Review Detail of MichaelYong in My Girlfriend Left me Because my D&{k is Too Big!
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The paragraphs lacked organization, making it difficult to follow the flow of the story. The writing sounded overly simplistic and childish, failing to capture the depth and maturity expected in adult literature. While the concept had potential, the execution fell short, leaving me unsatisfied as a reader.
My Girlfriend Left me Because my D&{k is Too Big!
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Hi, thanks for the honest review, I really appreciate it :) I have to say that this novel is intended to sound childish and lack maturity since its main focus is the comedy rather than the romance. The concept is based on a meme after all. But I do want to know how to improve the organization of the paragraphs so it's easy to follow the story. If you're willing to share some tips and tricks with me my discord user is DAVH_NMX#4048 Thank you again for the review and hopefully we can get in contact soon.