Summary and Analysis of Literary Masterpieces.

The holy meme Bible created by the Almighty Shrek himself.
Basically, I'm translating the bible to meme language.
Enjoy!

The Exorcists are members of the Church that are tasked with killing Devils, Fallen Angels, Vampires and Demonic Creatures that can potentially harm Humans.

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SUMMARY: Exorcists mainly consist of priests and nuns from the Church. All Exorcists have been extensively trained in the Church from a young age, resulting in them possessing abilities that greatly surpass that of normal humans. Occasionally, there may be an Exorcist that strays from the teachings of God and are exiled from the Church, becoming a Stray Exorcist. Stray Exorcists usually go to the Fallen Angel's side, though the Stray Exorcist may approach other groups as well.

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EQUIPMENT: Exorcists are equipped with many tools to help them battle supernatural beings. Among the tools that Exorcists have are Light Swords, crosses, the Bible and Holy Water, as well as guns loaded with light bullets, which are harmful to devils. Exorcists with greater skills can be given more powerful weapons such as the Holy Swords, however, these rare people would need to have a natural aptitude for them or have the Light Container implanted into them.

The Higher-ups Exorcists have holy power and can use magic and recite a chant to create a barrier of holy energy the strength of the barrier can be further enhanced by Blessing to trap their opponent.

There are also Exorcists that are born with Sacred Gears and use it as their main weapon over the usual equipment.

A world where all myth clash. Three great factions vying for supremacy. A multitude of power eyeing them from the shadow.

In this world, à child was born. One so rare that his kind was basically unseen. Bestowed with a name synonymous with death, known as the uncrowned king of the church, what kind of storm will this child bring?

Follow our hero as he visits the world and brings change to the society.

Disclaimer: The DxD franchise does not belong to me. I am just a fan trying to bring an alternative story to a novel I like. The cover picture doesn't belong to me either. 

Note: This story will be mainly in the Slashdog part which is part of the DxD universe but set 4 four years prior to the event of DxD. Also, DxD is a light novel with 25 volumes + side volumes and a sequel with already 3 volumes called Shin Highschool DxD. Only the first ten volumes and some side stories have been adapted in Anime. As such many terms and characters, I use may be unknown. But don't worry I will do my best so that everyone can follow.

NOTE 2: I AM currently writing another fanfic called THE TRIALS: PATH TOWARD GODHOOD. Try it. The mc is different in personality but I hope you'll like it nonetheless.

PART 5:
Have you ever noticed that when relationships are right, great things can happen? I've 
even heard it said more than once that who you know is more important than what 
you know. The all-important relationship; it can either make you or break you, because it 
is often true that if you have the right connections, certain people can facilitate your way 
on the upward path of success. People can open doors of opportunity or remove obstacles 
blocking your way.
Our relationship with God works in much the same way. The Bible tells us that life in this 
world and the world to come is all about having a growing relationship with almighty 
God. We are not talking here about a relationship of convenience or superficiality; God 
wants an intimate relationship with us! Jesus Christ came into the world to give us that 
relationship with God, and our decision to accept salvation through Christ has major 
implications for not only eternity, but for the time we have remaining in this world.
Being a Converterlator is all about having a right relationship with Jesus Christ and 
having his Word and life personally operating in your life (see appendix B on page 139). 
This is a tremendously exciting place to be! When we have a growing relationship with 
God, we experience his favor and blessing. And if we have the favor and blessing of God, 
what else could we ever need? To have his presence and the truth of his Word operating 
in our lives through Christ living his life in us truely makes us a different people.
Moses modeled this principle for us. The living presence of God in his life was 
paramount. In fact he did not want to proceed with the tasks God had for him without 
having God's very presence in his life. 
"And he said to him, 'If your presence 
will not go with me, do not bring us up 
from here'" (Exodus 33:15, ESV).
This kind of dependence on God is not 
possible without knowing God and 
understanding how he thinks. This 
means we must not only begin a 
relationship with him, but go on to 
develop an intimate relationship with him in order to truly experience his presence in our 
lives. Moses realized that if he ever hoped to find favor in God's sight, he needed to 
know God in a deeper way when he said, "Now therefore, if I have found favor in your 
sight, please show me now your ways, that I may know you in order to find favor in your 
sight
                          GOD AT WORK
Each one of us wants to experience God in a powerful way. The prophet Isaiah wrote, 
"That they may see and know, may consider and understand together, that the hand of the 
Lord has done this, the Holy One of Israel has created it" (Isaiah 41:20, ESV). As we live 
each day in relationship with God, we see and understand the "God things" that occur in 
our lives.This is not to say that life will be easy. There will be hard times, but God will be there 
with us. In my first book, KingdomNomics, I recounted how I experienced the Lord 
lifting a spirit of oppression from me. I have also experienced his presence as I lived 
through some very difficult situations. He does work in our circumstances.
The Bible gives us a wonderful summary about how important our relationship with God 
is for our time in this world, and how to achieve it: "Now acquaint yourself with Him, 
and be at peace; thereby good will come to you. Receive, please, instruction from His 
mouth, and lay up His words in your heart" (Job 22:21–22, NKJV, emphasis added). The 
International Standard Version of the Bible actually words verse 21 this way, "Get to 
know God, and you'll be at peace with him, and then prosperity will come to you."
Acquainting ourselves with God, or "getting to know him," is the key. The avenues for 
bringing this about are receiving instruction from his mouth and storing up his Word in 
our hearts. By discovering the benefits of a living and vital relationship with God through 
Christ, our value system develops, and we discover the road map for our life. We 
discover that our relationship with God is more valuable than anything else. Our 
relationship with God is so important that gold and silver from a value standpoint 
compared are like the dust of the ground, "Then you will lay your gold in the dust, and 
the gold of Ophir among the stones of the brook" (Job 22:24, NKJV). Gold and silver 
represent the world system's epitome for the ultimate "store of value." In comparison to a 
living and vital relationship with almighty God they are the equivalent of dust. We must 
be in God's Word on a regular basis to learn more about him!
Gold and silver are false saviors. Worldly wealth of 
any kind is a false savior. Only a relationship with 
God through Christ can deliver. The wise person of 
today will acquaint himself with God, and become a 
Converterlator, living to convert the perishable into 
the imperishable, holding on to values that will echo 
into eternity. In this case, it really is who you know that counts.

"Hmmm... my stats are ridiculously high I should nerf myself... AHA! I can get a new verse if exchange it for 1000 stat points!! "

[Redeemed Random Verse Ticket]
[-500 Str., -500 Agi.]
[Random Verse Ticket Used]
[Verse Acquired: Matthew 4:6
"If you are the Son of God,"he said, "throw yourself down. For it is written: "'He will command his angels concerning you, and they will lift you up in their hands, so that you will not strike your foot against a stone."][Acquired: Levitation]

"Phew...thank gods I cancelled the luck stat"

{TELEPORT}
*He lands on Medusahid's head*

[Godson stop insulting me]
[Hee]

*Medusahid produces a terrible grin as he devasted human lives*

(Midgard is gonna be crowded as heck)

[Spare that guy he's got a family ...I think]

[I am not your servant Godson] 

[Aight whatever] (stupid god rules)

"GET TO THE INSTRUMENTS!!!" 
*group scrambles for instruments while MC is running the wrong way*

"Arghhhh!!! Gahhhh!!! Ackkk!!!"

-Skip to MC getting fuqing impaled by the giant sword

[Not the face boys we have dinner tonight]

And Sung Jin Woo exploded. A powerful wave of magic flung every physical thing across the room which included the Godson.

Hahahaha!!! That. was. stimulating. Now now calm down you magic energy.

[Bible Passive Activated ] [Energy absorbed] [Magic Reserve :1,000,000]

-Couple days later...In a desert 

"Ahhhhhhhh!!!" yelled Sung Jin Woo as Centipedes chased him restlessly. 

(look at this dude) thought the Godson as he smash, crack, and fuqing slay his way through the desert with "already dead" blaring cutely in his ears.

*Sung Jin Woo is teleported back to Seoul*

"Look at him acting all brave and shit when he's running around the whole time" said the Godson as he punched a hole through 20 of the Centipedes. 

*A Master Centipede had appeared*
*slaughtered*
*A General Centipedes had appeared *
*chopped like sashimi*
*A Commander Centipede had appeared*
*the smell of gunpowder permeates the dry air*
*A Royacenti had appeared*
*Royacenti have lost at a game scissors-stone-paper*


*Centipede King "Centoralthus" had appeared*

"Who are you?!?!?!?!?"

(should I say your worst nightmare or the death of you...)

"Ummm... I'm a Jehovah witness... I'm trying to spread love. Really. In fact I'll revive everyone once I finish! 

"Die.." 

*ZOOOOMMMMMm..... WHOOOOSHHHH!!!!

His sword met empty air, this was expected, he spits his acid to his side which met its target.

*Discombobulate starts playing*

This mustn't register on an emotional 
First, distract target  * flicks a handkerchief in front of his opponent's face * Then block his blind jab, counter with cross to left cheek. Discombobulate.  * claps his hands over his opponent's ears *  Dazed, will attempt wild haymaker. Employ elbow block, and body shot. *blocks with his elbow and delivers a body blow* Block feral left, weaken right jaw, now fracture. *a cross to the jaw fractures the bone* Break cracked ribs, traumatize solar plexus, dislocate jaw entirely. *two more body blows, and a right hook to the jaw hinge* Heel kick to diaphragm *a heel kick to the opponent's chest sends him crashing into a dune* In summary: ears ringing, jaw fractured, three ribs cracked, four broken, diaphragm hemorrhaging. Physical recovery: six weeks. Full psychological recovery: six months. Capacity to spit at back of head: neutralized.

Adventures of the Creation god that got bored being too OP, prompting him to create an avatar called Godson and storing his consciousness inside it. 






Sorry other fanfiction authors.



Book is only written to please me

Me and Sister Griselda are in a very long hallway of the Vatican church which full of religious craftsmanship and paintings depicting the events that happen in the Bible. we are to train also Sister is my instructor and I think this is the part where the light novels have never shown but it gave her a short history summary. Since her childhood, she has endeavored in her training and studies for God and her religion. She was also raised and trained as the wielder of Durandal under Griselda Quarta as her swordmaster and legal guardian. Eventually, she becomes an exorcist, an agent of the Catholic Church, and partnered with Irina Shidou.
After Xenovia's life was put in danger three years prior to the series, because of her formerly long hair in a mission with Irina to exterminate a stray vampire from the House of Manthar, she chose to cut her long hair to prevent that kind of thing from happening again. She also dyed a part of her hair green for fashion but for a strange reason, I already had a green fringe on the right side of my hair from birth which according to Musoka it was possible that I am in another timeline where some small difference change, for example, my green fringe or Me having a sacred gear while Canon Xenovia does not have any at all but considering my presence in my me body technically I am merged with her soul tusk creating a new being but since she does not have any personally when being born my personalty is not changed at all.
Right now I am running for my life as I am being chased by a demon with a scary sword(Sister Griselda) that continuous slashing me to no end while I dangerously almost pee in my pants when this is happening and worse of all I just have a wooden sword to my disposal as it cannot block Sister sword even if I harden it with magic as her sword is literally a magical one crafted from magical beast also she is releasing a scary aura around here that I see a literal monster behind her back "Splash" I dodge the incoming attack from her but the result is making me scarier the ground now has a giant hole and I know sister is not taking this seriously this is just her casual swordsmanship when fighting I am scared to the core imagining when she takes a fight seriously. Sister is truly deserved to be one of the most powerful women exorcists I can't help but respect the idiots who tried to mess with her.....Ah! I am thinking too much again I look around to find where she is but I cannot find her until I look at my back there she is with a scary smile with her releasing a more sinister aura around her that I can't move body and sweat is drifting like a waterfall all over my body I prepare myself for the attack that will cause my death and nothing happen everything returns to normal snd sister I knew is back with a caring smile that I know well after that my body feels like refresh and I collapse on the spot.

A story of reincarnation in Highschool DxD where a random teenager got a second chance in life but first s(he) must deal with nonsense of the world s(he) finds h(im)erself  while also trying to not get caught up with the problems of having a existential crisis, marrying a certain guy that is perverted, and many many more!(AU)

Chapter Sixteen: More Repercussions.
It was now May, and yes the baby was due in September. Pamela Parsons kept us appraised of any new developments back at the BBC. She was truly a remarkable woman. She had enough work to do at the BBC, but she found the time to keep tabs on everything. Messages would come through via email, text, and Skype. Pamela had also worked out a system for the meetings. More and more people were being added. She decided that there should be a core group, which were the original members. Newcomers with certain backgrounds and expertise would be invited as and when necessary, assuming they could make the meetings. She thought as I did, that the last meeting with the religious gentlemen and lady was starting to get unwieldy. It was a very important meeting though.
More and more repercussions were resulting from each revelation and discovery. The BBC documentary was progressing very well. She kept us all updated on this. This would soon be broadcast. There was one central major dilemma. It would have to feature the Bull Public House. Plus the Hollywood movie was moving at a pace. Slippery Productions and Pamela Parsons tried to maintain some input into all of that. Pamela had got hold of the movie scripts and had sent a synopsis around to all the interested parties. I could see why she was worried. There was little we could do about this now. Yes, the character of Slippery was exaggerated. There was a 'sex angle' but this was played down because they still wanted a 'family-friendly' movie to maximize returns.
The 'upshot' was that there would soon be a tsunami of visitors to the Bull Public House. It was a 'public house', so this was to be expected. Pamela had had long conversations with Sid and Beryl about what to expect. There would be an increase in trade after the BBC documentary, this would largely be British, mostly domestic, although this did find its way on to YouTube. However, after the movie, this would be worldwide. Plus of course the press of all kinds. This in theory could be managed. Their redoubtable daughters were there to help and extra staff could be found. After the initial upsurges, there would be a decline, but people could well be coming in greater numbers from now on. With the Cellar Bar Restaurant now fully functioning this could be handled.
However, there another major variable, Old Slippery. How would he react? There could well be attempts to 'wind him up' and get a reaction potentially from any of the new influx. How was he going to be managed?
It was a slightly warmer Friday afternoon in May, we had yet another Slippery Productions meeting at the Bull Public House. The core group was all there. They were joined by Vihaan Bhat, the Hindu Priest, Father O'Halligan, the Reverend Frampton, the young 'Wicca' lady, Bethany, plus Mohammed Abdullah, the Sufi Iman, and Ashai, the Buddhist priest. The Jewish Kabbalah specialist, Rabbi Abraham was also present.
Pamela Parsons took it on herself to try and chair the meeting.
There was a brief update on the BBC documentary, which was due to be broadcast in June. By all accounts, a movie would be ready in the autumn.
This meeting took a very theological tone, which was no surprise given the representatives present. Old Slippery was not present yet. The Lounge Bar was busy as was the downstairs restaurant. Everywhere was filled up. This was only partly due to the notoriety of the 'House Ghost'. The quality of the food, drink, and overall service had guaranteed a large group of loyal customers. Friday afternoon and evening were especially busy as office workers wanted a chance to relax and chat after a long and hard week working.
This meant there were only scant interactions between the two young detectives and their barmaid beloveds. However, they did their best catching up with the occasional
'brief encounter'.
Lina, cleaning 'Old Slippery's' chair was the cue for him to reappear. The Old Highway Man was as usual totally overdressed. He seemed to like a sense of occasion. Professor Hudson confirmed this. All the surviving documents refer to the highwayman loving to 'play to the gallery'. Sandra and Kevin started recording all of this. They had already formed a solid friendship with Bethany, which was understandable given their shared similar interests.
"Yes, repercussions?". Professor Hudson started talking. "Yes, I would like to thank all the representatives from different religious faith attending this meeting. I am getting pressure from scientists at Oxford that are also eager to attend. They want to take readings of our 'resident ghost'. They want to have some understanding of what 'energy' is being 'transmitted' here. I would like to thank Pamela for all her hard work in organizing these meetings. I know she is a very busy woman, but she always finds time to organize these Slippery Jake Productions meetings."
There were nods of approval all around with these comments from the professor.
"I suppose I have taken it on myself to chair, or at least 'steer' today's meeting, having an academic background."
"I have spoken to Pamela, and we both feel that each meeting should have a focus unless events overtake us as they have done before."
There were a few laughs with this.
"This way we can best invite specialists and people with real knowledge in their fields to attend and contribute."
"Today's topic will therefore be religious. I come from an Anglican, Church of England background. Like most of my fellow countrywomen and men, I am not a firm believer."
With this, the Reverend Frampton smiled.
The professor continued.
"That is not to say that I am not lacking in curiosity. You have to ask a very fundamental question, 'Why anything?'. You may have heard of the 'Grand Unified Theory' and the 'atom-smashing device under the Alps, the Large Hadron Collider. Notions such as quantum tunneling. However, this still begs the question, why anything, us, matter, time, and space? Would it make more sense that the Universe was infinite and filled with nothing? Void! However, this is not the case. Also, had did RNA and DNA really evolve on the planet Earth? Why were the chemicals present and the conditions just right for the creation of life?
Most of us were in rapt attention with all of this. The Detective Chief Inspector wasn't particularly. He was not a man given to abstractions unless they were to do with the case he had to solve. The good Chief Inspector had his nose in his laptop, along with sipping the Bull's fine real ale from time to time, pretending he was listening.
This had not escaped the attention of Old Slippery. It seems very little does. He was listening to this learned conversation but he was also directing a sardonic stare in the direction of the Detective Chief Inspector from time to time. A number of us had also noticed this.
Ashai, the Zen Buddhist priest then contributed.
"This is consistent with some Buddhist teachings where we have the notion of dependent origination."
This then opened up the conversation to different religious bodies reflecting on whether there was one God, or if there was just a state of existence, the Great Why? The Great Mystery of everything. This was a real puzzle and conundrum. This was totally inexplicable!
With this, the Detective Chief Inspector was really 'zoning out'. He was going home by taxi, so he started on his third pint.
Pamela Parson, with her usual brilliant skill, then imposed some kind of focus on the proceedings.
"Well, ladies and gentlemen let us all focus in particular on the Right Hon Jake Horatio Higginbottom, sitting over yonder. Those of us that have frequently attended these meetings have become more than aware that our resident 'ghost' has a very acute awareness. Sorry to mention this Detective Chief Inspector. But you are not particularly a specialist in theology?"
"No madam, to be a bit controversial, my 'spiritual needs' are more likely to be met from a bottle."
Some laughed at this others didn't.
Pamela continued:
"This ghost has developed a very good awareness of the here and now. He had died a long while ago, but he seems to have quickly come to terms with the 21st Century."
Turning to the Chief Detective Inspector
"To bring you back into the meeting, give our newcomers a summary of what happened when the 'Russian Mafia' appeared along with the expulsion of that 'low life reporter'.
The Detective Chief Inspector felt he was back in school again. He had been found out.
However, he did give a good summary of these events.
Mohammed Abdullah, the Sufi Iman along with Rabbi Abraham started reflecting on this.
Rabbi Abraham started:
"We can not escape the fact that this 'ghost' is here with us now. All the faiths of Abraham: Judaism, Christianity, and Islam, share the notion of a singular God. I think there is a phrase that sums all this up quite neatly in the Bible, "passes all understanding." This also dovetails neatly into the endeavours of your scientific colleague's professor and their theories and experiments."
With this, Professor Hudson duly nodded.
"This ghost despite a heinous past seems to be very protective of this Public House and its inhabitants, from what the Detective Chief Inspector has told us. From what we see now and all the material kindly recorded by young Sandra and Kevin. Do we now have irrefutable evidence of an actual afterlife?"
Everybody had a very profound look on their faces. The Detective Chief Inspector, however, ordered another pint. With this, from his chair, Old Slippery again duly smirked. It was this 'down to earth' quality that Old Slippery still seemed to possess. He may have been fully aware of the learned conversations that were taking part amongst the different religious parties. However, it seemed that the House Ghost was more interested in the Detective Chief Inspector ordering another pint.
This was further reinforced when Magda started to clear away a table of plates, glasses, etc. This caused her to bend over. Of course, Old Slippery leaned over with a lascivious smirk all over his face, to watch these proceedings. He still had a monumental libido. They did not have short skirts in his day.
The religious gentlemen were taken about. Was this ghost really an emissary of God? Maybe they were looking for a purely 'spiritual' dimension. Old Slippery also had a very earthy dimension it seemed.
They pondered on the Ten Commandments. It was found obviously in the Bible and Tanakh and is referred to in the Qur'an. It was obvious that Old Slippery had fallen foul, seriously several times.
Thou shalt not kill.
Thou shalt not commit adultery.
Thou shalt not steal.
Thou shall not covert.
Being the obvious examples. So Slippery Jake was to become an emissary of God however God was understood? This was despite the highwayman's heinous past?

A Strange Ghostly Tale Of Slippery Jake The Regency Rake. 
Outline

This story is based in a London Pub from a few years ago. Slippery Jake returns to haunt the Bull Public House.
He is not your usual ghost by any means. He can be very ruthless but he is also very protective towards the pub.
His is a journey of redemption for the heinous he has committed.

Qin Mu walked over, looking dashingly handsome. As what people said, clothes make the man. These clothes were extremely fitting on his body and much fabulous than the beast skin clothes.
Incense Master Qu smiled, "Young master has a superb handicraft, even I want the young master to stay and be a tailor."
Qin Mu smiled, "This is granny's handicraft. I'm just showing what I have learned."
Incense Master Qu smiled, "Young master, even though this fabric is impenetrable to blades and spears, it can't block needle-like spirit weapons, so young master needs to take note."
Qin Mu nodded his head and thanked him for his good intentions.
Incense Master Qu clapped his hands and called a young guy over. He softly instructed him and the young guy took a coin pouch over to pass it to Qin Mu. Incense Master Qu smiled, "Young master, even though there's not much money in this coin pouch, this is subordinate's goodwill."
Qin Mu grabbed a bunch of coins which was about a hundred from the coin pouch and smiled, "I've taken the treasure of your store and I'm already satisfied. You should take the rest back."
Incense Master Qu understood and said, "Gifting the rouge and powder to the beautiful woman and presenting the treasure sword to the hero. This Dragon Teeth Scissor has always been worshiped at my place and rarely used. Since young master has a superb handicraft, why don't you keep it?"
Qin Mu immediately declined and Incense Master Qu could only drop the matter.
Feng Xiuyun sent Qin Mu to the inn and said as she took her leave, "Young master, when the waterway is unlocked tomorrow, the caravans would leave Secret Waters Pass. Young master must remember to leave with the caravans as these days are really not in a state of peace."
Qin Mu expressed his thanks.
When night came, Hu Ling'er lighted the oil lamp and Qin Mu took the chance to raise his glove when there was light. On the glove, a thread stretched its head out like a spirit snake and gradually became thicker. Shortly after, he could see the writings of Great Educational Heavenly Devil Scriptures and analyzed them in great detail.
Great Educational Heavenly Devil Scriptures was a scripture which could turn one into god and into devil. When Qin Mu had left, Granny Si passed this scripture to him but she didn't teach him how to cultivate it and let him comprehend it himself.
"Granny Si said Great Educational Heavenly Devil Scriptures was originally from a saint who had come down to the mortal realm and planned to use this technique to enlighten all living beings. But this technique was too easy to be cultivated wrongly, therefore, it was known as Heavenly Devil Scriptures."
Qin Mu carefully analyzed the summary of Great Educational Heavenly Devil Scriptures and the opening of this devil scripture was a sentence which could rouse even the apathetic.
"The path of the saint is none other than the everyday use for common people. Anyone who does otherwise is considered heresy! To act straightforwardly, to be free from nature, that's the meaning of path."
Qin Mu jumped in shock. The meaning of this sentence was that every principle, no matter it was the path of God, Devil or Buddha, was heresy if it couldn't be used for the common people!
As long as it could be used every day by common people, it was the righteous path.
What is called the righteous path? To act straightforwardly and to be free from nature.
With the opening being so ferocious, no wonder people would call it a devil bible!
However, this sentence had also fixed the foundation of Heavenly Devil Cult. The three hundred and sixty halls and hall masters of Heavenly Devil Cult were all originated from the three hundred and sixty professions belonging to the haunts of common people. They were all for the everyday use for common people and could be seen commonly. The divine arts used by the three hundred and sixty halls were also for daily use, for example, Rain Hall Master casting spells to create rain and solving the drought problems for the commoners.
These were common works of art while the paths of god and Buddha were like elegant works of art.
As a matter of fact, Qin Mu felt that the summary of Great Educational Heavenly Devil Scriptures wasn't illogical, however, it was easy to misunderstand it.
There were many different kinds of techniques in Great Educational Heavenly Devil Scriptures. There were all kinds of unusual techniques, all kinds of divine arts that people had never thought of. The thousands of strange and weird techniques dazzled Qin Mu's eyes, dumbfounding him.
However, Qin Mu pulled the glove into a thread and read from the beginning to the end. His eyebrows frowned deeper and deeper when he realized that there was actually no technique which could link the beginning to the end!
Techniques are split into technique and skill. For example, Qin Mu's Overlord Body Three Elixir Technique was a technique, an internal power. Whereas skills were Pig Slaughtering Knife Skill, Heavenly Pilfering Leg Skill, Thunderclap Eight Strikes and etc. Skills were the gateway to unleash the power of techniques.
If a skill wanted to unleash its full power, it must have a corresponding technique.
For example, Thunderclap Eight Strikes required Rulai's Mahayana Sutra to be able to unleash its full power.
There may be plenty of skills and techniques in Great Educational Heavenly Devil Scriptures, but there was no technique which was able to command all techniques and skills. With just this alone, it didn't deserve to be called the devil bible which could turn one into devil and into god!
"The Great Educational Heavenly Devil Scriptures isn't complete!"
Qin Mu immediately thought of the crucial point. Great Educational Heavenly Devil Scriptures may be all inclusive but it lacked a technique to unify all. There were too many techniques and divine arts, therefore, it made cultivating technique of each strenuous, even though every technique and skill was not bad, actually pretty powerful. Thus it was impossible to complete cultivating Great Educational Heavenly Devil Scriptures.
In Great Educational Heavenly Devil Scriptures, there were over thousand kinds of techniques and skills and each skill had a corresponding technique. There was no technique which could control all the skills!
What could have resulted this was that Great Educational Heavenly Devil Scriptures wasn't complete.
"However, it's impossible for Great Educational Heavenly Devil Scriptures to be incomplete, for this technique to be regarded as a precious treasure by Heavenly Devil Cult. There must be a technique which could unify all these techniques and divine arts in this cult legacy technique. Otherwise Heavenly Devil Cult wouldn't relentlessly search for granny for forty years…"
Qin Mu's heart slightly stirred and read Great Educational Heavenly Devil Scriptures from the beginning to the end again, but he still couldn't see the outline of it. He then checked it from the end to the beginning, yet he still didn't discover anything.
"Where exactly is the secret of Great Educational Heavenly Devil Scriptures? Granny also might not have discovered the summarized technique of Great Educational Heavenly Devil Scriptures."
Qin Mu sunk into deep thoughts. Among the nine elders in Disabled Elderly Village, Granny Si was at the lowest realm. This should be Why she wasn't able to combine all the various kinds of techniques from the Great Educational Heavenly Devil Scriptures as a whole.
She should have only cultivated some of the techniques in it to prevent herself from wasting her time and energy from cultivating too many techniques.
It was nearly an impossible feat for a person to learn all the thousands of techniques and skills as well as to master all of them in their living years.
"Could it be in that jade box which the patriarchs of the past generations had sealed?"
Qin Mu rummaged in his bag and found the jade box. This jade box had also been stuffed inside it by Granny Si. Qin Mu tried opening the jade box but there were many talismans sealing it. When Granny Si created a havoc at Border Dragon City then, she had said that the talismans were the seals of the Heavenly Devil Cult Masters of past generations.
Qin Mu pinched onto one talisman and gently peeled it. To his surprise, the talisman came off easily.
Qin Mu stared blankly and look at the back of the talisman. There were a few words written on it, "It's fake, hee hee."
"Granny sure knows how to have fun…"
Qin Mu shook his head and peeled off the other talismans to open the box. There was also nothing inside the box.
"Without the technique to unite everything, who's able to cultivate Great Educational Heavenly Devil Scriptures?"
He couldn't help having a headache. Pondering upon this awhile, he said silently to himself, "My technique is Overlord Body Three Elixir Technique, and since I already have a technique, why do I need to search for the method to unify Great Educational Heavenly Devil Scriptures? Can't I just use my Overlord Body Three Elixir Technique?"
He executed what he had thought of and opened Great Educational Heavenly Devil Scriptures and found a spell called Secrets Of Moving Rain. In just a short while, he had learned the spell.
He pushed open the window and looked at the darkness outside. He hesitated for a moment and immediately came to a realization, "This isn't the lands of Great Ruins anymore, the darkness outside is just normal darkness. There are still pedestrians outside and there's no need to be afraid."
Qin Mu relaxed and leaped out from the window. Stretching his hand out to grab the eaves, he gently pulled himself upwards and somersaulted onto the roof of the inn.
A gust of wind blew out from the window as the white fox flew out on a pillow. With the demon wind blowing, the pillow floated up to the roof and landed beside Qin Mu.
"What's that in the sky?" The fox suddenly cried out while pointing to the moon in the sky, startled and scared.
"That's the moon."
Qin Mu raised his head to take a look with a blurry gaze and said, "That should be the moon I guess? I have seen the moon in the day and it looks similar to this moon…"
He also couldn't be sure. When he was still a child, Granny Si would point to a faint silver sphere in the sky during the day and tell him that was the moon which was very bright at night. However, ever since he remembered, he had never seen the moon at night before.
The night in Great Ruins was complete darkness and nothing could be seen in the sky. Similarly, there were no stars in the night of Great Ruins.
The full moon shone brightly as it was the sixteenth day of the fifth month of the year.
Under the moonlight, Qin Mu executed the Secrets Of Moving Rain and the mist in the sky above the inn instantly condensed, and pattering rain fell.
Qin Mu waved his hand and all the rain instantly froze and strings of water hanged in the air as if time had stopped.
Hu Ling'er clicked her tongue in wonder and jumped up to touch these strings of water. She ended up drenching her fur, therefore, she immediately returned to the inn to dry her fur.
On the rooftop, Qin Mu changed his technique and used vital qi to execute Secrets Of Moving Water, to strum the strings of water. Instantly, the strings of water gave off beautiful music that could only be made with traditional music instruments. As the music sounded out, the rain turned into razor sharp water blades which flew into the sky!
These water blades flew over thirty yards before they started to lose power and turned back into flowing water!
This was the gathering area for trading and most of the people here were merchants, therefore, no one would get involved with him cultivating here.
"It's still not good. It doesn't flow smoothly."
Qin Mu's footsteps moved as he continuously strummed the strings of water. Hundreds of weapons crisscrossed and collided with each other in the rain, filling the sky with murderous aura. Hu Ling'er floated out from the window of the inn and applauded repeatedly with her furry paws!
Secrets Of Moving Rain had its own technique and Qin Mu always felt it was hard to unleash the full power of Secret Of Moving Rain while using Overlord Body Three Elixir Technique.
The power of his spell was already spectacular however this was because of his extremely strong cultivation. If it was another suitable skill, the power of that skill would definitely be much stronger!


There's an ancient saying in Great Ruins, ‘Don’t go outside when it’s dark.’
In Great Ruins, the old, weak and disabled elders of Disabled Elderly Village picked up an infant by the riverside and named him Qin Mu, raising him up with blood and sweat. This day, as the night descended and the darkness shrouded Great Ruins, Qin Mu left home...
Become a villain undulating in the spring breeze!
That's what Blind told him.
This is the rise of Qin Mu's road to becoming a villain!


Jesus Christ is at the center of our faith and beliefs. These Basic Beliefs are not the last word, but an invitation to further explore your discipleship.

God

We believe in one living God who meets us in the testimony of Israel, is revealed in Jesus Christ, and moves through all creation as the Holy Spirit. We affirm the Trinity—God who is a community of three persons. All things that exist owe their being to God: mystery beyond understanding and love beyond imagination. This God alone is worthy of our worship. 

Jesus Christ

We believe in Jesus Christ, the Son of the living God, the Word made flesh, the Savior of the world, fully human and fully divine. Through Jesus' life and ministry, death and resurrection, God reconciles the world and breaks down the walls that divide. Christ is our peace.

The Holy Spirit

We believe in the Holy Spirit, Giver of Life, holy Wisdom, true God. The Spirit moves through and sustains creation; endows the church for mission; frees the world from sin, injustice, and death; and transforms disciples. Wherever we find love, joy, peace, patience, kindness, generosity, faithfulness, gentleness, or self-control, there the Holy Spirit is working. 

Creation

As an expression of divine love, God created the heavens and the earth and all that is in them, and called them "good." Everything belongs to God and should be cherished and used justly according to divine purposes. God sees creation as a whole without separation of spirit and element. God calls people of every generation to join with God as stewards in the loving care of creation. 

Humanity

Every human being is created in the image of God. In Jesus Christ, God took on the limits of human flesh and culture, and is known through them. We therefore affirm without exception the worth of every human being. We also affirm that God has blessed humankind with the gift of agency: the ability to choose whom or what we will serve within the circumstances of our lives.

Sin

God created us to be agents of love and goodness. Yet we misuse our agency individually and collectively. We take the gifts of creation and of self and turn them against God's purposes with tragic results. Sin is the universal condition of separation and alienation from God and one another. We are in need of divine grace that alone reconciles us with God and one another. ​

Salvation

The gospel is the good news of salvation through Jesus Christ: forgiveness of sin, and healing from separation, brokenness, and the power of violence and death. This healing is for individuals, human societies, and all of creation. This new life is the loving gift of God's grace that becomes ours through faith and repentance. Baptism is how we initially express our commitment to lifelong discipleship. As we yield our lives to Christ in baptism we enter Christian community (the body of Christ) and have the promise of salvation. We experience salvation through Jesus Christ, but affirm that God's grace has no bounds, and God's love is greater than we can know.

The Church

God intends Christian faith to be lived in companionship with Jesus Christ and with other disciples in service to the world. The church of Jesus Christ is made of all those who respond to Jesus' call. Community of Christ is part of the whole body of Christ. We are called to be a prophetic people, proclaiming the peace of Jesus Christ and creating communities where all will be welcomed and brought into renewed relationship with God, and where there will be no poor.

Revelation

We affirm the Living God is ever self-revealing. God is revealed to the world in the testimony of Israel, and above all in Jesus Christ. By the Holy Spirit we continue to hear God speaking today. The church is called to listen together for what the Spirit is saying and then faithfully respond.

Scripture

Scripture is writing inspired by God's Spirit and accepted by the church as the normative expression of its identity, message, and mission. We affirm the Bible as the foundational scripture for the church. In addition, Community of Christ uses the Book of Mormon and the Doctrine and Covenants—not to replace the witness of the Bible or improve on it, but because they confirm its message that Jesus Christ is the Living Word of God. When responsibly interpreted and faithfully applied, scripture provides divine guidance and inspired insight for our discipleship.

Sacraments

Sacraments are special ministries given to the church to convey the grace of Jesus Christ to his followers and all those he yearns to touch with his compassion. Sacraments are baptism, confirmation, the Lord's Supper, marriage, blessing of children, laying on of hands for the sick, ordination to the priesthood, and the evangelist blessing. In these ministries, God sanctifies common elements of creation to bless human life and to renew and form the church to seek the peaceful kingdom of God.

Discipleship

Being a Christian is more than holding a list of right ideas; it is about radical obedience to Jesus in every part of life. God's boundless love sets us free for lives of responsible stewardship in which we generously offer our lives in service to God's reign. Discipleship is both an inward and outward journey. Jesus calls us to follow him and to invite others to experience the transforming power of his grace.

Ministry

Ministry is humble service offered according to the model of Jesus, who calls every disciple to share in ministry for the world. Some disciples are called by God and ordained to priesthood offices to serve the mission of the church in specialized ways. The Holy Spirit gives complementary gifts and abilities to all disciples to equip the body of Christ for its witness in the world.

The Reign of God

The Reign of God is the coming triumph of love, justice, mercy, and peace that one day will embrace all of creation. Jesus' life and ministry were the living expression of this promise. He taught his disciples to pray for the kingdom's full coming and sent them out into the world to be living emblems of that new creation. "Zion" expresses our commitment to herald God's peaceable kingdom on Earth by forming Christ-centered communities in families, congregations, neighborhoods, cities, and throughout the world.

Peace

Peace is God's shalom: justice, righteousness, wholeness, and the well-being of the entire creation. Jesus, the Prince of Peace, came to preach the kingdom and to be our peace through the cross. The Holy Spirit empowers us for the costly pursuit of peace and justice for all people.

Resurrection and Eternal Life

Christ is risen! Thus we believe that God is God of life, not of death. By faith we share in eternal life even now. In Christ, God's love finally will overcome all that demeans and degrades the creation, even death itself. Easter also gives us hope that the tragic suffering and death of victims, throughout history, is not the last word. We believe the Holy Spirit will transform all creation to share in the glory of God.

Judgment

The living God whom we serve is a God of justice and mercy. God cares about how we treat our neighbors and enemies and how we make use of creation's gifts. It matters supremely to God how we welcome the poor, the stranger, the sick, the imprisoned, and the rejected. We affirm in scripture's light that Jesus Christ is advocate and judge of the living and the dead.

End Time

We press forward together in service to God, knowing that our labor is not in vain. The future of the creation belongs to the Prince of Peace, not to those who oppress, dominate, or destroy. As we anticipate that future, we devote ourselves to seek Christ's peace and pursue it. We do not know the day or hour of Christ's coming but know only that God is faithful. With faith in God, Christ, and the Holy Spirit, we face the future in hopeful longing, and with the prayer that Jesus taught us to pray: "Thy kingdom come! Thy will be done, on earth as it is in heaven."

"Our Father Prayer"

Our Father, Who art in heaven, 
Hallowed be Thy Name. 
Thy Kingdom come. 
Thy Will be done, 
on earth as it is in Heaven.

Give us this day our daily bread. 
And forgive us our trespasses, 
as we forgive those who trespass against us. 
And lead us not into temptation, 
but deliver us from evil. Amen.

'The Lord's Prayer 'is truly the summary of the whole gospel.' 'Since the Lord... after handling over the practice of prayer, said elsewhere, 'Ask and you will receive, ' and since everyone has petitions which are peculiar to his circumstances, the regular and appropriate prayer (the Lord's Prayer) is said first, as the foundation of further desires.'

The position of the Gospel according to Matthew as the first of the four gospels in the New Testament reflects both the view that it was the first to be written, a view that goes back to the late second century A.D., and the esteem in which it was held by the church; no other was so frequently quoted in the noncanonical literature of earliest Christianity. Although the majority of scholars now reject the opinion about the time of its composition, the high estimation of this work remains. The reason for that becomes clear upon study of the way in which Matthew presents his story of Jesus, the demands of Christian discipleship, and the breaking-in of the new and final age through the ministry but particularly through the death and resurrection of Jesus.
The gospel begins with a narrative prologue, the first part of which is a genealogy of Jesus starting with Abraham, the father of Israel. Yet at the beginning of that genealogy Jesus is designated as “the son of David, the son of Abraham”. The kingly ancestor who lived about a thousand years after Abraham is named first, for this is the genealogy of Jesus Christ, the Messiah, the royal anointed one. In the first of the episodes of the infancy narrative that follow the genealogy, the mystery of Jesus’ person is declared. He is conceived of a virgin by the power of the Spirit of God. The first of the gospel’s fulfillment citations, whose purpose it is to show that he was the one to whom the prophecies of Israel were pointing, occurs here: he shall be named Emmanuel, for in him God is with us.
The announcement of the birth of this newborn king of the Jews greatly troubles not only King Herod but all Jerusalem, yet the Gentile magi are overjoyed to find him and offer him their homage and their gifts. Thus his ultimate rejection by the mass of his own people and his acceptance by the Gentile nations is foreshadowed. He must be taken to Egypt to escape the murderous plan of Herod. By his sojourn there and his subsequent return after the king’s death he relives the Exodus experience of Israel. The words of the Lord spoken through the prophet Hosea, “Out of Egypt I called my son,” are fulfilled in him; if Israel was God’s son, Jesus is so in a way far surpassing the dignity of that nation, as his marvelous birth and the unfolding of his story show. Back in the land of Israel, he must be taken to Nazareth in Galilee because of the danger to his life in Judea, where Herod’s son Archelaus is now ruling. The sufferings of Jesus in the infancy narrative anticipate those of his passion, and if his life is spared in spite of the dangers, it is because his destiny is finally to give it on the cross as “a ransom for many”. Thus the word of the angel will be fulfilled, “…he will save his people from their sins”.
In Matthew begins his account of the ministry of Jesus, introducing it by the preparatory preaching of John the Baptist, the baptism of Jesus that culminates in God’s proclaiming him his “beloved Son”, and the temptation in which he proves his true sonship by his victory over the devil’s attempt to deflect him from the way of obedience to the Father. The central message of Jesus’ preaching is the coming of the kingdom of heaven and the need for repentance, a complete change of heart and conduct, on the part of those who are to receive this great gift of God Galilee is the setting for most of his ministry; he leaves there for Judea only and his ministry in Jerusalem, the goal of his journey, is limited to a few days.
In this extensive material there are five great discourses of Jesus, each concluding with the formula “When Jesus finished these words” or one closely similar. These are an important structure of the gospel. In every case the discourse is preceded by a narrative section, each narrative and discourse together constituting a “book” of the gospel. The discourses are, respectively, the “Sermon on the Mount”, the missionary discourse, the parable discourse, the “church

Hi there, paddyptah89 !

Sorry this review took a while. 

So I checked your book out and jotted down some notes on your work. But before we get to the general feedback, let's first deal with the blurb.

I took the liberty of editing your blurb / summary because I noticed it was more of a draft.

Edited version:

"Good and evil is in all of us—that is the truth. It is our choices that make us sinners or saints. 



History is written by the victors. So was the Bible written by victors?

Just imagine if Lucifer, the shining light, is really the good guy made out to be bad.

Mad, I know.



This story challenges and rivals the notorious Bible, perhaps the greatest book ever written in all of mankind's existence.

Ask yourself: What if it is all a lie?"

General Feedback on the first parts:

The prologue was quite lengthier than most of what I've read in other books,  but that's not much of an issue, I guess. It was action-packed, the way the imagery was written was rather impressive, and the character development was effective.

If Cain is the protagonist/antagonist in this story, I'm pretty sure many readers will be intrigued to find out what happens to him next after he's committed the crime of murdering his own parents.

The narration had strong points save for the minor punctuation issues, sentence structure errors, among other technical stuff. I also came across some dialogue punctuation errors, some grammar and tense issues, and I'll be detailing them below.

Suggested corrections:

They are there, alright. I sense it. Glenveigh Castle. That is where my parents—the Guardians—are. Azrael told me himself my parents Jon and Valerie Magia hold two of the twelve keys of power, keys that unlock the beast's box. Keys I must retrieve for my master.

youth of fifteen, very captivating despite (a pause is necessary. u can also use a dash after 'fifteen')

head to toe in black death had come. (this part sounds iffy. did u mean to say: "head to toe in black, as if death had come." ? )

The hall itself (proper capitalization needed)

specks of glistening gold. ('spec' is a different word that means 'specifications')

The giant windows on either side of the hall made him feel quite small. (u could balance the telling and showing parts in the descriptive paragraphs to make keep the narration lively and captivating)

crystal chandelier looming above all in the center of the room. (u could omit some parts to make the sentences less wordy and to keep up the active voice)

It was New Year's Eve, so the many distinguished guests dressed to impress, as well as the Magia family. (inserting pauses would improve the narrative flow)

A show band entertained them onstage at the far end of the hall, and the performers were just getting ready to play when Cain appeared. (you could rephrase some sentences from passive to active voice)

Everyone began to fret (this is too short and didn't describe just how the crowd reacted to his sudden presence in the hall. maybe you could add more details?)

with a long chin and sported some stubble. (more correct sentence structure)

in Ireland—one of the few not corrupt.

Valerie Magia, a few years younger than her husband Jon.

Valerie was easy to spot; (a comma would be the incorrect punctuation to connect the two independent clauses) the striking red hair, the curvaceous frame, and her alluring sapphire eyes were her distinguishing features. (better narrative flow)

warm welcoming smile. One could also see his dimples as his eyes opened wide in disbelief. (keep the POV in third person) He moved closer to Cain, closer than anyone else dared to. (more correct sentence structuring)

"Oh, it is you," Valerie reiterated, turning to (a comma/pause is needed after a dialog tag)

joy in her eyes. She, too, moved closer to him. (break up the sentences since the last part is another independent clause)

But Cain did not share his parents' joy (misused apostrophe)

"W-What is it, my son?" Jon asked, now standing within 

held it out. Wisely, Jon stepped backward. (break up the two ind. clauses)

old sword that Cain wielded; the skull on the hilt verified that this was indeed the special, soul-absorbing sword which Cain had simply named "Avenger." (more correct sentence structuring and punctuation)

All the good swords had names he was told. (tense switch)

knew now that Cain was an Elementalist

"I have come for the keys." Cain finally stated his intentions with a proud stature, his voice uncannily soothing for such an adversary. (the phrase after the dialog is not exactly a dialog tag so a full stop is needed after the spoken dialogue.)

He lowered his flaming sword, thinking his parents (better sentence structuring)

"Keys? What keys?" everybody asked, looking at one another, rather bemused. ('everybody asked' is a dialog tag so it must be in lowercase. short pauses/comma are needed after each descriptive phrase)

Valerie stated firmly.

Jon added stubbornly.

Cain calmly asked. 

(this dialog exchange can do without the telling adverbs being in such close proximity)

"Let these innocent people go!" Jon held out his arm to the pale-faced and terrified crowd of guests, as if to defend them from him. "Then we can talk. Man to man."

"...a swift, clean death." Cain raised a brow and twitched his nose, eyeing up all the Norms 

('raised a brow' is not a dialog tag so a full stop is needed after the spoken dialog)

The Norms looked horrified (proper capitalization) (maybe u could add a little more descriptive lines to tell the reader how the Norms reacted to Cain's threats, and not just tell them they 'looked horrified')

"Where are the keys?" he asked again, but he was getting fed up asking the same question over and over again. (better sentence structure)

"You'll never get them!" Jon maintained a stern and loud voice as he had put his foot down on the matter.  (some parts can do without the dialog tags that just sound unnecessary with the adverbs also written in them)

orange aura, then created an orb 

flame towards where Jon stood. 

Everyone could not bear to watch

opened their eyes, they saw something

Elementalist, too. Somehow he was able to shield himself

from Cain's palms once again

looked at his son, moved his lips, and seemed to think for a second before he spoke the truth. (sentence structure)

do not have," Jon informed him. (comma for the dialog tag)

Cain was seething, but he sensed they were telling the truth. He bit his lower lip and spoke again. "Then who    (better sentence structure)

walked forward, trailing "Avenger" on the ground   (this part is choppy narration-wise, so try rephrasing it)

attacked back; he decided to fight fire with fire. (try not to overuse/misuse commas)

to duel Jon and defeat him in combat. He was cocky—too cocky, perhaps. (proper punctuation. use em dashes or long dashes to indicate a break in thought or dialogue)

Cain held "Avenger" (omit the first comma) out, and now Jon needed a blade of his own if he were to

thinner than Cain's sword

"Now go!" He glared at his wife. ('he demanded his wife' sounds odd)



**

So those are just some of the edits I suggest you make to help improve the narration and polish off your prologue. I apologize that I didn't have time to read through everything. But after reading and taking note of my proofreading comments, I'm fairly certain you will get the hang of it, and that you'll be able to polish off the next chapters on your own. 

Just make time for some proofreading/revisions to make your writing skills more consistent and appealing to the target audience.

All in all, I enjoyed your work and the amount of imagery you included, as well as the premise and your knack for character dev't.

Keep it up. Good luck.



Your friendly critic,

M

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