O and also please do not let MC be to reliant on people like Shane or Rick,Lori like any other author does. You can do something thing about him practice his fighting ability on his own he does not need a teacher because he already knows these thing. Have him pack survival bags and he knows how to drive a car so they can drive a way quicker without Shane’s help Or wake a way to buy weapons . He can do it in secret and later comeback for them after the world end Anyway these are just rambling thoughts Pay no attention to them or pay attention to them. it on 🫵 thank you

Do not drop this pleases 🥹🥹

Hey isn’t this kid supposed to be a genius .how does he find these thing fun.I mean a genius usually distance himself from other because they have nothing to talk about the hey are constantly going after knowledge

Damian and Maggie please I fill like they can be good to together

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The MC is not very calculating. It just takes the right person to ask a question and MC opens up.Like he has to remember that Daphne is a pear blood and is trained to ask questions.

Author not going to finish this fic because he skipped a lot of stuff so that means he most likely saw the movies and thought he could do better.But now he regreting doing it and is in a hurry to finish

Have MC teach Dale a lesson. have MC kill those men to show the group that mc can handle himself.please

Just read the patreon and it sucked i got all the way to chapter 5 and there’s a lot more of missed spelling words.The MC is trying to replace Rick with Shane.the MC is be treated like a child even if he is a grown up and I no he is 11 but still he needs space to grow. If he came at the time before it all happened it would be a lot easier for explain Carl could have packed everything thing up as well as his mother took off to the quarry and when the mc started acting strange no one would think twice because Carl has to protect his mother and this way carl doesn’t have Shane to lean on for support at every given moment.remember he is a adult I a kids body so it can be easy ear to move around Anyway this is my take on it. Read this or not if this is what your into go ahead and read it if not don’t .Thank you

He can be responsible but doesn’t give info about him to put the mystery of if they screw up there will be consequences

Don’t like MC being pressured for answers. And also he need to be more firm to give off the aura of someone who can’t be pressured into doing thing and can protect his sister from the volturi and if push come to shove the Cullen. Like if they hurt her they will die. Anyway this is my take on thing thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the CHP

Your back what took you so long been waiting for new chapter

I’m with you on that

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He should have checked for listening devices and cameras

Dude what wrong with you.I thought I put it in the comments that this is my first time writing a fan fic.This takes hrs out of my day just to come up with the ideas. At least some words of encouragement like your doing a good job but you need to work on some spelling,writing,details Ps:I’m doing this on phone so it harder then you think.

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Body armor