and Betrayal, or a lovely romance? reviews, comments, and ratings are appreciated. Sorry about any grammar or punctuation errors. please point them out.
Read Nowand I haven't had a chance to write so that is that. Oh and sorry for the grammar and punctuation and all that stuff cause I have been doing things fast and haven't had a chance to look over it and c
Read Nowand we will be good in the novel department. I believe that my novel is not a FAN fiction because 97% of my story is original. The only unoriginal from my story is the race and power of Eduardo as
Read Nowpunctuation mistakes, but this story honestly can't be confined by normal punctuation since it's a story told poetically. Overall, I always knew what the author was saying and nothing stood out as gre
Read Nowand she was quite curious about the System hidden within him. The System's power to distort karma was absolutely inconceivable. As long as it was used properly, it would be ridiculously powerful. "…I
and got so bored. I love writing and creating this but I don't have the patience to check the grammar and punctuation for my older chapters. If no one comments on this I wouldn't be surprised lol.
Read Nowpunctuation and capitalization are my biggest struggles so there will most likely be lots of errors. Grammar wise I'm good, and as for a release schedule, I'm a college student taking 18 credit hours-
Read Nowand keep deleting it. I don't want my story to be like all the other stories like, meeting a rich man and the female lead falling in Love. and in these stories there is problems, separation, betrayal.
Read Nowgrammar/punctuation! Honestly it has taken this long for an update because I'm still trying to get all of my chapter onto my computer, I wish I had done it from the start. Do comment if you want me
Read Nowand I have light blue eyes my hair is pretty long and curly I work at a business with a very rich man as a business leader he has a son but no one had seen him but he will Probaly be the successor an
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