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The story is very nice but if you can keep write you can make a very good novel and i read it all .........
Shadow Slave: From the Depths
JFalcon
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AdhamElansaryLv2AdhamElansary
I read the entire novel Shadow Slave, and I admire the way you write. I just want to give you my point of view. Do not make MC too strong too quickly. Give him time to grow and greater risks than the novel to make it balanced. I really like his character, so no comments. I hope you continue and I will support you as much as I can.
JFalcon作者JFalcon
Thanks a lot for the compliment! That's what I'm planning! I'm definitely unwilling to nerf him, so bigger and bigger challenges will find their way to him. Hope you keep enjoying the story!!
AdhamElansary:I read the entire novel Shadow Slave, and I admire the way you write. I just want to give you my point of view. Do not make MC too strong too quickly. Give him time to grow and greater risks than the novel to make it balanced. I really like his character, so no comments. I hope you continue and I will support you as much as I can.