It went well until chapter 14, which is where it falls like all stories of this type. I wonder why all these protagonists need to say exactly who they are and where they came from to the good guys.

Yead, idk how anyone understood this story plot. I will be honest I only read 7 chapters but there are so many details missing that I am just confused. Is this a self insert? transmigration? reincarnation? like what is happening, what's with the memories of monkey? was he rescued by the young justice from queen bee. The story feels like it's all over the place and there is not really a flow of going from point A to Point B.

I am surprised by how genuinely good this is I for one have never seen a beast boy fanfic before. I look forward to the process you will make

No one who has advanced knowledge of Batman and DC would ever voluntarily subject themselves to his paranoid delusions or Gotham for training that can be done elsewhere.

It's honestly an interesting world and an interesting idea for the main character. Unfortunately, it feels undirected. The plot after 30 chapters feels like it's still finding itself, where the Mc only real goal is to explore his powers. Honestly, it misses a lot of character development moments instead of letting the Mc just stay as his previous life self, but with powers. So far the "struggles" of the Mc have basically been artificial with all the solutions handed to him or easily within arms reach. Tldr it's okay, but won't ever be considered great.

The writing is all over the place. However, if you are from English Country then maybe it can be understood. Still, it is so confusing.

It is one of the better DC novels I have read but in the story Logan primarily relies on the martian part of his powers and neglects the red.In all honesty it feels like he is just martian boy instead of beast boy

It’s a great read so far and I am thankful for someone finally using beast boy in a fanfic

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