The writing is actually quite good. My only gripe with it is that this is a system story, but the author doesn't keep good track of what the system says. The system is completely arbitrary because it changes abruptly to suit the author's needs. Example; In one chapter, MC has 220 gold, and in the next chapter, MC has almost 100 gold but doesn't explain what happened. Also, MC's stats are not Consistent, sometimes he has 17 In a stat, sometimes he has 10 in the same stat.
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