It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! ðð It have a great plot/storyline, but the translate/english and grammar is quite bad (although I still understand what it mean, it still disturbing).. I love MC/Han attitude.. He's motto is like salted fish, but he didn't afraid to show his power.. I don't mind an op MC or harem story, as long as it still not overboard (like MC is so strong like god, or take all the beautiful women).. I love how he trash root, Danzo, Orochimaru, etc.. I also like how he recruit Kakuzu, Sasori, etc (it's funny).. I also like his interaction with others, especially when he's cooking and the reaction of someone who eat his food (Sanbi interaction is the best).. Love your story author san.. Hope you continue translate this story ðððð
RYUSuke
Liked it!
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