MichaelYong
Just an NPC trying to be a writer
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MichaelYong2 years ago発表The paragraphs lacked organization, making it difficult to follow the flow of the story. The writing sounded overly simplistic and childish, failing to capture the depth and maturity expected in adult literature. While the concept had potential, the execution fell short, leaving me unsatisfied as a reader.
- MichaelYong2 years ago発表
In this novel, the chapters appear to be quite short, which has both positive and negative implications. On the one hand, the brevity of the chapters allows for a quick and engaging reading experience. It creates a sense of pace and keeps the narrative moving forward. However, at times, I found myself longing for more depth within each chapter. Some chapters felt rushed, lacking in substance due to the limited number of sentences. It would be beneficial if the author could find a balance between maintaining the brisk pace and incorporating more substantial content within each chapter. By adjusting the paragraph structure and expanding upon ideas with a few additional sentences, the author could potentially enhance the overall reading experience and create a more satisfying narrative flow.
- MichaelYong2 years agoに返信 MichaelYong
Just changed the cover in case anyone asked.
- MichaelYong2 years agoに返信 MichaelYong
I could potentially increase the popularity of my novel by naming it 'Traveling with a Tsundere Succubus in Another World.' But I've decided against it.
- MichaelYong2 years ago発表
When is the new chapter coming out? Is this book dropped? Is the author busy?
- MichaelYong2 years agoに返信 lovez99
Thank you for your review! Your kind words made my day and I'm so glad to hear that you enjoyed my work. I promise that I won't stop writing and will do my best to continue delivering stories that you'll love. Thanks again for your support!
- MichaelYong2 years ago発表
Dear esteemed reader, I humbly present to you this written work, crafted with the utmost creativity and literary prowess that I possess. It is with a great sense of pride and accomplishment that I share with you this magnum opus that I have so diligently labored to create. However, I must confess that the contents of this book are not rooted in reality but instead exist in the realm of my own imaginative musings. This piece of literature is the product of my fictional delusion, a figment of my mind's boundless imagination. I have taken liberties with the truth, constructed elaborate scenarios, and woven intricate plotlines that are not anchored in the tangible world. This work is a manifestation of my creative spirit and a reflection of my innermost desires, fears, and aspirations. As such, I implore you, dear reader, to suspend your disbelief and allow yourself to be transported to the world that I have conjured. Immerse yourself in the tale that I have spun, and experience the range of emotions that my characters evoke. May this book be a source of entertainment, enlightenment, and inspiration, despite its fictional nature. Despite the book being at its twenty-sixth chapter, I am confident that it will continue to captivate and enthral the reader, holding them in a state of suspense until the very last word. Thank you for embarking on this journey with me.
- MichaelYong2 years agoに返信 Riley_23
Thank you for your reply. I'm still new to writing books, so I will do my best to improve, especially by avoiding over-describing scenes, like the one with the potato.
- MichaelYong2 years agoに返信 Dennis_Bundi_5441
Thank you for your feedback, I will keep that in mind and try to use multiple point of views in the future!
