So far the novel's overall performance is good, it just needs more chapters

This one will take some time because I am still thinking of ways to improve my grammar and writing style

The story, writing style , grammar, character development and World building was amazing there were no mistakes .But I would like it if the author added some more skills.

absolutely amazing book.the only thing it lacks now is a lot of chapters . I liked the world building, plot and how the novel progresses overtime.overall amazing read.

yeah that's rightin the 1 chapter I was trying to set the world settings correctly and the MC's past from 2 or 3 chapters is where it really gets started

please read this novel guys .I promise that you will love it and it will not end any time soon

let's gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

bro where can you find images like this,can you tell please🥺

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