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The novel presents an intriguing premise but suffers from poor execution. The dialogue is excessively verbose and often nonsensical, severely impacting the story's credibility. The protagonist, Jon, behaves inconsistently with his supposed age, resembling someone in their late teens or early twenties rather than his actual age (9). This disconnect, alongside poor portrayals of other important characters (including their decisions and dialogue) highlights the author's lack of understanding of the characters, further detracting from the narrative. Additionally, the reliance on the trope of "the old gods granting knowledge" as a convenient explanation undermines the plot's integrity. Overall, a promising idea, but not her more.

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Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT

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3の人に「いいね!」しました

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返事はありません。最初になろう!