negative point - AI, research on the story he already knows... - empty characters. ah and not being afraid of damon, is by far the dumbest thing in this fanfic. positive point - a system with the possibility of having maybe the spider sense, haki, ban's immortality..., not starting directly as a vampire is a bold choice.

The story has many inconsistencies with each chapter that is added the interaction between characters seems empty without feeling That and the fact that from one chapter to another he has X amount of points and then he has less and less is unreasonable, plus suddenly he finds a prophecy and automatically says that it is about him. Without prior research

I thought it would be a fun read but I don’t agree with a lot of the MC’s choices. MC should not be approaching the main cast AT ALL!!! If he wants to survive he needs to GTFO of mystic falls. Or at least stay away from the main cast. It really isn’t that hard.

This is just not good I feel like this was written by ChatGPT or some other AI tool but this is just bad [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]

Don’t even bother this is trash Nothing to gain here AI generated and senseless stupidity only

Why? what is the goddamn point of putting a system into the Vampire Diaries Universe? Why can't you just make a character who struggles with his werewolf curse and is constantly finding ways to improve that, even resorting to drastic and sometimes evil methods?

The system is just a crutch for word count, it's also inconsistent and don't bring anything to the story since anything it could give, he could simply get by being a werewolf. So the system is just a middleman that hostage what already supposed to be MC's. MC is too stupid, he got one job, it's to survive. He has no relationship with anyone, so there's no point on going out of his way to meet the cast. Story is pointless, just watch the series again or just rewatcj s1 e1-2 to get your TVD fix. 1.4 stars might seem harsh, but I don't see any once of effort or afterthought on this trash.

I wanted to read a story about werewolves, but so far the protagonist hasn't become one.

Cara sinceramente o autor é muito prolixo fica enfeitando demais as situações torna a leitura cansativa, e também a interação com outros personagens ficou muito forçada. Mas desejo boa sorte pro autor, não gosta muito do tipo de escrita dele mas pra quem gosta de boa leitura. 4 estrelas para apoiar o autor.