Review Detail of Anakin_Lost in My Succubus Harem System

it's a good attempt at harem but there are aspects impacting the overall story structure. after 15 chapters, the MC does not have to try at all for the women joining him to fall for him. zeroes in on those with high lust despite having a reputation of being the weakest in school. that would be something to ignore as a passing novel if not for the grammar. this story needs an editor badly. it's a great system in my opinion so the fact that grammar drags it down so hard is disappointing. the first 15 chapters are usually where new readers decide if they want to keep reading. author, please let me know if a rewrite is in the works because I would like to pick this back up after that.