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2024-09-27 03:36

The previous translation was very good... and this one too Please don't drop tho and regular updates [img=recommend]

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Regular updates? Keep dreaming.

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First off, the translation is great—there are some minor mistakes here and there, but they can easily be ignored. There's almost no poison, and if there is, it doesn't ruin the immersion; in fact, it feels like it belongs in the plot. The characters are somewhat fleshed out, each with their own aspects and personalities, which keeps them from feeling bland and enhances their interactions. As for pacing, I can say it’s balanced for now, though I can't comment on future chapters (17 are out as of this review). I believe it will maintain a good balance between the reality the MC is in and the simulations he’s experiencing. Regarding update stability, that's a point of concern. Unless I personally remind the translator (which I definitely won't do by spamming her on the Discord server or in her DMs), I might be left waiting for new chapters after weeks of no releases. However, I think she'll focus more on this one compared to Time Emperor from my conversation with Nia. In terms of plot, there isn’t much to go on regarding the reality the MC inhabits, but there are some intriguing elements, especially in the simulations. Each simulation has its own unique story and might even outshine the original reality. The current simulation the MC is in has been the best so far (read the story to find out—no spoilers here). Overall, with this review, albeit half-hearted by my standards for critiquing fanfics and novels, I can certainly say that I highly recommend this book. Take this review with a grain of salt; your experience may differ from my expectations. I suggest reading the first 10 chapters to see if you like it. If you do, be sure to tell Nia to release more chapters, or Kaito might leak the group chat.

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