and only then exercise.

All the time, many people learn of legends which a mage becomes immortal. Throughout history, there have been thousands of geniuses who have gained immortality. 

No one pays attention to those behind them, the stepping blocks, the antagonist, the "evil" one. Protagonists just laugh in their faces, knowing that evil "plot armor" will protect them.

What if, one hapless mage, who became the antagonist through various means, succeeded?

This is the story of your average neighborhood villain, who became immortal though being a "secondary" character.

Bai Yu watched as Shen Fei practiced swinging the sword. Bai Yu sat in the shade of a tree sitting on a chair drinking tea. Bai Yu felt weird, somehow he felt the attitude of the cute little bun was weird. He didn't seem to be as afraid or guarded against Bai Yu as he was when he first woke up. Shouldn't he be like a cute porcupine that I have to slowly win over? _(:3 」∠)_

Sure as hell didn't feel like it. Bai Yu scrunched up his brows for a moment before sighing. "Master? Why are you sighing, is my sword swinging not good?" The worried voice of the 15 year old boy startled the idiot master. See? Do you call this normal?? Bai Yu shook his head and decided that he should rain praises on the cute little bun. "No your sword swinging is just fine. Master was thinking of something else. In fact master thinks your sword swinging is very good." The idiot master felt his hand itch, he wanted to pat the cute little buns head.

Although Bai Yu may say that Shen Fei is acting weird, truly Bai Yu dosen't mind and totally approves the protagonist acting cute. Although the protagonist isn't really acting cute. 

Shen Fei looked at Bai Yu's face. Hearing what Bai Yu said, Shen Fei smiled sweetly and asked Bai Yu in a childish voice. "What are you thinking of Master?" Bai Yu's heart was immediately pierced by the cuteness. Bai Yu's brain was so melted by cuteness he didn't even notice his family's cute protagonist slip something into his robe. 

Chi Chi watched Shen Fei with a guarded look. These past days the little evil gremlin has been repeatedly probing Masters bottom line as well as seeing what works well and what doesn't. So far the evil gremlin has taken on the cute act and my family's idiot master is completely smitten. However, Chi Chi can't do anything because they don't know what the evil gremlin is planning nor do they have any proof.

Chi Chi noticed Shen Fei trying to get closer to Bai Yu and immediately stared at him with the highest alertness. To bad that from this angle Chi Chi can't see what he's doing. Grrr, damned gremlin. 

Bai Yu on the other hand immediately realized Shen Fei placed something into his robe after Shen Fei walked away. Bai Yu secretly looked while Shen Fei's back was turned away from him. Hmm, a listening talisman? Where did he get this? Bai Yu paused for a moment, then his lips hooked up into a playful but seductive smile. It seems that the cute little bun is not a like a porcupine when guarded but instead like a crafty little fox. 

Shen Fei saw at the corner of his eye, the usually gentle and calm smile turn into a playful and seductive smile. Shen Fei's eyes darkened as he looked away. Grabbing his sword, he began to swing it again. It seems Bai Yu has changed. However, between the Bai Yu of the past and this one, he much preferd this shameless one. The Bai Yu knows he's been acting and probing but shamelessly allows it. Shen Fei liked it alot, especially that smile he just showed. 

Little does Bai Yu know it was not a fox trying to steal a bun, but a wolf trying to steal a fish. Chi Chi felt exhausted when they saw the smile Master showed. What are these two doing?? Do you both have evil ulterior motives?? Master! _:(´ཀ`」∠):_ 
Bai Yu looked at Chi Chi. He felt that Chi Chi suddenly looked very old and haggard. Wasn't Chi Chi a young and vigorous dragon?  Bai Yu decided to ignore it and continue drinking the tea Shen Fei made. 

Chi Chi: (╯‵□′)╯︵┴─┴

After the sword training, Bai Yu went to his room to meditate. Although he has been spending life peacefully, that didn't mean it would remain peaceful. In the book, after a week of being in the lotus pond, Shen Fei finally gets to come out only to realize Bai Yu and Chi Chi weren't home. 

Mystery master wasn't home due to a request sent by a friend. This friend was named Si Wang Jian. They had requested help from Bai Yu because his wife, Wei Mai, was captured by a powerful demon to be eaten. Why would the demon want eat his wife? Simple, eating a pregnant lady, especially one who has a stronger yin physique like Wei Mia, would give great benefits to the demon if he ate her and her unborn baby. 

In the novel not only does Si Wang Jian's wife and child get eaten, but Bai Yu suffers a great wound. Which is why it was so easy for the protagonist to kill Bai Yu. Also I might add Si Wang Jian later finds out Shen Fei killed Bai Yu and tries to kill him resulting in becoming cannon fodder. Even worse Shen Fai kills the demon who ate his wife and child. So Si Wang Jian has to choose between his friendship with Bai Yu and the gratitude he felt for Shen Fei getting revenge for his son and wife. 

So you can see that if Bai Yu ignores the request, bad things happen, if he doesn't ignore it, bad things happen. What to do. Bai Yu sighs as he realizes that maybe he should start preparing for a boss battle.

The first thing Bai Yu sees after opening his eyes is the enlarged face of the cute little bun. Blinking, Bai Yu raises his hand to push the face away. "Hmm?" Bai Yu hummed, he had gotten used to his deciple suddenly appearing out of nowhere.
Shen Fei gazed down at Bai Yu. He smiled at him then turned to walk away, just before he left the room he said. "Master, if you go somewhere bring me, okay?" Then before Bai Yu could answer, he walked away. Bai Yu raised an eyebrow at his weird actions and words. Seems like things are going to get chaotic.

What would you do if you woke up on a boat in the middle of a lotus pond and coincidently see some random dude floating about it like a corpse?
Romance him or romance him??

Or less comedy description.

After his death by drowning, Bai Yu is transmigrated into what seems to be a fantasy novel he was reading. Bai Yu was also transmigrated into the shameless mystery teacher that was suppose to help the MC but then instead blacked the novels MC. What to do I'm to shameless for this role??


Okay, this novel or whatever is something I decided to create for fun and probably won't finish it. Also this is ROUGHLY based on chinese cultivation novels. Also also I'm a novice writer so if this sucks please refer to the first sentence.

I'm looking for story feedback on a new Webnovel I'm writing about a guy transported into his book.

You don't need to read the previous entries before this to be up to date with the events but if you really want a refresher, just read the four chapters of Volume 0 and you should be good to go.

This is a little like Omniscient Reader in regards to how the MCs main power is literally knowing most of the supposedly 'secret' stuff in this story and ends up meeting his own protagonist.

However, this isn't your typical story he gets transported into as you would see a lot of parallels between the story he was transported into and Chivalry of a Failed Knight. Thought not JUST that Anime as it subverts a lot of those tropes you all know and love in Magic High School Stories where the protagonist is strong but isn't acknowledged.

The dynamic I'm going with is that his Novel's Protagonist is a Overdog (is strong but just not accepted and has outcast status), while the Omniscient Writer transported into the story is more of a true Underdog who uses his wits and cunning rather than brute force. And he will stay that way no matter how much stronger he gets to reach bare minimum fighting capability using his benefits.

The 'witty solutions' he often comes up with all boil down to acting innocent and being an assassin if things really got out of hand. Though not the average Japanese kind who can still somehow fight swordsman on even ground but the kind who will really use tricks and schemes rather than brute force. It fits quite well considering his personality is the most similar to Anansi, the African Spider.

Hope you guys will give it a chance. I'm finally writing a 'fight scene' after building up the Power System and giving examples on how things work in the first ten chapters. It will be epic!

I just thought of the note I wrote before and realised that even a neat idea wouldn't work out without any heart in it. I'm thinking of redoing this story a Wuxia but need some ideas on a cohesive plot, since I'm not the best at Chinese settings.

Maybe I'll write a Wuxia but in the Gaiaverse I'd set up in my story... Well, I can think of a few ideas:

1. About a girl who travels back in time to avenge herself as an abandoned yet wrathful empress.
(This idea came from wanting to do this kind of story justice after reading The Evil Girl is The Emperor and being thoroughly disgusted by it. I like it when the heroine isn't inconsistently badass. To the point you wonder how she died before.)

2. A totally new story about a Beast who descends onto Earth and finds he's the only one there.
(This is a Reverse Isekai where an RPG Monster suddenly finds himself needing to find a job like in The Devil Is A Part-Timer. Except this story has a slime, skeleton, or whatever trying to live here.)

3. A Magical Girl parody where a police officer is a reincarnation of a generic Hero in RPGs.
(This would be a comedy where you'll see one of the forces of evil getting jail time after attacking an underage girl in the police officers point of view, and the 'Demon' crying because he really wasn't thinking anything weird and was just doing his job as the force of evil. This is the kind of story where heroism is expanded on in a funny way.)

4. An adventure story similar to ISSTH where the main character in a fantasy world finds himself being whisked into a Magic Academy because of his heritage being really special and interesting.
(This would just be me thinking of a Wuxia story from scratch but using my Gaiaverse's setting. It will be set in past of Earth where martial arts is prevalent and the pugilistic world is fighting all the time. Set in an urban fantasy medieval era.)

The reason I'm not doing ancient China anymore is because trying to remember Chinese customs like people tying their hair weirdly if they have some background is hard. I'd rather just write western pompous Noble twats getting the life beaten out of them instead. Like in Trash Count but less meta and having more personal character moments.

Pick the one you like and I'll get working on it. It's easier to use the Power System of my own universe now that I've perfected it. The power system I'm going for is like the one in this story but better.

See ya!

I’m Mu Long, the only Male of the Absolute Heavenly Ice Palace and Artificer extraordinaire! I received a mission from my Matriarch to find a place of retreat for the members of the Heavenly Sect to hide should its leader ever fall. After accepting the task, I decided to masquerade as a young master who knows how to intimidate and demand respect!

However, who could have known that he’d have a run in with a ‘protagonist’ type? Hey, why is my System awakening now of all times? I’m really not the bad guy alright? I’m a very ‘good’ Demon!

4 February 2018....
It might seem like an ordinary date and it is an ordinary date for most of the people out there (except those who have their birthdays or any special occasion) but for a guy who was sitting while browsing through Google, it definitely was not. On this particular day, he had finally caught up with the manhua/manga releases of "Tales of Demons and Gods[TDG] " by Mad Snail. He really liked the manga, but he wanted more. So, he searched on Google about similar stories and he found "Otherworldly Evil Monarch [OEM] ". He got curious because the name sounded badass and it seemed like it was not going to be a story where the protagonist keeps on spouting sh¡t about righteousness and slaying evil and protecting the weak and stuff as it had the word "EVIL" in it. He thought that its dumb and he had the adequate reasons to think like that. After all, who in their right mind would risk his life to save a girl who he does not even know properly . It is not even realistic and how in the world can the protagonist be so selfless and so dense when it came to matters of love. It is as if he was hit by a rock in his infancy and his brain was permanently damaged.
After he was done cursing the cliché Manga, he started searching for the manga of OEM. A while later did he came to the realization that OEM does not have a manga. It is actually a novel which is posted online and the chapters are released frequently, and these novels are known as "Webnovels". He also got to know that TDG was originally also a webnovel but since it got really popular, it was transformed into a manga and the animation of TDG was along the way as well.
The name of this guy is Weed. 
*snaps fingers*
(as we all know that I, the author has the power to pause this novel world by snapping my fingers, and I will break the 4th wall and this was mentioned in the previous chapter and this is the last time it would be mentioned.
Moving on, as well all know that Japanese are considered as really polite, humble, caring about others etc. people (E/N: Except you) and it is true. Until this guy made an appearance. This character, Weed was meant to be born in U.S.A. or any other western country but God made some mistake and he ended up being born in Japan.
If you are wondering about why his name is Weed, and not some other Japanese names like Hijikata, Kemamaki, etc (E/N: I've never even heard of these names in anime or manga), then I should suggest you to stop being a racist because it is not necessary for a guy to have a Japanese name if he is born in Japan. Actually he was given a good name which was a Japanese name but when he became an adult, he changed it to the thing he liked the most, and that is weed. Although he has never smoked weed but that is an entirely different topic. This guy can not be considered polite. Screw being polite, he constantly curses as if they are verbs and without his "verbs", he cannot complete his sentences. He is a degenerate scum of society and also has this constant urge of pissing everyone off as if the whole world is his enemy. He does not care about anyone but himself, and he does not give a damn about anyone's feelings. He thinks that facts do not care about feelings and prefers facts and logic over anything. He considers himself as an anti-social extrovert. He is 19 year old NEET and wastes his time looking at memes, watching anime and reading manga. He is a racist (E/N: rapist *cough cough*) to the core and will do anything to get on the nerves of others. We will get other information about him later on as the story progresses. He is also not the protagonist of this novel as I have said previously that communism is Supreme in such cases and so, everyone is a protagonist here.
Weed never had a problem in reading a story because he is into Manga a lot so he decided to give OEM a try. He searched for the places where he could read OEM and this was that moment where he got to know about the top dog in webnovel society. The corporate known and "QIDIAN". With some excitement and slight anticipation, (which is very rare by the way) he downloaded the application of Qidian and jumped straight away into the reading OEM. He kept reading and was so hooked that he eventually lost the track of time. After almost 5 hours of continuous reading, he finally closed the app because his stomach was not much happy and showed its discontent by a making a slight yet audible noise(he is hungry for fuck's sake). He got up and went outside his room to make some cup noodles for himself.
After pleasing his beloved belly, he started the app again, but instead of reading the novel, he decided to check other features of the app. He saw various novels of different genres, some novels even caught his attention and he added them into his reading list. He eventually stumbled upon the forum section and clicked on it. There he saw that a group of qidian was made on Facebook and anyone was welcome to submit their application to join it. 
Since Weed already had his Facebook account, he decided to fill the application to join the Facebook group since he did not had anything else to do. Along with the fact that he might get some good novel recommendations in that group. After that he continued reading OEM. After 13 days, his application was accepted and he was a member of the Facebook group of qidian.
Who knows what kind of adventures await him next. To find out, wait for the next chapter of "WHAT NEETs DO".
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Hey there everyone. Quiz time.
This time, the question is
The abbreviated form/full form of QIDIAN is?
Whack your brains and think hard.
Do you have the answer?
Well the answer is
Q- WE [☭] (it's a Chinese organization, what did you expect) 
I- steal
D- money from people 
I- and 
A- novels
N- from WW
THAT'S ALL FOLKS. See ya later

* Protagonist and 'Tutorial Village'

It is always a given that the Protagonist must start his life from a corner of the world, the so called 'Tutorial Village'. This place is a desolate place, with the weakest people and the lowest fighting techniques and treasures.

Eventually the Protagonist powers up and leaves the Tutorial Village and goes to another map. At last, he meets the final BOSS and defeats him, becoming the strongest in the world, and the story ends.

This is the usual template, with a starting point, a number of obstacles, and an ending point.


* Inserting a Loop

A web novel requires a large and extensive plot, which should be sufficient for 1000+ chapters- a difficult task indeed !

So, instead of stretching the story line to fit the lengthy series, another solution is to connect the ending point with the starting point.

By doing this means, when the Protagonist reaches the ending point, he realizes that there is a vast world out there, and this place which he'd known was just a backwater place, a 'Tutorial Village', albeit of high level.

Then the Protagonist goes on another adventure, towards the new ending point.

Of course, the same thing happens when he reaches the ending point – even this higher world was just a backwater place, and there are even higher realms !

Authors can keep on doing this until the readers start swearing and cursing them to finally end their novel.


* How to separate these 'Tutorial Village' ?

01. By territory names.
 Ex : Village, Town, City, State, Prefecture, Kingdom, etc.

02. By using Geography.
 Ex : In Er Gen's web novel 'A Will Eternal', the spiritual energy is more at the center of the world, and less when one goes far away from the center. Thus, the sects far from the center are weaker compared to those closer to it.

03. By using Realms.
 Ex : Mortal Realm, Immortal Realm, Divine Realm, etc.

In short, the Author can bullsh*t anything as long as the concept remains interesting.


* Parts of a 'Tutorial Village'

Every Tutorial Village of any level has following parts :

01. Starting point -

 This is the beginning point of the Tutorial Village where the Protagonist appears when he enters.
 This part is important to create the status of Protagonist in the new world and make it stable.
 Side characters introduced here helps to familiarize and can be used as companions in the journey of this new Tutorial Village.

02. Side Bosses

 These are the obstacles the Protagonist has to defeat in the new world.

03. Opportunity

 A singular moment which enables the Protagonist to gain boost in strength, after which he gains high status in the new world.
 Ex : in every Tutorial Village, this opportunity is Divine blood, or Martial Skill, etc.

04. Emotion Point

 This is a very important part, as it binds the Protagonist in the new world.

 The drawback of using a loop is that there is no emotional attachment between the Protagonist and the new world. This part fixes this weakness.

 There are various methods to execute this part, like death of a side character, or a group facing a disaster together.

 The pace of story here is slow and must be used for emotional buildup. As long as you are able to stir the emotions of the reader, you have successfully executed this part.

05. Save Point

 This is a very important part, because this is the place the Protagonist returns to from a higher 'Tutorial Village'.
 We need this save point so that, when the Protagonist for some reason returns to this lower world, he already has a home to come to with all settings already in place.
 Ex : The Protagonist establishes a sect branch in every new world he goes. When he returns to a lower world, he can act as a peerless expert and save damsels in distress by killing hundreds to villains with a single slap.

06. End Boss

 The final BOSS of the Tutorial Village, which the Protagonist has to defeat.

07. Hidden Grounds

 A place with clues to a higher 'Tutorial Village'. This is introduced so that the readers won't feel cheated when the Protagonist moves to a higher world.


* Things to note

01. This idea requires a decent writing skill because every Tutorial Village needs to be impressive.

02. The Protagonist must be emotionally attached to the world.

03. Side characters must be reminded after a given time so that they are note forgotten. If possible, they should be given a 'wild card entry' into the higher world.

04. The Protagonist must have a higher improvement rate so that he can ascend faster to the next Tutorial Village.

05. The best way to keep the Protagonist emotionally bound to various levels of Tutorial Village is by familial ties.


* Notable Examples

01. The Strongest System

 Author Xin Feng made his novel bearable with his nasty jokes.

02. Martial God Ret@rd

 This novel is still alive because the readers want to see how far Chu Feng will go.

 The Author also was able to make the readers remember Chu Feng's 4 martial skills because of their amazing names : White Tiger Slaughtering Technique, Black Tortoise Armor Technique, Azure Dragon Dashing Technique, and the Vermillion Bird Revival Technique.

 The point is, the readers must also be impressed by the fighting techniques of the protagonist. If they remember these fighting techniques, then half of the work is done.

03. Against the Ret@rd

 This novel is a good example of application of 'Village Tutorial loop'. The notable thing is how the Author is able to make the fighting abilities of protagonist Yun Che special – readers remember things like Sealing Sun, Locking Cloud, Evil Gate Purgatory, World Ode of Phoenix, and domineering names like Golden Crow's Record of the Burning World, or overbearing characters like Heaven Punishing Divine Emperor, etc.

 Although Yun Che has a big harem, the harem characters are not easily forgotten by readers because they have already created an emotional impression.

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This is my first novel so bear with me, also I'm making this mc EVIL like Evil Evil so if you don't like evil protagonist don't read this, and you grammar Nazis give me all your criticism it helps a lot, another thing is I'm doing this for fun so if you don't like it too bad. One more thing can you people (who do read this) explain commas to me I find them difficult? I'll start writing the story on a later date if I feel like it.

Let's just say this is a rough draft, MY FIRST NOVEL

This is my first novel so bear with me, also I'm making this mc EVIL like Evil Evil so if you don't like evil protagonist don't read this, and you grammar Nazis give me all your criticism it helps a lot, another thing is I'm doing this for fun so if you don't like it too bad. One more thing can you people (who do read this) explain commas to me, I find them difficult? I'll start writing the novel on a later date if I feel like it.

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