Rizki_Caturianto

It's a good One Piece fanfiction.. I like it!! 😍 It's have a good storyline/plot and good English/translation.. The grammar is quite good too.. I like that MC/Rei has a Gamer System.. I like that he not afraid to change the story a little (I agree that his knowledge is important, so don't change the story so much).. But it turn to bad and worse when other Strawhats is been capture by Aokiji.. I hope they save the others soon 😁👍😍😍

It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it 😍 It have a great storyline/plot and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I love how MC decieve Hyuga Clan and everyone else about his eyes (Tenseigan).. I love how he not afraid to change the story (Nawaki not dead, Danzo kicked from Hokage Advisor and Konoha Council, etc).. Hope he make the rest of Konoha Council a miserable lives too like Danzo.. If I can give a suggestion, get Kurenai as MC women too.. Help Karin and her mother.. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍

It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. There a few times an unconsisten about character name (not MC name), but it's still okay.. I think MC/Hara is too OverPowered (OP).. He can deduce/learn something easily, that's too broken.. But I like that he's not afraid to show his power, he also change many thinks (Nawaki not death, I think Orochimaru will not defected in this story, he became a Hokage will bring many different thing for Konoha).. I'm so satisfied when I read Danzo fate and how he solve Danzo.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍

It's a great One Piece fanfiction.. One of the best I think.. I love it 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. There still few chinese translation, but it's still okay.. I like how MC/Sanders want to revenge to Celestial Dragon for his father.. He even already kill 1.. I agree with Shiryuu, the Marines and WG made monster for enemy, they should let Sanders kill 1 Celestial Dragon (who kill his father) than caught him and make him want to kill all Celestial Dragon.. I think his power is too OP.. But can Awakening his DF he derive by eat the same DF is too broken (like Float-Float Fruit).. Can't wait to see who else will join his pirate crew.. Love your story author sama.. Keepup the great work 😁👍👍😍😍😍

It's a quite great One Piece fanfiction.. I like it 👍😍 It have a great storyline/plot and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I think it's no problem that MC/Alex recruit many girls to help her, but why recruit Nami?? She's still so small, and what about Straw Hats later?? 🤔🤔 I still like how the story progress for now, let's see next chapter 😁 Keep up the good work author san 😁👍😍😍

It's a great MCU fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😍 It have a good plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too... It unique and interesting to see what difference will be with MC/Rosh sell many Devil Fruit with different abilities.. With no seastone in there, then the downside/weakness of DF is null.. They become like mutants, has many different power (maybe not logia power, there's no way even for mutant to elementalize their body), but not because gen X, but because DF (Devil Fruit).. No wonder many think they are mutant first.. I don't mind MC sell his DF to bad guys like Kingpin, etc (because most of the time they're more wealthly/richer than many superheroes, many superheroes I think can't buy the more powerful/legendary DF in Logia, top tier of Mythical Zoan, and top tier Paramecia type).. I also like that he give a limit to each people or organization to only have 3 max change to buy DF.. But I think he should not sell any Logia (although they're only low tier, it still logia), top tier Zoan, and top tier Paramecia for now.. It's too early and dangerous for now, because not many wealthly/richer superheroes (like Tony, Dr. Strange, Black Panther, etc) know about DF to oppose the wealthty bad guys like Kingpin.. And why the Daredevil must die by Deadpool?? He's quite good guy for me, shame he's too early to die.. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍👍😍😍😍

It's a great Naruto fanfiction.. I love it 😍😍 It have a great storyline/plot and good english/translate (although there's quite a few times a chinese or different names.. it's still ok for me).. I liked that MC/Yagami not afraid to change.. He changed Uchiha fate.. He also change Hizashi fate.. It satisfying to see what happens to Danzo & 3rd Hokage (I don't know if comic Hiruzen is bad/evil or not, but he's really to soft to Danzo.. And quite bad in this story).. Hope the other Konoha advisor is get the downfall like Danzo and Hiruzen.. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍

Maybe re upload from Dragonite vs Dragonite?? I'm just half read that chapter when suddenly it's dissapear 😭😭

I want to ask about this problem a few minutes ago Author san.. Why your pokemon story is gone?? Then I see that it was Webnovel who delete it.. Why they delete it?? Don't they say the cause?? Maybe you should ask webnovel You can re try again in here or change to scribble.. It's up to you.. I still will be your fans and read your story, either in webnovel or scribble 👍😍😍

I hope it will be harem.. He too focus with cooking to see the girls around him 😂 Personaly I like if he get Erina or Rindo (Food Wars), his childhood friend (i forget her name), and many more girl who like his cooking