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This is a collection of reviews about the books I've read so far :)

From what I've been seeing, there are multiple books on this site with manipulated reviews. Bad reviews have been deleted and thus the books themselves appear better. Although I can understand that a review made based on ~10 chapters of a book with over 1,000 chapters may not be accurate, it is still an opinion. 

People keep on saying that authors are deleting reviews, but as far as I can tell, I do not have that ability (it might also just be because I'm not partnered). Maybe those reviews are being reported as inaccurate by fans (yeah probably not). 

The only thing that deleting reviews does is angering the reviewers. On a site like Webnovel, where everyone can review a book an almost infinite number of times, it's just a matter of time before such a book is flooded with bad reviews. 

Advice for Webnovel, don't reward reviews with xp and limit the amount of reviews per book. A review is something that should be taken seriously and I find it highly unlikely that anyone would be willing to read a new book every single day (at least for an extended period of time).

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That was a long ride.
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Where Yohan and Maya will meet again. Like a reincarnation story type setting where Maya is reborn and meets King Yohan.
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**Currently I'm writing Surrender to me so till then, this book is on hold**

Maeve is a normal human like any other. She's been living a normal life on earth ever since she was born and never in her wildest dreams did she think she'd wake up one day and will find herself in a foreign place.
Not only did she wake up and find that she wasn't on her bed, she also noticed three men staring at her like she was some sort of unique fossil but wait! There's something different about these men...
They have animal ears and tails?!?!?

I'm so sorry that this book is being crappy but it'll be on hold soon and it will be republished, chapters will be better.
I'm so sorry.
Hihi! How are you all?
Hope you are having an amazing day/
Let's get down to business ( I am so sorry, this authors note is going to be 
Authors note since authors thoughts is a tad bit too small for all I have to
Thank you for reading this chapter and the next one will be more amazing (I 
please remember that this is an entire work of fiction and it's out of imaginatio
*It's also a contracted book on web
*rights belong to me and webnovel so steal it if you 
*No plagiarism of this
*This book is a rollercoaster! You're all in for a wild 
*No unofficial translations of this
*Do not copy this book, there will be legal consequ
* this book is not a translation, I know you all see original on this book but the reviews/comments (I kinda deleted them, sorry I didn't want to see them) about this book being a bad translation really hurts. (I might be a heartless writer but I do have a heart,m
*If this book is not being read on webnovel it has obviously been st
*No hate, spread only
*place name and characters are solely out of my imagination and not intended to hurt an
*There will be no warning ahead of a chapter with mature scenes. read at your own 
*Again, plagiarism, copying and distribution of work will not be tolerated and there will be legal conseque
*Please if you see that this book is being reproduced inform me on discord @qweenamanda
It's a hassle filling dcma forms to report stupid ass sites that steal my boo
*Please don't read this book or unlock chapters on other apps (don't give them the ability to use my hard work for their own selfish gain and get money they didn't work hard 
*if you have any ideas on how this story should go please tell me! I would love to make this plot more interes
*Should I create a group chat for th
*If you want to make art for this book, please in
*The only sites apart from webnovel that this book is on are good novel and wattpad, but the locked chapters are not on it, so you have to come here and unloc
*Suggestions on how I can improve? Please tell me (nicely, I have feel
*Please leave power stones, gifts, reviews and comm
*I love you all! And should I change the boo
Please don't stop reading this book! And maybe check out my other book? It's a very good book and the writer keep a lot of effort in it *shrug* I promise you won't be disappoi
Omg sorry for the shameless plug, hah
I know most of you have skipped this authors note and are already on the next chapter but for those who read this, thank
~Dislcaimer~ image used in cover does not belong t
Don't be silent readers pl
See you all in the next cha
***********
Hi hi! How are you
Hope you are having an amazing day/
Let's get down to business ( I am so sorry, this authors note is going to be 
Authors note since authors thoughts is a tad bit too small for all I have to
Thank you for reading this chapter and the next one will be more amazing (I 
please remember that this is an entire work of fiction and it's out of imaginatio
*It's also a contracted book on web
*rights belong to me and webnovel so steal it if you 
*No plagiarism of this
*This book is a rollercoaster! You're all in for a wild 
*No unofficial translations of this
*Do not copy this book, there will be legal consequ
* this book is not a translation, I know you all see original on this book but the reviews/comments (I kinda deleted them, sorry I didn't want to see them) about this book being a bad translation really hurts. (I might be a heartless writer but I do have a heart,m
*If this book is not being read on webnovel it has obviously been st
*No hate, spread only
*place name and characters are solely out of my imagination and not intended to hurt an
*There will be no warning ahead of a chapter with mature scenes. read at your own 
*Again, plagiarism, copying and distribution of work will not be tolerated and there will be legal conseque
*Please if you see that this book is being reproduced inform me on discord @qweenamanda
It's a hassle filling dcma forms to report stupid ass sites that steal my boo
*Please don't read this book or unlock chapters on other apps (don't give them the ability to use my hard work for their own selfish gain and get money they didn't work hard 
*if you have any ideas on how this story should go please tell me! I would love to make this plot more interes
*Should I create a group chat for th
*If you want to make art for this book, please in
*The only sites apart from webnovel that this book is on are good novel and wattpad, but the locked chapters are not on it, so you have to come here and unloc
*Suggestions on how I can improve? Please tell me (nicely, I have feel
*Please leave power stones, gifts, reviews and comm
*I love you all! And should I change the boo
Please don't stop reading this book! And maybe check out my other book? It's a very good book and the writer keep a lot of effort in it *shrug* I promise you won't be disappoi
Omg sorry for the shameless plug, hah
I know most of you have skipped this authors note and are already on the next chapter but for those who read this, thank
~Dislcaimer~ image used in cover does not belong t
Don't be silent readers pl
See you all in the next cha
***********
Hi hi! How are yo
Hope you are having an amazing day/
Let's get down to business ( I am so sorry, this authors note is going to be 
Authors note since authors thoughts is a tad bit too small for all I have to
Thank you for reading this chapter and the next one will be more amazing (I 
please remember that this is an entire work of fiction and it's out of imaginatio
*It's also a contracted book on web
*rights belong to me and webnovel so steal it if you 
*No plagiarism of this
*This book is a rollercoaster! You're all in for a wild 
*No unofficial translations of this
*Do not copy this book, there will be legal consequ
* this book is not a translation, I know you all see original on this book but the reviews/comments (I kinda deleted them, sorry I didn't want to see them) about this book being a bad translation really hurts. (I might be a heartless writer but I do have a heart,m
*If this book is not being read on webnovel it has obviously been st
*No hate, spread only
*place name and characters are solely out of my imagination and not intended to hurt an
*There will be no warning ahead of a chapter with mature scenes. read at your own 
*Again, plagiarism, copying and distribution of work will not be tolerated and there will be legal conseque
*Please if you see that this book is being reproduced inform me on discord @qweenamanda
It's a hassle filling dcma forms to report stupid ass sites that steal my boo
*Please don't read this book or unlock chapters on other apps (don't give them the ability to use my hard work for their own selfish gain and get money they didn't work hard 
*if you have any ideas on how this story should go please tell me! I would love to make this plot more interes
*Should I create a group chat for th
*If you want to make art for this book, please in
*The only sites apart from webnovel that this book is on are good novel and wattpad, but the locked chapters are not on it, so you have to come here and unloc
*Suggestions on how I can improve? Please tell me (nicely, I have feel
*Please leave power stones, gifts, reviews and comm
*I love you all! And should I change the boo
Please don't stop reading this book! And maybe check out my other book? It's a very good book and the writer keep a lot of effort in it *shrug* I promise you won't be disappoi
Omg sorry for the shameless plug, hah
I know most of you have skipped this authors note and are already on the next chapter but for those who read this, thank
~Dislcaimer~ image used in cover does not belong t
Don't be silent readers pl
See you all in the next cha
***********
Hi hi! How are you
Hope you are having an amazing day/
Let's get down to business ( I am so sorry, this authors note is going to be 
Authors note since authors thoughts is a tad bit too small for all I have to
Thank you for reading this chapter and the next one will be more amazing (I 
please remember that this is an entire work of fiction and it's out of imaginatio
*It's also a contracted book on web
*rights belong to me and webnovel so steal it if you 
*No plagiarism of this
*This book is a rollercoaster! You're all in for a wild 
*No unofficial translations of this
*Do not copy this book, there will be legal consequ
* this book is not a translation, I know you all see original on this book but the reviews/comments (I kinda deleted them, sorry I didn't want to see them) about this book being a bad translation really hurts. (I might be a heartless writer but I do have a heart,m
*If this book is not being read on webnovel it has obviously been st
*No hate, spread only
*place name and characters are solely out of my imagination and not intended to hurt an
*There will be no warning ahead of a chapter with mature scenes. read at your own 
*Again, plagiarism, copying and distribution of work will not be tolerated and there will be legal conseque
*Please if you see that this book is being reproduced inform me on discord @qweenamanda
It's a hassle filling dcma forms to report stupid ass sites that steal my boo
*Please don't read this book or unlock chapters on other apps (don't give them the ability to use my hard work for their own selfish gain and get money they didn't work hard 
*if you have any ideas on how this story should go please tell me! I would love to make this plot more interes
*Should I create a group chat for th
*If you want to make art for this book, please in
*The only sites apart from webnovel that this book is on are good novel and wattpad, but the locked chapters are not on it, so you have to come here and unloc
*Suggestions on how I can improve? Please tell me (nicely, I have feel
*Please leave power stones, gifts, reviews and comm
*I love you all! And should I change the boo
Please don't stop reading this book! And maybe check out my other book? It's a very good book and the writer keep a lot of effort in it *shrug* I promise you won't be disappoi
Omg sorry for the shameless plug, hah
I know most of you have skipped this authors note and are already on the next chapter but for those who read this, thank
~Dislcaimer~ image used in cover does not belong t
Don't be silent readers pl
See you all in the next cha
***********


"To pay off a gambling debt, my father'sold' me to Alpha Hades."



Vincent growls, "I'm going to count to three," and then stops. The rest of it is up to him. Without my presence, he will find me... and I will regret it.

I'm familiar with the game, and the only way it can end is with shattered bones. Mis wolves will take over and make me pay if I don't show up. Even if I do as he commands, his wolf will still seize control and I will be the one to pay the price.

'One!' He snarls, his tone stern.

I dig my nails into my palm till they bleed as a tear slowly slides down my cheek. Even as I write this, my bottom lip trembles with the weight of more tears. I want Logan to understand how much he's causing me pain.

Vincent counts to two as he gestures for me to come over to where he is. I can feel his excitement building. He craves the number 'three,' and he's hoping for it.

Hi readers,
I've noticed and read many comments about why MC saved this girl as many think it because she's a girl...Well, my answer is NO!!

I know how you feel when MC saves a girl because I too feel cliched and bored reading the same stuff all over again...But believe me, this is nothing to do with Gender and if you read the later chapters, you notice that even though she's a girl, he would not give her any special treatment.

The reason for MC to save this girl was Abras(the one who traded a piece of soul with Michael) had little to no knowledge about the world outside of the sanctuary he grew up.

As you know, an assassin/hitman like Michael would want to know everything about his surroundings before making any moves. But he can't ask anyone to teach him about this world, as it would raise suspicions and might even kill him because of his low-level cultivation. Only because of this, he chose a crippled cultivator like Gaya as she obviously can't hurt him, and if she tried, he could simply kill her.

Since I hate harem, the MC will not go around the world and save beauties and get into trouble because of them. There's only one love interest and romance will not come anytime sooner.

Besides, if you have noticed, Gaya is a powerful cultivator, so wouldn't be cool to have an op servant until he gets stronger?
The system clearly states how loyal she is. Also, she's not a typical female companion who blushes at everything, calls the MC big brother, and brings him nothing but trouble. She would prove her value and do super awesome things in the future.
My kind request to all my readers(especially newcomers) is please read at least until chapter 40 before giving a low star rating because MC saved a girl. I put a lot of work in this book and it sucks to read a bad review stating that you don't like MC saved a girl.
Don't get me wrong, I love criticisms, that's how I improve my book.I can take any reviews no matter how bad it is if the review stats a valid reason but some leave a bad review when they only read until chapter 5 or six. There were no valid points in their reviews but complaints about MC saves the girl.
I rarely delete reviews even if it's a low star one when it states valid points, but now; I deleted a couple of reviews, not because they gave me few stars but they had no valid points and they only read a couple of chapters.
So Please at least read up to 30 chapters before leaving a review, fewer stars in the review means my book will not show on the WN recommendation list and people might even ignore the book looking at the reviews.
I take this moment to thank all my readers who have been reading my book and sticking around. You guys and gals are wonderful and expect regular updates from next week according to the update schedule..

Have you ever thought about having a cool system at your disposal? What would you do if you suddenly received a system that can help you achieve anything? Would you go save the innocents and damsels in distress or use it for your own advantage? This is the story of a normal human (well, not very normal) who crossed over to another world with such a system under his command. But the question is, who’s controlling who? Is the system under his command or the other way around? What was the origin of this system? Why did it choose him? What’s waiting for him in the future? A hero is only as good as his villain? So who is the villain for our hero? Lots of questions right? Jump right into the book and see the answers for yourselves.

Current update Schedule: Tuesday, Wednesday, Friday, Saturday
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Dear  readers plz write some reviews for my book. I am giving my all to this book and puts lots of effort in writing this novel, so plz give some respect to my hard work and write some  reviews for me by taking some your precious time. 

As you can see in the front page it shows no rating,  i felt bad and discouraged whenever i saw it. So plzz write some reviews . I don't want to give u me 5 star there in everything just give rating which you think i deserve and write something which you think about this novel. I will be grateful to you all for your support. Thank you and plz write some reviews.

" I hide my emotions and fear all these years but is it really useful .These emotions makes me sink down deep inside the ocean in my dreams i don't know how many times.Its not that i wanted to live a life of a masked girl but i have no choice.....now when i looks back i don't know what to do how should i feel.I don't want to live like that and wants to break down those chains who is trying to tie me down. But can i do that??? If i can't break those chains then i will kill those chained who me down, even if i had to go hell i will bring all those people to meet their demise sooner or later."


Mo Chou:

"Dare to touch me i will cut your hands "

Fei Hong:

"I don't dare but let me touch your heart"

This is a story of Mo chou who lived her life as a person who she didn't. She indured physical harrasment at young age but unlike others she didn't shed tears and ask for justice because she didn't want to hurt her parents and make them feel sad. She endures this pain silently without any complain .But is it really easy .Her believes and heart was shattered by her boyfriend once again and what was worst that she even misunderstood by her parents and everyone.When she is alone none of them comes to her which makes her realise that this world is cruel but even though she didn't complain but one day everything she did became nothing when she realised all these pain which she endured till now is given to her by her parents because she has never been a daughter for them there is only one daughter i.e.,her elder sister.But why ??? Is there any secret??

She decided to punish all of them even her parents for her pain and sufferings.No one will be spared.

Fei Hong a young and ruthless CEO OF FEI GROUP fells in love with her.And decided to make her his woman. But whenever he tries to go near him she glared at him with her icy look which makes him even more passionate about her.

Can Fei Hong will win her heart or her heart which becomes a ice block will never melt for anyone??
 
Come and join this adventurous journey of Mo Chou and Fei Hong where they torture the villains and face up and down in their relationship. And eventually find themselves empty without each other.

Hello to all my readers! If you have made it this far, thank you so much. I appreciate every single one of you that have taken the time to read my book. It means a lot to me, and I just want y'all to know you are appreciated! I just want to give everyone a heads up. I have officially wrote the first eight chapters of Totally In Love! I am so excited to have everyone to go along this journey with me!  My goal is to write at least 2 (possibly more) chapters every 2 weeks. I am a super busy person, but I want everyone to get the chance to read Beth's story. I am also really excited about everyone reading my book, so I may be off schedule sometimes! My plan is to upload 2 chapters either on Friday or Saturday. Since, I have uploaded already 8 chapters, I will be uploading the first two this Saturday, right after the holiday season! 
Who knows, I may end up writing tomorrow and uploading! Don't quote me on that though. I do appreciate everyone's take, and I really look forward to everyone commenting how they feel about the book. Reviews/comments really help an author to perfect their own writing. I would love for everyone to leave me a comment about the book! It would mean a lot, and help me as a writer, with constructive responses. I do hope to write more books in the future. I have a couple of ideas in mind, but at the end of the day it is up to the readers! So comments/reviews telling me how you feel about the book would really help! I would love to hear you, as a reader, your thoughts and takes on Beth and Sebastian so far. I would love to reply too! Adding the book to your bookshelf, would help the book to grow on its own! 
I really do look forward to writing more stories, but it is up to you as the reader to let me know how you feel. Whether this story was interesting or not. It will help me in the future. I also have another book finished, if you want to check it out. It is called The Moon Shines On Starlight. I strongly caution for younger audiences to have a parental guidance, due to it having animal cruelty. Any more information can be found within the synopsis of the book itself. Again, I look forward to everyone comments and reviews. If you have any questions at all, please feel free to comment/ review, or go to the forum as well. I am not sure if Webnovel has a inbox on here. There is also social media sites that you can look up for more updates. They can be found within the bio of my profile. 

Sincerely,
L. Roberson

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