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MissBlackRose
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I don't know know why the other reviews were like that, but this is how I write a review. An honest and constructive review. Honestly the first story was compelling and intriguing as well. The background/setting was precisely describe. I could envisioned the exact place as if I was there with Megami. There are some parts that bothers me though by just reading the piloting chapter/s. First: the proper use of quotation, which I commented at the chapter already. And next was during a dialogue, which I also left a comment there at the chapter. A little polish will definitely give this book an edge since the story was catching.

The Male god and I; Fated to a god

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Second paragraph: Honestly the first chapter was compelling......