This is my first book so all feedback is welcome! Also I am Co-Authoring this.

Rowan is a young homeless Half Elf just trying to survive. This is my first book so all feedback is welcome! Also I am Co-Authoring this.

The Holy Bible of El-Ven is collection of story from a fantasy world El-Den telling its creation, gods and people. The book is written with inspiration from The Old Testament in a more fantasy point of view. 

This book is not meant to mock any religion as the writer is religious himself, it is however to provide enjoyable experience or just for fun. This book is written in a style thar the people of the story are supposed to be the one authoring the book not the writer.


Author's Note:
This is the first time i wrote a book and i am not an english speaker but i enjoyed reading english materials and decided to write myself.
In this book the reader will find author's note littered within the book to give the reader help on understanding the story, its interpretation and interesting bits.



Warning : This story is fiction and the likeliness of character and name in this story in relation of real life is coincidence or satirically deliberate.

Webnovel Guide To Authoring 
- Publish 4k Words Before Waiting For Your Novel To Get Verified

I know I haven't posted any novel or fan fic since an enormous time. You people must have been waiting too, but no need to wait now. I have a YouTube Channel too and I am not able to focus on both, this authoring site and my YouTube Channel. I do upload videos on my YouTube Channel often and so you readers can watch that. As per now, I have only 30 subscribers but I am sure that you people will make me reach THOUSANDS of subscribers.

A BIG THANK YOU TO YOU READERS FOR MAKING ME REACH 20K VIEWS ON MY APJ Abdul Kalam STORY!!! :)

But wait.. If you people think that I am not going to put up new chapters THEN YOU ARE WRONG!!! I will surely upload new chapters soon.

Link for my Channel:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCCF7Ld99aacY1Ub24lGQuig

I may not be very articulate in this matter but the current 17 chapters of dlk are canon as side chapters but these may even be considered as beta or experiment chapters regarding stuff about consciousness city and more. In essence, I was unable to write or continue the arcs I had previously planned for dlk due to major difference in time between the two events happening and it began confusing me. I started another set of dlk chaps in patron that i will soon begin posting here but I can't promise that it won't happen again. The main focus of dlk is to go into the sexual lives and circumstances of girls and Nik that cannot be covered in the ehg due to the difference in the objective of authoring the fanfic. So, these 17 chapters have occurred and even may be continued but I couldn't write it due to many such reasons, I apologize for this show of weakness and really hope that this doesn't happen next time.

Rewritten in Paradise of Infinity

Current World: Marvel

Credits to Allchemic for such a wonderful cover. Love you mate.

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Nik Faran, a son of the miserable harlot that lead a life of a miserable gigolo. His birth father is one of the top swordsmen that gave his mother the glory of entering his chamber now remained unknown.

Passing years allowed Nik to polish his skills as a prostitute before he was suddenly made aware of the rumour that was the mythical Incubus Society. It was at that moment that his life finally changed.

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Warning:The novel is based for my ambition to make the biggest fictional harem. Therefore, lemon scenes are the focus. This novel also contain minor degradation and few r*pe scenes. Proceed with caution.

Would love will be that strong enough to direct them way back home? 

This is the question that entangles in the lives of Nancy and Hardy, sweethearts with a happy poster like picture of a relationship. If they would define happiness-- that would be their team where haven of connection resides. Not until this happiness was replaced with grievous cries and lamentations.

Fate was too harsh for them- the love story that Nancy and Hardy have written for five years was shattered by a tragic event that claimed their lives. While on their way to Solana Villa, a venue where Hardy should confess his deepest affection and love to Nancy,subject for "will you marry me?", a truck rushed and raged their car! Bang! The beating pulse turns into linear. 

Thirty years after their death, two babies was born named Faye and Yuan. Unknowingly, they are the reincarnation of the 'lost souls' in the past, reborn again to continue on authoring their love story. However, as their body died during the accident so their memories to each other, it would be a challenge for their heart to remember. Would love will be that strong enough to string them together again?

when mind fails to recall, heart remembers.

Life is like a smoke in the fire for him. When it goes no one knows as he was also going 
out like a smoke. Though want to live life to the fullest but destiny has not given so much time for that. But it was a dream to be in top and he is fulfilling that and would fulfill that, as it is said "the biggest adventure you can take is to live the life of your dreams". 
Though he had no regret out of life but sometime he thinks if it was not be like that then 
his life would have been different. He would definitely have been in some industry even without higher education and if that would have happened, he would have got his love
too. But then the life would have been without any adventure. It is just an imagination, everyone imagines the life to be different than the way it is. I am not the philosopher, not a story writer even but a technical person authoring the life of a person and imagining it to be different than what it is. The purpose of this story is to express the agonies faced by him in love and the way he wants to live life but destiny has not allowed him to do so. This strange but true love story is written by heart, but at the end of the story he is satisfied that at least he experienced the most beautiful thing in the world, that is the love. Absence makes the heart grow fonder. He still loves his beloved and is in tears on remembering the time spent with her, he still waits for her and when is in a sad mood remembers her and even sends her message whether she reads it or not.
It is believed that as we grow in strength in our spiritual life, we give up the habit of worrying. It serves no purpose other than to make us feel tense and miserable. If I stop fretting about things that are beyond my control and rather focus on generating optimistic and kind thoughts, my life can begin to flow in more positive directions. Such a light and easy approach to life enables me to take everything in my stride. But this approach is 
hypothetical rather than realistic for him. The story starts at this stage which is truly heartening and I as an author of the story would not be able to present the whole picture of the story if I do not imagine myself to be in his place.

This story reflects the sequences of love incidents in a person's life and how he regained his true love finally. It's a heartening tale of love, pain, lies and emotions.

I was in a debate with myself for deciding the title of the chapter, on whether it should be Dark or dangerous, but, then I decided on 'dark' as it adds a bit of mystery! It seems as if I am authoring stuffs, but who doesn't likes mystery?

So, Why do we have a gradual inclination towards darkness?
Obviously, not when the electricity cuts off and those cinematic paranormal activities starts taking place, it's the darkness of the soul!
We know about how drugs, alcohol and intoxication is unhealthy to us but, we do it anyway. Do you know why? Because, anything which is unhealthy is toxicaly addictive!

Even love, happiness and light; all of it has darkness in it's lace. Too much of anything is not more than darkness, making your mind numb in visualizing your destination. When it comes to love, nothing is so pure but it makes us desperate and the further story you know, afterall, all the teenage romance deals with that. Then comes the happiness; it is very stubborn, no less than a drug. Each time you have a little bit of it, you crave for more, having a lust for it, opening the gates of darkness. When it comes to light, we all have studied it in physics, but not the way, I'll say. Too much of Light is a culprit, blinding our eyes, blurring it, making us see only what it wants us to. It's deceptive. It's not what it seems to be.

We as humans have a habbit of forming opinions. We easily decide about what's light and what's dark. It's easy to conclude, but still we haven't got a clear judgment as we constantly get tempted by the dark! You know why this happens? Because, our soul's is not as naive as compared to our mind's. It knows what it does! It gets attracted towards the dark for a reason. For it knows that Darkness is not mere where light is scarce. It is a place to accelerate your mentality, help you in self-development even when you are surrounded by vulnerability. Afterall, you need some darkness to shine!

Never be afraid to kiss the devil,
At first it may seem as if you are vulnerable, 
But, the devil himself will realize the sweetness of your angelic lips.
Making him rise from the darkness of light.
Creating a beat in the wake of his ribs.
Your, innocence will trigger his heart,
Compelling the demons to depart!

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Thanks for reading! You be the light of hope, my thrill in darkness. Vote and Comment about what dark things you like, leaving a black shirt or a black dress.

Check out this collection of 10 articles, which comes from the depth of the heart! Topics that we all think about, but not with certainty. But, life isn't meant to be certain, afterall, it has to maintain it's charisma!!

Be ready to get a weird kind of a feeling within your ribs, coz I do, all the time I think or write on any of these topics. These topics might seem to be just words, but they are so much more!

People all around are different but they have a comman string of vigor and hence, everyone will definitely relate to it! Afterall, however normal we feel us to be, we have that part in us which always craves for the uniqueness! A part of us that only we understand, because we've all got some Secrets of the soul !!

~~We are the creatures of complexity,
With confused minds, and a desperate heart.
We cover our vulnerability with a mask,
Its actually special, a talent, an art!
We live in a world, which makes us feel normal, but we've got the uniqueness, for us to find and make it real!
We've got the blood and bones, crypting with fear, but it's time now, come out of the tunnel, 
Be great, be unreal!
Give divinity to your earthly role,
Unrelish the 'Secrets of the Soul'.~~

Immediately write well, or first write an idea, a text block, bring it to its logical end, and then start editing?

In fact, first, you need to put all the clay on a conventional potter's wheel and then cut off the excess to create a vase or sculpt a sculpture. That is to write a novel.

My method, from past experience, is based on technical reports, I need to collect all the information, statistics, process, analyze, write a text block. Have a discussion. Test it. Record errors. Fix them. Enter the report. Give conclusions and write the result.

Using the same method for writing novels, on the one hand, I was convinced that the method still works, on the other, it is more energy-intensive. But on the other hand, it's better not to be tormented by doubts, not creating anything, just not waste time chattering, but write. Even though this is a truncated idea, although it is written clumsily, it is not quite smooth and beautiful, but this is already something you can work with! You can see from the side - your mistakes. Find out, does the idea even work? Is it interesting to readers? Is it worth writing at all in this genre?

So far I have written 7 stories. I can say for sure that writing about travel is clearly not worth it, there are not as many readers as there are subscribers. Wasting time. So I quickly finished this story.

It is just as bad to start writing a lot of stories and not one of them to finish.

You need to slowly complete all the stories or most and then start a new one.

But returning to the old topic, the main one, it seems to me to write the story first, even if it does not look very clear or beautiful in terms of the text block. And then do the rewriting of the novel. Cutting off repetitive moments, probably not needed, weak, not interesting. Leaving only the essence. Then edit, as a first approximation, in the first reading. You can run a grammar and style check with a machine check. First, one program, and then the second.

Finding an editor for free is a difficult task. It seems easier to earn enough money, and after authoring, give the job to a commercial editor.

price for 1700 words editing $ 20 + $ 15 for proofreading.

the price is for 1000 words of editing, I looked on Google for prices varying from 2 to 15 dollars, and if the texts are complex from 20 to 300 dollars (well, these are scientific works, master projects, etc.)

Texts of novice authors are edited from 2 to 15 dollars. But starting at $ 15 it's a pro and not just a native speaker, student or schoolchild. And who has a philological education?

There are a lot of grammar checking programs on the net, but judging by the reviews, this is wiring people for money, the programs are not as good as the ads say.

There are four options here (in fact, there are more options, they just require more imagination):

1. learn English grammar itself (but
it takes time + money)

2. find a kind person who agrees to edit your text for free (you can find, but only for 1-5 chapters maximum) so this is closer to the genre of fiction

3. To find a professional editor for 80,000 words you will have to pay $ 940 (also fantastic, this is not realistic, since it can be money down the drain, not the fact that your book will be sold)

4. Find just an editor, maybe a native speaker, or maybe someone who speaks good English grammar, the quality is lower, prices are also lower for 80,000 words, the price can be from 200 to 300 dollars.

And other editors take $ 35-50 per hour of editing.

Price from 2 to 4 cents per word. Checking 1300-1500 editing words can take 2 hours. This is a pro.

So editing in the pros is expensive, and editing in non-pros is a cat in a poke, not the fact that it will be correct and good. But the price is 200-300 dollars for 80,000 words.

So dear author, it's easier for you to learn English grammar yourself and edit your novel yourself.

In short, there are no easy ways; knowledge of languages ​​opens up new countries and new opportunities for authors.

Lord authors, learn languages ​​and you will be happy !!

Thoughts of why and why stories are written.

All the same English, he has not improved in 18 days.

I'll figure something out, try to correct the text.

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This is a work of art. Any resemblance to real people or real events is purely coincidental.

"I trusted you more than anything in my life." He said struggling with the tangled mess of rope around him that tied him to wherever he was seated. "You're mistake" I said defiantly. "But you could have told me I loved and trusted you enough for you to tell me this." He said again trying to lure me into leaving him. "Listen I'll never ever You Hear It NEVER EVER TRUST THE SON OF MY PARENTS MURDERER. Get that straight in your head and stop babbling about trust because in my life rule number one is to never trust anyone until they earn it" I said stating the truth. 

And at that same timeI got a call. "Hello! Please don't do anything to my son please we're justreaching there till then please don't do anything to my son" the voice on theother side pleaded. "Oh my! What pleasure is it to hear your enemy pleading infront of you. I swear to Allah! That I won't do anything to your 'AADHARSHBETA' until you reach here on time! You see but if your timings delay even by asecond I can't guarantee your son's life" I said to them coolly. "Isn't thisthe same way you both killed my parents? So here you go through the same pain."I continued. "Hey! Please! Please! Spare my son! Please" a voice begged fromthe other side. "Ofcourse your son will spared! Only if you, you know manage toreach here in time! So all the best with that" I said and cut the call. "Why?"He asked. "What why?" I repeated in the same tone. "Why are you doing this?" heasked. "You know what it feels like to see your world, I mean your whole worldcrumbling into pieces and burning into ashes in front of your very own eyes andyou stand there just seeing it with your hands tied?" I asked him furiously."No" he answered. "Do you know how it feels like to live with that pain andguilt for the rest of your life?" I asked.

 That was it. There was moment ofsilence. "Listen whatever you're doing I totally understand that its because myparents murdered yours. Killing my parents will give a satiation for yourvengeance but its not the permanent solution." He tried to convince me. Butthis after coming till point I can't back out. "See that's thing! You don'tknow about your parents. Who are they! What are they! And if I tell you, youare not gonna believe me. So PASS." I said. It was true that I love him. But Ican't afford to become weak at least for my brothers, sister and Ammi I gottabe strong. "Well then enlighten me. I swear to Allah I will trust you" Hepleaded. "You have got 5 more minutes to live. So then say your last wish eventhough its not gonna get fulfilled even you know just a formality." I saidpuckering my face. "I wanna know the truth. You know the 'EXACT TRUTH'" Hesaid, I hesitated a moment and decided not to grant that wish. Umm...Anything else just not that okay?" I said roughly. "Okay! I know that whatever I'm gonna ask is just too much but if you have really loved me than please please after you kill me and parents take care of my siblings please?" He pleaded. "Okay."I accepted because I was in his shoes once. Seeing your parents brutually beaten up by a monster who brutually raped his own flesh and blood in front of your eyes and a merciless woman who threatened to kill your siblings and also nearly killed one is the worst impact that could make on a teenager with rebellious thoughts. I didn't want all this drama to happen. But still my so called 'hubby' who is tied up right now needed to know what exactly happened to me when I was in that place a decade or so ago.

"Shilok beta!" Just then I heard a voice. I took my revolver out and pointed at that person's so called head and before any of could realize THUD THUD . "I shot the bullets in the forehead of Shilok's parents. "Zabiya! What the hell did you do? Why the hell did you do?" Shilok yelled at me. "You see you should be happy that I give your parents a oneway ticket without any pain unlike them thrashing up my parents and your father especially who raped his own flesh and blood and left her to die" I said flinching at the last statement. "What? Who?" he asked me confusedly. "The right person to tell you will be Ryan Bhayu!" I said.........

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 Hi guys this is Scottvee here this is my first ever experience in authoring a book and apparently I'm new too in this field and my book doesn't have cover too! 

So please do excuse my mistakes and and do comment even if its offensive its totally fine and this story will surely be edited.

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The Awakening (Book 1)

The Holy Bible of El-Ven (abandoned)

Webnovel Guide

A Request

Goddess Collector (Stopped and rewritten under new title.)

Ivan Joshua Gabriel Pacete

Truly in love

Secrets of the Soul

Thoughts on writing stories

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