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Review Detail of Arslan_Aly in Fate/DC Universe

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Arslan_Aly
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The idea is good but the execution is bad. Actually the fic started off well, I read a few episodes and I didn't understand why they rated it so low, but then it went downhill after the episode with the Justice League came. MC is very pure and honest for a reincarnator who was experimented on in the laboratory. And this makes the fic pointless in my opinion. After suffering so much, a person does not trust everyone easily and does not want to play hero with them. Anyway, I ignored this error and continued reading. Then I encountered a logical error again. While Artemis and our MC were fighting, MC was defeated by Artemis. MC physical stats are C level and he is at least as strong as Spider-Man. Not only his strength but also its other features such as speed and durability are at C level. A normal person is F level in fate statistics. In FGO, Bedivere was human and several of his stats are F rank. Now, would you believe this if I told you when the MC with C level stats lost to Artemis, who has E level stats? If MC stood where he was and Artemis punched and kicked him repeatedly, nothing would happen to MC. Anyway, the idea is good, but the execution is very bad. It's a readable fic if you don't pay too much attention to logical errors. My score for this is 3.4 (translated by Google translate)

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Gilgamesh9669

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What Plot hole?

Iron_Man_3000:You are just trying to justify your plot hole that you dug yourself into
Gilgamesh9669
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Trusting the League was important, cause he needed them to trust him, he literally had nowhere to go, all his family is dead, and he didn't even know how to control his powers, of course he was going to team up with the league, as for C rank powers, i think you missed the part where it's explained, His body only becomes C Rank when his about to transform, to help the transformation go smoothly, his actual physical stats are that of a normal Human, at least at that part of the story

Iron_Man_3000
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You are just trying to justify your plot hole that you dug yourself into

Gilgamesh9669:Trusting the League was important, cause he needed them to trust him, he literally had nowhere to go, all his family is dead, and he didn't even know how to control his powers, of course he was going to team up with the league, as for C rank powers, i think you missed the part where it's explained, His body only becomes C Rank when his about to transform, to help the transformation go smoothly, his actual physical stats are that of a normal Human, at least at that part of the story