Personally, I could say that the plot is interesting as well as the MC's character. These kinds of character design interest me the most and I bet others will find it interesting too. My only concern is the writing quality of the book. I suggest not using multiple punctuation marks and paying attention to your grammar, capitalization, etc for reader better reading experience.
Satwo
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