The start is good. Although, there weren't any interactions I got to know the star of the book as well as the world settings. Seems like an interesting read, author please update (*ゝω・)ノThanks! Keep up the good work~
NecroLord_99
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いいねNecroLord_99:yeah that's rightin the 1 chapter I was trying to set the world settings correctly and the MC's past from 2 or 3 chapters is where it really gets started
This one will take some time because I am still thinking of ways to improve my grammar and writing style
S_A_Grace:Oh okay, when are you dropping the next chap?