Review Detail of Glebby_Boi in A third son of prophecy (Harry Potter AU / Assassin's Creed lore)
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Peak fiction, if you ask me! The MC is smart and cunning, with a real outlook to his situation given the age and knowledge pocessed. The side characters fit their roles and natures well, with the growing relationships described in a steady and thought-out manner. Maybe Luna’s was a bit of a curveball, but quickly it becomes a fun addition. I might’ve missed some inconsistencies with plot specific spells or knowledge, but either it’s not glaringly visible, too niche or just don’t exist in this novel. The story is exciting, interesting and fun with an abyss’s worth of potential. Please, author, keep up the good work. This novel is amazing!
A third son of prophecy (Harry Potter AU / Assassin's Creed lore)
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of course there's 0 plotholes (except that one reader pointing out that Priori Incantatem works differently, but he just missed that I changed it in my AU by design *cough* plus, it was just something the MC remembered, not something that happened in the story) cheers for the kind words :) I like the interactions between them and the characters themselves as well. I do rewrite a lot of dialogue until I'm satisfied that it all fits, anyway