Characters in the Star Wars universe mess around and play pranks on each other.

I had a sudden moment of inspiration, and decided to write it down.
I am not doing this to became an author and I might stop at any time.
Anyway I am very grateful to anyone who reads and gives his or her support. Also, I do accept suggestions.
I don't have ownership over any of the pre-existing characters nor the cover, but I do claim ownership over the characters created by me.
PS: this is a Star Wars fiction
PS2: There will be no harem or romance whatsoever, essentially because it would be too different from the lore, and also because I don't like it very much.
PS3: The protagonist won't have any Force powers.
PS4: The first chapters are small, but it gets bigger as the novel go on. As such, the first chapters are in a process of revision to make them more adequate to the rest of the novel. However, the novel doesn't stop because of this.

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About the story now. 

Clone trooper CT-4063 is a fresh and shiny trooper directly from the clone facilities in Kamino. 
He is also one of the thousands of clones that take part on the first battle of the Clone Wars.
Go with him as he carves his path to the high comand.

About the story:

Clone trooper CT-4063 is a fresh and shiny trooper directly from the clone facilities in Kamino. 
He is also one of the thousands of clones that take part on the first battle of the Clone Wars.
Go with him as he carves his path to the high comand.

Important warnings:

I had a sudden moment of inspiration, and decided to write it down.
I am not doing this to became an author and I might stop at any time.
Anyway I am very grateful to anyone who reads and gives his or her support. Also, I do accept suggestions.
I don't have ownership over any of the pre-existing characters nor the cover, but I do claim ownership over the characters created by me.
PS: this is a Star Wars fiction
PS2: There will be no harem or romance whatsoever, essentially because it would be too different from the lore, and also because I don't like it very much.
PS3: The protagonist won't have any Force powers.
PS4: The first chapters are small, but it gets bigger as the novel go on. As such, the first chapters are in a process of revision to make them more adequate to the rest of the novel. However, the novel doesn't stop because of this.

Also, don't forget to join our discord! 
https://discord.gg/Gdv2arS

The clone wars was a huge war between the clones and the separatists/CIS, surviving the clone wars was a huge feat, but to take it further the galactic war started practically right after it, in this story you follow a clone named CT-1A11A (lucky) the war he fought and the challenges he faced never prepared him for what happened next. may the 501st live on wards (this is not canon)

Author- Hello everyone, I hope your all having a great day I know I am and without further ado let's hop right into it.

1:  The chronological order will not be the same as in the original clone wars.  I originally was planning to, but it is so incredibly difficult to keep it in that order while writing a good fanfiction, so by doing it in a new chronological order it will be much easier and more enjoyable.

2:  I will be introducing new arcs into the clone wars.  

3:  I will be slightly modifying ancient star wars lore.

4:  I will not be following either canon or legends when it comes to the Sequel timeline.  Instead, I will be creating my own sequels that I believe you will all enjoy much more than either of the former options.

5:  Should there be 2 or 3 companions (Including Ashoka).  If so who should they be?

6:  Don't forget to support me at PayPal.Me/YugiohGod

When a prodigy of the Jedi Order, Mandalorian by blood, and proud warrior, sacrifices himself to allow his friends to escape the clutches of Darth Vass a member of the dark council.  

Surprisingly, he survived his suicide attack but he awakens over five millennia later.

"What happened to the Sith Empire?  Huh?  Confederacy?  Clone Wars?  What year is it?"

(WARNING:  FOR THE FINAL TIME HE IS A STRONG MC, NOT AN OP MC!!!!)

Hello there, this is a high school Clone Wars modern fanfiction, I collaborated with someone, (her OC is Aerin Pasan) I hope you like this, and by the way, most of this isn't canon so don't come at me, thanks. 
-DyadicEcho

Schooled! (Pretty much funny little stories of how School goes for the High schoolers and our OCs).

AAAAAALLLLLLLLRRRRRRIIIIIGGGGGHHHTT! everyone viking-stormo and I sat down and figured out the time of his birth it is currently 8 years before the clone wars start. I'll be skipping his childhood up on to the part where he used the force for the first time Note this is not canon I just Maki this part up to get him to coruscant.

Again if I start to get something wrong please point me in the right direction to correct it.

death. rebirth. The Force 


Jared a normal person in life meets a rather dull death of literal boredom after being quarantined for a year and travels to the star wars universe and becomes the second mandalorian jedi.


Another boy in another world will still continue this is just something I wanted to do.

Inside the Uzumaki house, Serena and Pedro were comforting the two little kids Irina and Izumi who had gone through all that, while the clone of Linley was talking with Minato...

So i hear you like my sister?? : C. Linley

Ugh, i do have a very likeable favorability towards her. : Minato

Well i believe you will learn what this means to like someone from an early age in the upcoming years, but if you hurt her i'll break your bones... : C. Linley

Minato was pale from talking to someone like their big brother and it was then that Tsunade came and smacked the head of C. Linley making him try and complain but stopped as he got the deadly glare from her and Natsuhi in the room.

While everyone was ready to kill the Clone from daring to scold a bit Minato suddenly the clone vanished and was replaced by Madara who started swearing with inappropriate words...

All of them activated their eyes and Madara felt danger as he could feel 5 Pair of eyes lock on to him.

It was then he realised where he was as he finally recognised their auras and started sweating badly...

He stopped talking and with a dissatisfaction expression on his face he went inside his room and holed up himself...

Minato kept looking at all those powerhouses and as a kid, he wanted to be like them, little did he know that he will surpass his canon self with the help of a few individuals...

Back to the cave, Linley was walking and started descending more and more and after a few hundreds of meters, he finally reached a large hall where he could see 3 dead bodies on the ground...

I would have been disappointed if someone of your status failed to see that those three were being controlled. : Linley

Oh?? That's a surprise..... This signature... It's like i'm looking at many different people at once... : ???

You can say we are the same... : Linley

Xxxmm??? We are not from the same clan so when you say that it means you have a Bloodline that is able to let you host other people's blood and abilities as well... : ???

Impressive, you found it based on the chakra signature i'm leaking?? : Linley

For that reason, i will not brush you off or disrespect you... What would your esteem self, would like from me?? : ???

For starters how about a name?? : Linley

Oh, right... Where are my manners... I'm sure that guy you sent away was Madara and he must have told you my nickname, just use that... : ???

Then Hanger, i only have a single goal in my mind and that is to absorb more Bloodlines for a few upcoming wars... : Linley

Hmm... Are you talking about the Otsutsuki Clan?? : Hanger

If i had a hat i would have taken it off and bowed to you, unfortunately, i don't. Yes i'm talking about them... : Linley

As you may have heard i'm obtaining immunity by absorbing the proteins in the ground from different kinds of fluids, including blood... : Hanger

Oh???? I thought it was only blood??? : Linley

That's what the outside was viewing us and eventually destroyed us with the Uchiha's as the front line... : Hanger

Hahahahahahah, interesting.... I'll learn a bit of History from you.... : Linley

Shadow Clone Jutsu!!! : Linley

Poof.... Linley created a clone and then dispersed it in order to notify the Wood Clone outside that the plan will be delayed based on what he will learn...

Do i have to thank you for sparing me?? : Hanger

How about you make an appearance in front of me??? And don't try to transform your appearance it won't work... : Linley

Either way, i can't do that, as i can't use Chakra... : Hanger

Linley saw a middle age man at his 50 walking from the deepest darkness of the hall they were in. He had black hair with nods of white, wrinkles in his face, he had green eyes and a frail looking body.

He wore white pants along with silver sandals and a white sleeveless shirt with a slight opening in his neck...

Linley Riku lived his life as a total MADAO.... leaching off from everyone he could..... His love was anime Manga and all types of fan-fictions but his most favorite one that would kill if he missed something from it was Naruto.... One day as he was sitting in an cafeteria seeing Boruto series..... Sound of brakes could be heard and the last thing he remembered was a huge BUS... Stepping over them killing him instantly.....

I was also planning on putting another platform for the ascension process which is SWO (Star Wars Online).
Wherein they will be training to be prepared in galactic warfare tactics and techniques from the movie and novel 'Enders Game'.
It is a working progress as I don't have sufficient tech and program yet to render a world of galactic size at that massive scale.
But with the advancements that we're currently having, it's not that out of reach within a couple more years or even months if Augur finished analyzing Nimrod.
I have bigger plans in mind with the A.I.s developed from «Underworld».
Such as creating a cyber world like the forgotten Mega-man Battle Network.
This is one of the Animes and games that shaped me in my previous life.
Wherein there is a miniaturized «Light Cube Cluster» in every PET (Personal Terminal).
And Transer (Bracer shaped PET from MM: Starforce) created to handle the Navis (A.I who came from the «Underworld» that liked to stay on the net).
While there will be also a LAN-like connection for [Capsules] to access the world platforms once it is ready to be released as 'VRMMORPG'.
Of course, all the techs produced by my company are protected by an energy field under the casing for those trying to scan its insides and are set to self-destruct whenever someone tries to reverse engineer it.
The «Light Cube Cluster» will also serve as the black box that will automatically be warped to company HQ while protecting the Navi in that specific Terminal.
This stuff is coming to reality soon as the scientists responsible for the research are still facing the problem of how to fit the required tech in such a small device to handle a lot of data processing material without overheating it.
.
Said scientists developing the MMBN project are:
Doctor Tadashi Hikari – in his mid-40's the soon-to-be the grandfather of Lan Hikari and Hub Hikari (MegaMan.Exe).
Father of Yuichiro Hikari who is currently in his preteen years.
.
Doctor Wily – was the nemesis of Dr. Tadashi but his temper and greed were toned down when I offered him something he wasn't able to turn down.
Own lab, funding, and all the techs he requires.
The guy is not that evil yet when I met him as he was just a workaholic researcher, who just can't satisfy his curiosity towards technological advancements.
Dr. Cossak – known creator of Bass.Exe the first AutoNavi in the MMBN series. with his help, Kayaba was able to progress much faster than the canon regarding the «Underworld Project».
.
Professor Tetsuhiro Shigemura – teacher of Kayaba Akihiko in canon, the villain behind the SAO: Ordinal Scale movie.
Whom Kikuoka invited on Rath to work on the A.L.I.C.E project after said incident.
Well now with my interference and hogging talented people from Japan I guess he'll have a much nicer time with his wife and kid in the future.
.
Shuuseki Ijuin – CEO of IPC (Ijuin PET Company) in the MMBN, but as of now is called ITC (Ijuin Technology Company).
Which is one of the major players in the tech industry in Japan that now works for Wayne Enterprise.
As you can see every one of these characters who will eventually become famous is buried in the future of the Marvel-verse.
By being casualties to Super-Powered beings fights at the level of Brainiac/Luthor against Flash in Justice League animation where they decimated cities in their fights.
Still begs the questions regarding so many characters of other universes existing here.
Though it looks like I am biased regarding Japanese being my subordinates in the A.I. project I'll tell you the basic layout of staff in the Wayne Enterprise.
.
Secretary – Sharon Carter (Silk) = was placed on me by SHIELD during the past 6-years for me (by 'me' I meant my personas within the enterprise) being suspected as Nightwing or Enigma.
As my other personas got fed up with trying to avoid her tailing them for months.
They confronted her upfront much to her shock and offered her a better job and the second bite of Peter's spider that was supposed to bite Cindy Moon.
.
Chief Operations Officer (COO) – Jason Todd (Clone) = Red Hood
Chief Administrative Officer (CAO) – Dick Grayson (Clone) = Nightwing
Well, I trust myself rather than a board of old goats that is only in it for the profits without even contributing anything other than small profit suggestions.
.
Chief Intelligence Officer (CIO) – Niijima Haruo = Kenichi's friend, CEO of Shinpaku Alliance, and a brilliant hacker.
Once we go galactic and take DNA samples of different species maybe we'll know more regarding his background and abilities.
.
Chief Technology Officer (CTO) – Madison Jeffries (Metallo) = gave him that nickname cause his previous is "Box".
That is basically an Iron Man suit but instead of building it he is bending any material he focuses on to his tastes, but his favorite material is metal.
.
Chief Financial Officer (CFO) – Stu Bazzini (Suits TV series) = though Niijima also helps him when he handles stuff poorly.
.
Tech Department:
Fransico Ramon (Clone), Quentin Beck (Mysterio) and his team, and the A.I. Department team.
Wherein Quentin Beck and his team are a great help in the development of Holographic techs.
I offered them a slightly higher salary from Stark's but great benefits regarding the workplace and environment.
.
Medical Department:
Dr. Helen and Philip Cho = parents of Amadeus Cho (Brawn) who is another super-genius intellect and skilled hacker.
I got to hire both people when I bought U-GIN Genetics Infinite R&D in South Korea.
Don't want to waste their expertise dying just so Amadeus can build up to his future character Brawn also known as Kid-Hulk.
.
Dr. Sarah Kinney – rescued together with her daughter Laura (X-23) during one of my raids on Weapon-X facilities mentioned previously while managing to get samples of Adamantium.
They are currently living at the mansion above my Batcave base as they got nowhere else to go while hiding from other Weapon X agents.
The mansion is large enough to house all the key people in the company like the scientist involved in the A.I. project, Ryōzanpaku people, and Jeffries.
.
Legal Department:
Litt Wheeler Williams Bennett Law firm – I also bought this firm as they are the best New York can offer and I have deep knowledge regarding them and what they have been through from my previous life.
Besides, I will greatly need their expertise to glide through the USA's laws.
.
Security will be handled by the Ryōzanpaku masters, Kenichi and Miu as they are of Katsujinken (Saving Fist) school.
Where they only need to disable intruders or any unwanted people.
For spying ones, I'm planning on taking over "The Hand" after mastering [Ki/Chi] from the Ryōzanpaku masters.
.
I didn't have enough time as I was busy laying down the foundation needed for the Enterprise, A.I. Project, META formula, and Tech development such as:
Zenny – Online currency like Bitcoin but much more stable and will become staple currency instead of coins and paper bills.
.
VRMMO (Capsules) Devices – Nerve Gear (Released), and Amusphere(Created).
.
Games – The Elder Scrolls: I-V (Released), The Witcher series (Released), Assassin Creed Series (Released), Elder Scrolls Online – ESO (created), GGO-SAO-ALO (created), Ordinal Scale (Created), Injustice (Created).
.
Smart Devices – Augma(Created = Earwear), Neuro linker (Developing = Necklace) and PET (Personal terminal = Holo-phone), Transer (Bracer shaped = Smartwatch) both still under development.
.
Brief Particle (Pym Particle) = clone looted Hank Pym's mind and Obliviated (Memory erased/altered) him of such incident.
While renaming it as such as a homage and preparation for the Capsule Corp signature item.
.
Dionesium (Created) = Stark expo element. Welp needs something to power up the entire facilities without relying on the power grid of the US.
Cause if I did, then most of the income we get will be drained by the electricity bill.
.
Promethium (Developing) = new metal synthesized from the combination of Adamantium, Carbonadium, and lastly Vibranium dipped in the Unbreakable Formula.
.
These are the current projects the company is focusing on.
While the META formula is a type of Super-Soldier serum.
Which I promised to give all my people for their continued work for me and loyalty.
Though it is still under development but will be completed soon before the first Avenger scene even begins.
.
META formula synthesized combination of:
Super Soldier Serum – which a clone extracted from the 5 subjects hidden in a Hydra base in Russia from Captain America: Civil War.
Since they gonna die anyway why not be more useful for the last time yeah?
.
OZ and Spider Formula – taken both at the same time from OSCORP during "Peter's Incident".
.
CPH4 – took it from the Korean drug lord Mr. Jang who was a part of the Weapon X facility during my acquisition of U-GIN company.
Before he even manages to finish the product and destroyed any related evidence of the research and start a LUCY incident.
.
Unbreakable Formula – taken by a clone along with all research from Dr. Noah Burstein's mind via Soul Searching (Telepath Memory reading) technique.
While also retrieving and destroying all materials related to the formula then wiping him from existence after finishing up.
.
Extremis Formula – still under development under A.I.M and Maya Hansen's hands.
Plan on saving her in the shadows before she gets shot.
It is just 3 years wait before Iron Man 3 happens anyways, should be enough to progress, and complete other projects by then.
.
Heart-Shaped Herb (Wakanda) – the one responsible for the over-stimulation of the Pacinian corpuscles.
This sends signals to the brain to allow for near-perfect movement.
This is how Black Panther is able to twist and dodge with unparalleled grace.
It also gives heightened senses.
All of them. Black Panther is able to track by smell, see in the dark and hear the beating heart of those near him.
There is also speculation of a very weak danger sense. I'm unsure about the last one, but I won't complain either way. [A/N: Wiki]
.
Though the formula is still under development because the last two are not yet acquired.
We've made improvements to the Vita-Ray Chamber.
It now has regenerative functions with healing fluids like DBZ's Frieza's Healing chamber which has been produced as 'Nutrient Fluid' to the public.
Also where the Saiyan's are kept during infancy and when they get injured heavily after coming back from galactic missions.
Wayne Enterprise is also expanding in different industries other than the Tech, Construction, and Medical field.
This one will be including damage insurance regarding supernatural fights, the News industry, banking (Savings and Loans) which will serve as the platform introduction for the Zenny (Online Currency).
Restaurants and Bars, and lastly Books-Movies-TV Series (that has GOT, Narnia, Star Wars, Star Trek, and Ender's Game well mostly the ones that don't exist here from my previous life)
After shaking up their beliefs from the Robert Langdon series and movies.
I plan on slowly but surely get them hooked onto all sci-fi shit like Star Wars and Star Trek books, movies, and DC Comics.
(Saving Batman's for last, along with Justice Leagues, after of 'Battle of New York').
This will make them be a bit open-minded regarding galactic affairs.
Then hit them hard with 'Ender's Game' movie a month right before the Chitauri invasion happens, telling the entire world that they were being warned regarding such stuff.
ALERT!
『Augur』 (Sir, it's about time for you to meet up with Peter and the others by the New York Public Library. Would you like me to send a clone instead sir?)
Notified me out of nowhere breaking me out of my thoughts.
『John』"No need I'll go. It's about time I tell them too, and Peter is in dire need of an overhaul on his Homecoming suit."
I replied shaking my head as I blinked towards the spot where we are meeting with his space energy.
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A/N: This is not included in the word count and is just me ranting because I need someone to clear something with me whoever is knowledgeable about this thing...
But what the fuck is up with fanfics having ******* even those that had bad grammar?? Isn't that against the 'Copyright' law or something?
Since they are making money from outsourcing a universe of their own from someone else's original book/comic/film/movie, here I'll even include the summary of the law.
[Copyright infringement (at times referred to as piracy) is the use of works protected by copyright law without permission for a usage where such permission is required, thereby infringing certain exclusive rights granted to the copyright holder, such as the right to reproduce, distribute, display or perform the protected work, or to make derivative works. ]
That is just from the wiki summary and not the complete law about it. 
Tell me your thoughts on the paragraph comments as I might just be ignorant on something where ******* might actually notify the original Authors and take a fee or something.

Young student bumming out with friends after watching Heroes TV series and was supposed to be magically summoned in Another world but was obviously got isekai’d. Upon waking up in the new world he got kicked into, he discovers the reason this universe was abandoned by ROB (Random Omniscient Beings). Follow his adventure to dominance, and his search for his friends from his past life.

Announcement:
Volume 1 of this book will contain like a massive amount of INFO DUMPS, you have BEEN WARNED!

And this is an 'Alternate Universe(AU)' of Marvel universe so most timelines and scenes will not be canonically accurate but I will try keeping up with the MCU events
This one will be a mash-up of other universes from TV series to manga and anime too. So please don't state facts like how Jean became [Phoenix Avatar] when she was saving her dying childhood friend based on the comic verse, whereas she had it during childhood in the Dark Phoenix movie.

Disclaimer: I do not own all Marvel, Anime/Manga, DC, film, and other novel or book characters. As I will make sure of following the “Fair use” clause of copyright.

Book Cover Illustration by Uchuubranko(teez) taken from Deviantart
(deviantart-com/uchuubranko/art/teez-492382847)
change the dash between 't'and 'com' to period to access link.

For the next couple weeks the two Spartan, would roam the facilities and gather whatever information they could. Sadly, like Lama Su had said all the stuff that the Kaminoans had related to either themselves or their research. The only source of outside information was Jango and he was tight lipped and they had no idea why. He always talks well about Diesel and the things he does, but refuses to let them mee or even talk. Creating excuses as for why they can't
Dom decided that something else was probably going on that kept Jango so closed off. "Sophia, the next time we are roaming the facilities I want you to hack into the security and spy on Jango."
"I already have. I haven't spotted anything unusual. But I'm keeping an eye out."
"Good, I'm gonna go visit the clones. Keep working on invading the systems."
Dom gets up and starts walking toward the clone training hall. The clones again were practicing drills of all sorts. To the far left was a target range, to the right is something similar to earth. Breaking and entering the clearing room of enemies. Dom kept walking and eventually arrived at an area where there were clones in different color armors. One of the clones noticed the presents of Dom and walked over.
"Sir, I'm CT-7567 are you a clone?" The reason CT-7567 assumed that Dom might be a clone was because he saw him last time running the siege course. What he witnessed amazed him, how could two people totally shatter a group of ten clones, who were built for war.
Dom looks over to the clone shaking his head. "I'm not a clone, I'm a Spartan."
"A Spartan sir?"
"Maybe one day you'll understand, if you ever met a Spartan you better hope they are on your side."
CT-7567 sits there for a few moments thinking about what Dom has mentioned. "So in your opinion would a clone be able to fight a Spartan."
--Dom--
"Impossible, as you clones stand right now you have no individualism. Because to that it makes you very predictable. Fighting a battle or a war is more than what you see on paper. A single moment or a single person can change the course of a battle."
"Think of it this way CT-7567. In battle nothing is absolute but if you hesitate you may lose your life. Always fight without hesitation.
(I know this isn't really canon for clones, because early/before the clone wars it was recorded if clones were thinking with too much individualism they were considered defective and were taken into process. Anyways, I'm pushing individualism forward.)
"Also, CT-7567 you're more than just a number. I'm Spartan-017 the name is Dom. How does Rex sound?"
"Rex? What do you mean?"
"I mean I'm giving you the name Rex. Like I said, you're not just a number."
"I'm Rex then?
After a few moments of exchange Dom left on his way meeting up with Lama Su. Explaining to him what he has done.
"I've accelerated your process ahead of schedule, the result for some clones will leave for satisfying results."
"Why would giving them a name change anything?"
"It's the mental state of an individual, it helps them develop a sense of belonging. If I belong here with these people> I would fight harder to protect them. For Example."
--Rex returning to his squad--
"Welcome back CT-7567, what were you talking about with him?"
"The name is Rex, he explained some of our shortcomings as soldiers and gave me a name. Also, he isn't a clone."
"Rex? That's your name?"
"Correct."
--Sophia--
Nothing was happening with Jango, so she decided to hack into the Kaminoans servers and find out other things. Although the premise of what they were doing was amazing in its own right. There was nothing she could do about it. She drove deep within the system eventually coming across the data on the current clones.
The clones were ordered by a Jedi Master Sifo-Dyas who wanted them to be built for the Republic. Unfortunately, the man died out on a mission. So the project was taken over by Tyranus, once he took over there were slight modifications and requests made to the creation of the clones. It look like they were implanted with a *inhibitor chip*. This made Sophia curious, she opened the recorded data for the inhibitor chip and read its contents.
"Clone Protocol 66 : Labels all Jedi as traitors to the Republic and are sentenced to on-site execution."
Sophia decided she needed more information on the chip and found that it was impossible for the clones to resist as it erased biases and their beliefs. It forced the clone to view Jedi as a threat to be eliminated at all cost. Sophia decided it would be best to download all the data about the inhibitor chips. They could decide what to do later after Dom sees the data.

Spartan-016 Diesel was fighting for his life against the onslaught of covenant on Reach as the evacuation orders arrived. Diesel and his fellow Soldiers boarded the last remaining ship. As they attempted to escape, the ship came under fire making the ship malfunction, throwing it into hyperdive.............

Please understand I'm very a amateur writer, I will make mistakes! By no means will my FF be perfect. I do 90% of my writing at work, so things will need to be fixed!

I own no Characters/Object or story related material from the Halo/Star War Universe. Spartan-016 Diesel/Spartan-017 Dominick are two Spartans that are currently not registered as "known" Spartans in the Halo Universe and as such I will borrow the tags Spartan-016/Spartan-017 as my own until otherwise notified.

Also, I would like to know things you would like to see in the story, Characters/Allies etc... and maybe I'll introduce such things into the story.

Hey guys it's been a long, long time. Merry Christmas! Unlike last year I haven't been able to do something crazy such as create a 40k word chapter, only around a 20k chapter.  Now I hope you guys aren't too disappointed with the chapter, I took a long break from writing over the year which has delayed the release of this chapter, as well as the fact it was meant to be an intermission chapter has really restricted how long it was going to be.

When I say intermission, I mean all this chapter was supposed to be, was a set up for many different story arcs later in the novel. This can be seen with over half the scenes alluding to something that will come in the future. Some faster than others.

Now I wanted to get this out of the way as well. The first scene and last scene in the chapter and any other chapter I generally do, are likely to not be in chronological order. As can be seen with the Shmi start to the chapter, followed by the council meeting.

If you were to look at a timeline of events the council meeting happens before the Shmi scene when she arrives on the planet. I have done this so it's harder to determine a proper time line, generally because this gives me a little leeway in what I can put into each chapter.

I think that having the first and last parts of the chapter, possibly being out of chronological order gives me a lot of opportunities to set things up in the future. Almost always I would say the last scene in the chapter will be set outside the timeline of events that happened in the chapter. Ranging from weeks to months into the future. 

Of course in the case of this intermission, there is a little chronological order in the timeline of scenes, but it is hard to tell because there is nothing so connected that you can tell. Outside of the first two scenes and the last scene. (Honestly hope I'm not confusing you guys too much here)

Now moving on, as I haven't been writing at all this year, outside of a few small chapters I really would love to hear what you guys think. I believe that the council scene wasn't bad, as well as the Shmi scene. Though my forte does not lye with political scenes and I find them hard to write, especially the planning that happened in the council scene.

Other than that I also think I did a not too bad job with the self-realization with Aayla, though I think I could have possibly done it better. The mental image in her head that she fights was very hard to write in my opinion. Also I'm sure a lot of you noticed who cameoed there.

Speaking of Cameos

In regards to the Commander of his forces…. I dropped about 3 hints into that part of the chapter, 2 small one and a major hint. For those that figured it out. This is going to be an amalgamation of both canon and legends that I'll be working with. I want to make the character more logical and impersonal; really give off a power went to his head kind of vibe to him, which will change how his back story and name are given to him. It will be very fun when a certain (Hint), Demi-god and Living-God meet… I'm thinking (Foreshadow) The battle of Hypori.

So as in regards to Ventress. Yes she will be in the story in the future as an apprentice no less! But who's apprentice shall she be?…. I mean I think a few people can make logical jumps to figure it out. It's pretty damn obvious when you think about their personalities and how they match up. But again this is really just a set up for her, like everything else in this chapter. Now onto the main point here. I don't know her full backstory, I'm still going through it right now. But to those avid Ventress fans, no I don't know which version of her back story I will use, legends or canon. There are good parts about both. In regards to her father figure/master I'm still deciding if I should have it that he killed her first slaver/father that she grew attached to. I think it's a good story point to explore, just don't know if I will.

Finally on to the mysterious planet and the queen. As I have said already in the other notes, all of these little scenes connect one way or another into story lines that will play out with the main characters/companions. So going off that some might figure out who this connects to. Really only 2 people that I could be talking about.

This is an original created planet, in that I mean, the planet name when revealed will be from star wars, but their culture, political structure, military, religion etc. will all be fiction made by myself, which is something that evolved from events mentioned in past chapters. Take your best guesses in the comments, sadly I won't be able to confirm or deny whether you are right until a later date.

Finally I know I'm going to get some hate, but I obviously put in a scene about Rey. Yes I will be doing a story line with her. Yes a future version of her, yes a young version of her (Which means I can turn her into anything, don't immediately jump the gun on hate… and yes I have thought about other people in the clone war periods that I could use instead of her. Yes I will be using most of the ones you will list for different story lines, Best example right now Ventress herself.)

Other than that I also think I should mention I might tone down the introduction of new female characters specifically. I mean I feel like I've just been introducing way too many of them. When it came to the 'Golden Twins' in this chapter, I originally had it that they were both sisters, but almost changed it to a brother/sister relationship. It wouldn't change much. It was just after thinking about it, this story really does have a lot of female leads, even though Mace is the main character, I have focused on, Aayla, Nadia, Padme, Jaesa, heck even Rey.

I would like to know what you guys think, I find I've done that with stories in the past, introduce a lot more female characters compared to male ones. Now that's not to say I don't have any Male characters I will be introducing, actually next chapter I'm going to be introducing one. It just seems like there are a lot of females right now. Your thoughts? 

PS. Ventress is like around 12 or something like that for people that are wondering. She is still young and there are 10 years before the start of the clone wars, so lots of time for her to grow.

PPS. For those wondering, the armour used by the Royal Guard is based on the SWTOR Exiled Padawan Armor Set.

Next chapter: Temple Ransacking (Working Title)

Now I'm very tired, excuse me while i go sleep!

Zevren out!

Mace Rook, Dark lord of the Sith, The Emperor’s Wrath, The outlander, The alliance commander, a Person with too many titles to count. On his way back from a mission to quell a group of insurgents the force rages and he and his current crew are flung 4000 Years into the future.

What happens when a crew of powerful force sensitive Sith are flung into the blockade of Naboo? How will the Jedi react to this new force in the Galaxy? How will the Sith? How will Mace and his crew? Will they let the course of the galaxy continue unhindered or will they make changes that reverberate through the force forever. 

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This is an AU based on the game SWTOR, some things have changed, but if you haven't played the game there will be a few spoilers, with character names and affiliations. But as this is an AU they are different from the game characters in some ways.

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This is a very slow release Novel as i have other stories i will be updating. This novel will be worked on when i can't be stuffed with the others. 

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(Disclaimer: I do not own Star Wars or any of their intellectual property. I also do not own Bio Ware or their IP)

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