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The System of Villain

作者: Satwo
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The Supreme God's Life After Retirement

During his life, all he wanted was to be the strongest. He challenged everyone he believed to be superior to him, but as he traveled, others around him began referring to him as the Supreme God. He never planned to rule or protect anything, but still went ahead and did it out of pure boredom. "Since I have nothing else to do, I might as well spare 0.000001% of my effort to help these mong-people." At first, he found it to be rather entertaining, but as time passed by, he became bored with his guardian duties and simply chose to retire after observing the beings below him. "After working incredibly hard all their lives, these mortals would actually retire. And I, the Supreme God, have already expended more effort as their "Guardian". Thus, it is time for me to retire!" After working "really hard" and spending the rest of his time watching the other beings to alleviate his boredom, the Supreme God finally decided to retire and spend his life in leisure and travel the omniverse. How would the Strongest God spend his life after Retirement~ ------------------------------- Just a heads up : this story would have a really big harem (like really huge), incest, netori (NO netorare), AU, and the mc would be very op from the very beginning so if you don't like the things I've said, this work isn't for you. Also, I'm doing this for fun, so there will undoubtedly be errors in my work as this is my first time writing and English is not my first language, but I'll do my best to improve the quality of my work. That's all, thank you and I wish you a pleasant reading.

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Patience_Agboola
Patience_AgboolaLv4Patience_Agboola

Well there is nothing wrong with this book because it's perfect but the only thing that is wrong is that you turned each chapter to a different volume

ThreyaMidnight
ThreyaMidnightLv11ThreyaMidnight

Hey, I love your work. however, as I stated in the comment I made, there were some grammatical errors that kept me (and possibly other readers) from completely enjoying the story. If you have the time to edit them, please do so! As it will increase reader's satisfaction.

redlady
redladyLv1redlady

I am not going to spoil the book.The writing is good and the plot is interesting.It is worth reading ! Love it !

Shaine_chan
Shaine_chanLv2Shaine_chan

Personally, I could say that the plot is interesting as well as the MC's character. These kinds of character design interest me the most and I bet others will find it interesting too. My only concern is the writing quality of the book. I suggest not using multiple punctuation marks and paying attention to your grammar, capitalization, etc for reader better reading experience.

DubiousTone
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I just finished reading the latest chapter of this novel and I am amazed by the quality of the writing. keep going!!!! I highly recommend this novel to anyone looking for a well-written and engaging story that will leave you wanting more. Keep up the amazing work, author!

MissScarlet
MissScarletLv1MissScarlet

This story is really interesting, although, it needs a bit of tweaking on the grammatical side. And, personally, I think the plot is really cool! Anyway, I hope the author keeps working on this one, since it has a good potential.

baalnana
baalnanaLv2baalnana

interesting plot but there are too many noticeable grammatical errors

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