Just little things that sometimes help me with writing and my thoughts of different forms of writing.

Dear Reader,
Hello there! Okay first of all two people are writing this book. Sun is the one making the plot and the framework and Angel is writing the story and painting over that framework. If you are wondering which one I am you are going to have to guess.
Two, updates are going to be slow because right now both of us are juggling several things at the moment including quarantine.
Three, this is our first book and it might not be that good so feel free to give us some tips on writing, or really anything you think could have been better.
Four, this book is dedicated to all the annoying, horrible siblings who have no respect for personal space and without whom I wouldn't be spending my time locked up in a room writing this author's note instead of playing with him. Stay safe, maintain social distance, and enjoy. <3

Far in the town of Deadwood in South Dakota, lies the ancient Havenpoint Academy, three girls who will face challenges unknown...
 Okay, this book is NOT that dramatic. But how will the curious, talkative Aidene Rayners get along with the introverted and emo Anne Gray? How will Anne Gray deal with her and the paranoid and secretive 'broker' Penelope Knight as her roommate at the same time? What will happen if Aidene's curiosity just hastened the trouble which was already heading towards them. Will curiosity finally kill the cat? And not to mention that annoying third roommate Valentina Brookes who won't stop talking about her ever so 'horrible' life.

This is our first book and we would really appreciate it if you gave it a try even if the description sounds horrible. Please don't be afraid to comment honestly and give some writing tips and suggestions. Hope we can survive 2021 together. CIAO!
Yours Truly,
Sun and Angel



Zhang Zian was Pi's only friend. The other elves in the pet shop could talk but Pi couldn't, and Pi was the only elfin that could type, so Pi found it difficult to communicate with others. Zhang Zian had always been worried about Pi. When he couldn't keep it company, who could relieve its loneliness?

In China, it was forbidden to have primates as pets, so Pi couldn't appear before humans. Zhang Zian couldn't explain to others that Pi wasn't an animal, it was an elfin, ruling out the possibility of Pi making friends in real life. 

Zhang Zian felt that the Internet was a good space to make friends. As the saying goes, on the Internet, nobody knows who you are.

Pi carefully thought about his suggestion, nodded, and typed: I'll try it.

So, Zhang Zian helped it join the group established by the readers. The application was approved almost instantly. The readers in the group were so exhilarated seeing that Pi had joined the group.

"Are you the author?"

"Are you really the author?"

"Are you actually the author of Pet King?"

Everyone asked questions one after another.

Zhang Zian looked at Pi with encouragement. Having just learned the skill, Pi captured the screen of the platform for authors on the Qidian website and sent the image to the group. Then Pi typed: Hello, everyone. I'm the author of Pet King. Thank you for your support!

The readers were even more excited, expressing their love of the book and their curiosity about the author.

Pi was bemused, not knowing what questions to answer first or how to answer them. Fortunately, the group's manager helped Pi in a timely manner. 

[Killed by A Sword]: Everyone, don't harass the author. You'll delay Popo's writing. 

Zhang Zian was surprised. They've given Pi a nickname?!

"Eeek."

Pi smiled. It seemed to like the nickname.

Pi found that the readers were very friendly. Whether they were discussing the plot of Pi's book or talking about their life experiences, they were very polite, which was completely different from what Pi had imagined. Every once in a while, Pi would slip in one or two sentences to express its own opinions. Each comment from Pi was praised by the readers, who would subsequently ask Pi a series of questions or urge Pi to release more chapters, making Pi feel overwhelmed again. 

As Zhang Zian watched the interaction between Pi and the readers, he knew it was a great idea to ask Pi to join the Book Group.

While chatting with the readers, Pi refreshed the website from time to time. Previously, the number of readers who had put Pet King in their libraries was 9,853. Now, the number was increasing.

9,887.

9,923.

9,945.

9,972.

Finally, the number became 9,999.

Zhang Zian held his breath, and Pi minimized the chat room window. Their eyes stared at the number, waiting for the moment when it became ten thousand.

However, reality was different from their expectations. When Pi refreshed the website once again, the number decreased to 9,998.

"Eeek."

Pi lowered its head. Every time it saw the number decline, it'd be so frustrated and thought that the readers gave up reading the book because of its poor writing. 

"Pi, raise your head."

Zhang Zian patted its shoulder, comforting it. "Pi, you have to remember that your novel isn't the Renminbi and it will never be liked by everyone. You should know that only two out of ten customers actually decide to buy my pets. Money means nothing to me." 

Pi raised its head and pointed at its chest. The gesture meant: You should be ashamed of what you just said.

However, Zhang Zian's joke had helped Pi regain its confidence and courage. Pi quickly forgot the one reader who had just left and refreshed the webpage again.

10,000

"Eeek!" Pi danced with joy. 

"Finally, 10,000! High-five!" Zhang Zian raised his right palm.

Pi lifted its small pink hand and gently hit Zhang Zian's palm. Zhang Zian wanted to celebrate, but his cell phone suddenly rang.

He took out his cell phone, thinking that it was a message from an acquaintance or merchant. He was surprised to find that Pet Hunter had opened with new three tips. 

[Game Tips]: Congratulations! Your Molecule Monkey has collected enough Strength of Faith to upgrade!

[Game Tips]: Your Molecule Monkey is currently an Elite level elfin. After upgrading, it will become an Elite/Premier elfin. 

[Game Tips]: Are you upgrading now? If you choose "No," you can upgrade it later.

[Yes/No, remind me later]

Zhang Zian was stunned. It was his first time encountering the upgrade of an elfin. 

His palm was still touching Pi's, so Zhang Zian could feel its temperature that was slightly higher than that of humans. He looked at Pi, who was staring at the computer screen with joy and refreshing the page with the other to see the number increase.  

Zhang Zian glanced at the computer screen. The Add to Library number had become 10,031.

Although he didn't pay attention to the time, he believed that the game's upgrade option popped up when the number had reached 10,000.

Was that a coincidence?

"Pi, I'm going to the bathroom. Stay here by yourself for a while. By the way, don't just chat with the readers, start writing," he said, taking his hand back.

Pi nodded and excitedly launched the Word document. However, the novelty of joining the group hadn't yet passed, and Pi still occasionally looked at the chatroom.

Zhang Zian entered the bathroom, closed the door, and said in a low voice, "Navigation Elfin, are you there?"

[Navigation Elfin]: At your service.

A flashing light appeared on the screen of Zhang Zian's cell phone. 

"Navigation Elfin, is this 'upgrade' the kind I imagined?" he asked, thinking that the Navigation Elfin would be able to understand what he meant without explanation. 

[Navigation Elfin]: Yes, the upgraded Molecule Monkey won't disappear, unless it's downgraded due to losing its Strength of Faith.

"Are there any side effects?" he asked with concern.

[Navigation Elfin]: There are no side effects.

There was no reason that the Navigation Elfin would lie, Zhang Zian believed it. "Thank you, I have no other questions."

[Navigation Elfin]: Enjoy playing your game!

The light disappeared.

Zhang Zian took a deep breath, and clicked "Yes."

[Game Tips]: Your Molecule Monkey is upgrading. Please wait!


1. Download a suspicious game
2. Catch a few magical pets as partners
3. Go through interesting daily routines and lead the pet shop to a whole new level

Hello everyone! Lievel here!

Remember I promised about posting at least 2 - 3 Chapters a week? Unfortunately, I can't do that anymore. Why? It's actually like this.

When I started writing this book, I was a complete newbie who had absolutely zero writing experience.

This story that started out as my 8th Grader delusion, was something I wanted to share to the world despite the fact I hadn't read any writing tips or watched any in youtube.

However, when I started to watch guides to writing and explanations to show, 'not tell' kind of videos on youtube a few days ago, my mind practically blanked out at how badly written this book is.

I realized it now, and are currently writing a remake on the story.

I want everyone to immerse themselve in the dream that I once had in my days back, so I'll be making a complete change in how the story is approached.

I'm really sorry if any readers want to continue reading, but I'll post the first two chapters of the remake as teaser.

Really. I'm very sorry.
--Lievel

This is my first book so it's a little crappy but I hope that it's ok. Any tips or tricks to make my book better are very welcome as well as any constructive criticism.❤️

I hope you enjoy and please leave a comment if I should continue writing this book. 

Thank youuuuu😛
-Raven

It's been over two years since Kaila and her younger brother had lost their parents and they've been working non-stop to attain the "normal" life that they both yearn for. 
But when a cruel fate entwines two people together, does love or hate rise up and decide their futures. 

Kaila Evens is a 17 year old girl who works tirelessly to support her sick brother, Matthew. Using skills attained from her parents, she provides food, love and care for Matthew. But one day a stranger encounters her alone in the woods, changing her life, for better or for worse, forever.

Alec Quill is a ruthless vampire lord that has never lived up to his family's expectations. His horrible aunt, Lady Serena Quill, pressures Alec into marrying regardless if or if he does not find his mate. Being shaped and carved by the people around him, Alec has forgotten himself. But when he encounters a young maiden alone in the woods, selfless and inspiring. It sparks a need to rediscover himself. Hope for a new beginning.

(The cover is definitely not mine, all the credits go towards the original author

im going to be completely honest i forgot i was writing a book so i will be starting up again also if there is any criticism or anything you could give me tips that would help this is my first book and i am sorry if it is horrible

a young boy is killed by bullys and is reincarnated into naruto after meeting an annoying god , he ends up in a relationship with a lazy bastard shikimaru .

I am very new to writing books, and I hope everybody can cut me some slack for any future mistakes. Also, for the chapter schedule, I will try to spend my week writing the chapters and post them on the weekend. (2+ chapter's per weekend)

For the contents of the book, I have decided that the starting point will be in the Harry Potter series. I will do in-depth research about a multitude of things, including psychology so I can try to make the characters more 3D and rounded ( This may take some time as I have much more to research on, including the Harry Potter series to refresh my memory). 

Although this sounds grand, my goal is not to make them as complicated as actual people as much as it is to make them more solid, so to speak, and help us enjoy the story and relate to them much better than if they were 2D characters. 

If you have any questions or find any plot holes or similar things, please comment HERE.

I will try my best to answer what I can without giving away too much about the future direction for this book.

And embarrassingly enough, I have no experience of being in a relationship, so if how the relationships progress may seem unlikely, please remember that I am basing the way the relationships form on my imagination, and other people's experiences ( My friends' experiences and people on the web.) 

If you have any tips on this area, please feel free to comment HERE.

Sincerely, Author.

Our MC was reincarnated in the Harry Potter world when he died when the parachute had a malfunction mid-air and he fell to his death. 

But with this turn of events, he reincarnated as a orphan in the world of Harry Potter and was adopted by a elderly pair of Wizards with a system and a OP starting package.

Need Points to Buy items from the system shop? Gain Affection Points!

Gained ????? Affection points for getting the complete Affection of Herimone! 

Gained ????? Affection points for getting the complete Affection of Ginny!

(Points increase with Affection or positive emotions. And for the people who worry that I will objectify the Harem members, don't worry. I will try my utmost to make sure they are not just things to gain, so to speak.)

Follow our MC to different Universes, Such as 

DC, Marvel, Greek Mythology, and more!

(Not necessarily in that order.)

I am very new to writing books, and I hope everybody can cut me some slack for any future mistakes. Also, for the chapter schedule, I will try to spend my week writing the chapters and post them on the weekend. (2+ chapter's per weekend)

     For the contents of the book, I have decided that the starting point will be in the Harry Potter series. I will do in-depth research about a multitude of things, including psychology so I can try to make the characters more 3D and rounded ( This may take some time as I have much more to research on, including the Harry Potter series to refresh my memory).
 
     Although this sounds grand, my goal is not to make them as complicated as actual people as much as it is to make them more solid, so to speak, and help us enjoy the story and relate to them much better than if they were 2D characters.
     
     If you have any questions or find any plot holes or similar things, please comment HERE.

     I will try my best to answer what I can without giving away too much about the future direction for this book.

      And embarrassingly enough, I have no experience of being in a relationship, so if how the relationships progress may seem unlikely, please remember that I am
basing the way the relationships form on my imagination, and other people's experiences ( My friends' experiences and people on the web.)

     Also, How many words should there be per chapter? If you have any tips on this area, please feel free to comment HERE.

     Sincerely, Author.

Our MC was reincarnated in the Harry Potter world when he died when
the parachute had a malfunction mid-air and he fell to his death.

 But with this turn of events, he reincarnated as a orphan in the world of
Harry Potter and was adopted by a elderly pair of Wizards with a system
and a OP starting package.

 Need Points to Buy items from the system shop? Gain Affection Points!

 Gained ????? Affection points for getting the complete Affection of
Herimone!

 Gained ????? Affection points for getting the complete Affection of
Ginny!

 (Points increase with Affection or positive emotions. And for the people
who worry that I will objectify the Harem members, don't worry. I will try
my utmost to make sure they are not just things to gain, so to speak.)

 Follow our MC to different Universes, Such as
DC, Marvel, Greek Mythology, Star Wars, and more!
(Not necessarily in that order.)

Note: I lost my phone and couldn't log into the account where the original ICTWAS was being previously written so I rewrote it in my old account. Also, please consider saving this novel to your library!

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