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Miki_Marlo75
Miki_Marlo75Lv42mth
2024-09-03 06:48

The story has many inconsistencies with each chapter that is added the interaction between characters seems empty without feeling That and the fact that from one chapter to another he has X amount of points and then he has less and less is unreasonable, plus suddenly he finds a prophecy and automatically says that it is about him. Without prior research

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cosmicRider
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Gpt bro

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