Review Detail of MissBlackRose in The one eyed ghoul.

This story was interesting. How the setting/background were describe, one can vividly visualize the place and its surroundings. With regards to the characters, the author created their emotions with such intensity and clarity. There's just one thing I've noticed, one the way to narration and dialogues were put up, there should be spaces to seperate the lines of each characters, so as it won't be a bit confusing. But, all in all, it was a good start. Keep it up!