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ƎᴿᴚǾɍ woke up and noted that he wasn't in his room but in fact in the middle of the forest. "Well...this isn't my room," Σʁʀөꭆ looked around the forest, it looked mostly normal, he then looked down at his clothes and saw that he was wearing his everyday wear, a grey turtleneck sweater with black jeans and black dress shoes, he also had a messenger bag slung over his shoulder but no coat. Ignoring that fact he was now in everyday wear and not his pajamas he said, "A lucid dream?..I've never had one before and I'm pretty sure I wasn't watching any documentaries before I fell asleep." He looked around some more and noticed that is was almost night, "Well, if I'm dreaming why not make it morning?"
The man closed his eyes and imagined that is was morning, after he was finished, he opened his eyes but saw that it was still night time and started to calmly freak out, "Umm...I'm pretty sure-" He was cut off with a wave of information coming all at once into his mind, when he recovered from the pain he started to have a panic attack. The information he got was that he somehow got dragged from Earth and got plopped in a different world of a sort—a fantasy world that had magic and mythical beasts to be more exact. The man slowly calmed down and started to make up excuses that he wasn't really in a different world but just in some sort of exotic forest, soon he accepted that he was here and started to look for shelter as it was almost night and he didn't want to take the chance of freezing to death. After wandering a bit, the man found a cave that was relatively safe and looked around for some wood for the fire, after he got everything he needed he started to think about the future, what would he do in the morning? How would he get back home? How can he sustain himself in a world that doesn't follow the laws of science? (when did I write that? its so weird!) Suddenly the man remembered that he had a bag with him and thought that it was probably a good idea to see what was inside of it but when he opened it, he just saw black. The man hesitantly reached his hand into the bag and a see-through screen popped up, it held another set of clothes, a YETI water bottle, his phone, some coins you see in a fantasy world, and some food. The man told himself that he was now in a fantasy world and that this was normal, he sighed "Whatever," and took his hand out of the bag and closed it then slumped back onto the cold, hard cave wall. Right before he was about to fall asleep a person suddenly popped out nowhere.
"Yes! I finally got through!" The person who just appeared and celebrated a bit then remembered what he came here to do. "*clears throat* You are Ǝɍʶoʳ right?"
"Uh, yeah…" 'what the f*ck?'
"Good!" The man crossed his legs and started floating. "Right, I should start explaining. So, you know why you are here and what this place is because of the little piece of info I gave you but let me explain in more detail. You are on a planet named Arues and in The White Ebony Forest in the state of Uccoghar. This world acts like the RPG games we have back on Earth so you have the usual inventory, status screen, etc...Now, any questions?"
The man watching the other person float raised his hand and said, "Yeah, who the hell are you?"
The one floating chuckled and said, "Well, it depends on who you ask so…"
"Well, we have time so..." The man sitting down waved for the other one floating to continue.
"*sigh* Fine. If you ask someone in this world I would be called a hero and be worshiped, but if you ask someone on Earth who I was they would answer that I was a good friend...Anything else?"
"...I meant your name."
The one floating stared at the other then started again, "Well...here I am the hero Gabriel and on Earth, Gabriel Diggory."
"Ah, so can I call you Gabe?"
Gabriel's eyes flickered with sadness for a split second then said, "Of course! Ah! I got an idea, why don't you change your name? When I was alive I wanted a cool name but I missed my chance of getting one but you can get one!"
"Back up, back up, you said when you were alive? Are you dead? Are you a ghost?" Everything else Gabe said after that didn't register in ɆℜӨʴṞ's mind.
"Hmm? Ah, well that's confusing even for me but...well...I guess you can say I'm in limbo." Gabe did a little spin in the air and landed upside down while explaining.
"So you're dead but also alive." The man said, trying not to get distracting by Gabe's acrobatics.
"Yeah…" They both fell silent and after a couple of seconds Gabe spoke up, "Are you going to change your name now?"
"What? Oh, yeah, just let me think for a bit." The man got caught off guard but then composed himself.
Gabe gestured his arm and said, "Take all the time you need." He got answered by a small "mm" as the man sitting on the ground started to think. After a minute or two the one on the ground asked, "Hey Gabe?"
Gabe jumped a bit as he was not expecting a loud sound, "Uh, yeah?"
The man looked up, "What's your favorite thing?"
"Like...what I like to do?" Gabe flipped back upright.
"Yeah,"
"Hmm...well, I like to look at the stars, or sometimes when I'm really bored I like to go to different planets." Gabe thought for a moment and answered slowly.
"Wait you-" The man cut himself off and continued, "-eh, whatever, so you're an astrology nerd huh?"
Gabe scanned the man on the ground, "Guess so, even before I got to this world I always loved to look through a telescope at the night sky and see the different worlds that were so close, yet so far away…" Both of the men fell into silence but one of them suddenly said, "Oh! If you ever defy death and become immortal, why don't you travel to planets with me?"
The man on the ground flinched a tiny bit when he saw Gabe's smile, it was filled with sadness. 'He must still miss Earth, after all, he was dragged here without his consent too.' For some apparent reason, the man didn't want to ever see Gabriel sad ever again so, the man smiled and said, "Sure!"
Gabe chuckled and joked, "Oh? Well, now I need to find a way to kill you soon."
The man jolted up and yelled, "Hey! I thought you didn't want me dead!"
Gabe smirked, "Well, I change my mind then,"
The two men bickered for a while until, "Oh, you are insufferable!" The man the was on the ground stood up a long time ago as he and Gabe argued.
With that, Gabe burst into laughter, after he calmed down he asked, "Anyway, did you come up with a new name?"
The man who was now sitting down pouting in a corner looked back up, facial expressions changing, "Oh yeah! It's Cosmo Ipomoea alba." Cosmo faced Gabe.
Gabe raised his eyebrow, "Why have a poisonous flower as your last name?"
Cosmo scratched his head, "Dunno, it was my favorite flower…" He trailed off as he suddenly felt really tired.
Gabe looked up to the sky and looked back to Cosmo, he smiled, Gabe said at last, "Well, it's past midnight and you're really tired so I'll take my leave," Gabe waved but then, "Oh! Wait, can I have your phone for a second?"
Cosmo, half-awake, got his phone and handed it to Gabe and he did something before placing it inside the now sleeping Cosmo's bag. Then he disappeared. When Cosmo woke up it was almost noon, he sighed, and remembered that there was some food in his bag so he ate that, after he was finished he nearly had a heart attack when his phone rang he looked at it and it was a new text message from Gabe, it read, "You should start heading towards a town now, you should be able to see a town north of here on your phone, have fun~"
Cosmo nearly smashed his phone because of the cockiness radiating off of the text. Cosmo sighed and opened the map and set his GPS to the nearest town, Omevar, and started off. A bit after Cosmo found a road, then he got a call from Gabe,
"Why'd you call?"
"Not even a, hello? Wow, I'm hurt."
"Just-I'm just...I'm still trying to wrap my head around what sh*t I've gotten myself into."
"Strange…"
"Hmm?"
"Nothing, now I didn't get the chance to tell you this yesterday but, remember that I said that this world is just like an RPG game?"
"Yeah?"
"Why don't you try saying Status?"
Cosmo was silent for a few seconds before screaming a little too loudly, "...oh, oh! That's right! Status!" A similar screen that popped up for the bag also popped up but instead of boxes to store stuff in there was a mini version of Cosmo to the left which also had a couple of boxes to put armor, weapons, etc... and a list of his abilities to the right. Right now on the left side, he had no armor or weapon box filled and the only extra thing that was filled was for the bag. Now for the right side, it stated:
Name: Cosmo Ipomoea alba
Race: Human
Class: Magician
Lv: 2
Hp: 30/30
Mp: 100/100
Sp: 50/50
Abilities: [Lv.1] Cold-blooded (able to keep cool in spooky situations; is more resilient to mind control), [Lv.5] A**hole (able to wiggle out of their way out of difficult situations due to being a slick a**hole), [Lv.1] Light affinity (able to use magic), [Lv.1] Dark affinity (able to use dark magic), [Lv.1] Ying-yang (boosts everything for a certain amount of time as the person can use both and dark and light magic).
Cosmo nearly fell off the road as he was preoccupied with reading, "Um, this is nice in all but I have a couple of questions."
"Lay it on me."
Cosmo hesitated a bit before saying, "Oh boy, okay, first of all, why am I on level 2? Aren't you supposed to start on level 1?"
Gabe hesitantly answered. "...you survived being transported here."
Cosmo tripped, "Wait, I could have died coming here?!"
"Apparently…" Gabe said quietly.
Cosmo stopped walking suddenly and shouted, "What do you mean, apparently?!?"
Gabe laughed a little bit before saying, "Well, I learned that after I died so…"
Cosmo sighed and then started walking again, "Whatever, uh the second question is...what's up with one of my abilities?"
"Which one? I can't see your status screen."
"Ah...[Lv.5] A**hole (able to wiggle out of their way out of difficult situations due to being a slick a**hole)."
Gabe was silent for a bit before bursting out laughing, "You…*sharp gasps for breath in between laughter* alright, alright, *exhale* okay. Now that's probably because of how you were when you were on Earth." Gabe was still dying on the other side of the phone even after he finished talking.
"What?! I wasn't an a** when I was-wait, no I wasn't an a** that often."
"Well, (Cosmo could hear Gabe shrugging on the other side of the phone) the system has spoken and it says that you are an a**hole." Cosmo chuckled as he knew Gabe was messing around.
Gabe talked more about what this place was and what Cosmo should do, "You see, you have two paths to take-well three if you count dying but anyway, one path is leading a normal life which, I would very much not like it as I would not like to be left in eternal limbo alone, anyway, the second option is leading a hard life of an adventurer and maybe being able to aid me with not being bored all the time but… it's your choice."
Cosmo started saying, "My dear friend-" but got cut off by Gabe saying, "No, no, don't ever say that again."
Both Cosmo and Gabe burst out laughing it took a little bit for them to calm down but when that happened Gabe said to hide in the trees so he could give Cosmo something.
After Cosmo found a hiding spot he asked, "Why couldn't you just have given it to me while I was on the road?"
"Well," Gabe said as he appeared in front of Cosmo, ending the call, "I might be seen by people and I bet you don't want to deal with people asking you repeatedly if they could see the great hero, Gabriel~."
"..." Cosmo said nothing as he was trying so hard not to punch the person-ghost-thing that was in front of him.
After, uh-that moment, Gabe asked Cosmo for his phone. "What are you going to do with it?"
"Destroy it."
Cosmo paused for a second before, "WHAT?! No!" but Gabe already had destroyed Cosmo's phone. "Why?!"
"Relax, you wouldn't be able to use it in about an hour." Gabe started to get something from his pocket.
"But it still, I could've acted like a-"
"-Yeah, yeah, I'm sure you'll like a piece of metal that doesn't do anything." Gabe cut Cosmo off and handed a fancy looking ring. It had a red gem in the center of the gold-colored metal,
"Is this real gold or?..." Cosmo trailed off.
"It's real, but the function if it is so much better than it's pri-iii-ce." Gabe glitched out for a second but showed that he didn't notice it.
"Umm," Cosmo on the other hand saw it but decided to not say anything, "What's its use?"
"It's a magical device that allows the ussss-er to talk to some-someeee-one that also has a ring…"
Cosmo looked at Gabe in the eye and said, "So it's just a phone that doesn't have all the fancy apps in it…"
Gabe rolled his eyes and said, "Shhhhh-ut up, it'll also llll-ee-t you look normal also, because you're a www-izz-ard you're gonna need this." Gabe handed Cosmo another magical object and this time it was two bracelets, one white, one black. "They're wands, yyy-ou put one on each hhhhaa-nd."
"Ah, okay." After Cosmo put them on he asked, "I've been meaning to ask…"
"Yeah?"
"You've been...glitching out? Is that the word?"
Gabe nodded, "Yeah, I kk-now, it's hard being visible and bee-ing able to give yyy-ou things. I'm going to nnn-eed to rest an lll-oo-nng time after this.
"So-" Cosmo started to say something but was cut off by a cry of help.
"S-SOMEONE HELP!"
Gabe glanced at Cosmo and said, "Wanna go help?"
With hearing that Cosmo started to slowly inch away while saying, "Ah-well-you see, I haha...I'm sure they can handle themselves, no need to involve myself in their fight, haha..."
Gabe sighed and shook his head, "Coooo-me on, it'll be a great way to tttt-est your new skills."
Cosmo paused and said, "Ah, no. I can do that on my own time, I don't want to go barging into every fight I stumble across."
"How is that going to hhhhh-elp you if you run away from evvvvv-ery fight?!"
"It's going to help me stay alive!" Cosmo snapped back.
Gabe was about to say something but then shook his head then said, "If you're not going on your own accord then I'll just teleport you to the fight."
"Arrggg..." Cosmo groaned then said, "Fine. Alright? I'll go."
Gabe smiled and said, "Good, if you had declined I would've jjjj-ust teleported you into the middle of the fight with-without telling you how to use magic." Cosmo got in a little, "what!" before Gabe started up again. "Now the magic yy-ou need to worry aa-bo-uut is really sii-mple, it's all about imagination th-he clearer you imagine it, the str-stronger it is."
"Wait, but how am I going to use it?"
"Huh?"
"Like...like aren't there supposed to be set skills I have?"
"Oh, no, your magic just moves to your will, there are some types of magic that have set skills but you don't need to worry about that. Now I'm going to tt-eleee-port you near the fight and I'm going to sleep for a lo-oooong time." Gabe snapped his figures and Cosmo was now in a different part of the forest but now the fighting sounded very close but before Gabe said goodbye he said something to Cosmo then disappeared.
Cosmo looked at the fight to see what he should do. There were two women in the middle while four adventurers surrounding them. Cosmo decided to use light magic like a little lighting bolt so he imagined a beam of light coming out of his hand and hitting the two women in the middle, the image was a little fuzzy so it wasn't too strong but it was strong enough to let the group of adventurers finish off the two Skinwalkers in the middle.
After defeating the two monsters the swordsmen of the group looked to where the beam of light came from and when he found the person who shot the beam of light, he went up to Cosmo and said, "Thanks, we were in a pretty tough spot epically when they started to yell for help."
"Yeah," The archer of the group walked up, "We thought that some other person would help the two Skinwalkers."
The swordsmen asked, "How did you know that they were Skinwalkers anyway? We were able to tell because we were lucky enough to see them in their true forms."
Cosmo thought back to what Gabe said, "Oh! Just saying, try not to fight the bigger group, you'll regret it if you do."
Cosmo smiled and tapped his head, "Intuition."
The swordsmen laughed and extended his hand, "The names, William, I still haven't expressed how much we thank you."
Cosmo shook William's hand and said, "Cosmo, nice to met you."
By this time the whole group had already gathered around Cosmo and the mage of the group stepped forward and said, "You're a light mage right?" Cosmo nodded.
The archer spoke up, "A light mage? Whoa, that's rare, it's not every day you get to see one."
The mage held out his hand and when Cosmo shook it, said very fast, "My name is Oliver if you're traveling to Omevar, we could accompany you there and if it's okay can I ask some questions? Like how-"
William cut Oliver off and apologized, "Sorry, he's just very excited to see someone who uses light magic but! If you are going to Omevar, we could come with you if you don't mind."
Cosmo thought for a bit before saying, "Sure, I also have a couple of questions to ask."
The archer jumped out of nowhere and said, "Awesome! Let's go now, we already got everything from the monsters."
The group of adventures and Cosmo started off talking most of the way also introducing themselves, the swordsmen is William, the archer is James, the mage is Oliver, the healer is Sophia, and the Spearmen is Harper.
When they had finally reached Omevar, William said, "Well, this is Omevar, it looks small from the outside but it's big once you are inside."
Once they finished the search at the gate, they walked in and then Oliver said, "It was a pleasure to meet you Cosmo, if you need anything from us then just find the guild and ask for us." Then they all said their goodbyes.
It was noon when Cosmo got to Omevar and because he barely ate anything for breakfast and he walked about a mile, he wanted food. Cosmo decided to look for something to eat before doing anything else.

The title has nothing to do with the book, I just liked the sound of it.

Long Rant, SKIP BELOW THE LINE TO SEE SHORTENED VERSION.
       I'm thinking of re-writing this story. When I began writing this story, I initially was just really bored because all the originals that I was reading were updating too slowly, or just randomly dropped. So, I tried my hand at writing a story, with one of the best powers that frankly no one ever uses in fanfictions. I only realized the difficulty in introducing a cultivation system to a world like Marvel after I began. There were issues, like understanding the upper limits of each cultivation rank, and generally just how to compare two completely different power systems. 
       When I planned out this story, I had to research so many things, just because I didn't want to piss anyone off by misrepresenting something people hold dear. I still managed to do that because the DE Wikia, has as much useful information as a children's book on evolution. But, even beyond that, I came across many inconsistencies with my story. My MC was emotionally unstable, and I understand now that trying to mix the emotional stability of a 10-year-old, with the mental age of an adult was a mistake. I understand that this was a mistake but give me a break, this is the first story I've written, and it was without a thorough plan.
       My planning basically consisted of me just noting down the timeline of Marvel events and planning out how to progress through it while still being believable. Yes, I may have used plot armor to push the MC's mom into dragging the MC into events, but how else am I supposed to bring a 10-year-old MC into the action who already has everything he needs to grow stronger (Also a mistake). I'm certainly not going to give him a hero complex, like Spiderman or Archer (Emiya).
       This isn't me trying to bash on people who leave comments or reviews that criticize my novel. No, I welcome it, it helps me grow as a writer and helps me improve my story. Honestly, some of the comments have given me new ideas, and avenues that I originally wasn't going to explore; i.e. a sect. Sure at the start, some reviews and comments hurt as a writer. People leaving random reviews that bashed on my story without even reading it, and then having to deal with trolls just spamming my novel with bad reviews. But as time passed, I looked past that, because so many more people were supportive of what I was writing, and it was honest to god uplifting. 
       I was initially going to rewrite my novel after the 10th chapter, but with the growing support, I decided to just keep writing it and see where it got me. I now understand why novels take so long to release chapters or sometimes go on hiatuses. Pumping out a chapter or two a day is mentally exhausting especially when your plans start derailing. It's difficult to write a story where you only have a general idea of how you are going to progress.

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NO, I AM NOT DROPPING THIS STORY, BUT I AM GOING TO REWRITE IT.

    I decided to rewrite my story while keeping the elements that I and so many others enjoy it. I'm going to rewrite everything, changing the background, and character interactions so that the story feels more cohesive, while also trying to fix plot mistakes. I will keep the cultivation system because I think with some changes (to his wishes) I can actually make it work. It will probably take me a week or two at max to completely rewrite my story. When I relaunch it, I will try to have a minimum of 15 chapters out on the first day(fingers crossed). 
 The only question now is whether to re-post the story here or if I should just make a new one.
       Leave a comment below, telling me which option I should choose. 
       Also, leave comments below of things that I should add to the story (I may or may not use).
    This time when I release it, I will make his romantic status clear in the beginning, so as to not lead anyone on. 

       Finally, I want to thank everyone who read this novel, donated power stones, commented on it, and posted decent reviews (This does not mean just reviews that have good ratings, but also reviews that explained their standpoint.) 

Thank you for reading,
Have a Good Day.

The Marvel World has a variety of powers and abilities. Just how much havoc and change can a single cultivator bring into the mix. Well, we are about to find out. 
	Aaron Zamora was a middle age author whose life continually screwed. Watch as a somewhat broken man uses his 5 wishes to gain the powers of Desolate Era cultivator. Will the Marvel World, and to other multiverses that exist still be the same after a being who goes against the heavens is brought into the mix? After all, cultivation is the best way for a mortal to Ascend the Heavens.

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Congratulations for making it to the end of Volume 2? How was it? I hope everyone enjoyed it. It's been a really challenging experience for me so I hope that those who've made it this far appreciate just how much work and thoughts I've put into this. 

As for those of you who are dreading the spirit stones cost, fret not! I have decided to turn down the offer Webnovel has given because of their inflexibility to change the terms I found that were unreasonable. So until I receive something better (wherever that may be) everything will still be the same as it has always been.

I especially want to thank the patrons who have given their support. I want them to know that their help is greatly appreciated. Every help is one step closer for me to be able to solely focus on this work. 

The next volume will begin after another time skip. So for those who have been asking for it, congratulations! Kazuya will be a little older at the start of the next volume.

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Now off we go to the question and answer portion. I've browsed through the comments section for the whole volume and I'm glad that some people have been helpful in answering some of the new readers' concerns. I didn't get to see much that were left unanswered by the later chapters so I will address those that I've seen by the time I am typing this up. (Note that they are questions from both the comments section and discord)

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Pavook: 2 years? (time skip) So he is 8y old now? 

A: Volume one ended in winter where somewhere it was mentioned that it was almost his birthday. Time skip took more than two years and started near the end of spring. So he is 9 when volume 2 began. 

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Jon1031: Should I put every typo I find in the comments? 

A: It would be faster on discord since I rarely check the comments section after my initial check when I post the chapter. Much appreciated for the help.

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Lauwn: Ringo = Apple?

A: If you're asking about the meaning of the word then yes. Ringo Japanese for Apple

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Tweis: I'm amazed at how much bad reviews are coming in. They stopped reading very early and most of them quit after the MC brush off Tomoyo and Kurumi. Why don't you answer or reply to these reviews to make it clear to them?

A: Not going to waste my time. If they don't know what it means for literature to have 'character development' then it would be better for them to stop reading early. These guys even went as far as using alt accounts to upvote their bad reviews so why feed the trolls? I just hope that the current readers can upvote the reviews that they agree with. 

Tweis: I did that. Why not just report them for abuse though?

A: I have. But webnovel doesn't seem to be doing anything about it. I don't really mind bad reviews as long as the reasons they have for giving something as low as a 1 star is understandable. The ones that spam bad reviews for the heck of it or because of something that happened early on in volume just makes me laugh. Hopefully they find actual quality novels to broaden their horizons.

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qostoc: Do you have any other novel you are working on right now?

A: Not at the moment. Though I have been receiving a lot of requests asking where my previous stories have been published. My answer remains the same on the previous q/a section and say that I only have the raws of what I've written in the past. The ones that were published and edited were on sites that have already went down (I've checked most of them)

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VersusZero: Is it just me overthinking or did the author's Dao (of cliffhanger) is improving?

A: That's just an illusion… I don't know what cliffhangers are…

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KuroKagami: Why is the story keep making kazuya ship with mei?? It's my personal opinion but maybe he could be better with robot girl because of their age.

A: Mei is the closest person to Kazuya because she was the only one he really cared about on earth in his previous life. She is, as mentioned in the first volume, his first love/crush. 

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BlackKnight42: Are there any extra chapters if we subscribe on *******?

A: The way it works 'currently' is that bonus chapters can be sponsored by patrons to be released on days where there are supposed to be no releases. Currently, my schedule is 3 chapters a week. So if you notice that the chapters are coming daily, it means that there are bonus chapters sponsored by these patrons. 

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GembeRForceS: From what I remember MC will get summoned in middle school right??

A: He was supposed to be in his first year of high school when he was summoned.

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WeepingAngel: I see Author has improved in his cliff-dao. I wonder which level Author is?

A: Level 0… It's all an illusion…

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LonleySnow: I don't know why but I have to ask why almost everyone's name and family name start with 'K' ??? 

A: That only applies to the Kouzuki clan. I made it somewhat of a tradition for them at this point (If written in the English alphabet that is). Though in Japanese, staring syllables don't matter because they always change depending on the meaning. 

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CrimsonDragonKing: Did they have guns? Was there any mention of guns in this operation? Even from the fodder? Author-san care to explain why we still don't have real weapons? Even Kaguya still doesn't have a real sword. All we have are kendo practice swords and fists.

A: There are many laws controlling the possession of firearms and swords. Even the in the police, there is a heavy restriction when they should use or sometimes even carry guns (only those detectives and ranked higher can carry them if I'm not mistaken). Even if one has a licensed gun, the law prohibits it from being carried out in the open because of the weapons and firearm ban.  

Guns have been controlled in Japan since the late sixteenth century.  After the Second World War, gun control became very strict.  Many civilians have never seen a gun in their lives. The relationship between gun possession and crimes or suicides has not been studied in great detail.  There are very few deaths by gunshot in Japan, which has a low homicide rate overall.  The suicide rate, on the other hand, is very high, and many speculate that if Japanese people were able to possess guns more freely, the suicide rate would rise sharply.

Hopefully this sheds some light. 

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Lolhappy: Author San I would say it would be better if you add a character list

A: I've already put one up at the end of Volume 1 and will most likely be putting one up at the end of volume 2 as well.

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JadeGazardiel: Do you know the name of Bruce Lee's brother?

A: Which one? If it's the vegan brother, then its Broco Lee

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VirtuousParagon: What's SS chapter?

A: Side Story Chapters. They are going to be put most likely after this one.

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Brezer: I am wondering how many chapters this story is going to have. Every time we start getting to the meat and potatoes of the story we end up going off on a tangent to stuff that seems to not have any effect on the story. All of these backgrounds characters, are they going to the other world are they driving the story.... why are we even reading about them. If we are building background for all these people to go over then ya ok but if they don't then this is all useless filler that is detracting from the main path of the story. I like the story but really just trying to understand what we are reading all this filler for.

A: Even I don't know how many chapters this story is going to have. At least, not yet. Like most people who interacts with me in discord know, I have the story in my head, what's going to happen, what needs to happen, etc. the only problem is how I tell the story. As for the other concern, someone already gave an answer I quite agreed with in the comments section. I'll put it here as well.

Overlord_Venus: There is actually a good reason for that, while these characters may seem like A,B,C but they are what slowly influence and change kazuya's character, try to read once again from the first chapter then you'll understand many subtleties you might have missed the first time ( I got to know why only in my second read), hope this helps 

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SootheSayre: How old is the Demon King and his daughter?

A: Hellion is a few centuries old while his daughter's age is currently unknown. 

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Funtastechick: How old was kazuya before he died when he's at edea?

A: He never aged when he was summoned. A high school kid

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MeowY: Can I ask questions that isn't related to the novel?

A: As long as it's not too off track?

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overlord_venus: I'm trying to write my first novel. how do you write Ruruci?

A: (posted this on discord somewhere)
My take on when you are deciding whether you're going to create something to publish or not; 
1. decide what you want to write about 
2. make sure that what you write about interests you, yourself (this is so that the chances for you dropping it when you eventually experience a block lessens) 
3. begin thinking about what kind of person your MC will be (if you can't decide, make him/her similar to yourself) 
4. think about what you want to happen in your story 
5. start constructing specific main events in your head that should happen in the novel. 
6. start thinking about how you want to start it. 
7. think about whether the story is something that you are actually interested in because an aspiring writers who would drop their stories with reasons such as disinterest or blockage are absolute garbage 
8. Start writing it. and think about who/what types of characters you'd want your MC to hang around with or which characters would support him 
9. ask a friend to read it or tell them about it and ask for what they think (make sure this person is into reading because friends that are illiterates and prefer to watch shows rather than read are useless) 
10.If you want to post it, make sure you have a reasonable lead in case you end up with delays and what not 
11. Think about what you're doing once again. If you really want to do this, make sure what you're getting yourself into 
12. enjoy the ride and don't let haters get to you. Not everyone will like what you write no matter what. 
13. Tank the haters and focus on the people that enjoy what you write. They are the ones who matter (This is important so i had to list it down again. People will try and bring you down) 
14. Never stop learning and improving your craft and appreciate those who support and encourage you.

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That is all the time we have for right now. So if I missed any questions, I do apologize. I will be releasing the promised SS afterwards and Volume 3 will begin after I take a little time to recover, think, and prepare the releases for Royal Road, Tapas, etc. 

We have reached the top 20 by the time I'm writing this and I would like to thank all those who have given their powerstones to make it happen. Thank you for your support!

A special Shout out to those who have been helping out with the errors, typos, edits and what not. JadeGazardiel, Ryou, Arion, your help is much appreciated.

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Enter Kazuya, a boy who never had any memories before his adolescent life. He was summoned to the world of Edea wherein the final battle against the Demon King, our hero entered the last room to find a welcome he had not been expecting. An unguarded, unarmed demon king who greeted him with manners and etiquette.

As if a respectful and well mannered final boss wasn't shocking enough, he was then introduced into an elaborate plot to exploit summoned heroes. Unfortunately, our naive hero chose to trust his companions. He underestimated human greed which led him to suffer alone in darkness for a time he himself does not know how long. 

When he suddenly woke up, he saw himself as a child back on Earth. As an amnesiac, he had been thrown into an unknown part of his life. What should he do? What about the people who betrayed him?

Follow along as Kazuya finds out about his past and tries to prevent the tragedies he's experienced while trying to change what he knows what will happen in his future.


Volume Guide:
I - From the Ashes. (Learning about his life before he lost his memories)
II - Divergence. (Changing the future) 
III - The Two Heroes. 
IV - Edea and The Hero
V - ???
VI - ???
VII - ???
VIII - ???


Official Release Schedule: Currently ongoing changes.




PATREON = patreon.com/ruruci
DISCORD = discord.gg/enbq8sB
DONATE = tinyurl.com/RuruciDonate

Hiya, I go by the name of iMiH around here, and I bet if you're reading this, it means that you have most likely read my fanfic CoA. 

I know that readers that enjoys reading novels included me, do hate hiatus or even more so when novels just stop being updated. Which is exactly what I did till now. 

I know that I could sit here and rant about anything and everything with it having little to none effect of what I want to accomplish.

Which is why, I will just tell you my side of the story. I was born with a disease which has been harming my body ever since which has hindered me in doing lots of things. Over time, my health was getting worse. By the time I was 19, I started trying to study at univeristy but had to quit not too long after due to my health.

During all my youth, I was either in the hospital, or stuck at home not being allowed to go outside all too often. And after having to quit studying alongside my health getting worse, I didn't know what to do. It didn't take too long before I came to a conclusion; that I didn't enjoy my life... Time passed by with such thoughts, and I ended up with half a dozen suicide attempts during a short amount of time. 

Well, after that, I was pretty much stuck with my own thoughts as I was getting help from doctors and psychiatrists. Let's forward some time, and I'm now here. I don't have any kind of dark thoughts lingering in my mind. I have already applied to study through the internet for next semester, and I also thought of returning to one of the few things that I enjoyed doing - writing. 

If you're still here, I would like to say that I am quite happy to have all of you here to read my fanfiction. I have seen a good amount of comments and reviews which has made me smile, laugh, sad and even angry at some points, but all of these things are emotions that I show due to this novel which I wrote. And I do sincerely hope that all of you will continue reading my novel. Oh and I don't really mind mean comments and reviews, they're actually really fun to read after the stage of me getting angry of it, hahaha. 

Izan is someone who’s under a lot of pain. Every day he wakes up with pain and late at night, he endures the pain and falls asleep. Izan is someone who wishes for to die as he can’t seem to keep up with the pain he is under. 

Suicide was an alternative which Izan wouldn’t commit as he knew that it would have pained his family more than he could have imagined. Day after day, Izan tried his best to endure for his family. 

Izan did also have a wish, a wish that strong which allowed Izan to continue forward until his breaking point. One day, Izan was allowed to seek for his wish in the vast universe.


- Disclaimer, I do not own this picture.
- I do not own One Piece, nor any of the upcoming series I will be visiting in this novel. 
- This is just a fan-fiction which I thought of in my mind, therefore, I will not always follow certain 'plot'.

Hi guys,
I hope you guys are safe.
I have been reading your comments and reviews and have tried to reply to every comment and review.
some give 3star, 2star some are giving 4and5star also.
Some common reviews were about
My writing quality and I know it is not upto standards and many readers are finding it hard to read due to grammar. For grammar I have no excuse and for spelling as I use smartphone to write and that some spelling mistakes are made, during the process of writing or due to auto correction and I have tried to edit them but some just don't get edited in official version.
Like breast which should be beasts.
Ruin be rune etc.
Second:
update are irregular as I only write when I feel like writing else busy due to my study or read other novel.
Usually I read Machine translation of novel and many are raw version of novels in Webnovel. As I became curious to know about the latest developments and I can say I have got used to reading them and enjoy it.
After all I write for enjoyment and myself, so writing novel is more like hobby.
I am not paid for it, till now that is.
If I was getting paid I would have hired a editor by now.
That is why I am looking for free editor who can help me edit.
But every time is the same story, some guys reply. I want to help you and I say come lets have a chat in Discord. After that I never get a reply.
As for some uncommon reviews and questions like.
#Why have you dumped so much information in starting chapters which I as a reader, find irrelevant?
The answer is, that is common sense of how other magic uses cultivat but because Kai is not following the common method and basically skip magic apprentice stage and
I use it to explain the difference between others and Kai way of cultivation.
Note:I have already explained the logic behind law and Kai limitations in earlier chapter.
I will just add that chapter to volume 0.
#Question 2:
Why is the world name is Great magic world?
I have no answer to this. May be a random thought.
#Question 3:
Why is the rank of body potential and mage root have saint above divine.
Because I want it to be. No logic.
If you ever write a novel feel free to change it according to your wish.
Question 4:
#Why is it common for space rift occurance in the continent?
Well it due to incomplete and unstable laws of magic, cause due to world barrier.
Remember why I say, all magic users are not able to display full power and why true saint level magic user don't exist till now so evenJai and other are not match for true saint magic users as they have understanding of incomplete magic laws and cannot make any progress in their cultivation.
#Why is Kai able to make such decisions in starting chapters and is his memory so strong?
Answer to that is Kai father knowledge and wisdom which he shared with Kai.
As a hunter who lives in a dangerous world close to forbidden forest. He has some general knowledge of behaviour magic beasts and share it with Kai and he use this knowledge, wisdom, incomplete mage root to trace magic power left behind by to survive
the first day.
Later event you have read.
You will not expect such thinking abilities from a 6year child but magic root is closely related with development of brain and mental strength.
Higher rank mage root give better intelligence, memory power and greater brain development.
It was also one of the reason why Kai got possesed by Daoma in starting not to mention be is a magic emperor.
Kai's mage root went to deep slumber and so he didn't cultivated strong mental strength.
Possessing mental strength of a non magic user.
Don't ask questions in paragraph comments. Use chapter comments.
Ask questions if you have doubts ask.
I will reply as soon as possible.
For those who read my novel and supported me. thank you and thanks for power stones, gifts and responding to me.
Really going premium was a bad decision. I thought it will stop my novel from getting pairated on other websites. But it's still going on.
My novel veiws have reached 1million.
Planning to create a discord server for the readers. If you guys any thoughts let me know.
Thank you guys for reading.


Discord Server=>https://discord.gg/MDY3g4Z
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The great magic world where the magic is part of everyday live of people. Where users of magic are considered elite and everybody dream to become a grand Master.

There are words which are famous and knows to all magic users who want to reach the peak. Representing great deep of magic laws, which gives idea about the journey of great path of magic

MORTAL LIVE BY THEM, 
TRANSCEND KNOW THEM, 
SAINTS UNDERSTAND THEM, 
DIVINE TRANSFORM THEM, 
WORLD CREATES THEM.
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**Discord=> Evernightlord#5624
Discord Group=>https://discord.gg/MDY3g4Z

**Updates**
3-4chapter a week and time to time bonus chapters
 
Editor:-
Daoist Apocalypse (1-25)and AFoximmortal
(From ch74 to ch91)
If anyone willing to help me with editing let me know.

**Disclaimer**
This cover is not owned by me. If you want me to take it down just comment me.

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Hey Guys,

O'Kelley here. I'd rather do this then try and direct you towards a P.atreon.

 If you like my stuff, feel free to check out my 1st Book, The Genesis Game: Volume I, a LitRPG Dungeon/Tower Climb about the tyrant Black Seraph who is reincarnated into the past as humanities best chance for survival. 

You can find it for free on Amazon Kindle Unlimited at http://tiny.cc/AmazonTGG
If you don't have Amazon Kindle Unlimited, you can get a free month by using the following link. http://tiny.cc/GetKindleUnlimitedFree

Thanks and Keep Reading
P.S. (If you do like my stuff, but don't want to mess with the rest, good reviews and ratings help so much) <3

If you WANT an edited copy of any book before they launch, I'm looking for guys willing to do Amazon Day 1 reviews. If that's you, shoot me a message at theauthorokelley@gmail.com or just sign up http://tiny.cc/NotifyMeGG.
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Volume II is currently at the editor as was expected to launch already, so I'm actually a little behind. I'm contractually obligated to finish this series before August, so I do promise you, it will be finished. You will see all the remaining chapters here. It's just in the meantime the work is stalled until I can get Volume II wrapped up. 

If you WANT an edited copy before the book launches, I'm looking for guys willing to do Amazon Day 1 reviews. If that's you, shoot me a message at theauthorokelley@gmail.com or just sign up http://tiny.cc/NotifyMeGG.

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Available on Kindle Unlimited
The Genesis Game
Volume I - tiny.cc/AmazonTGG
Volume II - https://tiny.cc/TGGVolumeII


Surviving after the fall of humanity. The man known as the Black Seraph was thrust into the past and given one opportunity to change fate.

But people do not change overnight, and Seraph must find a new path forward and learn there's more to power than being a tyrant if humanity is to survive the Genesis Game.

Hello my dearest readers,
Does anyone of you have an idea on how to share spirit stones to another reader?If any one has an idea on how to do this,please kindly write it down through comments or writing of reviews.
I want to bring up a new development and I really need this answer in order to carry out my plans.
My plan is that I want to reward the person with either the highest amounts of comments,power stones and highest reviews with fifteen(15)spirit stones at the end of every week,so please if you have an idea kindly write it down Ok?.
Thank you so very much for supporting me this far,
I love💖💖❤❤💖 you.
AUTHOR'S NOTE ☆☆☆☆☆
Hello my dearest readers,
I just found out a very pain truth yesterday that is why I wasn't in my right mind to upload the normal chapter yesterday. I just found out that the novel I had worked so hard to write was stolen and uploaded on other websites other than Webnovel. I know that I am not the best author out there but it hurts so much to see someone else do this to me (sobs). How could someone be so heartless to do this terrible thing to me? I have asked myself this question more than a hundred times since I found out this painful truth but I could not find a convincing answer to comfort myself, so I just want to formally inform you all that this novel is a contracted work with Webnovel.com, so please if you are not reading this novel on Webnovel.com then it means that my novel was stolen. My hearts bled so much when I found out yesterday that someone else stole my hard work. For those who are reading this novel on another website other than Webnovel.com, will you be so kind to read it on the original website? This is my contact for those who wants to get in touch with me; discord_ Flabbergasted#4252, Gmail_ flabbergasted1803@gmail.com.
Thank you so much for your understanding,
I love ❤❤❤❤❤ you.


She is the baddest woman on the planet. People tremble just by the mention of her name. She is the most dreaded person in town, no one dares to offend her and go unscathed. Some people call her, "Cold-blooded Witch", while others call her the, "Demoness".


" So what if I don't have friends?",I have one and I am satisfied with that.

"To hell with my extended family who are hungry for power, since they choose to abandon me first I don't give a damn about them",
 
"F*ck any man who thinks that I am an easy targets for ridicule?,I am more than a man myself ",Lie Ruge said seriously panting because of loss of breath.

This is the story about a girl who wanted to be loved and cherished even after the terrible ordeal She went through as a child. She her mother was murdered in her presence when she was just ten years old.
After completing her high school, she was sent to a school which was the best school in the World.The funny thing was that no one really knows anything about this particular school.There, she acquired the best martial arts skills, she was second to none.People of the underworld call her "LADY BOSS".She was the most beautiful and dreadful woman that any man has ever set their eyes on. She was ruthless to her enemies but what will happen when she later falls in love with a man who will bring so much laughter and brightness into her dark world?

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Other books by author;
1) Fallen in love: the CEO who tamed me
I just created a Facebook page, please take time to check it out. This is the link: https://www.facebook.com/Flabbergasted-Dynasty-112153860550735/

Let's talk on discord about what you like and what you dislike. Discord ID: https://discord.gg/7DGssmj

Support your dearest author here if you love my novel:
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DISCLAIMER: Cover art is not mine, it's from the game Love and Producer!

Book Title: Return of the Cold Hearted Empress

Author: Ahce Darato Torres

Date Published: July 4, 2020

Book Status: Ongoing

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All Rights Reserved.

No part of this book should be reproduced, distributed, and transmitted in any form;

1. Copying and publishing to another novel application/ websites/ social media apps for the intention of offline reading purposes,

2. Copying and printing hard copies for offline reading,

3. Recording or screen capturing shots, and

4. Making unauthorized soft copies using html/ notepad/ pdf/ word document, or other electronic and non-electronic saving methods.

This book should not be translated in other languages and published in other sites without prior knowledge and proof of permission from the author, Ahce Darato Torres.

Exceptions:

1. Direct quoting a few lines from the book for critical/ literary reviews,

2. Direct quoting a few lines with right credits to the author/ references, and

3. Direct quoting for a 'hugot' post or for certain noncommercial use permitted by the copyright law.

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Disclaimer.

This is a work of fiction.

1. Names

2. Characters - portrayals, description and detailed characterization

3. Business Ideals - products, details mentioned and process description

4. Settings - locales, imagery of scenes and scenic visualization

5. Events - celebration, ritual events, incidents/ accidents

6. Story Plot Sequencing - Chapter Conceptualization

Are either a product of the writer's unfathomable imagination and/ or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual entities (a person; living or dead/ mythical creatures, animals, and supernatural beings) and all of the things included above are purely coincidental.

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Story Description:

She is a legendary figure who dominates business and reigns military power. With an ancient ring in her hand, she became prodigiously gifted at almost everything, but pity that she bears a curse of never falling in love. Envied by many, she is trap in a loveless family whose members maim her wings and force her to early death. However, her soul is summoned in the body of a heavily poisoned good-for-nothing miss whom everyone despises and plotted-against.

Now that she has taken over, who dares to bite her back?

Wherever she walks danger and miracles follow! Accepting a new life in another era fills her journey with endless adventure, there she meets several powerful figures who become her closest allies and help her discover the truth about her mysterious death.

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Country: Philippines

Region X: Cagayan de Oro City

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(Letter to the Readers)

Dear Readers,

Greetings to my beloved readers, I just want to thank you for giving this book a chance to be heard. It has been a few months since Covid19 wreaked havoc around the world, tucking us into our homes for safety and security. I am delighted to be able to write and present such odd Ancient-Chinese themed novel to all of you. I know somehow most people around my age and younger are bored at home, so might as well motivate everyone to read and enhance their reading comprehension/ critical thinking skills. As an amateur Filipino teen writer I am not expecting so much from this book, but I can't help it, I want to be able to share a story to the mass and escape the world of reality for a while. Your reviews, comments and support are very much appreciated so don't forget to leave a note. I as a college student also want to improve my writing skills, so I'll thank everyone in advance. And I just want to remind everyone to avoid plagiarism, let's respect people's property and just enjoy reading, get lost in the world of imagination and have fun.

Please keep yourselves safe and follow WHO guidelines.

Love lots,

Ahce

She is a legendary figure who dominates business and reigns military power. With an ancient ring in her hand, she became prodigiously gifted at almost everything, but pity that she bears a curse of never falling in love. Envied by many, she is trap in a loveless family whose members maim her wings and force her to early death. However, her soul is summoned in the body of a heavily poisoned good-for-nothing miss whom everyone despises and plotted-against.

Now that she has taken over, who dares to bite her back? 

Wherever she walks danger and miracles follow! Accepting a new life in another era fills her journey with endless adventure, there she meets several powerful figures who become her closest friends and help her discover the truth about her mysterious death.

Greetings everyone!

I've been busy editing some stuffs from the previous chaps. Not to worry, I did not change anything, just 'clean' some errors and patch some plotholes. Especially the errors my allegedly alive Keyboard did.

So... for the new readers, I welcome ya'll, for the old readers, Thank you thank you thank you~ I really feel grateful that ya'll keep on supporting me. Shoutout to Cerment_the_frog, hopefallsnow01, Jagermeister, LoudHermit and ChiseHatori and those who kept on reading my story since square one.

And by the way, You should skim the first 20 chaps for additional snippets that I added :3. I wasn't planning to add them at the first place since I'm not yet sure about the system and plots and everything I wanted to integrate into this story.


So to be honest, I didn't expected this sudden recognition, I was just casually writing stories then sharing them to the world through Webnovel. And now, I'm starting to get comments and reviews, which greatly pleases me! Please give me more of those, thank you so much.


So yeah, I had the plan to drop this novel before, during those quarantine stuffs and online class wackamoles, and yet, I'm still here, writing Vol. 2. So thank you ya'll for the support.

Anyways, since Webnovel doesn't have an open forum feature in the app which I greatly wish they are planning to add, I'll be opening this chap for any questions ya'll have in your mind, tips for my story and your ideas - Especially names, I lack the creative brain to think of names.

Oh right! Give me more of those honest reviews! I love those! They're helping me improve the quality of the novel. So feel free to leave some reviews for this novel. Shoutout to Jaxer30 and Nith_Haiah.

All in all, thank you for following the development of Defend the Queen.

How to defeat a horde of monsters?

Create an army!

How to do that?

BECOME A QUEEN!!

Set your colony, raise your army, attack monsters, eat their flesh, then evolve!

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Iziul was the youngest and the only female General of the Army of Earth year 2075 who attained the respectable rank of Five-Star.

Sadly, her high prestige was ended after being sent to her death trap by.

Waking up again, she was brought to another world quite different yet similar to Earth.

Trees were towering here as animals and insects that were seen small at earth became gigantic titans that wrecked havoc.

"Is that mothra?!?! godzilla?!?! wait! Why are they so big but... normal. Normal???

Holy Sh*t. They are not big! 

I'm just small!"

Join Iziul, as she transmigrated into a
Queen Bit and thread the path of evolution while building her army of children to conquer the world!

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Hope you guys enjoy it!

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