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Tftc, it's 278 PW

Ok with first, but why have you made second ability this op? I do not understand. Ok, he can't be erased with time shenanigans, it's ok. But immortal? Invincible? He cannot be even bothered with strong emotions. This suck on many levels. Invincible is cool cause while he is almost immortal, and durable as hell, he is still mortal, still can suffer from physical stuff and mental stuff (I'm talking about emotions, not telepathy), and this makes him someone alive. This piece of shit is just a paper, plastic Ken which will fulfill all your wishes with no effort. Such a waste...

😅, well, I can't help it feels kinda cringe to me. Especially, when people in sophisticated manner describe actions of psycho. There is a sense of exaltation in moments where it is inappropriate.

Exactly, 💯. I hate when mc out of nowhere get bunch of op skills and moreover - do nothing with it. I mean look at the plot, guy speak to bird, but a house and intrude girl's apartment. He can do all the same without telekinesis and shitty invisibility, which shouldn't work omo. I do not blame him for 🍇 starlight, but I haven't seen nothing good in book either. Good start with fish telepathy he ruined instantly. Telepathy not equal to telekinesis, and telekinesis is not equal to unlimited power and unbounded abilities. It's just ridiculous.

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10 out of 10, it's right in my taste. Good mc, not too op, sweat relationship with others, no unnecessary drama, good pacing. I like it, I hope it'll have 200+ chapters and story will have it's ending.

Gamer's body and mind is a shitty abilities,. it's good he doesn't have them. But absence of stats is confusing

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I hope he will not. Better Ethan being cooked, than this cliche. And for some reason I feel like Gotham gonna burn in the end