I found the idea of the story interesting, but the way things were played in the chapter seemed strange to me. I don't know if it's because I'm reading this translated, but the lack of clarity hindered my reading a little. But other than that, it seems to be very interesting, I'll let it accumulate more chapters before continuing reading.
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いいねThe idea of shenron sounds interesting if I made it difficult... Let's assume some difficulty explained holy grail version of Fate. I mean, basically a wish-fulfilling monster containing a complicated and sophisticated body to fulfill said function... Maybe similar to Ilya's family... Einsvern or however you spell it. (Translated from Spanish).