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genelvo
genelvoLv131yr
2023-09-14 20:44

It's honestly an interesting world and an interesting idea for the main character. Unfortunately, it feels undirected. The plot after 30 chapters feels like it's still finding itself, where the Mc only real goal is to explore his powers. Honestly, it misses a lot of character development moments instead of letting the Mc just stay as his previous life self, but with powers. So far the "struggles" of the Mc have basically been artificial with all the solutions handed to him or easily within arms reach. Tldr it's okay, but won't ever be considered great.

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Malamber
MalamberAuthor

Still new at this, but ill do my best to prove you wrong.

Percy9
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Harem?

El_Fuego
El_FuegoLv13

That’s actually a very good mentality

Malamber:Still new at this, but ill do my best to prove you wrong.
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