Review Detail of BurgerNoTomatoes in Full Potential: Using The Ten Shadows Technique in RWBY

1 Chapter in so no insights besides extremely good writing - Which is very nice. The chapter flowed really well so if this is consistent it'll be a great read overall. Also an especially interesting world to insert the Ten Shadows power into. So that is also very nice I would subtract points because of Harem, but who knows, The Author could write an immaculate harem without 1 dimensional characters (ULTRA RARE SKILL) But... 5 Stars because I'm a Mahoraga deep-throater.