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2024-07-01 15:05

This author writes only high quality books. I liked the previous version of this one, hope new will be even better 🤗. Thank you for your work!

Marvel: False God - Avatar of Ogdoad

Master4thWall
4.6
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Emmanuel_Capricorn
Emmanuel_CapricornLv4

I've read the older version and it was a good read but definitely sub par compared to master4th wall's other book, with MC I didn't like - which is hard cause I like Amon from your Skypein fanfic - and uninteresting abilities for the MC. But with this rewrite, I am expecting a great change and a Master4th wall standard. Anywho, with the existing chapters and based on my knowledge of the Author and the old version of this book, let's be the first review. Writing quality : 5 out of 5 no drama. Master forth wall has great writing skills and versatile english words to capture the essence of the story. He is the type of writer to describe backgrounds in great detail and someone who occasion used sentence masterfully stitched together. Though my problem is that the writing can sometimes be tiring to read and I hate it when he use it to increase word count with minimal plot. Also, his writing can sometimes come off too professional these days and I miss the fun narration from old masters book. But that can be just because his stories has been going in 3rd POV recently. Unlike me who used really simple English, expect an intermediate level of english with almost impeccable grammar and Punctuation. It is godly compared to what you you would mostly find in web novel. Character Design : Five out of five no drama. MC is always interesting and likeable in most cases except for their shared intrest in women. He also has the talent to create Ai pics for each of his characters so it greatly helps in imagination.Author has great ability of distinguishing characters and he writes female characters really well. He has written much so no complain in this regard. Updating stability : 4 out of 5 it's fair game. Master rarely drop a book and have competed multiple books. But he has the habit of writing three or sometimes even more books one at a time sotti that slow down his updating time. But always expect at least 2 chaptees a week for him with his normal being 4 chapters a week. It can be daily if we reach the power stone deal. World Background : 10 out of 5. This is a tricky question because it's a fanfic but all in all, the author show great ability in bringing out the original world building in his books. And he has built up his own Ominversal universe and stuff with all his books being connected with each other so definitely above almost every other fic. All in all, a must read to all traveling readers. be warned and read the tag though. And his books is power fantasy self insert type of thing. Like solo leveling. Is not the book italef but the genre that might turn you off even if you don't end up liking. Here's to one of my favourite author.

4mth

JosephJoester
JosephJoesterLv2

I honestly expected more mythological plot, but other than the start, there weren't many other myth parts in the original story.  I expected him to start from Egypt because of the title and base story, with maybe Mutant Apocalypse plot starting. Instead, he is dropped in New York with the rest of the familiar faces. Well it's fine since Black Cat is in New York 😔. Jokes aside I hope we'll get more mythological things this time. And as the synopsis said the MC is a piece of sh8. It depends on your taste in MCs if you'd like him or not. Might not be everyone's cup of tea since he's quite more ruthless than the usual naive and the good guys. He's kinda annoying sometimes but it's bearable. He likes power, money, and girls, and he does heinous stuff to have them. I think he's basically a villain pretending to be a hero for benefits from what I remember from the original, an anti hero. He was already quite ruthless from his first life, a bit too much imo.  Hopefully he'll learn to love his women better this time around. The update stability last time was trash though. Hopefully that'll be better this time too.

4mth
darking6564
darking6564Lv2

hahahahaha idiots. The time has come. ENGLISH OR SPANISH. If you don't like this comment you are GAY.

4mth
CkLance
CkLanceLv15

Reveal spoiler

4mth
whatIMreading
whatIMreadingLv2

I'm liking the story, it continues like this but the main character is so... insufferable, he acts so weird, the guy acts like a robot with little or no character or charisma, he just moves without a clear objective where he seems to trust a goddess who almost kills him for his plans. The MC is too weird, he thinks he's intelligent but he's not, where it seems like he's never seen what human reactions are like. Many times he is surprised by certain reactions of some girls in which the reader can only say, what did you expect to happen? You're acting like an idiot with everyone, seriously, he behaves like the most unstable and bipolar guy there is with absolutely everyone. MC has no charisma, he speaks dryly without any emotion behind it, the only thing where there could be some of this is when he acts like a hero. He also seems to be a bit too paranoid and distrustful of everyone for someone who knows the plot, the world and the characters, which in turn leads me to believe that he never really makes good use of his memories.

3mth
The_One_Below_All
The_One_Below_AllLv4

In this rewrite of a classic fanfic, the author does a great job bringing the story and characters to life. The descriptions are vivid, making each scene easy to picture. The characters are developed well, giving us new insights into their motives and feelings. I really enjoyed how the plot twists and turns, keeping me engaged throughout. What really stands out is how the author balances the old familiar elements with new, creative twists. The dialogue feels natural, and there are some really memorable moments that stick with you after reading. Fans of the original will enjoy the nostalgia, while new readers will be hooked from the start. This rewrite shows the author's talent and dedication, offering a fun and engaging read that everyone will enjoy.

4mth
_Harsh_
_Harsh_Lv14

loved the previous version,always had that one in the library hopefully you won't drop /go on hiatus on this one

4mth
AnHa8
AnHa8Lv4

Phase, Paramita, Pillar of light. RED. Phase Twilight, Eyes of wisdom. BLUE Nine ropes, Polarized light. Crow and declaration, Between front and back. HOLLOW PURPLE. 🫰🤌🫴🟣

4mth
Arslan_Aly
Arslan_AlyLv2

This is a really good fic and I didn't think it would be bad since you wrote it. But I have a few complaints. First of all, none of the Marvel Gods require faith like the DC Gods. The Marvel Gods are extra-dimensional beings worshiped by humans. They were seen as aliens for a while in the movies, but it was revealed that they were gods in the movies after Ragnorok. Anyway, in short, none of the Marvel Gods require faith and faith is not their weakness. Secondly, MC exaggerates Rogue too much. Rogue cannot absorb the powers of the Phoenix Force, Thor, Odin and Loki. Let me give you a few examples. In the comics, the Phoenix Force was once split into five pieces and each piece had a different host. At that time, Rogue touched Magik, who had a piece of the Phoenix Force, to defeat her, but nothing happened to Magik. Or, she touched Loki once to absorb his power, but then she was stunned and passed out, and nothing happened to Loki. in short, rogue has an upper limit to the power it can absorb, and if it exceeds that limit, it either faints or dies. of course, in a non-canon what if series, it absorbed the power of the dead thor. but as a result of this absorption, there was no rogue anymore because its entire personality had turned into thor. in other words, there was now thor using rogue's body. odin said the following about this issue "i may have lost a son, but i gained a daughter". third and lastly. mc's character development is little or no, and the focus is more on the character development of the other characters. the character development of the other characters is well-done, but the development of the main character is very much in the background. anyway, these are the things i don't like about this fic in general, but other than that, it's a very good fic. (translated)

2mth
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