interesting choice of original power (that didn't came from template) and plot advance, the way you portray marvel and it's character are also on point for me....the only thing that is disturbing is your mc in himself. you made him a villain just for the sake of it. or maybe this is how any of us would act given the same power? he goes around killing innocents like he is playing GTA...heck even while playing that game i've hardly killed as much as he does on single chapter. using blue, red and purple to destroy hundred of meters of buildings containing innocent familles just to show his power and feeds his ego? killing whole group of ingorants just because they found his actions dangerous for their families and life. and mc had no goal..just randomly killing people.people like villain character when they had a solide reason, charisma, and harm those who are mostly scums. but the ones who just kills others for fun? i don't think many readers like this type or it just me who is weird here
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いいねOh, a farmer's novel, how I love you friend, I have read almost all the existing ones for a long time now and finding a new one makes me very happy. Thnx
John_2156:Try this "Start as a Spiritual Planter: I have a Game panel"