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Ghost141simon
Ghost141simon作者13dGhost141simon

This is my first time writing I no I made mistakes I will try to do better .not all will be based on tv show . Give me feedback all is appreciated and give me ideas. Thank you

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Ghost141simon

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Jan_Cheater
Jan_CheaterLv4Jan_Cheater

the story has potential a tip for the grammaticale errors is using chat gpt to filter them out and to correct them.

Irebornintheboys
IrebornintheboysLv10Irebornintheboys

even you couldn't give yourself 5 stars because you know that you write some things without quality

Ghost141simon
Ghost141simon作者Ghost141simon

Dude what wrong with you.I thought I put it in the comments that this is my first time writing a fan fic.This takes hrs out of my day just to come up with the ideas. At least some words of encouragement like your doing a good job but you need to work on some spelling,writing,details Ps:I’m doing this on phone so it harder then you think.