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Fellow readers, this is NOT some MTL garbage that we see everywhere. This is a fanfic where the theme is inspired by the MTL. With how much the writer had to edit and change, this could be considered a proper fanfic. I can’t wait to see what our author will cook.

Wanted to read the original myself before leaving a review. Now that I have, I can officially say that this version is WAY better. Not only does the author show respect to the original story and plot, but he also changes it just enough to make the story flow better, as well as the characters and interactions feel more natural and believable. I also like that while interactions, characters, and plot points have been added or changed, I still feel I can switch back and forth from this, and the original and feel comfortable enough that I know what's happening with the main plot doing so. While the characters and interactions add more to the story, they dont affect the main story beats that the original author wrote. On a side note, I do have to mention this is more of an adaptation than a translation, but I have to say this is how adaptations should be done.

Usually when an uploader on Webnovel says their upload is a "Translation", it just ends up being MTL'd and copy-pasted as it is without any effort from their side. Here, the translator might as well be the co-author with the changes he's making to the story (in a good way, of course!). Looking forward to where this story ends up and I can't wait to see the dynamic between wanda and the mc when they finally meet!

I have read this story from many different authors and I can say so far this one is the best translated and fixed version so far so please keep it up.

would be better if the author wasn't a scamming liar will not consistently update on patreon will get mad if confronted with the fact they don't provide what's been paid for great potential terrible person writing the book

I only demand more CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I don't usually write a review but this is a quality translation l but honestly its more of an adaption/improvement of the story can't wait to see where this goes!

I really didn't have any expectations for this one but it honestly surprised me. It's absolutely worth a read. Give it a try the characters are good and the interactions not dull. So yeah give it a try.

There is someone writing this book that’s further along it’s called marvel: journal writing by blackGoku222. They hit chapter 45 as of today.